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Patron Early Viewing/Edits - BoC Act 2: Ch 12 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-12-19 00:31:04
Imported:
2026-06

Content

EDITS: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hHnGLf93G7NyzqZyDncOWdscscJIVgjdOzU4_56lCHY/edit?usp=sharing

READ ONLY: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wxWm6_mrEIFnmmpyUASKn6UnS6qnaR4Gl6kzSxFEPlU/edit?usp=sharing

This one was exhausting.

Comments

Sean

Please stay away from these Pokémon human relationships. I don’t like the foreboding. Why are you catering to the horny crowd ? Just direct them to a porn site…

Prinny

So good, I have no words, every new chapter it feels like you improve your ability to captivate my attention, i might have to increase my pledge soon.

Hazel Kings

Did not expect another drop so soon

Anonymous

Wow just wow. Amazing job on this chapter. So many writers aspire to evoke a portion of the amount of emotions i felt reading this. I cant say it enough, but good fucking job.

MooMoo195

I guess the rumors about Ninetales being vengeful are flaring up here. I wonder if lee will contact lokoko on that forum for advice.

The Golem Crafter
>>97818513

I fully agree with you on this one. I can understand the friendship and love but anything further than that doesn't make sense honestly and it's a pretty gross thought.

Zach

You just made my whole day

Powernap

Tears, well done.

Doodlyboy15

Damn that was good, why is someome chopping onions near me?

Appl
>>97818513

I get where you are coming from, but personally I like that it's not just completely ignored. Fuggmann has said before that he has no intent in writing this story in that direction, and I'm inclined to believe him. However, he is also writing these characters to feel like real people, and this is most certainly a topic that would be discussed between real people. I think that it would make the people -and the world- feel less real if the story just ignores such a large part of the human mind.

Spartanstoryteller

Loved the corvi section it brought a tear to my eye

Stephen Place
>>97818513

Lokoko was brought up again this chapter. I’m hoping this is more of a ninetales thing.

James G.

Another good chapter. Despite my feelings that Corvi's arc was taking too long (and I really think that's more an unfortunate repercussion of the online serial format), it was still plenty emotional seeing him finally confront himself.

CMDR Dantae

This chapter was beautiful. Simply beautiful. You evoke such a range of emotions. For someone who used to suffer depression, the latter half is something truly inspiring. Thank you. God bless you.