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Derek V

"the event was tomorrow, and the, so I focused on the first" That doesn't seem right. Also "a major thread to Ming". Also "was a bit concerned she’d"

Shweta Narayan

ooh I just caught that first one (it's a missing part of sentence after 'and the' -- I kinda love these personally because they give me a glimpse of process options I'd never think of myself. I think this is the first I've seen that wasn't at the end of a paragraph.) and skipped down to paste it in, but you're way ahead of me 😆

Shweta Narayan

Yay! Non-tournament stuff! Minh getting to see Malachi in his element! I've enjoyed the tournament thoroughly but I'm eager to get back to the stuff that's inherently important to Malachi being the rewards. Malachi noticing the Headmaster, and it being because apart from him it's threats to Ming who'd notice, is *chefs kiss* and I think I love the Shepherd so far and want to hug him and make him coffee 😂 "she wasn’t braiding the weakness and life senses her new Analyze spells together into a more cohesive whole" - I think there a word or phrase missing here, maybe she wasn't braiding together the stuff her new spells 'gave her', something like that? if and THANK YOU for the reminder about what the Oracle says, I only remembered that Ming's important and not that he *must* make an ally of her