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Comments

Ryusui23

If the sword is too much on Luffy’s arms then Luffy should have a physical sword to wrap his lightning and powers around

Leroy

Noooo I need more

Vic Hops Shaquille

Damn, Luffy never gets a break. Lol But that's the raw, chaotic road of becoming the Pirate King. Great details of the fight between him and the frightening Shamrock. The creativity you put in for Luffy's storm attacks are great especially the Maelstrom Heart. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Tk Oni

Please write more of this story, I beg you, I really want to see if yamato joins the crew so early, and whether or not usopp has a redemption arc

Ryusui23

I really like this story and how you do it and thanks again for another great chapter, sadly I have to wait next month or another for another chapter

Drinor

I'm really glad you liked the chapter, and Luffy will go through a lot of tough situations. Thankfully, his lovers will be there for him, as will his entire crew.

Drinor

Usopp is broken right now, and Water 7 Arc of this story is the first major break from the Cannon.

Zeldris

The way you write this story is peak. I didn't expect Shamrock to mark him with Imu's symbol and his parting words alluded to something strange

JoeBear9001

Great chapter as always. It was probably explained in an earlier chapter but why does luffy's power affect him negatively if he's a logia type? Also is luffy still joyboy despite not eating the Nika fruit?

MAEGHT Maxime

Fuck that was epic but now Luffy is mark with imu mark so it is really bad , thank god yamato was here. If they hurt is nakama there will be a hell to pay. But the other comment are right we need more update please i beg you, thank you for your time.

Drinor

The Arash Arashi Fruit is one of the strongest fruits in this story, but since it's so strong, it can negatively impact the user and it can cause damage to the user. As for the whole Nika thing, well, it will still play a role in this story, you have to wait and see.

Hayden evans

Why does luffy constantly lose why bother change his fruit if his original fruit is stronger

Hayden evans

And he still hasn't learned haki to it's fullest sounds like you want him to constantly lose

Hayden evans

And now he can't use his powers to there fullest unless he kills himself

Hayden evans

Now you make him a slave well done stop writing your just not good I bet shanks is going to betray him next

Hayden evans

The whole reason robin stays with luffy is because he was able to protect her but now he works for the WG instead fucking pathetic

Hayden evans

And if his devil fruit is so strong how did he lose to akainu