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Noah remembered. The endless beat of dragged footsteps. The winding golden light of the path. The darkness that swallowed everything but the

Noah remembered.

The endless beat of dragged footsteps. The winding golden light of the path. The darkness that swallowed everything but the way forward. He remembered the Line. He remembered the grindstone of time that had milled his mind away. He remembered the monotonous commandment of existence that dragged him forward, one foot after the other, into eternity.

There was no end to the memories. They melded together, the sound of every individual footstep layering over each other until it was a booming roar echoing through the cracked recesses of his soul.

The past and the present were one and the same. There was no distinction between what had once been and what now was. Time itself became a mere suggestion — and then it became nothing at all.

He was in his soul.

He was in the Line.

He was in Arbitage.

He was on Earth.

He was nowhere and everywhere at the same time. Eternity didn’t have limits. It didn’t have boundaries. Mortal concepts were nothing more than distant memories. And those memories sank within the ocean of his crumbling mind. The core of a mortal — everything that made him who he was — it was all nothing more than a droplet in a sea of footsteps.

For every memory Noah had of anything at all, he had a hundred of the Line. A thousand. A million. It was all the same. There was no difference between any of the memories. There was no distinction between one step and the next.

No boundary between where Noah ended and the Line began. No limit to the rivers of water pouring into the ocean, their crash drowning out the distant screaming within Noah’s mind.

Nobody could hear him screaming in the Line. There wasn’t anyone who could scream within the Line in the first place. There was only a single action permitted to all who inevitably walked its path — and it was the next step.

Everything faded away. All memory of what he’d been doing, of what he’d been fighting for and against, it was all irrelevant. None of it mattered anymore. Such things could not be brought unto the next life.

They were lost.

Forgotten.

They were ordained to be. The sea would be purified until nothing remained. It would be pure.

So what is that?

Thoughts twisted back into Noah’s mind. Within the sea of nothingness was… something.

A patch of black like an oil spill. It glistened, undiluted, waiting. The memories of the Line beat against it. They crashed in great waves and sought to swallow the darkness.

But still it remained, floating upon the surface of the endless ocean that was his mind.

There was silence. Just how long, nobody could have said. But time passed. And the memories remained. They stuck out against the fragments of what had been a mind and floated in wait for someone.

In wait for him.

In wait for the one that had once been Noah.

His mind brushed across the patch of darkness. It was so small that it might as well have been nothing more than a tiny blip. A single star in a black sky, insignificant to anyone but one who stood under its light.

There wasn’t much within it. Certainly nothing of note to anyone else. A few faces. Names. A pie and a bird and a violin. A smattering of mortal memories. They couldn’t have covered more than a year or two at the absolute most.

That tiny bastion of thoughts that should have been long forgotten stood in defiance of the Line. They stood in the face of the waves of eternity.

The Line reared up. It drove down upon the tiny spark of resistance to crush it out with the sound of a million different falling feet.

There was a brilliant, ringing crash. It was a thousand fine plates shattering against the ground, the howl of wind through the still peaks of a distant mountain, the crackle of lighting flame in the pitch black night.

And the Line shattered.

A name carved itself into being with a certainty that could be denied by no god. One that ordained its existence in a command that even eternity could not swallow.

Noah Vines existed.

There were people waiting for him.

A ragged scream tore from his lips.

There was no ocean. No Line. There was only him. There was only Noah and the memories that had been carved into his soul. They could never be sealed away again. They were part of him. They were nearly everything.

Everything but a single patch of black oil.

But, right now, they were in the way.

Noah’s eyes snapped open.

Golden light burned within them like liquid honey. It cut through the darkness of his soul, waves of glistening light like King Midas had cursed the very air. Massive white cracks split open all throughout the darkness around him.

The Prophet’s work undid itself in an instant, unable to contain the full might of the soul bearing down on it for an instant longer.  

An agonized scream tore through the air.

But it wasn’t his.

“No!” Father begged. The man’s voice was raw and raspy.  His voice box had been torn to shreds from over usage. He knelt on the ground before Noah, his eyes glassy and distant. Bloody furrows ran down the sides of his face where his fingernails had dug into his skin, carved in the pen of agony. “No! Stop! Free me from this hell!”

“You can withstand it enough to think,” Noah said. His own words were distant, as if they’d been spoken through someone else’s mouth.

But they hadn’t been. They were his.

Father’s gaze didn’t quite focus, but it managed to shift so it was directed toward Noah. He panted like a rabid dog, saliva dripping from the corners of his mouth as he staggered, trying and failing to rise to his feet.

“What is this?” Father said, his words something between a demand and a plea. “What have you done to me? What have you done to yourself? What are you?”

Noah stared down at Father.

“I am Noah Vines.”

Father stared back up at him. His lips trembled, parting in horror. Noah knew what the man was seeing. He didn’t have to guess. Father was crumbling. His incredible soul didn’t make him immune to the Line.

No man could stand against eternity.

And Father, above all other things, stood alone.

There was only one thing that could give pause to the Line. It wasn’t a Rune. It wasn’t some Imbuement or soul manipulation technique. It wasn’t a formation — and it certainly wasn’t a tool.

It was the one thing Father had absolutely nothing of.

“How?” Father whispered. “I feel you. You… survived this? It isn’t possible.”

“Not for you,” Noah said.

Father staggered to his feet. His breathing accelerated, coming out in rough, ragged gasps. He swayed on the spot, his soul shifting and lurching in every direction as he tried to free himself from the Line.

But there was nowhere to run. The golden magic carved through the shadow in a web that was just as endless as the darkness itself. Its waves rolled within his gaze and spilled from his lips with every breath. The Line wasn’t just inside Noah’s soul. It was his soul, carved so deeply into his being that there was no separation between the two of them.

“If I kill you, it’ll stop,” Father whispered. He lurched forward.

Noah stepped out of the way.

A footstep echoed through his mind — no. Hundreds of them. They beat against his sanity, trying to drag him into the maw of the swirling golden serpent that wound and wove through him.

But he couldn’t allow that to happen.

Not yet.

Moxie was waiting for him. Lee was waiting for him. His students were waiting for him.

Noah’s mind had to remain intact for just a little longer. The Line would have to wait its turn. There was a patch of black within his soul that could not be allowed to be damaged. Not in this life, and not in the next.

Father lurched for him again. It was a sad attack, little more than a stumbling shuffle. There was little trace of the terrifying, dead-eyed monster that had once inhabited Father’s skin. Panic and terror welled in Father’s eyes. His hands swept through the air as if searching for something to hold onto. Something to help him bear infinity.

All that remained of Father was a scared old man.

“Help me,” Father whispered. “I — power. I have—”

“You have nothing,” Noah said.

“Spider. You’re being a fool,” Father rasped. “Order. Chaos. Don’t you understand? The fate of this world. I hold the keys. I have seen it all. The Order will destroy everything if the Chaos keeps grows stronger. I can show you. The Song of the Night’s Shadow—”  

 “I don’t need it,” Noah said. He stared down at Father, disgust twisting his features.

“Please,” Father begged. He grabbed onto Noah’s shirt, bloodied fingers leaving streaks across the jacket as his glassy eyes bore up in desperation. “I have power. I could be—”

“A tool?” Noah asked. “I don’t need tools, Father. And I don’t need you.”

The ground started to crumble. Father stiffened. His eyes jerked down as fragments of darkness fell away beneath them.

Regal yellow light tore through the shadows, swallowing them whole as more and more of Noah’s soul was turned to glimmering gold.

“No!” Father screamed. “Stop!”

Noah drove his foot down into the ground.

The final shards of the darkness shattered. They fell away, leaving behind only a winding segment of the Line.

Father’s fingers lost their purchase. He fell, plummeting to the Line below. His soul wasn’t even struggling anymore. There was no longer any difference between this reality and the world outside. His soul shrank in on itself, shredded apart as his mind frayed.

There was a difference between walking the Line one step at a time and experiencing enormous swathes of it within mere seconds. Father may have been a Rank 7 — but he was not a god.

And now he never would be.

Noah watched, the dim candlelight that was his own mind flickering and fading, as what had once been Father was shredded away to nothing. He still existed, but not in any manner that could have been living. There were no more memories. No more schemes or plans.

There was no more Father.

All that remained to him was the Line. Or, rather, this version of it. An imprint of the Line, identical in every way except for its ending.

Because, unlike the true Line, there was no goddess waiting for Father at the end.

There was only the next step.

Comments

Andrew Denton

Epic. This is what I'm here for.

Justin Lucier

That's some badass stuff, Actus. Can't wait to see what kind of ridiculous stuff is in store for a completely whole Noah. He's got his whole soul now, for better or worse.

Justin Lucier

Side thought, now that he has his whole soul, and a copy of the line, odds on him creating another master rune? Eternity, maybe?

Lee

How you like those stairs Daddy!!! Father- personally I can’t wait to see this in the WEBTOON. The mindscape fight will be amazing. Father you were a strong 7. But you’re no god. His ending was pitiful and that made it even more exhilarating to see his ending. No pride like Wizen. Father was and always will be a paranoid, scared old man. Noah- I’m scared for him. His three selves merged into Noah Vines again. I also would love to see this drawn. The contrast of the black mindspace against the regal gold shining through. It’s going to be epic. I am worried because how I read this it appears Noah is stuck on the line and can’t/don’t have any reprieve. How is he going to pull Himself out? Can he remember his students? He loved being a teacher maybe that will help him heal for real. This entire time there were band aids to protect Noah from his trauma. This is Noah really facing his trauma head on. Imagine his triumph when he leaves the line on his own terms? How gratifying will it be? I’ll be here just reading it and cheering this fictional dude on.

Zachary Blevins

Damn,! he cursed him to purgatory forever that’s not cold that’s soul crushing That’s real arch, villain territory

Bound

Great chapter, thank you! I was skeptical that Father would actually die this chapter, but man this was beyond what I expected. Also just wanted to point out, this paragraph near the end of the chapter seems worded weirdly? "Noah watched, the dim candle of his own candle flickering and fading in his own soul’s rebellion"

yazu

holy shit so noah has his own reality inside him?

realitiesincrease

Naaaaah more cliffhangers! But I noted a line (pun intended) : "he was not a god". I think it was you Firel, you might have been on to something !

Colin Holloway

I have been waiting for this for so long! What a pay off! And even a bit of "hoisted on his own petard" from being friendless and shitty

Firel Dakuraito

This pretty much explains why he had such a big problem in achieving the awakened state at will. The separation to Noah1 Noah2 and spider... as Spider was doing all he could to protect theem all from The Line of eternity.

Robert Mullins

Noah already has order magic doesn't he? It's just been sealed away with the line.

Rob Sie

damn that’s dark

Rob Sie

Maybe he will get help from Renewel and Decras? Decras has the power to accsess his mindspace one last time before sunder turns to different from the original. Or he makes a flawless God rank 7 Rune. in an Instant, with all of his and Fathers runes and tools

Lonnie

the dim candle of his own candle flickering and fading in his own soul’s rebellion, I would change the first candle to, flame, light, illumination or drop the second candle. It is a jarring paragraph in the middle of an intense scene. It makes it stand out quite a bit.

Caleb Reusser

Definitely a satisfying end to Father.

Dan Isl

Other than the candle flame line, might be prudent to reconsider this as well: "His mind brushed across the patch of darkness... A single star in a black sky, insignificant to anyone but one who stood under its light." Comparing a "patch of darkness" to a "star in a black sky" seems a little awkward.

Daniel is ŁØNE

I hope he gets a way to elevate the small fraction of his existence that matter to a level where despite not drowning out the line he would still be himself. Maybe some evolution to the rune of self that makes his existence that much more transcendent because what be more proof of being than waling eternity and remaining entirely as you are. I feel like his memories are gonna be sealed again to some degree and honestly I don't want that, I want Noah to embrace his special boy status even more than before.

Rob Sie

Hundreds of chapters back Renewel said that if the gods of Order found out about Noahs Unstable Pandamonium rune they would destroy the entire planet. Is that what father meant? “The Order will destroy everything if the Chaos keeps grows stronger.“

Martin Brock

How to become a true high god: make your own afterlife: complete

Luc_mic

Noah sanity saved by the POWER OF ✨FRIENDSHIP✨

Luc_mic

Also when Crumbling Apocalypse started ascending I thought Noah’s god rune will be Apocalypse, but now I am thinking it will be Eternity

N0ct3m

How to become an Eldritch

Tom C

Yeah Noah you tell Daddy who’s boss! Oooh zaddy TFTC!

Emily Gurnavage

Pretty sure its a hint toward a similar fate, yea. Powerful mortals can have limited contact with powerful gods, so its possible Father knows more than he should of how things work off planet. Chaos has been growing in the world in the last while. The other Herald uses Chaos. Noah uses Chaos. That face guy is now awake and using Chaos. Noah keeps doin massive Chaos formations. There are at least 3 recently turned active Chaos users in the world, and even 1 seems to be distuptive enough for powerful people to sense its existence from across the world. So I wouldn't doubt that things are heading towards a tipping point where it sets off some sort of divine alert that there is "too much" (for the Order gods at least) Chaos on the world. Oh wait. Renewal is still supposed to be guarding that world, right? Officially she is still a part of Order's organization, no? Just hiding out with Decras and tryna stay under the radar but her boss doesn't *know* she abandoned her post in the line yet? If a Chaos alarm gets set off, the other Order gods are gonna be lookin for Renewal soon.

Emily Gurnavage

I think its gonna fix *a LOT* when he ranks back up to 6. Not fully, but enough to mooostly be himself and other story arcs to continue but still remain an issue until he hits rank 7. Higher ranks let you process memories and time better, as Garina stated about Jalen goin crazy from living too long as a mere rank 6.

jobe matula

fitting end for pops!

Tiger

"Noah watched, the dim candle of his own candle flickering" should be Noah watched, the dim glow of his own candle flickering" TYFTC

Arnon Parenti

There comes a time To face the toughest of fights This was not that time, Father never had a chance, and now he is just another step in Noah Vines' ladder.

BronzeWolf

"There was a patch of black within his soul that could not be allowed to be damaged. Not in this life, and not in the next. His students were still in danger." Well, this was the most disappointing end. Similar to the Damned Plains ending, where the two people responsible for keeping his soul and mind grounded aren't mentioned at all but his students are. I had to point that out last time as well, gotta ask, is there any point having Lee and Moxie in the story when you're constantly forgetting their importance to the main character? While the students are important. They were never the 'root' which saved Noah nor keep him 'alive' in the literal sense for the word here. Noah, Noah-2, and even Spider, have all said throughout story it's those two which are most important. Please, try and remember that as it waters down these type driven scenes. All the build up here was honestly just complete disappointment yet again seeing no mention towards the two people who are the only people in this story which keep him alive and functioning.

Philipp Battenberg

Am I seeing this right... The Line is white and gold and when Noah got soul damage his suspiciously empty and dark mindspace got cracked letting white light inside... Was that mindspace just a small egg in the ocean of Noah's soul?

Justin Lucier

Moxie and Lee are at this point his students too, though I agree, they have taken a back seat recently, but that should change soon enough. Now that they're out, he's going to have to bring everyone to R6/7 and probably will hit R8 into first stage divinity when dealing with the false herald. Hopefully they get something else to do than be an anchor.

Lee

Well shit. I didn’t think of it like that Phil. Hmmmmmmmmm. That’s a lot to ponder. I like this idea then.

Ben Bass

TYFTC! Noah has a reason outside of himself to exist and to strive for. Father never did anything for anyone outside of himself. Now, what can/will Noah do to rebuild his own little mindspace so he isn't snuffed out by the impression of the Line on his soul?

Kitti Lumpo

all my homies love the Line in noah's soul owo

Ryan

Damn

Moosky

So Father's quest was to release enough "Order" magic to mask the "Chaos" magic in the world, so the gods don't come down to destroy it entirely. He's also been at it for hundreds of years, so we know he wasn't targeting Noah, leaving only Lorne/Orlen. So that leaves the question, why was he acting alone? I'm sure the Church of Repose, the Apostles and any other power faction out there would be very interested in what he had discovered, and would have helped him either wage war against Orlen or grant access to the Long Night. I get that Father is very socially inept, but was he really so bad that the power factions would risk total annihilation instead of listening to him? If so, not only was he doomed to fail, but why did he bother taking such an altruistic task to begin with?