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TheWateringWizard

Glad Anders clarified his position on Jon’s heritage because I wasn’t sure what was his angle with his legitimisation. Breakstone Hill is a backup, in a way, in case he never discovers his heritage. Not a big fan of Barbrey for now. It’s usually how she’s portrayed in fanfics, someone really bitter. But here she has another husband and a son and unless we see her be more tender with William and especially Benjen, I’m just going to think “Poor Benj, to be saddled with that…” Not that she doesn’t have the right to be angry at Ned though. He TOTALLY fumbled the bag when he didn’t bring back the bones of any of the people with him at the Tower. Not sure how he could forget that…

Drinor

It is not really explained how Ned kind of forgot about the bones of all his friends. Hell, Howland was there, too. Why didn't he remind Ned that their friends should be returned North? Barbrey will move on, but it will take some time.

Longclaw16

There is no point in shitting on Rhaegar and Lyanna, especially since Lyanna was Anders' granddaughter

Drinor

Well, Anden is not like that; in his mind, what Lyanna and Rhaegar did got many, many people killed, and he is not a soft man.

travis btmb

"And how are you finding married life, Lady Dustin?" Shouldnt she have the stark name now?