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Hello, all!

So I was no quite happy how the final arc of Volume 2 went so after talking with my author friend about possible alternatives, I have rewritten it. Those who want to re-read it themselves and don't want to be spoiled - I suggest starting from Chapter 36.

For those who want a short rundown on changes, here it is:

  • The Fallen ability to kill people with blood has been strongly nerfed. It does not work in bright light.

  • Theobold tries to kill Galandir with his blood ability first, but is unable to do so due to Morrigan illuminating the area with her fireball.

  • Theobold gets captured by the King, but he managed to teleport the little bit of blood he got from Morrigan to the Fallen King.

  • The falllen and the demons negotiate within the Demon Castle instead them travelling.

  • Uriel, the Fallen King, attempts to kill Morrigan during the negotiations, plan which is thwarted by Galandir who figured out that the fallen can only use their ability in the dark.

  • The fallen have no choice but to sign the Peace Treaty with the demons. Morrigan will not be forced to marry the fallen prince.

  • The epilogue remains largely the same with Morrigan discovering her paint magic ability.

Please, let me know which ending you prefer.

Comments

Arin K Nave.

I think I prefer the no forced marriage. It just left a bad taste in my mouth as it felt like the fallen get everything they wanted with no agency on Morrigan's part. I do get that it is a big part of being a princess but it seems funnier to have the Demon King perpetually refusing his ministers even hinting at it being a possibility. 🤣 Overall, seem like good changes!

Knight_Redundant

Does this mean changes for existing chapters of Volume 3? Would like to know before I start on it.

Amber Atlas Stories

Very minor changes. You can keep reading Volume 3 without issues I think, but of course you are free to wait until I make the changes.

neil

I definitely prefer the nerfed fallen ability. They were a little OP before, since all they would need to do to defeat any enemy is draw blood.