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hello everyone, I'm working on improving stability, uncached full files will take a while to load and imports are a bit backlogged both due to bandwidth. Thank you.

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Published:
2022-04-05 06:04:30
Imported:
2026-06

Comments

Anonym Sau

Any reason why chapters 17-22 is locked, while 23-27 is unlocked?

MarkArrows
>>115269628

Fix't. But they're already unlocked on RR, I'd recommend reading there, some of them are slightly more polished since I see them again before posting on RR. As for why they're locked, probably happened during the IRL madness I had to go through last month.

RedPine

No cliffhanger my #$$'%$$$. See ya next week. Grumble grumble.

MarkArrows
>>118527824

But there isn't a cliffhanger? Fight's over. There's a wrap up chapter in progress and then the epilogue

RedPine
>>118527824

First: When a story is engaging enough, epilogues, not-dates, and a casual afternoon stroll count as cliffhangers. Second: The fight isn't over until Father's central soul fractal is confirmed destroyed or his head decapitated. It wouldn't be unlike him to pop off a last minute "whoops you didn't get me, you're dead." Third: Although it's unlikely that Keith successfully managed to kill his father, that's not necessarily true of the other knights in the armor, and there are plenty of potentially unpleasant, permanent consequences to this fight other than death.

MarkArrows
>>118527824

"First: When a story is engaging enough, epilogues, not-dates, and a casual afternoon stroll count as cliffhangers." Love that xD

Wandering Scribe

I was wondering if at some point you could group the books into “collections” here on Patreon. I am currently re-reading the story from start to finish and it’s a lot of loading and scrolling on mobile. Just a quality of life suggestion.

Morgan Swanson

Quality over quantity man, take as much time as you and the story needs :)

TroubleFait

Take care of yourself :-)

Rotary

No worries

RedPine

Real jobs are important. That said, you're writing style is probably good enough to be a full time job - assuming you dont value your sanity :)

samuel tupper

I demand art!!! Lol, take what time you need good sir, I for one can and will wait for this amazing story as long as need be

Tony
>>81886487

I also am in need of art for a D&D campaign based on 12 miles below. Is it possible for me to commission an artist for you?

Wyv

Been a while since I've felt the need to check this lol but 4 chapters at once? Nice. If it wasn't unplanned (?) I'd have guessed it was end of book 3 coming up. The dump to be released on what, Friday?

MarkArrows
>>86272600

Not sure when the dump is going to come out, still tinkering with the whole scene. One lesson I learned early on was that fight scenes shouldn't last more than two chapters, unless there's pauses in between. RR readers are particularly onery about this, but I can't trim this down in a way that I like. @__@

CRX
>>86272600

Who cares about them, we're the ones that are paying! :) Come on lad, 8 days is too much without a chapter. Good story 👍

jdouglas

double chap today?

MarkArrows

It's not so bad, few more days and a whole set of chapters will come out for a long binge, and you'll have access to those. At the moment, it's past 70K in words. Very much a 'draw the rest of the goddamn owl' issue.

Pedro Villa

Holy hot dog, rest of the owl indeed! Take your break, you've definitely earned it. Until you're in a good place to come back to us, so long and thanks for all the fish.