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Comments

Hakai

Welp.. I'm out.. This was exactly what I was afraid of in the first chapter. Its literally every single cliche of a Slytherin Harry. Even Snape is extremely toned down, when you said last chapter that that wouldn't be the case. Genius main characters all fail eventually, because they rely on the authors intelligence and plot induced stupidity to survive. You have like 15 fics on the go, we're supposed to believe you can keep up with writing Harry as a believable genius who can out think the entire house of Slytherin and Snape, while not being a bigot? Hard pass.

Drinor

I assure you Snape is not toned down, and this is just the second chapter and Harry just entered the Slytherin house. I’m not sure exactly what you were expecting to happen, but if you don’t want to read it, then you are welcome to not read it.

Ton

I’m hooked definitely need more

Beerosity

Not going to lie, now that I think about it, Harry and Draco would actually make a pretty great duo in Quidditch.

Darrow

Great chapter as usual. One small thing, I was hoping that you wouldn’t use the term ’light side’, no good politician would advertise outwardly that they are light, Gray, or Dark. As it would immediately bring out negative connotations to the factions they belong to.

TheWateringWizard

Ohh what a great first Hogwarts chapter! It’ll be so interesting to see the influence Harry can have in Slytherin and how that will affect things when Voldy comes back.

sonicmalibu

Does Potter at least have clear eyes that don’t need glasses? This hair change is wielding me out.

Kuronokishi

Great Chapter!