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RektNut

Happy New Year, you Evilish Citron!

Touch

Happy new year author! +Love her character development + Love her dynamic with Mr.white in recent chapters - The anticipation of Ynett’s betrayal seems a bit delayed/dragged out, hope that’s addressed soon - We at this point know Chloe is either the daughter/the angel themself, and some mysteries we could see where it could probably go, so hope it also addressed soon as well (most plot point/mysteries literally starts hinting at the story first few chap, hope there’s new ones or just get rid of it and make explosive char development or new phase where she fight with determination or something)

Mizar Caph

Thanks for the feedback and for reading so far! I think direction is definitely an issue I got with the story so far. And I'm trying my best to try and address that issue, but it's been challenging.