Patron Early Viewing/Editing: Borne of Desire CH 11 (Patreon)

READ THIS: For people who want to help edit: Please make suggestions when you're 100% certain the suggestion is needed and correct, but leave the ones where you're doubtful be. This is to cut down on the time and effort needed to verify erroneous suggestions, which has been a little bit of an issue recently. Thank you.

Also I'll be taking a short break after this chapter. I don't start my next job until the 31st, so 24th-30th will probably be spent relaxing before coming back refreshed for you all. This one was so late because I've been mentally drained as of recently. The last thing I want to do is ruin a story you all enjoy by forcing it. 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_8Y2ZKb-ec33hxeCFW0M-N_c0-dRumGLtU3BRmmdCaA/edit?usp=sharing

READ ONLY

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OmNmhMB0SNoSxowryTr7ug6w6kn4ijQxLz91WYM5JTg/edit?usp=sharing

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