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When You Fell from Heaven — 22 — Fade to Black (20k words) (Patreon)

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2025-04-18 00:52:22
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Here we go!

Gonna be another chapter toward the end of the month, hopefully :)

Edit: squashed a few typos.

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UltraLuigi

aaaaaaaaahhhh!

Wren Roberts

Nit first: thatthan

Gwen

wow

Wren Roberts
>>171328940

Soo f’ing good. Lynn Scott being a great mom, the other girls being so there and protective, Gordo being terrible. Thank you.

Jade Diaz

Very cheeky to have the chapter title work best at the end of the whole thing... 👀👀

Lucy Severine

I'm really worried by how many times she's (mostly accidentally) blown off Avery...

Anamorphose

Lynn knows exactly what's going on.

Briar Rae

I keep forgetting to mention this, and maybe it’s in this chapter or someone already told u about it, but if not! re: Taylor’s instant messaging handle, there is an anime series called Irresponsible Captain *Tylor* that had already been released by RightStuf (rip) from ‘97-98 on VHS and on DVD by ‘01. Might be something worth mentioning there on a blockbuster trip or maybe Avery makes a weird gift of it to Taylor via Maxine (or just Maxine giving it to Taylor directly) with sharpie writing on the cover to change it from Tylor to Taylor. Just a thought!

SingularCurve

I want my mom to have been like Lynn back when I was in high school in the late 1980s. My mom was too quiet. Dad never understood. He turned the channel on me when I was trying to learn about myself, when trans representation was only on shows like Donahue or Jeraldo. Being that trans teen that had NO ONE and no information in the late 80s sucked. Hell I got to be scared personally by the AIDS/HIV epidemic and just how bad Regan and Thatcher were back in the day. I didnt even get to see much of what was happening to us in the news because even the stories about the epidemic on main stream media (which is all I had being there was no internet yet) were mostly turned off. (Dad turned out ok when I finally told him but that was scary as hell that I enlisted my mother to run interference when I told him and I was an adult in my late 30s that was financially stable and living away from home at the time) I know that kind if inner turmoil that Max is going through, intimately. I would have done ANYTHING to have a Taylor and a Banger in my life at that time of my life. Now to have a Lynn too. Im just sitting here crying while I type this. They are good tears Alyson, good tears but a wee bit close to home that I knew when this moment happened in the story I would cry. Great chapter.

Ellen Mellor

Yay! Sex! Loved that. It was absolutely perfect. A bit of - relative - calmness after the recent stresses - both in the book and in real life. I'm really hoping that Maxine comes clean to Avery soon, although I'm worried that she's going to be angry with her for not telling her sooner. Or Avery just turns up on the doorstep and Maxine's mum sends her round to Taylor's place and finds her. "Surprise..." I think this story might actually be edging ahead of Dorley in how invested I am. I mean, don't get me wrong, I am totally there for all the Dorley girls but somehow this little romance with its dorky queer girls and high school drama just hits me right in the heart. Can I start the campaign now for Alyson to be showrunner on the Buffy reboot? I think you would kill it. In a good way.

Kiva Maginn

This was a lovely chapter and after reading it last night, my partner and I have been talking about it all morning.

Kiva Maginn
>>171490696

Also strongly agree with everyone feeling anxious about Maxine not having come out to Avery yet. It's nail biting anxiety for us. 😬😊

Cromalin

can't believe clay killed the pope, love that for him

Genevieve R

between dorley and wyffh your writing has finally gotten me to make some headway on learning makeup! better late that never, though i blame it partly on having a bounty of gnc women in my life growing up

Lizzie

Damn good chapter. The only bad part is that I have to wait for the next one.

PetPetal

Waaaa its so beautifulll, the shared understanding between Maxine and Taylor is everything… Lynn being so supportive was amazing too! I’ve fallen in love with this story(was already in love from the first few chapters but i may or may not have binge read them all over the last two days)!!!