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The Sisters of Dorley — Chapter 33a — Until You Make It (13.6k words) (Patreon)

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2023-05-31 21:50:23
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May was a nightmare for so many reasons, so I don’t have a completed chapter for you! What I do have is the first day of chapter 33, and it stands alone pretty well.

I do apologise for any typos; I’m still kind of ill.

I also have a cover reveal for Dorley book three! I kind of love it.

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Comments

perfect34

I really really enjoyed this chapter! Just a question though are we getting the rest of chapter 33 next month or will the rest be released sometime this month? Regardless of how you space it out I really enjoyed what you put out.

alysongreaves
>>109741628

I plan to release the rest of the chapter as soon as it's done. About a week, maybe a bit longer.

DeusExMarina
>>109741628

Take your time. Your health is more important, and we all know that whenever it comes out, it will be worth the wait.

Toadie
>>109741628

Being perfectly honest- the way you've got this section organised and cliff-hangered, aside the notably shorter length of it in comparison to the average, you absolutely could just call this part 33 actual and it'd stand fine on it own.

Samantha Louise

Take your time your health comes first. Feel better soon. 🫂

Mallory Nguyen

Ohh, that makes Will's dialogue in the previous chapter read a little differently. I can empathize :X. (And as others have said, make sure to take care of yourself!)

prisca_theologia

I was not ready for the story to finally progress past eggs and into full on repressors but it had to happen eventually.

Mary

"William — never Will, not in his own head; nicknames are familiarities, and William’s never felt like he knows himself" It's never the bits I expect to get to me that get to me.

EnderX

Wow. Bethany certainly makes an impression, but that final bit was quite the revelation!

DeusExMarina
>>110168025

Maria told Bethany that whatever name she chose would be cursed by at least one sponsor within a week. Beth is just making sure she lives up to expectations.

Lily Valentine

Poor, poor Will. I never quite expected her to be a rotten egg. How is every goddamn chapter you write the best chapter yet? How, Alyson??

Emory Ahlberg

Alyson! Damn, that was so good. You wrote Will's emotional turmoil so, so well. Poor rotten egg girl! Bethany's schoolgirl act - holy crap! The visual of her sashaying in her 'borrowed' schoolgirl outfit, chewing bubblegum and blowing bubbles was priceless. What would the old her have thought? Actually, he probably would've thought it was fucking hilarious, too. God, your knack for blending deep emotional explorations with light, comedic moments is so masterful. Now... Will Bethany start a trend with her daring fashion choices? Maybe open a fashion line? "Dorley Dazzle – for when you want to make a statement and confuse the hell out of your friends at the same time!" Keep up the brilliant work!!!! 💖

Ciara

I’ve just got to point where it refers to Maria also having a civilian job. That confused the hell out of me for a while.

Ciara

Oh just got to the end. I let out an audible ‘Awh’ at Will & cried a little.

Abby Stegall

Melissa's narrative in this chapter is everything to me! I relate to her so much and I'm just so happy to see her happy 😭💕