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  • Waifu Catalog SI 26-30.pdf
  • Waifu Catalog SI 31-35.pdf

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Content

Chapter 26 - 35

Comments

Cerber

Couldnt he have tried to let her down softer? Like tell her he finds her lacking in a lot of thing, which makes her less attractive(worded differently). This way, he would make his future relationship with her slightly easier

Boyo

This Sunspear arc is a blast. I love Stephen's calm confidence. If I would critique one aspect of this story, it's that the MC is getting progressively more rapey. I like villain MCs, but Rape makes me pretty uncomfortable (I normally just skip the scene)

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

It seems Stephen is self-sabotaging his relationships pretty hard all over the place here... But what really bothered me was that "arrogant young master"-chuuni spiel at the end. Why would he damage his reputation, and his position in every sense with a move like that? Now he's not the innocent party, he's breaking guest rights on some level, he's being obnoxiously rude, and he is stooping to their implied level before they've even thoroughly showed that they've reached that level. The only one he handled even vaguely reasonably was Tyene(and perhaps Brienne). And even that was a pretty sloppy job. Is he going insane? Is his power going to his head? I rightly don't think I've even seen such amateurish power plays since Joffrey... Quite disappointing. Is it the boredom, and losing his control over his surroundings? PS. I'm sorry if this all comes off as exceptionally harsh, that's not usually my style. But this came so completely out of left-corner, and bulldozed through all his efforts up to this point that I really think I had to be this harsh in my critique of the MC here.

Anonymous

Soooooo he’s decided to channel Gilgamesh, that’s the only explanation I can come up with to explain his major attitude adjustment especially with that last line lol. Like seriously my whole mental image of him flipped to caster Gil in that last bit, all he needs is the red eyes, red magic tattoos and blond hair. It was entertaining i will admit, just feels off