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Comments

alba perez

Esta genial si puedes subir mas de un cap te lo estaria muy agredecida gracias por el cap

Josh Robbins

Just me or was there a bit of like a repost or maybe a retry? Like you have one paragraph talk about them needing to cross the bridge then jumped back a bit and had the whole encounter again but phrased slightly different? I could be wrong.

TheWateringWizard

Uhh… seems like you’ve repeated yourself in the middle of this chapter. We have Harry and co discovering the castle twice. We go from them being on the border of the bridge to them back on the approach to the castle. The fighting was awesome! What’s the goal with the runes Harry gathers? Will he finally be able to use them at a site of grace? Will we see Melina soon again? Looking forward to that and ESPECIALLY towards the badass fight Harry’s going to have with the Misbegotten! So hyped for that.