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  • [epub] When You Fell from Heaven - Chapter 23 - The Game.epub
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It’s done!

edit: fixed continuity error + corn

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Comments

Zenmadster

It took a few days to get past "unintelligible anxious noises" as a response, but that might be the oddest sort of compliment? You've built these characters, in a story that I kinda thought "Cheerleaders? This one's gonna be silly" into a cliffhanger where you could basically wreck me with a few words.

SevenFerns

Finallt finished this chapter and good lord Avery you better chill the hell out after Maxine explains everything. Poor girl can *not* handle her best friend being a TERF right now.

Zenmadster

Psychoanalyzing a bit, but Avery's got three people to feel angry at: Max, for not explaining she's Maxine; Taylor, for being there when she couldn't; and herself, for *not* being there.

Rhiannon Swanson

finally caught up! just in time! and now i have to wait... the build knowing avery was coming from the texts was so good just such an amazing chapter

Gender Swap Podcast

I've been binge reading for past few days and *muffled sounds of distress* hit the last few pages like a brick wall. I almost NEVER get emotionally invested in characters but this is soooo good. I'm going to stop putting dents in my tablet with my death-grip-of-every-emotion-at-once and try to patiently wait for the next chapter.