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Okay, a lot of guys are having problem in accessing the last few chapters for this and the Jaune Arc story. So I decided to upload these chapters once again for you guys to read.


For those of you guys who don't know which story this is. This is the link for it. Check it out if you guys are interested in Game of Thornes fanfiction.


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Cerber

General opinion It was a really enjoyable story with different POVs. You showed us a lot of different sceneries and scenarios. The development over time for the different characters, landscape and political field was cool as well. I hope this gets continued. Compared to other world jumpfics, that may be ended whenever they want, this one actually got a clear enemy and ending Ch182/183 What was the point of the 2 rape scenes in chapter 182 and 183? How did they contribute to the story? Especially chapter 183. Deleting it or not reading such a short and pointless chapter gave nothing? 182 showed the brutality enough Ch199 Why is Harrys power lvls so inconsistent here? Why did he use a bloody killing curse on something the smells and is corrupted of death? Why not a bombarda to make distance? Wasnt he an experienced auror, who has faced 300+ dark wizards? So, will this force harry to make firearms? Shotguns filled with dragonglass bullets seems nice. Ch242 Holy crap. I never liked Sansa, but that was pretty cruel. He should at least do something with Joffrey for messing with her mind Ch282/283 Y, a shame Catelyn didnt get raped. Her attitude and how she acts is going to get her family killed, that she thought her childhood friend who deals in money for a whole kingdom is good is even more laughable. The again, ladies of westeros are mostly taught to be idiots. But she also lived in the north, but was unable to adapt or listen to her husband. She even sucks at being a southern lady, who excels in duplicity Ch284 Jesus christ. They are both attracted to her and she is loyal, the fact Harry kept using legilimence on her after finding out she is actually in love with him was a dick move. Especially if he really ends up with her. "I never use legilimence on my loved ones" fat lie Ch294 Well, things are going tits up and Harry only himself to thank for. He should have dealt with rhe Khal while he had time, he should have dealth with Petyr when he had time, he should have made sure the south was stable before going on his expedition. There is so much he should have done before it blows up, because they always blow up together or when Harry isnt available to handle the situation Ch295 And ther we have it. It went tits up. The southern kingdom are going to create war, when Harry doesnt have the time to solve it Ch370 He didnt want anything with her and fucking flirts with her right after saving her? It doesnt what harry think, it matters what the bloody love struck girl thinks. Doesnt help this whole situation is on Harry and him procrastinating things. Ch372 Could you make harry make up his bloody mind? Does he want to interact with her or not? He doesnt even care about westeros customs, so why humor the girl? Just make him sleep with Lyra already Ch373 Makes me wonder how many times she going to keep getting heartbroken from her attempts. Is she ever going to realize her situation can be blamed on her naive stuck up mother and her rigid and spineless father? Who is incapable of handling his wife? That Harry repeatedly told him Sansa is too naive and ignorant during their two meeting about his betrothal to sansa? Ch376 Except for some annoyances and some months of setbacks. Harry hasnt encountered anything major yet, like death of family, friends or crucial allies. So lets see how this goes Ch382 Oh for the love of god. I hope you dont let Sansa become like Catelyn to Ned, becoming a deadweight. He better add Lyra as well after this and force Sansa to learn Ch407 Harry is afraid that the other lords fear him? He bloody massacred the lannister armies and he could crapet bomb them all as well. Why would a bloody assassination bring more fear? Not to mention he is going to soon reveal his freaking dragon. The excuse you made in this chapter was thin and poorly made Ch415 Well, thats awkward. Sry Jon, i snogged the shit out of your future. Yikes Ch440 I guess thats what he gets for not giving Jon a dragon egg and not bothering with checking the eggs she was gifted. Ch442 Couldnt he just have read her memories, so he didnt meed to let someone die like that? Ch444 Isnt Harry afraid of Daenerys feeling resent towards him? Like it is awfully convenient for someone so powerful, resourceful and so far away from home to be there to save her at such a time? Like even Ygritte asked questions, so why wouldnt Lyra? Is it because you are going to add Daenerys to the harem, so when she asks the same questions Ygritte asked. He can say he never read her mind? But he instead let those 5+ people die? Ch450 Problem solved i guess. Especially when he solves her preg issue Ch460 Sense of moral is all over the place. Emotionally blackmailing is fine and letting people die, when he could just mind read Daenerys and confound her, but kicking Sansa out is too hard Ch461 Are you going to showing the white walker and wights to his army before the war? Because seeing and knowing is after all a big difference. The shock, unpreparedness and fear will get his army killed Ch464 Have you considered to give Lyra an upgrade? Her devotion and love seems solid enough, it would also make her safer against an assassination attempt or accident Ch465 He went from fearing that other might be too afraid of him to sharing a scret that the whole world would kill him for to a lovestruck girl that feels betrayed. Why? Ch468 Id he going to share his seeds to build up the food storages? He is after all getting help from the south and they did food Ch485 The way he so casually uses his mind arts on Lyra irks me to no end. Even for the simplest things. She has shown to be loyal and hard working, but the way he keeps rejecting her might cause resentment. Especially when he showed so much interest at start and gave her hope Harry is single most greatest asshole. Not evil, but asshole/jerk in planetos. He keeps beating around the bush and stringing things along. Just give the girls what they want and they will not fail him. It isnt like he or even Ygritte is against it. Him marrying Daenerys in the future already made Harrys reason a moot point. He is going to marry Daenerys out of situation and the pure willingness after all. Or maybe its the legilimence part? Anyone he doesnt use it on is a potential harem member? Because it feels like it All in all. It was a enjoyable read Thx👍

JO LP

I finally got around to reading this story. I like it a lot even though I see a few inconsistencies here and there. Do you plan to continue writing it? I can see that you uploaded chapter 480 nearly 3 years ago. And though you updated here up to chapter 485, that might just mean you forgot to upload those chapters back then. It doesn't necessarily mean the story is still active.

Sherzu

Hi did you drop the story?