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TimeDrawsNigh

“The rest of his sentence ended in a choked curse as Lee laughed the strip of jerky she had in her hand toward the large man.” Typo: Lee launched

TimeDrawsNigh

“With the 5 he already had, there were just 2 needed until he hit Rank 6.” 5 -> five 2 -> two

Emily Gurnavage

I half wonder if Mordred will end up joining the gang at this rate. He would fit right in, and theres more than just Lee to be interested in.

Ywoak

There really is not much happening in one chapter sometimes Perhaps I notice it now because the arc is good

Philipp Battenberg

"as Lee laughed the strip of jerky she had in her hand toward the large man." Probably a typo, but I have the image in my mind with Lee having a strip of jerky hanging out of her mouth and laughing so hard, it's flung through the air.

Philipp Battenberg

Well, Mordred appeared, wanting something, when Noah's in need of runes... Maybe, they can weasel a few out of him.

Nicole Hicks

Fear the smile, all yea who frown!!! ☹️ ☹️☹️

Mack

Looking forward to this! I find his questions amusing but he’s not a good guy at the same time.

Oliver

I Modred want to have your blessing to take Lee as my wife 😂.

M. Lampi

on it, the even was probably going to take ==> on it, the event was probably going to take

M. Lampi

While that certainly could be the case, I think Actus meant to use the word "launched".

Sitsume

Ooooo! This is so exciting and hilarious! I like Mordred. He is such a fascinating person! Looking forward to the next chapter and thank you for this one!

Ben Bass

TYFTC! Man Mordred is just so earnest and has no idea that he could even possibly be creepy. He actually kinda fits in with the mentality of Noah's group actually. Now how much of a hole is he going to dig himself into with Noah and Brayden, or how much deeper at least?

Rhea

Mordred is one of those characters I just find delightfully absurd. He could fit right in with this group lol. I can't wait to see more of him and the interactions with the group. I also love that Mordreds friends were forcefully involved in his antics.

Ryan

Edit suggestions: “…choked curse as Lee laughed the strip of jerky…” launched? “…the amount of importance on it, the even was probably going to take a…” even=> event?