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(Every character depicted in the story below is a consenting legal adult over the age of 18)

A/N: Not gonna lie, Free has really grown on me since the first time I saw the movie. Doesn’t crack my top three songs, but it did move from fifth to fourth as time went on.

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Google Doc Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NoaO7TR_sNcoKkiKAuLkag5uHWNFlwAMgkGqVShbV-Q/edit?tab=t.0

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Comments

VaticToxic

Next chapter should start with Rumi staring Celine down for a minute then going "...I approve."

eric

I have one small thing. Bobby reads much more like the girl’s older brother than their father. That would probably make that line read a bit more impactfully as well as making it funnier

Alun Lewis

Ya know...I think Rumi should take it as a win that she didn't end up trying to talk to Celine while Bobby was working on his oral skills under Celine's desk. But I gotta agree with some of the others and note that Bobby is more akin to a big brother to the girls (age-wise), so Rumi needs to good-naturedly bust her surrogate mom's chops for cradle robbing....then complement her on her good taste 😉