WYFfH: Chapters 11-18 revised and book 2 title reveal (Patreon)

Book 2 of When You Fell from Heaven will officially be called All the Way! And this is my current draft cover for the ebook. It will be finalised when I have the opportunity to see it in print but I think it will survive Amazon’s print on demand service okay.

Also attached is the current, up-to-date version of the first eight chapters of All the Way. As I was catching up with the story in preparation for writing the finale of book two—the next few chapters—I decided I could be super efficient and perform a preliminary editing sweep, so as to save time later this year. This proved to be a very stupid idea, but once I started, I was committed, and now here we are.

The text in these files will be the basis for the final version of these chapters in the book, so if you spot any typos, errors or—heaven forfend—Britishisms, please let me know, either here or on the Discord server (@ing me on BlueSky is unreliable; I get a lot of notifications and miss things constantly). The formatting will be imperfect in some places, because it’s just an export.

I am still working on chapter 19! I had to do a lot of research to get it right, hence the extra time. I hope to get it out within the next week.

Finally, when chapter 19 drops, the $3 tier on this Patreon will cease to be for new subscribers. You can read this post for more info, but the tldr is that trying to get something out for the $3 and $5 tier every month was causing me to have to constantly switch mental gears and waste a bunch of time catching up.

Right. Back to work on chapter 19!

Edit 1: fixed “Willa does” to “Willa doesn’t” in chapter 11
Edit 2: fixed a single accidental British slur for lesbian, switched it to the Biblically accurate American slur for lesbian
Edit 3: got “they guys” in chapter 14