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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Jinu POV!

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mjcxqNNSWq7U9m3vFpDA92BQDKAmsCuAvrt2jsJhHHs/edit?tab=t.0

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Comments

Belly

Hon-Glock Please.... I need this. Also would be cool if they read more of Ahri's side diaries snd turns out they don't need to just stick to one weapon, most hunters did to master one instead of many, but since this is one of the strongest generation hunters, it would make sense if they all had backup weapons. (Like daggers, ranged weapons)

RHar

Loving the fic, seriously, I'm happy every time I get a new chapter. But there is one thing that worries me - there's no timer running on the story, there's nothing seemingly that's going to force any urgency, and more importantly, we've almost run out of conflicts to resolve. My hope is that something seriously wrong has happened with Celine so this story can have a bit of urgency in it.

Alun Lewis

While Celine does have a point that CONVENTIONAL firearms are harder to dodge out of the way of than arrows, it's interesting that she assumes any kind of Honmoon weapon would harm Rumi when she also believes (or believed) that the Golden Honmoon would simply remove Rumi's demonic half when it was completed. If the Honmoon can differentiate well enough to ensure Rumi's survival post-GH activation, then Honmoon weapons should do minimal or zero harm by the same logic.

William

I dont think it needs urgency, its developing super well, and it was never meant to be a super long fic, were already at least half way, maybe 2/3 of the way through the movie, now we COULD just be on the falling action, no need to add more urgency when you're winding down into the end.

RHar

Presumably Rumi says that Honmoon weapons can hurt her because she knows it. Maybe a training accident, maybe Celine tested it intentionally so she'd know for sure, but Rumi talks about it like she's certain about it. As far as the GH is concerned, very likely the theory is that until the GH purges the demonic aspects from Rumi, she's vulnerable, and afterwards, she wouldn't be.