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This is chapters one and two (of three) of the story. I’ve included chapter one again because I’ve both heavily edited it and added new scenes.

Hope you enjoy it!

Content warning: dysphoria.

edit: 2023-07-06: fixed the big/dig typo

Comments

Kate

oh my god I would die for Carl(a)

Kastastrophe

Wasn't expecting to be crying into my pillow tonight. This poor girls story of struggle has broken my heart :(

SinsofSenna

Someone dropped a line on Twitter about this that was something like “you write like a knife wound.” And I think that’s an amazing line on its own and is also the best summary of your writing I’ve seen (especially for this piece). This was so good and also sharply painful. Thank you!

Lily Valentine

This is incredible stuff. The POV characters feel so agonizingly human, and their complex relationships with womanhood especially. Thank you for writing this: I'm already champing at the bit for chapter 3.

SingularCurve

This story reminds me so much of what happened to me in my 20s it hurts, but in a good way. Once again your absolutely mad genius way of writing brings tears and solace to my soul.

MaggieHeels

OMG... Do you think that only 3 chapters is enough for them? For those poor girls? Can I safely assume then 3rd chapter will be waaay much longer ? 🥹🥹🥹🙏🙏🙏❣️❣️❣️

MaggieHeels

Ah sorry now I found your message where you said "[...] three chapters at the very least, but probably more."

prisca_theologia

What is it like writing this stuff emotionally? You so consistently manage to make something on every page an emotional razor, does that hurt you too? Like, obviously exceptional work as always, this one just struck me as particularly raw.

alysongreaves

Honestly a lot of the stuff that I'm channeling is quite a way in my past, so it's sort of accessible but not immediate. There are things that affect me, but they tend to be family stuff, soppy scenes, that kind of thing.

Pumpkin Witch

Damn, I enjoyed it a lot.

dr boofenshmirtz

You have no fucking idea how much I NEED the next chapter. Your writing is ridiculously good and always hits close to home for me.