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Next one is ready for you! One more to fill the backlog, then I'm likely going back to BoC.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oFGMuoZC05o2HDeHmSnaNrtgDW-pXpGN3bMEY0vC4kA/edit?usp=sharing

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Motanium

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Already on my second re-read.

spotter

When Trigger joins dinner, it's implied he's aware of the tiger woman in the soap opera; is that intentional? Since Mila is unaware of the soap opera until she walks in and the rest of the crew says that Trigger has been in his quarters for hours when she asks where he is, I guess it would imply that Trigger has seen the show at some point and Mila has not. Reasonable possibility, but it broke my immersion a bit.