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Comments

Erinnyes

I appreciate that your characters in this chapter in particular are multi dimensional. They have their own interests but aren’t blind to reality or completely inflexible so that the plot can happen. Nice work.

Mauricio Sanchez

10/10, great chapter. Soon Crouch will suffer in his reputation, when Harry finds out he sent Sirius to Azkaban without a trial. Sirius, Sirius is going to be proud of Harry

Jonathan Sánchez

I really liked the part of Gringotts, I wonder which other country Harry is going to? although Russia already has it in its sights

Itsyaboytrav

Hats off to Terrance Smith! All the extra updates makes it worth the monthly subscription.

Drinor

Well, the other Countries would like to get their hands on Harry Potter, especially after Fudge, with his infinite wisdom, will show just how smart he really is

Drinor

Well, to be fair, Crouch wasn't a Minister of Magic when Sirius's ass was sent to Azkaban, so Harry cannot really put the blame for that on Fudge.

Drinor

I'm glad you are enjoying it; the following chapters will explore more of how Harry's new talisman will affect the Magical Community of the World.

zain sad

I’m really glad that Harry Potter is fighting for his own independence – even though his invention is incredibly powerful. He already has far more influence than the Dark Lord, who only operated in England and ruled through fear. He’s just a terrorist with too much power, and nothing more than a madman who needs to be taken down. I’m truly excited to keep reading and see how the story unfolds. I actually got a subscription just because of this story.

Hadrian v.E.

Um, wut. I hope Daphne is talking about "get[ring] rid" of presumably her blood curse, right?

Hadrian v.E.

Indeed. Harry is commanding power through self-made innovations, friendship across various non-traditional but important boundaries, and just being a good person.

Tyler smith

Dumbledore is right about the power without love is dangerous

Kuronokishi

Fantastic story!!!

Kuronokishi

New talisman blocks all powerfull curses. All rich wizards will be buying them in stock. The Voldemort supporters would refuse them out of pride. Hence, giving other a competitive advantage. Dumbledore, Amelia Bones, etc all who were killed in original canon, now have a living chance due this Talisman. I think every talisman would get its own name due its fame. First talisman is already called "Potter Talisman", the second would be called "Tonks Potter talisman".