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Srsli

A small note for this one - I am not convinced this is the right place for this as while I was editing it felt to soon to the start of the book, I won't be cutting it entire, but I'm seeking your opinions on it.

Powernap

Seems like this would be better placed close to when he is already going to leave to usher him out of the city, depending on what you're trying to do with it.

Crystal Petrosky

Unless you plan on extending the capital stay beyond a few "nobel" gatherings, maybe put this closer to leaving. Im not opposed to seeing him get & use his butcher building, & see Micca settle in.. honestly, there's so much storytelling that could happen here, you've left so many threads to tug!

Srsli

There is lots of training that needs to happen we'll be in the capital for a while (for those who love the adventure and you're reading this, don't worry I'm not forgetting you <3 )

Metafy

Thank you for the chapter! A dragon's presence at his shop will ensure noone to messes with it, nice touch!