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(Hello again ๐Ÿ˜Œ So I added that one extra last panel I mentioned, in order to reduce the cliffhanger and help you all with the waitingโ€ฆ ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ‘€) 


โ€ฆ.Okay so this episode turned out kinda hornier than I thought, but I guess itโ€™s okay since itโ€™s episode 69โ€ฆ (?) ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜Ž *Iโ€™ll leave-*


(Donโ€™t get any funny ideas about what Keane is about to do at the end of the chapter btw.. ๐Ÿ™ƒ or do get? ๐Ÿ‘€)


Hope you liked this awkward mess and gay panic of an episode! ๐Ÿคฃ Tell me your thoughts and see you soon! ๐Ÿ˜Œโค๏ธ

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sunshine2919

Like another person mentioned (@C), I also liked the previous dialogue a little bit better, and I think that the panel first panels should be switched back too, just because I think it flowed better. It effectively shows that Keane was staring at Onyx after he flipped over, but here it shows as if that he was just looking at him from behind and then Onyx flips over. I just think it made more sense before. I also found it hilarious when Keane said, โ€œI canโ€™t believe he let me hug him. I thought heโ€™d flip for sure!โ€ Kind of makes him start to ruminate on their actions and feelings ๐Ÿ˜† But ultimately itโ€™s up to the author, and Iโ€™m happy to read this beautiful comic!! ๐Ÿ’–

Nicole Ant

Oh, Iโ€™m definitely open to changing the text and panel order back to how they were if you guys preferred it that way! ๐Ÿ˜Œโค๏ธ Aws, thank /you/ for reading!! ๐Ÿฅนโค๏ธ

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SUBTLE KEANE, *SUBTLE*