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The first chapter of Slumrat Rising posted on Royal Road on March 18 of 2023, or about a year and a quarter ago. Five volumes later, the Slumrat has risen.

There is... so much to unpack. About the story. About what it has meant to me. The difference in mentality that comes with being able to say you are a published author rather than someone who enjoys writing as a hobby or side hustle. About the things I learned researching this book. About so many things.

Part of telling a story is knowing when to stop. And, at least for now, this is the place. We leave Truth in a garden, loved, and loving himself. He still has things to do in the world. He has a whole rest of his life to live. Truth's only about twenty six at this point, and he's only lived twenty one of those years. But this was a story about a terribly broken, traumatized young man who fought his fate, fought the very world, and cultivated himself in the process. Let's give him his flowers, and the time to enjoy them.

One of the odder things about this story, one that people used to kvetch about, is that it is tagged "satire" on RR. Why? Well, since you are Patreon readers, you are obviously smarter than the common masses! But for the people reading this on a pirate site, I'll spell it out.

I love Xianxia books. They are really fun, and they play with tropes that, when I first found them, were totally new and alien to me. Cultivation? Meditate your way to power, but juice the process with natural treasures and alchemy? Awesome! But... these are all set in fantasy China, and while my distant relations had some connections to the China trade, I am in no way Chinese. Also, these webnovels do Daoism dirty. They are copying each other without referencing the source materials. At this point, the photocopy problem is severe.

So I made a satire. I took the bones of a Xanxia but used western mysticism and escoterica to build the world. Xianxia books are all about 'persuing the dao to become a god,' (a program actual daoists would savagely disagre with) which is the kind of religious take that won't get you in trouble on the mainland.

Well, if those books are about pursuing the Dao, which is to say a study of the world via philosophy, as a way of accumulating a fundimentally religious power, can I do the same with my book?

Yeah. I can. Because the difference between religion, magic, science and philosophy was marginal for most of the last six thousand years or so. Or longer. And if we look at the original sources (or, being honest here, scholarly discussions of those documents and artifiacts by subject matter specialists who know infinately more than I do about the subject,) we can find absolute wonders.

This has been one of the most fun years of my life. I'll discuss what's coming next in another post. I just wanted to say thank you all so much for all your support. I hope you can stick around and see what is coming next.

I know most of you subscribe for Slumrat, so I'm not asking you to stick around as paying patrons. However, I do hope you will remain free members, so you can be the first in the know about new projects. I'm also looking to set up a group chat here on Patreon, a sort of AMA, which is, I THINK, possible through the community tab. Must investigate further.

Thank you all so, so much.

Warby

Comments

BaguaBrady

Absolutely loved this story and agree about the ending. Bravo! 👏

habu987

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and have zero problems with the storyline ending here...but without having at least an epilogue or two to wrap up some of the copious loose ends, it feels very abrupt to just end here. ETA: To clarify, I view there being a difference between the storyline ending here and the story ending here. This is a natural stopping point for the storyline, but the story has a ton of open ended plot threads that are left dangling if it ends here without any followup.

ioajfidsnmfomds77

I too vote for an epilogue. But that's just because the hungry content gremlin in my heart is never satisfied

axel jensen

I will always want more, but the ending is a good one. Can't wait for when/if a new story comes.

william wallace

Thank you for your story. Thank you for giving it an ending instead of dragging it on forever (even if I do wish for a few more chapter). I am excited to read your next works. I wish you much success.

Timothy Alexander

Thank you very much for the story - enjoyed it greatly. I think we would all enjoy the/an epilogue, or even another few books to watch truth get the nascent soul and beyond, but also respect you decision to end it here and now. Maybe you can come back in a couple of years! Thank you again, for one of the most original (lol - dw I did actually read the note) xianxias out there.

Kain

Yeah this feels right, while I am a little let down that starbright was taken down by an Angel possessing Truth I’m fine with it. Really the main thrust of this story was about Truths self discovery and there just doesn’t feel like there’s enough left to fill out another book without retreading ground, or introducing new trauma/breaking what’s been built to this point which is basically the same thing with an extra step so I’m happy it’s ending here.

Deathly_God

Thank you for an incredible experience. Easily one of my favorite novels to come out of RR! Congratulations on sunsetting a project in a satisfactory and comprehensive way. I'm definitely going to miss my weekly Slumrat chapters, but I'm looking forward to your next projects. Something decidedly more.... Weeby?

gostsamo

Good place to stop with Truth, but what about the sibs? Also, are you going to post anything in august? I'm reshuffling my subscriptions on the first and it would be good to know.

s476

One of my all time fav stories:)

Alexander Belousov

Loved the book. By all means, will remain a free member. With you, I am actually curious about your next project. ;)

Baines

I want that Merkovah interaction lol. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Taedirk

I'm going to miss reading Slumrat everyday, but definitely satisfied with the ending.

sri kalyan mulukutla

I love how you are ending the story here. Unlike some 3k chapters story, you are not taking the soul out of it and professionally fucking it to its death.

Max Müller

sighh i was afraid it was the end for truth

Darren Deloach

Good ending the only thing I would wish for is a epilogue "snippets" like Truth meeting back up with Teacher and frustrating him, little light hearted moments. Would live to see were the sibs ended up, since that was one of Truths main driving forces

Alexis Lionel

While this is the end of Truth's story. Will you re-use this setting for other tales? It was a very interesting setting to explore with Truth. But it also feels like there was so much more left to explore.

Thefreddygamer

Best read of 2024 for me so far, thank you for the awesome experience!

BurnNote

Huh, I'm gonna miss slumrat, though i have to say the ending feels pretty rushed. What's with the sibs? And etenesh bring dropped out right after a major character moment for her without ever coming back to her beyond flashes is doing her dirty. It's better than just peetering out or going way past its shelf life, but the ending is by far the weakest aspect of the story.

HyperJoJo

Thanks for the awesome story! I am a bit sad that it is over now, but I can see how this is a good point to end it.

Cícero Daniel

Obrigado pela historia grande obra!

Addicted_Reader

Tragic to see it end, but it probably is the right decision. There are always loose ends in life, and the fundamental thrust of the story was accomplished well over all five books. In an ideal world, there would be much more to tell. But I think that much of the force of your writing comes from ... well... the Truth of it all! Writing the path to Gnostic Godhood means writing a true account of approaching perfection itself. But if you knew what that really looked like, you wouldn't be writing about it. A sad paradox.

mark harrell

I'm not really satisfied with the ending as it stands now due to many character threads being unresolved. I don't really have a problem with the story ending for now per se. It really just doesn't feel like you intended to end the story right here originally. Not that I think you should try to force more blood from the stone. But I would definitely consider editing previous books to better build toward this ending. My main reaction was: "Good close to the Starbrite arc, wait what? The stories over?!" Then my immediate next thought was: "This feels like Slumrat somehow got canceled by a publisher and told the author they needed to end the story in 2 chapters."

mark harrell

I also feel a little weird with the theming and symbolism of Starbrite being taken down by anyone but a (in-universe) "clay doll" It kinda bothers me that for all the karma Starbrite had coming and the journey of self-discovery and actualization Truth embarked on - in the end Truth was just used as a rat-shaped tool by MORE alien monsters to kill a nuisance. I personally feel it kinda grinds badly against what the books been telling us.

Dath

Not sure how I feel about the story ending at this point (for now, at least). This was a fantastic way to wrap up *the first Arc*, but there is such an endless amount of setups and unresolved or even barely inrtoduced plot threads with Thrush, the snake(s), the Rough Patron, the Demiurge, the Prophet, the Nephilim, other worlds, angels, demons, Nascent Soul, the sibs, God, the history of the Sons of Seth, the planet, Sariel, etc. etc..... That it would feel like a colossal kick in the nuts and waste to end Truth's story, or at least the exploration of the world at this point. I can, however, definitely understand wanting to let it breathe for a while and focus on something else, I can imagine this story to be quite exhausting to write with how intricate everything is. I'm happy to let Truth take his well-earned rest in the flower garden, but I'm also keeping an eternal side-eye on him for the rest of my life waiting for him to get back up. After all, if there's one thing everyone loves about Xianxia novels, it's their length.

_mori

The book is as great as ever. I wouldn’t say the ending is rushed. I’d always thought that the death of Starbrite would mark a type of ending, regardless of whether you’d write more volumes or not. The journey was amazing. But the actual ending is a bit unsatisfactory, to me at least. It just feels a bit off seeing that Truth didn’t go get his siblings. Literally everything else was perfect. No need to change that. I’m perfectly fine with imagining that at some point in the future truth breaks through and figures out his own way off world. But just for the sake of sentiment, I’d hoped we’d get to see him reunite with his siblings, not just Etenesh.

Alex

That was a really good story. A list of reference materials would be good. I think I get the ending. An epilogue would just turn into another volume. Maybe one day. See ya around

sri kalyan mulukutla

I really really wish you will write some epilogue. Not even some 2k wordy chapter just a brief 200 words essay telling what happened later

Loggar

I sincerely think this deserve an epilogue @Warby Picus . It feels rushed to just leave it there without saying what happens next with Etenesh, the sibs and so on. Doesn't need to become a new arc, but at least for satisfaction of the readers.