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Captain Morgan

Finally I’ve been looking forward to this

Julien

Can’t wait to see how this one plays out

Robert Hernandez

I see this as something new, not everyone has written a story like this. I see Deanor wedding Rhaenys since she is alive and Robert will most likely have her inside of the Red Keep as a hostage to keep the Martells in line. Cersei will most likely plan out to either kill Robert as Queen and getting Rhaenys out of the Red Keep to her son or flee with Rhaenys and Daenor in secret. But will see how this goes

Elias

I like it

Anthony Russell

good story just wish you would finish the others before starting new ones but good start

J T

I am all in on this.

waitwosius

Not a fan of the name tbh, but love the start of this story

Michael Turner

Awesome story, I like the names. I hope Sandor Clegane becomes his bodyguard and they have some adventures.

Michael Turner

Also the love interests could be Arianne since he’s a “bastard” he could be safe there. It’s also close to where dragons have disappeared in the past.

Michael Turner

Will Daenor have a white lion as his companion? A name day gift from his “father”

Manuel Arreola Torres

Honestly I think Tywin will try to find a way to make his grandson the true heir to the iron throne

TheChosenOne

Great start. Not a fan of his Targaryen name though so maybe just name him Daeron.

Drinor

Cersei has no reason to give a fuck about Rhaenys. Right now, she wants to make sure her son survives, and later, she will think of ways to get him to the Throne. But right now, Tywin is the one who has her son, and she knows her father won’t show mercy if she doesn’t do what he says.

Drinor

This one will be updated again only if it wins in the next poll.

Lost_Monarch

Perhaps, the Lannister kings in the past were recorded to have Lions, although their "bonds" with them were questionable, I'm pretty sure one of them was eaten by their own lions.

Lost_Monarch

I like the way the story is being set up... though I'm curious where Rhaenys will be if Jon Arryn spared her, likely Dorne, or if not, in exile like Viserys and Daenerys are, if their positions remains the same... I like the name, never heard it before, Unique valyrian names are great for establishing a unique identity for the character. Curious as to how this will develop, Cersei would likely seek to have her young dragon on the Iron Throne in the future, no matter the cost... though whether or not she has any more children, whether by Robert or Jaime, who would serve as an obstacle, let alone rhe remaining Targaryens, is a question yet to be answered. A great start, can't wait for Chapter 2.

Michael Turner

I was thinking more along it could make sense and help with the story. A white lion would help new readers see it as “different version” of ghost since he’s kinda part of the old gods. Cersei and Rhaegar got married via old gods and the new right?

Drinor

Sandor will become his bodyguard, and it will be quite entertaining.

Drinor

Well, when it comes to his love interest. I know Rhaenys will be one, but I have yet to decide which will be the second one.

Drinor

When it comes to Jon's first animal companion, it will be a surprise.

Drinor

Tywin is a smart man, he will try to see how things play out before he makes a decision.

Drinor

Well, that's the name I wanted as well, but it seems that while writing the chapter, I wrote Daenor instead of Daeron. Now it's fixed.

Drinor

Jon Arryn will try to convince Robert to leave Rhaenys to live with the Dornish, but when Robert's mind is set on something, nothing can change it. Cersei will see her son with Rhaegar as her only real son, like Viserys with Rhaenyra.

Gilgamos

Love it

Abdoulaye Sarr

You’ve done it again Drinor

Winter

Wait wait this makes no sense if lyanna didnt get abducted that means arthur dayne gerold hightower oswell whent barristan selmy lewyn martell and darry are alive ?

Elias

Re reading this for the second time now, I think the thing I find most intriguing is that Cersi will actually care for and protect Jon, most of the stories where Cersi has a kid beyond the cannon three usually ends up with her hating the child in question and favoring Joffrey and cannon not really changing much despite the kid being better in every way while also being part lion.

StrevHd

So since Rheagar never sang the song of ice and fire, does that mean one of Dearon's wives will be Sansa? If so I would be interested to see it. The only good version of the pairing I have read so far is Father of Dragons. Also dig his Targereon name is unique.

Drinor

Their fate will be revealed later, but it will make sense once it's revealed.

Drinor

The Cannon will change in this story; this is not going to be a retelling of Canon, but Jon is half Lannister.

Drinor

Daeron won't be with Sansa, but Arya is an option. I'm glad you like the name.

Captain Morgan

Love it can’t wait for more content

Winter

Why not have this child grow up in the westerlands and also get sent for fostering in the north that way the west and north might actually work together …. Although im not sure cause it tywin still got people killed then idk

Drinor

Why would Tywin or Cersei want Jon to be fostered in The North of all places? If they wanted him fostered somewhere, it would make more sense for it to be The Reach since they have the largest army and a lot of food.

Longclaw16

This is... fascinating. I only imagine what will happen to the North in this, and Lyanna.

Julien

I absolutely love this one. Keep it coming

Stephhh

Oh this is interesting!