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Sage_of_Eyes

Sorry for the delay on this, I had to do some rewriting for both chapters.

Valerian

Good for Arta.

Macha

I hope the new girl is not too domineering, I hate how annoying that character archetype can get. Kinda annoying how the she says he has to pass her test to marry her, like bruh isn't the whole point of it being Trelawney doesn't need anything from neither Argen or Arta not the other way around? But I do trust in Sage to write good characters so it should be fine.

Jackson Waddle

Well it looks like he is going from a witch to a queen and it sounds like an actual one with pride and her own motivations. This will probably still just be a political marriage and thus resemble more of a business partnership, but perhaps the goddess's shipping instincts might help things along.

N U

Kinda annoying how she has standards and doesn't instantly simp for someone just because they're strong enough to achieve godhood?