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Hadrian v.E.

Fantastic! Though Harry's shortcomings are showing during his conversation with Flamel. He's going off the recency effect and leans into whichever point he just made. And despite offering a very gentle critique, Harry already has his feefees hurt. Toughen up, champ. His scenes with CH, Gabrielle, and Fleur are all great. I already alluded to this point for a previous chapter, but now I'm directly stating that Harry's next project should be providing CH a relatively non-taxing method to transform into surface mode perpetually.

Romavictrix

Cant wait to see Flamels reaction to itisa