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The End of Days has come... but not for us.
The UEC was fighting a losing battle against the demons for decades, forced to sacrifice more ground every day. But the Overmaiden, a technoghost AI and leader of the resistance, has created the perfect weapon: The Hellmarine.
He lost his family to the demons. Now, all that's left is hate and rage and unyielding power. Rip, crunch, gore, dismember—this unstoppable juggernaut will slaughter his way through the hordes of Hell, single-minded and filled with righteous purpose.
And he won't do it alone. Seraphiel the exiled angel and the UEC's newest recruit, his personal physician Dr. Mandy Hughes, and the Overmaiden herself will be there with him every step of the way. They will bear witness to the carnage he unleashes, for he is the nameless one that will make the demons fear. He is the Sword of Mankind.
He is the Hellmarine.
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