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Side chapter (Patreon)

Published:
2021-10-22 22:33:56
Imported:
2026-06

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I'm struggling with if I should write a chapter for one of the villains.  It would be very spoilery about the character and very off of the normal.  Far more violent and sexual than this story has been, but it just keeps bouncing around in my head and it's kinda irritating.  What do you guys think?  Poll finished.  You guys didn't want me to post it so I won't.  I'll send it out to people on discord if they want it though.  Thanks to everyone who voted, and particularly the people in the comments who suggested writing it regardless of if it would be posted.

Comments

Lictor Magnus

You could write it and then put it out when the info in it is less spoilery.

EmmaLeia

Is it a story you can do after the villain has been introduced to the MC? or she hears about them via some means or another? I'm not against a dark chapter but you just recently had one so you will need to do something light and fun to balance it out.

The Lost Pages

Sides stories as a principal, yes. This particular one doesn't sound like something I'd enjoy reading about. In large part because "Violent and sexual villain" just screams trope to me. Since it is you, I know you'll do a fine job of it. But this just seems to be the kind of side chapter I'd disappointedly not read and wait for the next regular chapter.

Wandering Agent
>>70315968

The thing is that it's about what said villain is doing at this point in the story. It's just... very, very different than what I've been writing. If I do do it I'll have to hide it under a window or something so people don't accidentally it.

The Lost Pages
>>70316121

I guess part of the question is what role is this villain going to serve? Is he going to try and rape her? Is he there to just be fodder for her to step over? How is this villain going to impact the story?

The Lost Pages

One other option is to write it and get it out. I have done that with my stories with things that won't make it into the book. It gives my other characters greater depth.

Wandering Agent
>>70316121

The villain isn't interested in Alana sexually, and is part of the overall fight between the kingdom, particularly with the terror type assaults. This particular person is a bit unusual for my characters in that they don't have some sensible reason, they're just a bit crazy and really mad at... many things.

J3_Haustkottr

I voted for not because you said spoilery, but really I think you should write it and then decide if you want to release it or not.

Wandering Agent
>>70316394

I think regardless of the poll I'll end up writing it, if for no other reason than to get it out of my head and get on with the rest of the story. This is more for should I share.

Bridie

I voted no because I don't want it to obstruct me reading more of the main arc sooner :)

Anonymous

Voted no. I like side stories but spoilery seems bad. I feel like the story has better flow right now without introducing a big baddie. Makes every new character seem like a possible baddie. But if you feel like the character needs to be introduced now so we know what their deal is and what they’re up to then that’s your call as the author. I’ll enjoy next chapter either way.

Leviathon251

I feel like you could still write it, just see how it goes on patreon and if no one likes it here just don't post it elsewhere.

Leviathon251

The only problem is that I actually can't think of who would be the antagonist currently so maybe wait to do a side chapter until after they've been introduced in the main plot....

Scott

if you need to write it, then write it, just don't share it or not right away. If it has spoilers, hold of on releasing it until a later date but as a flashback or something.

Shifty Albert

I really don't know who that villain is, but if you can't introduce him/give him the same depth if you don't write a side chapter, I'd consider just going for it. —— As long as the spoiler doesn't reveal too much about what he's going to do, but merely leaves us guessing how and when things are going down I don't see the problem with breaking POV to create that bit of tension.

D

I alrady know the identity of the antagonist, it is: Dras mom ;))