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Vince

Tftc

Catherine

Huh. The badges that Yoru asked Tim to send. Did they go to Mordred and co?

LucidiSol

Doesn't Unraveling Disruption break down things into the basic elements? How come the cards didn't leave even dust? 🤔

Chris Welsh

Mordred mentioned he already killed the Mistress’ goons for them earlier. He was shocked anyone paid.

Emily Gurnavage

“Eh. It happens,” Noah said. It really does though, lol. How many times has his room been invaded over the course of this story? Prolly over a dozen times by now.

Actus

That was the old version prior to Noah’s upgrades to the rune

pavlo

eh what a waste of potential, it was the perfect place for Father joke

Green0Photon

Oof I just got a notification that "My Best Friend is an Eldritch Horror, Vol. 1 (Graphic Novel)" was delayed to 04-14

Sitsume

“This,” Mordred said, pointing to a heavily armored room with an exhausted look on her weather-worn features, “is Fist.” Not sure what the word was supposed to be, but a heavily armored room sounds hilarious.

Sitsume

Also thank you for the cheeky chapter! Find it hilarious her birth name is Fist. Must have gotten picked on a lot as a kid. Can't wait for the tournament to start. This is going to be good!

Eternal Reader

please let tournament start tomorrow

Oliver

Only few hours left till the tournament, no big reunion? Noah has to see his students and moxie and Grimm.

Kenneth Darlin

Ready to see some fighting and to find out what happened to Garina!

Kenneth Darlin

I think they are meant to meet after the tournament or at least during it in Moxie and Noah’s case as you know they will be fighting each other

Nicole Hicks

Wonder how many of the strong participants in the tournament that Mordred will be conveying info on to the group are going to be from those in Noahs' group he and the others are trying to meet up with that will be in the same 5-6 rank mages that all who fall in the same category in Noahs' group will also be participating in? Mordred observes one of the participants fighting, sends his observations to Fist, she conveys the info and Noah's like, "Yes! That sounds like it might just be (name of person not currently met back up with Noah here)!!"

Actus

Dangit. I think the spellcheck on scrivener catches things slower than word or something because I keep missing these lmao

DeadicatedReader

Poor Ace and Fist. Seem like good additions to the story though. reason I wouldn’t to follow somebody.” -> I wouldn't follow or I wouldn't want to follow

Sitsume

God I hope so! That would be so hilarious and fun shenanigans!

Ben Bass

TYFTC! It is kinda hilarious that Ace and Fist know how odd Mordred is. I do think the tournament is going to be very enlightening and eye opening for a lot of people, Noah included.

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Thank you for the chapter! "“ But we’ve been standing around here long enough."" misplaced space before but, 8th paragraph. "As odd as Mordred was, he did genuinely seem to have every plan of fulfilling the promise he’d made." every plan > every intention, or 'he did genuinely seem to plan/be planning on fulfilling'. “We’re already on thin ice. Don’t forget, Mordred. If we get one too many more complaints—” 'one too many more' reads oddly. "too many more" or "if we get one more" or "one too many" should all work. “You seem more (well-)adjusted than Mordred,” This might be a regional thing, but I believe well-adjusted is more commonly used when describing someones personality. He raise(d) his gaze to look at the street it was directing them down.( )“Now, let’s get a move on, shall we? There’s a tournament starting in a few hours, and I plan to be there when it begins.” raise > raised, and a space after down.

M. Lampi

Your parents terrible naming sense ==> Your parents' terrible naming sense I never said you could stay back too.” ==> I never said you could stay back, too.”