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Got another one out quick. Enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ltpoSCTjPYgKjHsvoMJzLLNDeJ0m19z24z_cEYBH0FM/edit?usp=sharing

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Jericho Rising

Awesome! Still fresh in my memory from where I left off too.

Stav Tri

Nice moves trigger. *Meanwhile the on board AI is documenting EVERYTHING that goes on in the ship* I highly doubt that Eddy is going to get a one up on nidhogg, since we already know it can transmit itself to take over other systems, Eddy's tablet is not any difficulty I can imagine for it. What I do wonder is how deep, and how far can nidhogg adapt and evolve systems since it is technically a rogue ai. Just bound to specifically Trigger

Jericho Rising

On that note; I enjoyed how you used the time of this chapter to better develop where things are going plot wise and where Trigger and Mila's relationship is going. Despite feeling rather short you made the chapter progression feel rather natural which was a nice touch. Getting used to the more animalistic aspects of the series is still gonna take some time for me but im happy to try; the story gives mass effect vibes for me which is quite nice.

Duke of Coffee

Finally, romance in Fuggman fics. 😜

NinjaMole

Hmm … so you call this trash, Fuggmann? Well call me Oskar ‘cause I love it!😆 Keep up the good work.

clagann

Welcome back to sauce or loss with striker squadron