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This chapter was a bit of a struggle until I realised that I was trying to cram into one chapter a story I needed many more words to tell. As soon as I decided to split the chapter into two, everything fell into place. Unfortunately for me, that decision was, like, two days ago.

But it’s finished! Consider this part one of a two-parter, but I think it’s satisfying on its own, too.

Content warnings: dysphoria, misgendering and deadnaming, use of an anti-trans slur, and the view of someone on the supply side of forced feminisation.

Thanks once again to Emory Ahlberg for her art of Aaron, which you can see in full on this post (and without the poorly photoshopped fairy lights).

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Cassidy Marble

yay! new chapter. thanks for the meal

Helena Grace

Eeeeeeeee this is so so worth the wait. The Pamela reveal with Martin? I'm shocked even allowed that, she must have made a very good case for herself. Raph and everyone sees Stef for the first time and see just how femme she is, just not pinning girl at 50 meters anymore. Stef not wanting Paige to frown at her because it would make her *more* attracted to Paige is so fucking cute. That girl is too pretty for her own good. Luckily she has Christine to defend her. Mistletoe foiled! The second years tried, thanks gals. Nadine is a very sweet human, she's doomed because of Mia but sweet. I did not know I could hate Jake more, well done on that? Someone like say Frankie needs to stab him in the dick, she 's already done it at least once. No Abby tonight? A shame but spending time with her family is understandable

Jennifer May

Thank god today is my half day at work! Regardless my productivity is dead; time to sneak a paragraph in until I punch out! Okay Home and time to finish this chapter Very, very interesting turn with Martin and Pamela. Very curious to see where this’ll go.. Finally fished this chapter, god things are coming together. Aaron is precious little shit and he must be protected!

July

God this is prolly my favorite chapter in a while. I haven't been paying attention to in-universe dates so it being the Christmas party surprised me.... and I'm very happy about just *everything* in this one. Jesus I love that ending.

Carrie

Really just Lucy with the footbal when it comes to forcefemming Aaron huh (and i go for it every time) 🤣

Carrie

Also! Other thoughts. Part of me is wondering if Dorothy’s plans are gonna end with her getting scammed by the org she’s hired. Hoping Val and Co make a break for it in time to get stuck at Dorley for lockdown. Raph and Aaron are vibing! Love Martin! Adam lore!

Maggie Heels

I finally did it... waiting whole week for 30th at ScribbleHub would kill me... ❣️❣️❣️ start reading now...

Kate

Just finished! amazing chapter, I wish I was better at articulating my thoughts so I could give this all the praise it deserves but it's SO fucking good

Emmabonn

Great chapter. The suspense of Aaron’s outfit was killing me. I just hope it is at least a sort of fem tux in the style of Catra or Zendaya.

Andi

The tuxedo!!!! Ahhhhh!

Tamsin Davis-Langley

I definitely didn’t see ANY of that coming, and I can’t wait to see where it’s going. (And I ESPECIALLY can’t wait to get the full details on Aaron’s tuxedo!)

July

In addition to this, god I'm so excited to see Aaron talk to some enbies. That boy needs to talk to some more varied gender experiences to figure his shit out... it's no coincidence that I like chapters more when there's more Aaron...

Maggie Heels

ohhhhhh tux......... my brain was rushing things obviously..... oh Aly.....

Bri

!!! This was incredible. I had to go bully a friend to put down the new Destiny expansion just so that I could gush about it. Two lovers sharing one last dance together before the end is a trope I always love, and I 100% didn't expect to see something like that here. I spent the whole time assuming this was building up to the first time he'd ever been properly dolled up. But to do the opposite, to let him wear a TUX and make it the first and last party that Stephanie and *Aaron* will be able to go to together, now that's just painfully bittersweet. I'm so excited to see where this goes.

Veryy

This is such a beautiful chapter. I really enjoyed the whole chill and domestic lead up to Christmas dinner. It was real real nice to see the strength in herself that steph has found, both in the basement and above. Stenordale content best content. I simply must see Valerie reunited with her Beatrice. The last scene was moving, ty4 Aaron pov. Shoutout to Mia. I do love to see the broad sampling of types of girl in this story, and especially Aunt Bea’s reaction to each. I am so looking forward to everything about next chapter.

Valyusha

Jake really has a problem doesn’t he? Honestly hope Dorothy disposes of him before he’s able to do anything. He’s arguably worse than even her.

Olivia Irene

omg, this chapter was so amazing, start to finish 🤩

Emmabonn

Some friends have said that since Jake knows the codes they can just push Dorothy over and then have Frankie stab Jake in the D1ck until he tells them.

alysongreaves

The, uh… [glances sideways at TG Storytime and Fictionmania] you know, the literature...

Jane Ditchfield

I loved this chapter, the basement psychodrama is absolutely My Shit and we got so much of it, just enough Christine still being a dorley student to keep me happy, the little Aaron suit subversion was cute. 10/10, this is the shit I got into in the first place

Andi

Also, remembered this from chapter 22 “God. I’m going to buy that girl a present.” “She can hear you, Donna.” “Hi,” Lorna says, hesitant. “Oh! Hi, Lorna! I’m going to buy you a motherfucking present!" I wonder if we're going to get to see Lorna get her present 😊

E

Aaaaah, the fakeout with the suit was such a disappointment/hoot! Although, as somebody else pointed out, it gives the event a really bittersweet tinge. I loved the dialogue in this chapter so much I decided to have a go at bringing it to life. Here's a pre-voice-training, very-much-masc-interpretation, really amateurish snippet of Valérie and Frankie's convo. - https://voca.ro/1el5zxpsL51v

Elizabeth

Finally commenting :), processing Aaron’s party outfit after a couple of really hard days personally leading up to reading the chapter was surprisingly difficult for me. I won’t bore you with details of my own nonsense, but as the week has gone on, I’ve realized just how *amazing* it is. And the rest of the chapter, omg, so great!

E

I'm honestly considering turning Dorley into a private audiobook once I actually start voice training. Do like a chapter a month and record the changes over time for later. If only I had a good microphone (or talent)!

alysongreaves

Reading aloud from books — and trying to do different voices for different characters — was part of how I voice trained, too :)

Nina

such a wonderful chapter alyson!!! i love the quality! it feels like i’m reading several chapters at once the way you pace things and i absolutely love it! i really do hope rachel is let in on the secret. it feels more fun that way. also, god does oliver suck. while i don’t think you’ll wash him out, i do expect him to be the most apologetic little fucker in the future. raphael is gonna be interesting seeing him come back into the fold. Will! What a change! I love that steph and aaron refused to be silent about their relationship! I’m a little surprised at aaron’s choice to wear a tux but i can totally see aaron being non-binary in the future! he’s certainly got the gremlin vibes too many of my non binary friends have :D The valerie side story is so captivating! I can’t wait to see her escape and finally get to see bea! at least i hope! Absolutely wonderful chapter! I love the way you tell your story Alyson! So much detail that it’s its own world!

Allie c

Pippa experiencing the trans girl generational divide :P Also don't forget bigcloset topshelf and at this point scribblehub should probably also get an honourable mention XD Wait I'm 22 am i old? >:(

alysongreaves

I’ll always remember an early comment on this story, that it was a Scribblehub egg wandering into a Literotica story

Emory Ahlberg

Oh. My. Gosh! Alyson, you've done it again! This chapter was an absolute rollercoaster, and I am LIVING for it! The emotional depth and complexity of the characters, the intricate plot twists, and the masterful storytelling - it's all just so captivating. Your storytelling is simply fabulous, and I can't help but gush about it. The decision for Aaron to wear a tux was definitely unexpected. I didn't expect him to wear a dress, but a tux seems like the LAST thing he would put on willingly. It's "drag" for him, I think. I am so excited to see where his journey takes him next. Loved, loved the interaction with the other basement boys. Ollie is trying is hardest to become the next Declan. If only he knew! Speaking of which, Valerie's story just continues to have me on the edge of my seat. It's such amazing, tense drama and the suspense is killing me. I'm dying to see how everything unfolds - particularly her reunion with Bea (fingers crossed!). As for the rest of the cast, I love how they all have their own unique voices, and how each of them contributes to the overall narrative. It's truly a testament to your incredible talent as a writer, Alyson. Once again, this chapter was an absolute pleasure to read. 💖 P.S. I'm now only one chapter behind!!! 😁