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Law

Missing the divider between the two chappies

Skylar

Merry Christmas

Raymond Whitehead

Not sure if it was a typo or intentional but Neil said Rena when calling for Reya

Sitsume

Thanks for the chapters! Looking forward to the next ones.

Sitsume

Question, is it missing the divider indicating the second chapter or is this all one chapter?

Tsorov

Yeah, the last one was missing the divider too. Seems to be a new thing?

Ty

I read it as an in-world mistake as in Neil the character couldn't quite remember her name and goofed it. I could be wrong tho, of course.

Ben Bass

TYFTC! As much as I love the fighting, seeing the machinations and how Madiv is running the auction is really cool! Now let's see how round 3 goes for everyone, and I think Neil is growing on me!