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Gabe Sarti

Ah of course, the Dornish target the one rebel leader who protested the deaths of Aegon and Elia and who had the most legitimate reason to rebel against House Targaryen in the first place, instead of targeting the man who ordered the deaths of Elia and Aegon in the first place. Instead let’s target the brother of the woman who dared “seduce” the husband of our dear princess because it dishonors Dorne!!!! They have one of the largest victim mentalities I have ever seen, while also being giant hypocrites who constantly sleep around with other people, even if they were married.

John M Pogue

Damn so that is Doran’s plan kill Ned and frame the Lannisters.

Bryan Hamstra

I honestly think Doran is a scumbag just like tywin they are the same they are just power hungry even in Canon Doran is a piece of shit I never liked him ned stark isn't perfect but he isn't to blame for Ella's death if anything Doran is more at fault than ned is he has the people capable of a bunch of things he could have easily rescued his sister and her children once the sack of kingslanding started

Timecka

Dornen killed Ashara and plz to kill a Stark with 20000 Northman. You have make a huge mistake Lennisters, Ned Ben they hate them and by them are all Lords of the North. So to kill Ned only in Dreams , Ben yes but plz don't, Lord Anden yes in a skirmish. You have one big prob Deamon not Jon he is not ready but in 10y Deamon will have his vengeance vs Dorne. Raeynes is the big Spider in Dorne for Jon

travis btmb

tftc why does ned have bronze and leather armor shouldnt it be steel

Daeron Targaryen

Right kill Ned, instead of maybe Tywin

Jamil c

I agree with you Doran is a true scumbag I think his even worse than Tywin in some aspects. we all know that Tywin doesn’t hide what he is, but doran is the type who doesn’t care about no one not even his family he only cares about himself even this plan of his isn’t revenge for Elia he doesn’t give a shit about her he’s only doing this for himself

Jamil c

Gods I hate Doran hope his plan fails I never liked that piece of shit.

Drinor

When it comes to Doran and Oberyn, I think the biggest difference between them is that Doran sees what happens to Elia and her children as Dorne appearing weak and Dorne, in general, losing power over the Realm, while Oberyn doesn't see that, he doesn't care as much about Dorne appearing weak and losing the power of the Realm. Instead, he focuses on the fact that he lost his sister and nephew, and he grieves for them and wants payback. In this story, Doran and Oberyn are targeting Ned in hopes of starting a war, and in their mind, if The North were to attack House Lannister. Robert would have to fight The North and fight the child of his best friend if Ned were to die, so in Doran and Oberyn's minds, that's a very good kind of revenge. When it comes to targeting Tywin, they feel that killing him would be much more difficult than killing Ned, and even if they manage to kill Tywin, they don't want to just kill him right away. In this case, both Oberyn and Doran want Tywin to see everything he built fall apart before he dies, so they are targeting Ned, knowing a war between The North and House Lannister can last for a very long time and will weaken both sides.

Drinor

Well, in the books, Doran planned to have Quentyn marry Dany, and that went up in flames. He plans to have Arianne marry Young Griff, and I can see that going very bad, especially with Jon Connigton having Grey Scale. This plan...well, let's wait and see what happens; maybe the wrong one will get the knife.

Drinor

In this story, Doran and Oberyn are targeting Ned in hopes of starting a war, and in their mind, if The North were to attack House Lannister. Robert would have to fight The North and fight the child of his best friend if Ned were to die, so in Doran and Oberyn's minds, that's a very good kind of revenge. When it comes to targeting Tywin, they feel that killing him would be much more difficult than killing Ned, and even if they manage to kill Tywin, they don't want to just kill him right away. In this case, both Oberyn and Doran want Tywin to see everything he built fall apart before he dies, so they are targeting Ned, knowing a war between The North and House Lannister can last for a very long time and will weaken both sides.

Drinor

Well, let's see how this plan goes, maybe this time it will go even worse.

TheWateringWizard

Doran’s plan feels so stupid… there’s no reason for Tywin to target Ned. Plus won’t the Norvosi stand out quite a lot amongst the Westerland men? They don’t really have the same skin colour… there’s also the fact that it would hard for regular Westerland soldiers to get close enough to Lord Stark, unless they use bows. Can’t wait for the plan to blow up in their face. God do I hate Doran and Oberyn. Their stupid plan, their stupid victim mentality… targeting the least guilty and responsible person during the Rebellion. How about they use this incredibly intelligent plan to kill Tywin, the lying, betraying piece of shit 100% responsible for Elia’s death ? I look forward to the day Doran bites the dust… Jon and Dacey is a nice pairing unless it trumps Dany or Rhaenys. Looking forward to the next chapter !

Drinor

This story will have Harem. As for Doran’s plan. Let’s wait and see what happens.

Lost_Monarch

Something tells me, much like all of Doran's plans, an unknown factor will come in at the worst possible time and ruin it... forcing him to spend years coming up with another one. and should they have a chance of Succeeding in their endeavor... well, than the seven hells will have no fury compared to what Jon can give them... Anyway, looking forward to what happens next... especially the next possible interaction between Jon and Rhaenys...

Drinor

It will take some time until Jon and Rhaenys finally have a chance to talk, and the two finding out the truth about who Jon truly is.

Longclaw16

Goddamn it, Doran. And I know he's keeping this a secret from Rhaenys Jon's stature is growing, not just in the North. Hopefully it doesn't expose him to unwanted attention

travis btmb

"No one questions the boy's abilities," Lord Dustin interjected smoothly. "But surely, Lord Stark, you must have some feelings about another house claiming your son?" Isnt lord dustin dead ?