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Comments

Erinnyes

I love this story but I could not read this chapter. The way the translations were done was just too painful. Having to hunt for the words I could actually read for 30 paragraphs was just brain murder. Sorry mate, please just note they’re speaking a foreign language and then write it in English.

Ryan

Agreed with the other guy but good story chapter none the less

Danielle Marie

Good chapter, but the first half was hard for me, especially with the different translations. While I understand the need, I think for me at least, I would of liked a reference before the transition that they are speaking so and so language, and write it in english. Other than that I like all the different reactions that came from the article. I do so agree with Russia if Britain forces Harry, I would be looking to move. Yes he will miss us his friends, but if he wants to be happy and independent then it might be time for him to move.

Drinor

I went back and fixed it. I removed all foreign dialogue and left only the English dialogue. I'm truly sorry for making this mistake.

Drinor

I fixed my mistake. I removed all the foreign dialogue, and left only the English Dialogue.

Jay

I mean I could read the foreign language but it was EXTREMELY difficult. I only read English and having to hunt for the translation was extremely difficult. It might make it easier to swap the English translation with the language it's translated from and put the English translation in italics.

Drinor

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I removed the foreign dialogue, and only left the English Version.

Drinor

I don't know if you got the notification, but I went back and fixed the mistake. Now, it's only the English version. I'm sorry for this mistake I made.

Konner Human DBZT

I hope it was only constructive criticism

SSs34TheElf

Thanks for another great chapter! Also, sorry to nitpick, but I thought the obvious French-British connection that would be brought up is that Albus Dumbledore has worked with Nicholas Flamel before? There would be a historic precedent of a next magical powerhouse from Britain also collaborating with Flamel.

Mcclaz

Now I am curious, do you already have who Harry will be paired with decided?

Cody

Well one of the tags at the bottom says he will have a harem so I am assuming girls like Daphne, Susan, Fleur, maybe even Crytal-Harmony herself. We'll have to wait and see as he is still 12 right now.

Hadrian v.E.

Damm, Harry is a player—magically, politically, and romantically 😁. "Nothing revolutionary"?

Hadrian v.E.

So the Russians use another talisman ranking system? Is Golden Shield like Gilded Fang—level 3—then?

Tyler smith

Why he so short