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Comments

Daeron Targaryen

Damn, Gael’s child is an ungrateful brat to hurt the dragons feelings. Also Jon is such a bitch for murdering Arianne.

John M Pogue

Oh boy this chapter from that opening with Rhaenys to the ending with Sara, the Mysteries keep getting bigger and bigger.

Imperatororbis

Sara you need to love your dragon or she will not love you you must fight against the dreams not follow them

Drinor

Well, Sara is terrified of them, but things will change soon… As for Jon, he lost his daughter. The poisoned wine was given by Arianne, so he wasn’t really in the best state of mind anymore to listen to her or anyone else.

Drinor

Sara will learn to love her dragon. Her character arc has just begun.

MAEGHT Maxime

If rhaenys is here does that mean that Dany will appear one day ?

Drinor

I don't think so when it comes to Dany. She will not appear in this story.

Pedro kowalski

Poderia atualizar mais está historia

Robert Hernandez

I have a quick question. Is this story an adaptation of the first Prince of House Targaryen, that's on your Fanfiction page.

Matthew Johnson

Confused at first and then caught on

Apex Calibre

Oof, now when she needs her dragon most, Sara probably isn’t going to receive it. Its almost similar to Drogon and Dany’s early relationship. I noticed the story lost 30 chapters, you editing them?

Longclaw16

Aliandra could change the whole outcome of negotiations through that one statement from Rhaenys. Sarra and her dragon broke my heart. The poor little hatchling.

Drinor

Laenor and Seasmoke are dead, so changing anyone’s mind will be very difficult. I found writing the scene between Sarra and her dragon difficult, but things will get better…eventually.

TheWateringWizard

Oh that Alliandra/Rhaenys conversation was brilliant! Love all those mysteries. Can’t wait to see Aenar’s reaction to the message. Lykard seems like such a wet noodle. Just because he touched some old thing and had some visions, he thinks he’s in any way an equal to a dragon-riding Targaryen? Pfff what a joke. Damn, that scene with Sara really breaks my heart. Gael once again said “when you’re ready” but I disagree totally. I’m sorry but if my daughter had such horrible visions/flashbacks/panic attacks, as if she had PTSD I’d sit her down and get to the bottom. Sara’s parents should be wayyyyyy more alarmed that their daughter seems completely traumatised by dragons for seemingly no reason. And sorry to say this but it sometimes feels like this plot point drags a little bit. Sara’s been terrified of dragons for quite a lot of chapters now but things haven’t progressed apart from Cregan’s dragon and hers hatching. But I might be talking out of my ass. It’s clear that this is Sara’s big character arc so I might just be impatient. Sorry to hear about the declining likes, must be disheartening. One potential reason could be the very slow pace? I think we’re nearing 400k words on ff net and it looks like the story is set to go on for a very long time still. I haven’t felt like any chapter so far was filler material but things do progress slowly. However you’re also following lots of characters and POVs so it’s going to take time. A second potential reason could be that we don’t see our Aenar/Rhae/Laena ship together often. People who wanted to read about those three getting it on and developing their relationship might be feeling annoyed with the lack of romance. Not giving any solution just potential problems. Sorry about that. Edit: ohhh I just realised I missed chapter 61… now I feel stupid for mentioning the lack of romance…