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Comments

John M Pogue

Oh boy, I am dreading the next chapter.

Apex Calibre

Martell’s ruin everything

Lost_Monarch

Makes sense on the note... carries to balancing act between first & third person writing, who's lens you are looking through and how they view the character they discuss, versus a number of them or third person which leaves any view up to interpretation.

Lost_Monarch

(2) I do remain curious as to just how this will play out... if it turns out Arianne ended up poisoning her own cousin, after thinking she was dead for so long... that is both a stab and twist of the knife, one for kinslaying a long lost member of your own family, the other for the retribution they would surely feel not long after from the remainder of House Targaryen.

Hakai

This story is easily my least favorite of your stories. The entire plot is convoluted and hidden behind a fairly badly setup backstory that we don't know anything about and is entirely irrelevant to the actual plot of the story. The whole unreliable narrator thing doesn't actually make any sense either because we're not seeing anything through Jon's eyes. It's not told from his perspective. It's told in an omniscient perspective with random things hidden.

Drinor

There have been instances in the past where Aenar remembered Arianne begging, telling him that she did not know the wine was poisoned, so it remains up to the reader to determine whether she was telling the truth or not.

Longclaw16

Yeah, I know Aenar blames Arianne when it was someone else that poisoned the wine

TheWateringWizard

Ohh what a chapter! Loved it!! But we didn’t get any details about Jon’s relationship with Dany. Were they already a thing before he kissed Rhaenys?