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Tsorov

I definetly like the way this story has started. It has a bit of desperation, as all good progression storys need, but the MC know his limits too, and acts accordingly. I also like the way Eloise is portrayed until know. She seems unsure at the moment, probably because of our MCs title, but I'm sure that will change in time. Thx for the chapter!

Noss

5th paragraph "But I d-do hope its to your liking, my lord" -> it's Good to see it start to come together and conversation that doesn't default to 'you're a monster lol', but while seeking believable. Looking forward to more

matt tombaugh

Fantastic end to the day

Talia Rock

Ngl in a rush to see where this is going actually.

anony

Love that conversation!

Connor

Definitely interesting and I'm looking forward to the MC interacting with more people, loved the chat with Eloise. Less so Camilla so far, personal ticks involved, but the unceasing disdain and suspicion make me uncomfortable to the point I have kind have written Camilla off as a love interest with the currently provided interactions. Curious to see how that will change, but not really holding my breath for that yet. As a character I don't know anything about Camilla beyond that she's a total bitch (deservedly or not) to the MC to make building that relationship seem valuable. If that makes sense? Very early of course, so who knows, maybe next chapter has her starting to put the pieces together seeing him interact with the "commoners" like a decent human, and we'll get to see something less 1-note.

Touch

Author when will they faq?

Cambrian

Yeah I've definitely given myself easy mode with Eloise as a love interest and hard mode with Camilla as a love interest. We'll see if I can realistically sell it or not!

Cambrian

Not for a while lmao, no plans for smut for quite a few chapters actually

Touch

Wish for time skip, some of Author’s story these days MC didn’t reach the ceiling of power or potential they could achieve just before ending. Let him grind!

Cambrian

Don't worry, timeskips will be used to make him stronger. the grind begins soon!

Corvus

It‘s off to an amazing start so far🖤

Alun Lewis

While I'm glad Camilla kept her tongue and stayed out of Thomas' conversation with Eloise - while still eavesdropping, of course - I do wonder about how she'll react when the truth of Thomas' situation is confirmed and it's clear that there's a completely different person inside of her charge's meatsack than there was when Camilla & "Lord Thomas" left the Capital. I suppose it will all be dependent on whatever the popular religion or religions believe about possession or reincarnation...Camilla deciding it's a sign of the Devil or a demon now using Thomas' body due to him selling his soul is all too possible if the world he finds himself in is akin to Western societies prior to the 20th century.