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Hakai

While the chapter was pretty good, I really feel like you sacrificed too much of Harry for the sake of Natasha having some unhinged moment. Harry was barely present for that entire encounter, and the pov switched about 7 times, which made it extremely frustrating to read. The entire scene should have been from Harry's Pov, with his mind running commentary and actually doing something instead of literally being non existent until Natasha flipper her lid. Even then Harry was completely secondary to the scene. Pretty good chapter, either way but was pretty disappointed in Harry

John M Pogue

And the plot thickens. I wonder what the fallout from this will be. I wonder what Nat did that was so bad. Hopefully, Harry voices what Sirius said to Hermione and Susan, and they consider that he was telling the truth.