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Hammy

TFTC,

Crystal Petrosky

Tyftc, but I'm DYING here!!!😭🤪

Srsli

Yeah I admit that was a bad cliff, but it wasn't intentional! I mentioned on discord, but if I had of done the conversation there I would have split the Hari family thing across two chapters and also had a really large chapter here, which wouldn't have been ideal. or, I split it where I did and cover all the family stuff in tomorrows chapter as one, it just would have flowed a lot better, but I fully recognised that cliff was evil lol

Hugsenuef

Thank you for the chapter! As a bit of an aside from my editing brain: "I took the two scrolls and handed them to Hari, who stored them immediately. “Oh, that’s it for me,” Luis said quickly. “I just don’t want to go back to the palace yet. You don’t mind if I hang around here for a bit? I won’t get in your way.”" It looks like something got lost here?

dkpfrog

Tftc!

Srsli

Yeah I believe the oh was an okay, Luis literally came in dropped off the writ and deed and was like yup that's it. But I'll have a look properly when I wake up, it's possible I messed up im pretty sleepy lol

Alex V

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

Metafy

Thank you for the chapter!