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It's finally here, ready for your viewing...pleasure.

I've had this chapter in the back of my mind for quite some time. I'm glad I could finally get it out. Part of this chapter was intimidating to write because of the D&D elements, but I think it came together well. You all will be the final judge, of course.

There are a lot of little things happening here, much that will be reflected in upcoming chapters. The next few chapters should be especially fun to write, I can't wait to bring them to you. It's a bit of a breather from the intensity of the last couple -- though Sarah still gets her fill.

I believe most of the grammar and other issues have been caught but if you spot something we missed, let me know!

Enjoy.

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DING

Lester rolled his eyes and pushed his phone further away across his desk. He turned back to his computer monitor trying to focus on his game. All he wanted to do was play his new game, Helldivers 2, but between his cellphone and Discor,d people kept bothering him.

On-screen, Lester was alone, the last member alive from his team, battling against hordes of alien creatures.

DING

Lester glanced away at the distraction of his phone screen lighting up. When he looked back at his monitor, a giant alien bug was mutilating his character’s corpse.

“God FUCKING DAMMIT,” Lester said, flinging his mouse across his desk as his phone began to ring. He angrily reached over and saw who it was. Jesse, Dan’s old coworker.

“What?” Lester almost shouted into the phone as he answered it.

“I’ve been trying to get a hold of you,” Jesse said breathlessly as Lester retrieved his mouse from the room’s corner and started checking his Discord notifications. He ignored the messages from his private server and instead opened up the one he shared with his D&D group. “I was wondering if Sarah mentioned anything about me since that night at the club?”

Lester had to stifle a laugh, “Come again?”

“Has Sarah mentioned me?” Jesse repeated, “I know she felt something on the dance floor. It was like we were moving together, completely in sync. I can’t completely explain it, but I felt this magnetic pull between us, and I know she felt it too—until Dan ruined it, of course.”

“How many times have you jerked it to that memory, kid?” Lester cycled through messages from his group until he saw the most recent one from Shadowweaver, aka Eugene, the royal pain in his ass.

“Uhhhh,” Jesse nervously laughed into the phone, causing Lester to frown.

“What is it you want, Jesse? To answer your question, no, Sarah hasn’t mentioned anything about you.” Lester said while reading Eugene’s message. Ever since Ned had mentioned to the group that Lester had a girlfriend, Eugene had been ragging on him to prove it, adamant that he was lying and making this woman up.

Usually, Lester wouldn’t care, but since Lester joined their D&D group, Eugene was the only player who wouldn’t capitulate to Lester’s demands. Quite the opposite, he was the one who always had to be diametrically opposed to whatever Lester wanted, almost out of spite, it seemed. The older man pissed Lester off to no end, but Lester had to maintain appearances. Very few active groups played in Chicago that would have him, especially with what Lester had done in his last group.

“Can you give her a message for me, Lester? I need her to know how I feel. So she can feel assured about leaving Dan,” Jesse pleaded.

Lester wanted to put Jesse out of his misery and block his number. His ramblings were pathetic. Still, Lester didn’t want to take a pawn off the board. As the Russians would say, Jesse was a useful idiot.

“Jesse,” Lester said calmly. It’s not a good time for her to hear that message. Listen, I will contact you when the time is right, okay? Goodbye.”

“But, uhh, I did what you wanted. I really should have another—” Lester heard Jesse hurriedly trying to make a last plea to his obsession. Lester hung up and silenced his phone. He focused back on Eugene’s text, replying to something Ned had said in the group chat.

Shadowweaver: “Bullshit. That’s as fake as Lester’s ‘hot’ girlfriend.”

Keeping his life in siloed had always been Lester’s modus operandi. When one silo got tainted, he could burn it completely without poisoning the others. But now Lester was thinking about how Sarah could help him shut Eugene down once and for all. It was a risk worth taking - Sometimes, you had to cross the streams. He typed up a response.

Darkspire: I’ll host Saturday’s D&D game at my place. I’ll bring my ‘pretend’ girlfriend too.

Surgebinder: WOOOOO

Lester rolled his eyes at Ned’s dumb response. What a moron

Shadowweaver: This is your first time hosting in ten years. I guess I finally got under your skin. Since we're playing make-believe, I’ll bring Santa on a unicorn.

Lester exited Discord and went back to his game. He didn’t like deviating from his plan with Sarah, but sometimes, he needed to put people in their place. Eugene’d had it coming for a long time. He knew deep down that this kind of emotional response could derail long-term plans, but Eugene was a long-term problem that he could solve once and for all.

***

Sarah walked quickly down the hallways to keep pace with John, the Interim CEO from the board. He’d had them in back-to-back meetings with department heads and outside vendors, trying to pivot the direction of the hospital. John was a head taller than she was, and she had to walk briskly to keep up with his casual gait. Her heels clicked on the floor as she walked. Sarah loved this pair of heels; they matched her black slacks well. She looked professional today with a conservative brown sweater and dress shirt underneath. The shirt's cuffs extending beyond the sweater’s sleeves were slightly rolled up. The collar of the shirt framed her neck demurely.

They were heading up to a meeting on the third floor with Marcie from HR. As the elevator doors closed behind them, John said “Great work on finding those cost savings in the diagnostics department. They’ve been dragging their asses for months on doing that.”

“Thank you, John. It’s just part of the job,” Sarah said, smiling back at him.

“No,” John said, looking into her eyes, “It really isn’t. You go above and beyond your role here. You keep this place running. That’s been obvious since the first week I was here. You’re a real asset, and we’re lucky to have you.”

He placed his arm on her bicep and gently squeezed it as he smiled. Sarah didn’t know how to answer, and they stared awkwardly before the elevator doors opened. His hand quickly left her bicep and moved to hold the elevator door, letting Sarah exit first.

“How’s progress on the CEO hunt?” Sarah said, changing the subject while trying not to sound too eager as they walked to their meeting.

“Slow but good,” John said as they turned a corner. “I can’t say much, obviously, but a couple of external candidates look promising.”

As they reached the meeting room, John stopped outside the door and added, “...and there’s one internal candidate getting a lot of attention.”

John winked at her and then walked into the meeting room. Sarah smiled to herself for several seconds, basking in the glow of a job well done. She gave herself five seconds to enjoy it before putting on her best poker face and following John through the door.

***

Dan had a few minutes before his meeting started, so he looked at his LinkedIn page. Today, he was meeting with some people from the Elevate Engagement Group, but Dan didn’t have high expectations for the meeting.

They were Chicago-based and discovered him because of his new social strategy. They’d reached out with questions and wanted to meet with him. Dan was on his lunch break for the call. He didn’t want Walt to discover what he was doing, and after Lester had walked naked through his job interview, he’d opted not to take any calls at home either.

That’s why he was posted in the Starbucks a few blocks from his office. He had also learned how to put a virtual background on and cancel ambient noise to make these calls a bit more controlled and professional.

Hesitantly, Dan typed Jesse’s name into LinkedIn’s search bar to see what that kid was up to since he’d been fired. Dan felt a little bad about what happened, but ultimately, he’d done what he needed to do to protect Sarah.

Dan felt a lead weight drop onto his stomach when he saw where Jesse was working now. Not only had Jesse landed a job before he had, but Jesse had landed one of the positions Dan had applied for. He was now a director at a competing firm in the city. A Director!

Jesse could barely tie his shoelaces, and within a week of his dismissal, he’d landed a better job than Dan. Dan pinched the bridge of his nose and breathed out, trying not to work himself up before his call with the potential new client. Not only had Jesse just recently groped his wife at a club, but now that little shit was doing better than him. Dan briefly imagined Jesse comfortably paying a Middleton mortgage, having two kids, a gorgeous wife, and no Chicago roommate.

Sometimes, Dan just wanted to give a middle finger to life. This was one of those times.

He checked the time and quickly started closing the windows on his laptop. He had gotten so lost in LinkedIn and Jesse’s profile that the meeting had snuck up on him. He was a minute late and quickly logged on.

“Hey there,” a friendly voice said through his headphones. A handsome man’s face appeared on his screen. He looked friendly and probably ten years younger than Dan. It looked like he was calling in from his home office. “Dan, right? Nice to meet you. I’m Bill from Elevate Engagement. How are you?”

“Hey Bill, nice to meet you. Doing alright for a Monday. How about yourself? How was your weekend?” Dan immediately fell into his professional small talk voice that he had honed and perfected over the years.

“The weekend was…” Bill hesitated for a second. It seemed like something in the background at Bill’s house had distracted him, “Good. Yeah, it was good. My wife and I celebrated our fourth wedding anniversary.”

“Oh congratulations,” Dan looked at the screen, wondering if anyone else from Elevate would join them, “What did you guys get up to? Go out to one of the restaurants in the city?”

“No….uh,” Bill hesitated again. This time Dan heard a thump sound from Bill’s microphone. Bill looked like he’d heard it too but quickly recovered. “We actually stayed in. Kept it low-key. My wife Amber wanted to watch some home movies.”

“Well that sounds nice too,” Dan smiled. “Sometimes it’s just nice to spend an evening alone, just the two of you. I get that.”

Bill’s face changed briefly as if Dan had just triggered a verbal landmine. It was a brief moment where a storm of distress was apparent on the man’s face. Bill’s friendly demeanor quickly returned, “Right, yeah. It was. So, Dan, I’m not sure where my colleagues are but let me just give you some background. We’re considering expanding with a new office in California, but buildings and architecture aren’t really our strong suit. We wanted to reach out and pick your brain on a few things.”

“Sure,” Dan said, sitting back in his chair, realizing that this call probably wouldn’t lead to a paying gig. “Let’s start; what kind of questions do you have for us?”

Dan chatted with Bill for the entirety of his lunch break. He explained in depth what Bill and his company should look for before thinking about building a new office building in another state as well as what they should look for when drawing up architectural drawings and hiring a contractor.

Bill took a lot of notes and mentioned that they might reach out with more questions. He even asked if Dan was open to consulting on small projects like the one they discussed. Dan mentioned that he was, and shortly after that, the call ended. He wasn’t optimistic about the potential work they’d discussed, but Bill seemed like a solid guy. Maybe they’d get a beer someday when Dan was back on his feet.

As Dan returned to the office, he rechecked his email, hoping for news from the other prospect he had been chasing down. He sighed as he only saw junk mail in his inbox. Later that night he would reach out to his contact. The company was called Sentinel Security Solutions. They were planning on building a massive new data center. Dan had a consulting contract in front of them. He was just waiting for it to get signed.

Dan rode the elevator back up to the office in silence. All he wanted to do was get through this week and spend time with Sarah when she drove up on Friday.

***

“Mhmmm, I’ve missed you,” Sarah said as she embraced Dan in the living room of the Chicago apartment. Waiting the rest of the week for their reunion had been agonizing. “It’s been a crazy week at work.”

Dan held his wife tightly, not wanting to let her go. He inhaled the scent of her hair and felt the neurons firing in his brain. Memories of the two of them together flashed to the front of his mind, “Well at least from what you’ve told me it sounds like work is on an upward trajectory for you. I might even be calling you CEO soon.”

Sarah pulled back and looked at her husband, lightly slapping his chest, “Don’t jinx it. It feels weird even just getting my hopes up about it. But I’d be lying if I hadn’t convinced myself I could actually get it. It just feels so strange.”

“It’s a huge shift in your career and for us,” Dan stroked her arms and looked into her eyes, “And a welcome one. After all my career issues this last little while, it’s nice to have some good news we can celebrate. I feel like I’ve just been treading water lately. I’m happy for you.”

“Don’t count yourself out just yet, mister,” Sarah let go of her carry-on bag and removed her jacket, “From what I’m hearing, you’re starting to make some good connections with your LinkedIn work. Something is going to happen there. I know it.”

“Well, I just wish things would happen faster,” Dan sighed, “I’m putting in all this extra time and energy, but no bites yet.”

“What about that one company? The one that’s reviewing your contract?” Sarah asked.

“Sentinel Security? Still nothing yet. I reached out. They said their teams are still reviewing, and things take time to work through their organization. Want anything to drink?” Dan moved towards the kitchen, and Sarah followed closely behind.

“Just water would be great,” Sarah said, casually checking out Dan’s butt as he opened the fridge.

“Here you go,” Dan handed a water bottle to her. “I hope something happens with them, but I’m not holding my breath. I’m still working on some other things. I had a call with another potential client today. They are a marketing agency, but they don’t know what they want yet. It’s too early to bring me in. Maybe I could get some kind of project guidance consultation from them, but I don’t know. We’ll see.”

“How were they? Were they nice? Did they seem professional?” Sarah asked. She didn’t want Dan to get involved with another company that would chew him up and spit him out.

“Yeah, they seemed okay. I talked with one of the guys before everyone else showed up. Bill was his name. He seemed nice, but something seemed to be distracting him on his end. Anyway, like I said, I’m not putting all my eggs in one basket. I’ll keep working on…”

Dan trailed off, his eyes looking over Sarah’s shoulder. She turned around to see Lester walk into the living room. Usually, she heard Lester before she saw him, his feet smacking off the hardwood floor—this time, she hadn’t.

“Hey, Lester,” Sarah smiled. Dan’s roommate stopped short and stood there looking apprehensive.

“What’s up?” Dan said, stepping up next to Sarah. You know the deal. There are no date nights on the first night.”

“That’s not why I’m here,” Lester said, walking forward and leaning onto the couch with his arms crossed. I need a favor for tomorrow night.”

“A favor?” Dan raised an eyebrow, “Alright, that’s interesting. Let’s hear it.”

“Tomorrow’s date night is going to be a little different,” Lester said, eyeing Sarah. “You look great, by the way, Sarah.”

Dan rolled his eyes. Sarah felt her face blush, “Thanks, Lester. The favor?”

“Right, well, I’m not sure if you know this, but I’m part of a D & D group,” Lester opened his mouth to continue, but Dan cut him off.

“D and D? Is that some sort of sex thing?” Dan said.

“No, pretty far from a sex thing,” Lester stared at him flatly. “D & D. Dungeons and Dragons. It’s a role-playing game I play with some friends. Not on the computer but around a table. We each pick a character and progress through a campaign built by the DM, the dungeon master.”

“You’re right. It doesn’t sound like a sex thing at all,” Dan chuckled, “Sounds like something that people who have never had sex would play.”

“You’d think that,” Lester huffed, “But I do ok.” The trollish man nodded at Sarah, looking directly at her nipples, which both men could see were obviously in an aroused state. Sarah smiled, happy that Lester wasn’t escalating the situation like he could have.

Dan’s face grew red, and Sarah could see one of the veins on his neck sticking out. Lester held up a pacifying hand as Sarah folded her arms to be on the same page with her husband. But she couldn’t help but feel a tiny spark of excitement at Lester’s words. Knowing that the two men were competing for her. “Lester’s mentioned this game before…on one of our…dates.”

“I didn’t come for a fight. I wanted to say that tomorrow night, it’s my turn to host our D&D game here. So the rest of my group, four other guys, will be here for a few hours to play.”

“That sounds okay, Lester. What do you want from us? Do you want us to switch the date night to tonight so you can have your little game tomorrow?” Sarah felt herself growing wet, thinking Lester might take her ahead of schedule. She caught herself beginning to touch his arm, initiating contact that could become more intimate.

“No,” Lester said before she could reach him. He stood up off the couch and looked at the couple. I want you both to play with us tomorrow. Jump into our campaign and role-play with us.”

Dan pinched the bridge of his nose, “Lester, we’ve never played Dungeons and Dragons before. Why would you want us to play with you?”

“I really don’t,” Lester said, “It’s honestly gonna suck with you guys.”

“Then why are we having this conversation, Lester?” Dan said. Sarah could tell that his patience was wearing thin.

“Because,” Lester said looking at Sarah. “I want Sarah to be there. To show her off in front of them. And remember, you’ve insisted on joining us on all of our dates.”

“Lester, I don’t know how to play. Couldn’t I just parade myself around the apartment in front of your friends?” Sarah asked, looking to Dan for agreement.

“I want you there at the table next to me. They don’t believe I could land a hot girlfriend so I want to rub it in their faces all night. They never met my ex, Lizzie, so they just assume I was lying about her. That I couldn’t land someone as hot as you or her. I want you to tease them and make them squirm.” Lester said.

Sarah thought back to how Lester had saved her ass at the hospital. She could do this one thing for him. Besides, it bugged her that these guys were giving him a hard time. Just like when that homeless man called him fat, or that stranger subtly insulted him. Even the way that people looked at them when they were out together. Hearing Lester mention Lizzie being as hot as here kind of pissed her off. She made up her mind she was going to do this and do it well.

“Tease them how?” Sarah eyed Lester.

“I wouldn’t presume to tell you how to tease a group of men, Sarah,” Lester licked his lips and smiled, “I’m sure you can think of a few ways to get under their skin.”

Sarah looked to Dan for reassurance. He shrugged back, smiling, knowing full well how far her teasing could go. She was able to teasingly torture him with expert precision. Who knew what she could do to a group of people she wasn’t in love with.

Lester’s invitation to play made more sense now. This is the first time she would meet any guys from Lester’s world. She was intrigued at the opportunity to learn more about him from other sources. “I’m game then.” Sarah looked at Dan, “What do you say, Dan, should we get our nerd on?”

Dan sighed and crossed his arms. “Fine. Whatever. Maybe it’ll be fun. So you’re going to tell all these other guys that Sarah is your girlfriend? Have her tease them all night? What about me?”

“You can just be my roommate, Dan,” Lester grinned. That’s all.” Dan took in this information dryly, his expression unchanged.

“How do we play?” Sarah asked, “What are the rules?”

“Well, it’s not hard. First, you have to pick a character. Since the rest of my group is advanced, we’ll let you use some pre-built characters we have. Then it’s just a matter of –” Dan held up his hand, silencing Lester.

“Lester, Sarah just got in. As amazing as your instructions will be, can you give us some space? We’ll join you for your little game tomorrow, but tonight, it’s just us, okay?”

“Fine.” Lester stared at Dan and turned back towards the hallway. Just before he left the living room, he turned back to the couple, “Oh, just one more thing. During the game, Sarah and I will spend some alone time in my room. I’d like the rest of the group to know just how capable I can be with a beautiful woman.”

Before Dan or Sarah could respond Lester had retreated back to his room and closed the door. Sarah could feel her pulse quicken at the thought of Lester taking her in his bedroom while an apartment full of men listened in. Dan turned to look at Sarah with a half disgusted look, dashing her daydreams, “Nerding out is not quite the date I had expected Lester to choose. Not after how the last one went.”

“I think one thing is safe to say,” Sarah stared down the empty hallway. We never know what to expect from Lester.”

“I’m gonna have to talk with him again. Just assuming that you are going to go back to his room with him like that,” Dan’s arms were crossed as he looked down the hallway.

“Well,” Sarah said, following his gaze, “What else are you going to look at through that peephole if I’m not in there?”

Dan chuckled and cast an amused glance at her, “I love you, you know that?”

“I know, baby. I love you too,” She leaned forward and placed a lingering kiss on his lips.

“What do you think about the teasing thing?” Dan asked her, pulling away slightly. She looked back at him and smiled. “I think it could be fun. You know how much I like teasing you. Just imagine how much fun it will be to tease a room full of shy sex, malnourished men.”

“As long as you don’t get off on it as much as you do with me,” Dan said, playing his part as the jealous spouse. Sarah stepped up to him and whispered in his ear, “Who knows? Maybe I’ll like it more. A room full of men squirming under my teasing. That sounds hot to me. Don’t you think so?”

“Please,” Dan said, stepping away from his wife. “You’re not going to make me bend that easily. Besides, you tease men all the time. The only thing you need to do is walk into a room, and they squirm.”

“True,” Sarah said, closing the distance again to her husband, “But I don’t always get to put on a show for you. Seeing your reaction to the things I do or say. That is what is going to be so hot about it.”

Dan cleared his throat. Sarah’s words had clearly affected him. It was adorable how he tried to change the subject, “So dinner tonight. What are you thinking? Maybe we can eat here in front of the TV?”

Sarah smiled, taking the victory over her husband: “Sure, honey. That sounds nice. Maybe Chinese?”

***

Sarah and Dan spent the night together in front of the TV before retreating back to his room to enjoy each other. The next morning, they went out for breakfast and spent the day walking around different areas of Chicago. Sarah wanted to pick up a few things for their daughters.

There were a few moments where she covertly read some texts from Lester. It's not that she wanted to hide things from Dan. She just wanted him to focus on their morning together. He needed the mental break.

Lester sent her a heads-up about what to expect with the DND game, the type of character she would be playing, and some other ideas on how she could tease his friends. She raised her eyebrow at his plan for the two of them to eventually separate from the group and go back to his room. He always seemed to have a plan, which Sarah appreciated. She was surprised to feel a bit of wetness between her legs at Lester being so forward and actually giving her instructions to follow.

When they returned to the apartment it was well after dinner. Lester had rearranged the living room so that the couches and chairs were pushed closer to the TV. A large fold-out table with six chairs was in the newly provided space. Unlike his usual stained t-shirt, Lester had on a t-shirt he’d evidently worn for the occasion, which read “She Thought I Was Into Some Kinky Shit When I Told Her I Was A Dungeon Master.”

“Good, you’re back,” Lester said, carrying several bowls of chips from the kitchen and placing them on the table. It was rare to see Lester do things for others. The two of them stopped momentarily and took in Lester, preparing the place for the evening.

Lester noticed them watching, “Everyone will be here soon. Snacks are part of the host’s duties. Sarah, if you don’t mind, I left something in my room for you to change into.”

“Oh?” Sarah raised an eyebrow to Dan, “Not another wedding dress, right? Or a Princess Leia outfit?” Dan stifled a laugh.

“Believe me, I was tempted,” Lester flirted back. But not this time. Maybe in the future. It's just something to rile up the others.”

Sarah held onto Dan’s hand and turned back towards him. She kissed him on the lips and whispered, “Okay, time for me to get into character as Lester’s girlfriend. I’ll see you later. Remember, say ‘pineapple’ and the date stops.”

Dan nodded and whispered back, “Just don’t let those nerds put their hands on you, okay? And you let me know if you need rescuing.”

“Please,” Sarah smiled, “I think I can handle a few guys. It’ll be like taking candy from a baby.”

“Remember,” Lester said, watching them, “I want you to tease the shit out of these guys. I want them to be really uncomfortable. Torture them.”

“We’ll see,” Sarah stepped back from her husband and headed down the hallway toward Lester’s room. Dan watched her go. His mind was still stuck on her words about being able to handle a few guys. He shook his head, gulped, and turned around to see Lester staring at him.

“What now?” Dan said, “What do we do?”

“I’m going to set things up here,” Lester said, moving back towards the table, “Can you grab some cups and the soda in the fridge?”

“Sure,” Dan said. He walked into the kitchen and saw a pack of plastic cups on the counter. He grabbed a stack and looked in the fridge for the soda. There were several jugs of Pepsi and Mountain Dew. He took one of each and brought it to the table. As he set them down, someone knocked on the apartment door.

Lester walked over to the door and opened it. Without any fanfare, he said, “Come in, gentlemen.” Dan watched as three men entered the apartment, looking exactly like he’d imagined.

“Hi, I’m Ned,” the short man who entered first said, making his way across the room to Dan. “I’m Lester’s best friend.” Dan saw Lester roll his eyes as Lester shut the door behind the other men. Ned did seem like a mini Lester in some ways, but more meek. He wasn’t as rotund as Lester and seemed more friendly and outgoing. Ned had a scraggly beard and a thick pair of glasses. He wore baggy cargo shorts and a t-shirt with a spaceship and a logo mentioning a federation, “Who are you?”

“I’m Dan,” he said, hearing the sound of defeat in his voice. He shook Ned’s hand and looked back at the other men starting to filter into the apartment, “Lester’s roommate.”

“Never seen your place before, Lester,” one of the other men said. This guy looked older than Lester and looked to Dan like some kind of wizard, wearing a black t-shirt with a skull surrounded by writing that read “Dungeon Master est. 1974.” With his thinning, gray, wispy hair and long white beard, the only thing missing was a wizard’s hat. He reminded Dan of his old chemistry teacher from high school. This guy had to be in his sixties, at least. “Nice little spot. Why have us over? Getting tired of bringing all your shit down to Ned’s shop?”

“That’s Eugene,” Ned said, pointing him out to Dan, “He’s the elder statesman of our group. And that’s Greg,” Ned gestured to the other guy who had already sat at the table and was setting some things up. Greg looked up and waved to Dan before returning to what he was doing, “Greg is our Dungeon Master. Charlie couldn’t make it tonight, which is where you come in.” Greg wore a black t-shirt reading “The Dice Giveth, The Dice Taketh Away.”

Dan knew Greg’s type. He seemed like a meek guy who spent more time with his nose in books instead of interacting with the real world. He was rail thin, and his clothes looked too big. Behind his thick glasses, his eyes seemed to dart around the room, assessing threats and looking for danger. Likely a trait he picked up in high school, where bullies probably targeted him. He looked like he took better care of his appearance than the rest of the group, but it likely still wasn’t his priority.

Ned turned his attention to Eugene, “Lester’s bringing his girlfriend tonight. He didn’t want to bring her down to the shop in case my customers got too handsy.”

Eugene looked Dan up and down, “That ain’t no girl. ‘Dan’ was it?”

“Yep, that’s me,” Dan began to feel increasingly awkward with each passing minute, “Lester’s roommate.” He nodded and hoped his smile seemed sincere.

“What character do you play, and what is their class?” Eugene stepped up to Dan like he was sizing him up. It was clear that the older man was trying to intimidate him somehow.

“I honestly have no idea what you’re talking about,” Dan said, shaking his head with another friendly smile.

“What the fuck, Lester?” Eugene spun around, looking at Dan’s roommate, “You’re going to bring some complete noob in here with us?” Eugene walked over to the table and took a handful of chips into his hands. Ned seemed to cower back like he was watching his parents fight. What an odd dynamic.

“It’s okay.” this from Greg, the guy sitting at the table setting things up, “Lester already talked to me, we have character sheets set up they can play as.”

“Sit down, Eugene,” Lester said, staring daggers at the older man. “We’re going to start soon.”

“What’s their deal?” Dan whispered to Ned, who had begun unzipping his bag and pulling out packets of Twizzlers and other candy. Dan had quickly decided to turn to Ned for anything he didn’t understand in the game. Talking to him seemed to cause the least friction within the group.

“Oh, that?” Ned whispered, “Don’t let it scare you. Those two just don’t get along. They both have control issues. Been like that since day one when Lester joined us.”

Dan understood that. He felt like he had been on the losing side of an arm wrestling match with Lester for months now.

“How long ago was that? That Lester joined?” Dan asked.

“Mhmmm I don’t know, maybe ten years ago?” Ned turned and raised his voice, “Okay we have chips, soda and candy. I think we are good to begin. Greg, are you all set up?”

Greg nodded in the affirmative. Ned gestured to an open chair, and Dan sat down. Lester stood, waiting for Eugene to sit first. “Where’s this girlfriend of yours then, Lester?” Eugene laughed as he sat down at the table. “Let me guess, she just ran out with her girlfriends. Or better yet, she lives in Canada?”

“Maybe she’s just running late!” joked Greg.

“Maybe she’s already here. She’s Lester’s left hand,” Eugene made a stroking gesture with his hand. “Aw, let’s be kind to her. After all she’s so ‘hot’ the best she could do is Lester here!” said Eugene, using air quotes to emphasize the ribbing.

Eugene looked at Ned, who quickly laughed along. Lester glanced at him, and Ned's smile instantly evaporated.

Lester purposely pulled out his chair slowly and sat down, his face serene. “She’s getting changed. She’ll be out here in a minute. Then we can go over the rules.” Eugene crossed his arms and leaned back in the chair defiantly. Dan smirked, knowing that this guy’s mind was about to be shattered when Sarah came out. The Eugene guy started running his mouth again, which Dan could tell really irked Lester.

Ned seemed to be trying to play peacemaker. Before the game even started, it seemed to devolve into anarchy. Dan just sat back and watched, amused. He got up and grabbed himself a beer from the fridge. As he sat back down, the sound of a door closing from down the hallway reached the group, causing a silence to fall over them.

All of the men’s eyes were trained on the hallway. Eugene seemed legitimately stunned, considering the possibility that Lester may have told the truth. Dan heard audible gasps at the table when Sarah finally emerged into the living room. She walked gingerly on bare feet, her ass clearly defined in revealing pink booty shorts and a white v-neck tee under a nondescript gray hoodie.

Dan noticed Sarah’s wedding ring was missing. He felt a pang of sadness. Hopefully, she hadn’t left it in Lester’s room.

“Hey baby.” Sarah had stopped next to Lester, her breast just against his cheek. He turned when he felt her, and she leaned down, inserting her tongue into his mouth for a deep kiss. The room was quiet except for the breath from their mouths as they made out slowly. Dan’s stomach dropped hearing Sarah call Lester ‘baby.’ He watched the kiss in utter fascination. Sarah played her part well. Maybe too well. It really seemed like a sincere, if inappropriate, kiss. Dan’s dick agreed, suddenly coming to life. He could feel himself breathing in quick, shallow breaths. He closed his eyes and steadied himself, focusing on the mechanics of his breathing to calm himself down. After a few moments Greg made an awkward cough that seemed to remind Sarah and Lester that others were present.

“Hi, boys,” Sarah said, standing back up and taking the empty chair next to Lester, “I’m Sarah, Lester’s girlfriend.” Hearing her introduce herself as Lester’s girlfriend caused Dan’s stomach to knot up. Lester cast a glance at Dan before looking back at Sarah. Dan hadn’t realized it before but it felt like he had missed something significant about tonight.

Sarah was being introduced as Lester’s girlfriend to people he knew. These weren’t just strangers at a restaurant or to people he was consulting with at her work. These were people in Lester’s life, making the relationship feel more real. Dan shifted uncomfortably; his pants felt tighter somehow. His wife’s hand covered Lester’s grubby paw on the table.

Still, seeing the way these guys’ eyes were popping out of their sockets as they looked at Sarah made him hide a grin. He loved seeing other men drool over his wife, and she was leaning into that.

“Okay,” Greg said, setting up some sheets in front of him, “Now that we’re all here, I’ll quickly go over the rules for our newcomers joining us for this session, and you are always welcome to join in the future,” Greg’s eyes lingered on Sarah’s body.

“Sarah, sometimes we have noobies joining us, but since we’ve been playing a long time together, our characters have been well-developed and have earned various powers. So, for green beans like you, we have a set of pre-made characters you can choose from. Your boyfriend thought you’d like to be a cleric,” he said, handing her the sheet.

“Dan, do you want to pick one?”

Dan grabbed a random character sheet and looked at it, a confused look forming on his face. “What’s a bard?”

The players all groaned, and Eugene said, “Someone who talks a lot and who supposedly can manipulate foes with their words and music.”

“But not much help in a fight,” said Lester.

“Whatever,” thought Dan as he read the abilities on the character sheet and scanned the room. Maybe he could find a way to be useless and ruin Lester’s game. Best case scenario, he wouldn’t have to play much. His mind drifted to his high school buddies, who would be laughing over who he was hanging out with. None of these guys would have been in Dan’s athletic circle of friends.

What would they think of me now; struggling financially, in a dead-end job, and willingly letting some Chicago fat troll rail my gorgeous wife and show her off to all these nerds?

Sarah broke his reverie with a question, “So, my character, Val, is a cleric. I see I have some magic spells I can use? When do I use them?”

A look flickered across Greg’s face, quickly replaced by an overly warm smile. He explained, “When we’re role-playing on the adventure, we’ll come across situations where we work together to overcome traps and foes and trickery in order to get to treasure, and the more treasure we get, the more character points we earn, which gets us more powers—like your spells.”

“But you have to be careful because if you get injured, you’ll have to roll the dice to see how many health points you lose. If you lose too many, you’ll die or not be strong enough for the adventure, and you could slow down your partners,” said Greg.

“Hmm, Lester, I see one of my spells is the Aura of Vitality.” Maybe I should cast it on you later when we’re, um, role-playing?” Sarah said, blushing. Her eyes focused on inspecting her miniature figure before she set it back down on the gameboard.

“Sarah, you know vitality has never been my weakness when you’re around,” Lester responded, stealing a quick kiss from the married woman. The guys looked like they could barely keep it together. Dan rolled his eyes at Lester’s shitty attempt at flirting. It seemed too obvious that he was putting on a show, but then again, these guys didn’t seem to get it.

“Um, can I just ask one thing?” Sarah said, “Can we put little name signs on the table so I can remember who’s who?”

Eugene sighed and rolled his eyes as Dan began to scan the character sheet in front of him. Sarah was paying close attention to what Greg was explaining but Dan wasn’t listening. He was reading the character sheet in front of him.

Eugene sighed again and looked at Greg in a way that begged him to intervene. “Of course,” Ned said, leaning forward eagerly, grabbing sheets of paper to fulfill her request. His eyes weren’t able to meet Sarah’s. “We can do that just for today. No problem. I’m Ned, this is Eugene and Greg. Do you know Dan? He’s Lester’s roommate.” Ned began writing out names, their real ones and their character names, and folding the sheets into display triangles.

“Nice to meet you all. I’ve seen Dan around a little bit, but usually, my boyfriend and I are busy in his room,” Sarah said, causing the table to fall silent.

Shit Sarah, you’re selling this pretty hard, Dan thought.

“Right, so let’s begin. I’ll set the stage. Your party is standing in front of an old manor. You’re on a quest to retrieve a magical item, the Aetherial Orb of Luminescence, which emits a soft, soothing light, capable of revealing hidden paths or concealed objects in dark places. It can also be used to cast minor illusions or enhance spells related to light and visibility.”

“Wait, I’m sorry to interrupt, but I’m confused. So I’m a cleric with magic spells and I see I have a sword too, so I can fight? Then what are you guys?” Sarah asked.

“I’m a warlock, Shadowweaver.” said Eugene. “It means I have arcane powers from the universe with a great number of spells because of my experience level.”

“Ooo,” laughed Sarah. “Maybe I’ll fall under your spell!”

“I’m a rogue, er, basically a thief,” said Ned. “My character has a high level of dexterity and can move silently, which might come in handy to get the Orb. Samrick is the name, dear lady.”

“Yeah, but rogues can’t be trusted,” said Lester.

“But dexterity comes in handy in some, um, situations. Right Lester?”

“I can think of a few scenarios where dexterity could come in handy,” Sarah stared into Ned’s eyes, causing him to look away. Sarah turned to Lester and playfully punched him in the arm. “Hey, what’s your character?”

Lester smirked, “I’m a barbarian. Barbarians have great strength and are great in a fight.”

“How about stamina, my barbarian? Can you wrestle all night long?” Sarah teased, stressing his character class.

Dan winced. It was odd how easily Sarah seemed to integrate her teasing with the nerd jargon. Still, knowing how long Lester could last in bed caused him to believe her comment. It stung, but he could also feel his dick stirring in his pants.

“So, are there female characters in this game?” she asked as she paged through the Players Handbook. “Some of these pictures are pretty hot. Like this female wizard in the tight black bodice and high boots with a staff. She has plenty of skin showing. Do you guys ever dress up for your roles?”

Ned blurted out, “We have some costumes at my shop but feel rather geeky wearing them,” seemingly unaware of the irony of his statement.

“We’ve been playing together for a long time and it’s sorta awkward to introduce rookies into our game, so no, we haven’t played with any females,” remarked Greg.

“That’s a shame, '' Sarah said with a pout, turning the book around to show a picture of a scantily clad half-elf woman fighter. “I think it would be fun to wear something like this,” as she turned the page to a picture of a female wizard dressed in a red bikini top holding in amazing breasts and red matching bottoms with long slender legs reaching down into her boots, with a red shawl over her shoulders. Her blonde hair spilled over her shoulders, and her blue eyes held her gaze in a piercing view. “She looks something like me, doesn’t she?”

The crew sat uneasily in their chairs. Dan suspected what they’d each done with such pictures in the D&D manuals. They all seemed very familiar with the very image Sarah was holding up. Dan couldn’t help but think there was an uncanny resemblance to his wife. The rest of the group probably considered how often they’d satisfied themselves with that picture. And now, a veritable clone of that character was sitting before them, talking with them, joining their campaign.

“Ahem.” Greg cleared his throat. “Can we get started now? Remember you’ve all met together for your adventure and obviously have just introduced yourselves so you can see how you’ll work together. Remember, rely on each other’s abilities, and you just might succeed!”

“Okay, Cassius Silverstrings, er, I mean Dan, it’s your turn. What will you do first?” Greg said. The entire group looked to Dan.

“Uh, well, I guess I’ll go up to the door and knock on it,” Dan said.

“You’ve just triggered a trap! The Knocker's Bane Trap! Hidden blades spring forth from the doorframe, slashing at Cassius’, er, Dan. The force of the blades could be fatal! Quick, roll the dice to see your fate! You need to roll a six or higher to survive.”

Dan grabbed the dice from the table and rolled a 3.

“Cassius Silverstrings is dead!” Greg said, bowing his head solemnly. Ned leaned over towards Dan and whispered,” You should have used a spell to check the door for traps.”

“I guess so,” Dan shrugged, “Well, I guess I’m dead then.”

“What a dumbass,” muttered Eugene.

“What’d you say?” Dan shot back.

Lester piped in, “Well since you're new, you should have asked your party for advice instead of just rushing in and getting yourself whacked. Now we’re down a man and have hardly started the game. You should learn to make better decisions.”

Dan didn’t like the insult but was out of his element. He took a breath and relaxed. He tried not to take Lester’s comment to heart and think about how it could also be true for the rest of his life.

Dan sat and listened as the group took turns playing their characters. Sarah was unexpectedly good at the game, but he wasn’t too surprised, given her commitment to their bedroom roleplaying. Dan was looking at his phone and barely paying attention until he felt a tension in the air. He saw Sarah unzipping her hoodie to reveal a tight v-neck t-shirt that read “I’m The Player Your DM Warned You About.” Clearly, she was not wearing a bra. He heard a sharp intake of breath from Ned next to him as the top of Sarah’s cleavage came into view. Lester looked at Dan, and the two shared a knowing smirk at the others’ reactions.

Dan watched Sarah and knew that she was enjoying teasing these guys. He was enjoying it a bit himself. It was too easy for his wife. They weren’t prepared at all for the levels of teasing and flirting she would inflict on them. He could feel his crotch responding to his wife’s antics.

At some point, the group had managed to make it into the make-believe house. The adventurers were mapping their exploration and searching the rooms for the orb, all the while the Dungeon Master was periodically rolling his dice to compare against his chart of events. Greg suddenly shouted, “A hellhound bursts forward into the room!”

“I cast Protection from Energy! Shielding me from the flames!” Eugene shouted, rolling his die. The rogue, Ned\Samrick, quickly jumped around the corner out of reach of the flames. The barbarian, Lester, was about to speak when Sarah blurted out, “I stab at the hellhound with my sword!”

Greg rolled his 20-sided dice, looked at the number, and said, “Fire envelopes you. Your clothes start to burn,” Greg said.

“I strip off my clothing and lunge for the hellhound’s throat,” Sarah said in a very seductive voice as she played with the neckline of her T-shirt, eyeing the men around her. Greg had her roll the dice, and it seemed to Dan that they landed positively. Greg announced, “Our new cleric, Val, has pinned the hellhound down!”

Lester, playing Darkspire the barbarian, said, “I rush forward to slay the hellhound,” and rolled the dice. The die rolled off the floor past where Sarah was sitting. Dan watched as his wife stood up to retrieve it, her toned, slender legs coming into view before she turned away from the table. Her fantastic ass was showing itself for the entire table to appreciate. Dan’s eyes flicked to see all of the men at the table ogling his wife’s behind. Sarah bent over at the waist to pick up the die, causing more than one of the men’s jaws to fall open. Dan couldn’t help but enjoy the way she teased these guys.

“Eighteen,” Sarah said as she returned to the table, pretending to be oblivious about what she’d just done.

Greg regained his composure and said, “Dar, the barbarian’s crushing blow kills the hellhound.”

“My clothes are burnt and falling apart on the floor. I’m standing naked in the room, looking around at the three handsome men in my party, wondering which will offer me something to wear.” Sarah eyed the men at the table, who seemed to be losing their composure.

“Milady,” Ned said, “I offer you my humble rogue’s cape to wear around your body. It offers an extra camouflage.”

“Why thank you kind sir, er, Samrick.” Sarah said leaning forward, the top of her cleavage pushing together for Greg, Ned and Eugene to see. “Once this quest is over I’ll have to think of some way I could repay you, Sam. Perhaps I’ll cast you under one of my spells.”

The table was silent for several seconds while the three men stared at Sarah, who was pretending to read her character sheet. Her half-exposed breasts still prominently on display for the nerds.

“Erm, okay, right,” Greg finally pulled himself together as he looked down at the sheets in front of him. “With the hellhound slain, a deep cold falls over the manor. Your breaths are visible, and you all feel goosebumps on your skin. If you don’t find a way to warm up soon, you will each lose 20 HP per minute.”

“From the looks of it, the cold is already affecting our lady, Val!” Eugene said, and the others noticed Sarah’s nipples had begun to poke out of her tight T-shirt. Sarah pretended not to notice Eugene’s comment. Dan could tell Sarah still had a bra on. It must be a thin, lacy material since her nipples were somewhat visible. It wasn’t that cold in here, though. Was she getting turned on behaving like this in front of these men?

“I cast a fiery aura,” Eugune said eagerly, “Enveloping myself in a warm gentle, comforting flame giving me a resistance to cold damage. It has a one foot radius. Maiden Val, would you care to join me?”

Dan rolled his eyes but kept them on his phone. Somehow, Eugene thought he was being suave here. Still, Dan could feel his cock getting hard, knowing how these guys were lusting after his wife.

“Mhmmm, that sounds like exactly what I need right now,” Sarah eyed him mischievously and leaned forward. “Is this close enough?”

“You, uh, sometimes the way we play, you should actually go over to that side of the table, Val,” Greg said, “to keep the roleplay true.”

“Okay,” Sarah said standing, all the men stared at her body, “Ned, er, Sam, would you switch with me?”

Ned nodded and scurried around the table to change places with Sarah. She sat beside Eugene and pulled her chair right next to his. Her legs were pressing up against the sides of his thighs as she leaned against his arm, “Is this close enough?”

“Uhh, yes,” the old man croaked out, his head turning to the side to try to look down Sarah’s cleavage covertly. Dan watched the older man’s eyes staring down at the tops of Sarah’s breasts, knowing that sight all too well. Jealously started to creep in, especially with the act Sarah was putting on. The way she looked back at that guy felt wrong, like something that should be reserved for him.

Sarah looked at Ned, “Samrick, is the cape you gave me resistant to fire?”

“No, uh, I don’t think so, Val….” Ned said wide-eyed.

“I’m gonna roll,” Sarah said, picking up the dice, not waiting for Greg, “If we roll above a ten, the cape doesn’t burn in your fiery aura. If it’s below a 10, the cape burns, and I’m going to be bare naked again. Is that okay?” She looked at Greg for approval.

He eagerly nodded, “But it’ll be Eugene’s roll.” Sarah picked up the dice and handed them to Eugene. She took his hand in hers and bent forward, blowing on the dice, “For good luck.” Her eyes looked up at him expectantly.

Eugene stiffened at her warm breath on his skin. Without responding he rolled the dice onto the table. As they rolled, all eyes were trained on the dice, eventually stopping on a five.

“Oh no,” Sarah feigned surprise, “I’m naked again. At least I’m warm and protected next to this mighty warcock.”

Sarah bit her lip, and then a small laugh emitted from her lips, “Oops, I meant Warlock. Not war-cock.” She added extra emphasis onto the word ‘cock.’ as she brought her knees up to her chest and placed her bare feet on the chair, “Sorry Shadowweaver.”

Dan could see Eugene beginning to breathe quickly. Even Ned looked like he was ready to spontaneously cum in his pants. Greg was harder for Dan to read, but he seemed pretty distracted by what was happening.

“We should continue on,” Lester said, “Let’s move further into the house and find this orb.”

The group continued on their imaginary quest, with Sarah still sitting uncomfortably close to Eugene. The man seemed stiff as a board. Dan could only imagine how stiff the guy was in his pants. Dan had never seen Sarah so close to a man so much older than her. He knew she was toying with the guy, but he couldn’t help but feel his dick stirring.

Performing his DM duties, Greg periodically rolled his dice, assessing the probability of each subsequent event happening. As the group moved down a hallway, Greg said, “Arrows spill out from the walls, shooting at the group. Lester rolled the dice, and his barbarian’s shield successfully blocked the arrows from piercing him.

Eugene looked at Sarah and said, “I’ll cast a shield to block the arrows from hitting us.” Dan smirked. This guy really thought he was being a white knight or something to Sarah. Sarah put her arm around his and hugged him close like she was afraid. Eugene took a shaky breath and rolled the dice. Greg informed him of his success.

“I’ll evade the arrows with a dexterity throw,” Ned as s said, throwing the dice. “Unsuccessful, Sam,” Greg said, looking at the dice. You’ve been hit with a poisoned arrow to the knee and lose 10 HP. The poison will make you lose HP every second.

“Can I heal him?” Sarah asked.

Eugene looked at her desperately, “As a cleric, you could use a healing hands spell to heal a wound like that.”

“Okay, I’ll do that,” Sarah said, standing up. She grabbed the dice and threw them onto the table, “I need to get close like the last time, right? Lester, can we switch?”

Lester raised an eyebrow at her, “Sure.” He stood up to trade places with Sarah. As she moved to his side of the table, Eugene piped up, “If you aren’t in my aura of fiery heat, you’re going to get cold again and take damage.” His eyes followed her body, staring at her juicy ass as she walked around the table, “And you’re naked too.”

“It’s a risk I’ll have to take,” Sarah said as she took Lester’s seat. She turned to Ned, leaned forward, and touched his knee. Ned’s eyes seemed to bulge out of his head as he looked down at Dan’s wife. He had the perfect angle to look down at her cleavage as she leaned forward.

“Was the roll successful?” Sarah asked Greg, not taking her eyes off Ned.

“No,” Greg muted as he took his eyes off Sarah to look at the dice. Sarah grabbed them and rolled them again. She put her hand down on Ned’s lower thigh.

“Unsuccessful,” Greg muttered again. When he saw Sarah reach for the dice again, he muttered, “This isn’t how it works.”

Sarah repeated the process. She rolled the dice again, and this time, her hand came to rest on Ned’s upper thigh. “Success,” Greg said, “You’ve healed the wound, but the poison still inflicts damage on Samrick.”

“Oh no,” Sarah said, looking up at Ned for guidance. “What can I do? Should I suck the poison out somehow?” Sarah placed extra emphasis on the word suck.

“Uh, I uh, ah,” Ned was having trouble forming a coherent sentence. Dan thought that his mind was probably tripping over itself at Sarah’s use of the word suck. He had to admit that even he was getting riled up by Sarah’s roleplaying performance.

“Try the ‘Lesser Restoration’ spell, Val,” Eugene said to Sarah. “That’ll cure the poison.”

Sarah looked at Greg, who nodded, “I’ll try Lesser Restoration on Sam’s wound.” Sarah reached across the table to grab the dice from in front of Eugene. His gaze dropped to her cleavage hanging low in front of him. Ned’s eyes flicked up, and Dan swore the little guy stopped breathing. His eyes were focused on Sarah’s booty short-clad ass bending over the table just inches from his face.

Sarah rolled the dice again. “Success,” Greg said, “You’ve cured the poisoning, eliminating it from Samrick’s body.”

Sarah smiled at Ned, and her hand lingered on his thigh. She gently rubbed it up and down and said, “I guess I paid you back for your cape.”

“Ugh,” Ned grunted, his face contorted, and his eyes lost focus. Sarah removed her hand, and Ned’s legs slammed together, and he hunched over the table, panting. Sarah gave Lester a knowing look, and they both seemed amused.

“Everything okay there, bud?” Dan crossed his arms and looked at Ned. He couldn’t have just cum in his pants, could he?

“Fine,” Ned said breathlessly, “Just need a second.”

The group of men sat slack-jawed as Sarah sat back up and pushed her chest out. She looked down at her character sheet. Finally, Greg mustered up the courage to speak: “The arrows stopped raining down on your group, and Ned is healed. But it’s still growing colder. You’ll need to find the orb soon. All of you have some kind of cold damage protection except for you, Sarah. Cold damage increases because you have no clothes on and are still naked.”

“Silly me,” Sarah said, looking each man in the eye, “I keep forgetting I’m naked. Nothing between your eyes and my cold, naked skin….but I bet you haven’t forgotten.” Her eyes stopped on Eugene.

“You should join me in my fiery aura. I’ll keep you warm,” Eugene was staring desperately at Sarah. His eyes were flicking up between her face and the inviting crease where her cleavage began.

“Hmmm, that sounds tempting. How exactly would you keep me warm?” Sarah stared at him, “How would you keep my naked body hot?”

“I can think of a few ideas,” Eugene grinned, believing he was successfully seducing Sarah. As he rode the ego boost of flirting with a beautiful younger woman, he did not see her next move coming.

“Tempting, but what’s this?” Sarah said, pointing at her character sheet. “It says my cleric has the spell ‘teleportation circle.’”

“It lets you teleport anywhere. Somewhere in the manor or somewhere else in the world. It has a prolonged recharge time.” Greg said, clearly flustered at the direction Sarah was taking his game.

“And remember, the teleport spell is only temporary; it will transport you back here when it wears off!” Lester grimaced at Greg. Dan wondered whether Greg was beginning to understand Lester’s plan.

“Hmmmm, that sounds good. I’m going to use that,” Sarah said, rolling the dice without bothering to look at the results. I need to warm up, so I’m casting a spell to teleport back to my bedchambers. Can I bring the entire adventure party with me?”

Greg stuttered and said, “You’re only a 4th-level cleric. I think the circle is just big enough for two.”

Sarah stood and began walking around the table. Her hands lightly touched Ned’s shoulders, who shuddered at her touch, “But which of my brave party members will join me?” Her fingers traced a line across Greg’s back before moving onto Eugene’s.

“I’ll join you,” Eugene said, eagerly looking at Sarah as her nails grazed the back of his neck.

“Mhmmm, I don’t think that’s how it works. You have to roll for it. The highest roll gets to join me and warm me up.” Sarah said, her hands reaching Lester and toying with his fat shoulders. When she arrived, Dan, she winked at him and said, “Except you, I guess. You don't get to roll since you’re dead and all.”

Eugene eagerly picked up the dice and rolled a 15. He clasped his hands and excitedly looked at Sarah, who was still circling the table. Ned reached out and grabbed the dice. Sarah walked slide up next to him, pressing her body against him, “Do you need me to blow you?”

“Wha-what?” Ned’s voice broke like a thirteen-year-old boy going through puberty.

Sarah leaned down close to him and whispered, “Do you want me to blow on your dice for good luck?”

Ned didn’t respond but held his hands up to her mouth, where Sarah gently blew on the dice. A shiver ran through Ned’s body, and he threw the dice onto the table. They came up a nine.

“Shame,” Sarah said as she stood up and moved behind him. Her fingers lingered on his shoulders, “I really wanted to pay you back properly, over and over again, for lending me your robe.”

“Well, you can pay me back for letting you into my fiery aura,” Eugene said hungrily, “We need to get your naked body out of this manor and into your bedroom.”

“But how should I repay you for letting me in your fiery aura?” Sarah whispered into Eugene’s ear. “Hmmmm,” she breathed down his neck, and Dan saw the old man stiffen. “I suppose I would have to let you into my teleportation circle then,” she said, letting the implication of intimacy linger in the old man’s mind and pants.

“Not so fast,” Lester said, leaning forward and grabbing the dice. I still have to roll.”

“Don’t bother,” Eugene jeered, “It’s clear your cleric girlfriend has a thing for warlocks. I don’t think she’ll be warming your bed tonight.”

“He might be right, Lester,” Sarah said, biting her lip, “I might be going home with the warlock and playing with his staff tonight. Shadowweaver could help me learn to cast my own fire.”

Lester threw the dice, and they rolled across the table and stopped with the 20 side facing up. “It looks like I’m joining you in the teleportation circle,” Lester said, smiling.

“That’s too bad,” Sarah said, stepping up next to Lester, “Who knows what kind of magic we could have created, Eugene.” As Lester pushed his seat back from the table, Sarah straddled his lap, her breasts directly in his face. She pulled him to her chest, “Now I’ll beam us up,” she said in an overly dramatic tone.

The fat man’s hands mauled her supple ass, luxuriating in Sarah’s display of affection. Around the table, the men weren’t sure where to keep their eyes, on Sarah’s amazing behind or where she was joined to Lester, sucking on his tongue. Dan felt lightheaded observing his wife atop the fat man, watching her kiss him again in front of the D&D party, her enthusiastic grinding only slightly exaggerated for effect. It dawned on him that he could tell the difference because he’d seen it so often.

After a few moments of gloating, Lester pulled Sarah off of him, stood up, and led her around the table. As they passed her husband, Sarah’s hand lingered on Dan’s shoulder and gently squeezed it.

It was then that Sarah said, “Oh, did I break another rule? When my clothes were burnt, was I supposed to role-play in real life, too? Was I actually supposed to get naked?” As she walked away from the table, she split off from Lester toward the hallway. She grabbed the bottom of her T-shirt and pulled it over her head, revealing her toned back. “Sorry for breaking the rules. I’ll get to my shorts in a second.”

The three men’s heads all spun and watched Sarah’s bra-clad chest jiggle as she walked away. Their jaws hung open, and their eyes bulged out of their heads as they stared at Dan’s wife. None of them had likely ever been so close to a woman as beautiful as Sarah, and now here she stood, right in front of them, wearing only her booty shorts.

With one last look over her shoulder, Sarah winked at the group of speechless men as Lester led her down the hallway to his bedroom, “My boys, my boyfriend needs me.”

Dan noted the distinct lack of the ‘Chicago boyfriend’ that they usually played with. That was all part of this weird role play, right?

“What the fuck just happened,” Eugene said breathlessly. He sat there stunned, staring down the hallway Sarah had disappeared into. “You don’t really think that’s his girlfriend, right? This must be some kind of joke.”

Greg focused on the sheets of paper before him, “I don’t know, but I guess the game is over for this week.”

Ned quickly stood up, cupped his crotch, turned away from the group, and made a beeline down the hallway. The word “bathroom” came out of his mouth shortly before he disappeared.

“Looks like Ned over there has a mess to clean up,” Dan scoffed with his arms crossed. He was relieved that the game was finally over, but his mind was drawn to the closed door at the end of the hallway. He and Sarah had agreed to do this together. Lester was on board with letting Dan be present, but now he and Sarah were behind a closed door while Dan was stuck with these nerds. He couldn’t just get up and –

The peephole. He had covered it with duct tape, but he could still watch Lester with Sarah. He just needed to find a way to get the nerds out of the apartment.

“Is she really his girlfriend? She's not a hooker?” Eugene had finally broken his stare down the hallway and was now looking at Dan. Dan could say she was a hooker to embarrass Lester but he’d feel like shit doing that. He wanted to keep Sarah’s honor intact. Even though they were playing this fucked up roleplaying game, Sarah was still his wife, and no one was going to talk about her like that.

Dan shrugged his shoulders, not wanting to verbally say the word ‘girlfriend,’ “This isn’t her first time at the apartment. And no, she isn’t a hooker. That I know for sure.”

“Jesus,” Eugene muttered. He looked back and forth between Dan and Greg, “Do you think… do you think if Lester hadn’t rolled higher that…uh…you know…it would be me and her in there right now?”

“Some guys are into that,” Greg continued to pack up pieces of the game. I don’t really know about Lester.” The dungeon master seemed all business, not comfortable discussing the details of what they’d all just witnessed.

Dan felt his face grow flush as the two guys discussed the fantasy of his wife sharing. It was not something he wanted to be revealed about himself. “What do you think, Dan?” Eugene looked at him. You kind of know her. Do you think she would have?”

Dan had no idea what Sarah would have done if any of the guys besides Lester rolled a higher number. Part of him was excited at the prospect of seeing that play out, seeing what his wife would do in that situation. How sexily she could manipulate these guys was a turn-on for him. Still, his mind drifted to the bedroom at the end of the hall.

***

As Lester shut and locked the door behind them, Sarah felt anxious. It wasn’t that same anxiety she’d felt so many months ago when Dan made her come in here to fetch Lester to watch them. It was a more excited anguish about what was going to happen next.

His room looked messier than Sarah was accustomed to. Earlier, she had been so focused on Lester’s instructions and the outfit he had for her to wear that she hadn’t taken it all in. She was surprised that it didn’t bother her. She liked to keep her house immaculate. Seeing his mess just sort of made sense. It was somehow like an extension of Lester. Still leaning into her roleplaying, she said, “Hmmm, I guess I made a mistake. This isn’t my bedchamber at all. It looks like your barbarian lair.”

Lester just smirked, “You have no idea.”

“How did I do?” Sarah said as Lester walked over and leaned against the bed, “Did I turn the screws on them enough like you wanted?” Sarah held her hands together, hoping she’d succeeded.

“Better,” Lester smiled wickedly, “Those guys won’t sleep for a week. They’ll be dreaming of you.”

‘Aww,” Sarah smiled and looked around Lester’s room. It had been a while since she had been in here, and she noticed a dramatic change. The clean, tidy room was gone. It reminded her of the first time she’d walked in here when she was taking those sexy pictures for Dan. There were discarded clothes on the floor alongside takeout containers at different levels of emptiness. A few empty Cheeto bags sat on his desk. She could see a sheen of dust littering most surfaces.

More than anything, the room smelled like Lester. She couldn’t help but find the smell arousing. It was like her brain associated it with sex. Lester watched as she went from simply standing in the room to posing, her ass and breasts slightly more prominent than a moment earlier.

“And they’ll probably be jerking off to their mental image of you, too,” Lester smirked, feasting his eyes on her.

“And you’ve ruined it,” Sarah said, walking towards Lester. She didn’t tiptoe around the mess on the floor. She walked through the old clothes and refuse, “You’re just lucky you rolled that 20. Otherwise, your friend would be here in your place.”

Lester crossed his arms and raised an eyebrow at her. "He's not my friend. You wouldn’t have brought him in here anyway.”

“Are you sure about that?” Sarah said in a low voice as she stepped closer to Lester. She stopped a foot away from him, staring at him defiantly. “Are you so sure I wouldn’t have brought him here, into your room and fucked him? I’m sure Dan wouldn’t mind watching that. I don’t think you understand that I hold all the power here.” Her hand made a fist, and she held it to her chest as she plainly stated this to Lester.

Lester quickly grabbed Sarah’s hips and pulled her to him, her crotch pressing against his. “Let’s not beat around the bush. It isn’t about Dan’s fantasy anymore. This isn’t about some random person.”

“Oh?” Sarah asked, raising an eyebrow. Lester’s hot breath was on her face. “What’s it about, then?”

“It’s about you and me,” Lester licked his lips as he stared into her eyes. “It’s about the way we fuck. The way you crave it and can’t get enough. Say whatever else you want, but that’s all it comes down to.”

Lester held her hips tightly and mashed his cock into her waist. Sarah could feel his growing hardened cock pressing against her, “Is that so? Do you really think you have that kind of hold on –mhmmmmm.”

Lester mashed his lips against Sarah’s. Her knees grew weak, and she felt her body fall against his. Her breasts pushed up against his flabby chest as his arms encircled her. Lester’s tongue parted her lips and thrust into her mouth.

Sarah moaned around his invading tongue. Her own flicked out and ran against the underside of his. Sarah was surprised to notice that her arms were already around his neck, pulling his head down towards her. Lester slowly withdrew his tongue from her mouth. Sarah pushed hers forward, desperate to find more of him. Lester continued to pull back and whispered, “Tell me you don’t love the way we fuck.”

Sarah smiled as Lester started to kiss and lick her exposed neck, “You fuck me good Lester.” Sarah shuddered as she felt his cock growing against her pussy. When she saw he wanted more from her, she continued, “I love the way you fuck me.”

“I knew it,” Lester grunted, pushing himself against her harder. Sarah moaned, feeling his probing cock pulsing against her, “How about the way we make love?”

“We’ve only done, ah, that once,” Sarah said, closing her eyes. She was getting lost in the feeling of Lester’s large body against hers.

“But you loved it,” Lester whispered in her ear, “You know how I know?”

“Mhmm, how?” Sarah moaned as Lester’s lips started to work their way down her chest.

“Because of the way you dug your nails into me. How your legs held me tight and wouldn’t let me go. How your pussy gripped my cock and milked it. How you let me cum into you unprotected, taking me fully into you.” Lester’s hands found her shoulders and drifted lower to her supple breasts.“Because you gave yourself to me completely.”

Sarah’s body shuddered at the revelation. She didn’t want to admit to herself how much she enjoyed that night. Lester was right. Her body had responded to him. She hadn’t wanted to let him go, even though he hadn’t worn a condom. She had wanted his cum that night, but she wasn’t ready to admit it to herself, let alone Lester. She didn’t know what he was driving at now but needed to shift things before she admitted something she shouldn’t.

Letting go of his neck, Sarah placed her hands on his chest and pushed Lester down onto the bed. Lester flopped back with a look of surprise on his face, caught off guard by her assertiveness. Sarah stared at him hard, her eyes running across his disgusting body, perplexed at why he turned her on so much.

Sarah lowered her shorts and stepped out of them without saying a word. Then she stepped forward, knelt on the bed, and crawled up Lester’s body, “You want to make your little D&D group jealous? Do you want to make Eugene know how much of a man you are? No more talk about making love, show them how well Lester can fuck. Make me moan your name. Let them listen to you fuck me.”

Sarah’s crotch found Lester’s hard cock through his sweatpants and ground against it, “Mhmmmm, what the fuck are your pants still doing on?”

Lester quickly tugged at the band of his sweatpants, trying to pull them down. Sarah’s thighs had his hips pinned to the mattress. He couldn’t get a firm grip to pull them down. She reached her hands down and grabbed his, quickly pulling them off her and pinning them above his head against the mattress.

“No,” She stared into his beady eyes, “That’s my cock. You understand? I’ll do what I want with it. You don’t touch it. Got it?”

Lester slowly nodded as Sarah eased herself off his hips, “That includes other women. No more Lizzie. No one else.” Sarah tugged at Lester’s sweatpants, pulling them and his boxers clean off quickly.

“Ughhh, you want me to be exclusive?” Lester said, pumping his hips into the air as Sarah took off her panties and straddled him again. “What do I get out of this?”

Sarah held the shaft of Lester’s cock against her spread pussy lips, feeling the throbbing of his cock against her clit. She closed her eyes, reveling in the feeling. Eventually, she opened them and stared at Lester.

“Isn’t it obvious? You get all of this. A sexy, devoted, married wife as his very own Chicago girlfriend,” She took his hands and placed them on her breasts. Lester squeezed them firmly, eliciting a soft moan from Sarah. Lester gritted his teeth, “Not fair. You still give Dan attention. And now he even comes on our dates with us. I want you all to myself.”

“Well, he is my husband, Lester,” Sarah teased, “Besides, you’re getting me alone right now, aren’t you?

Sarah held Lester’s shaft with one hand while the other gently teased the head of his cock. She ran her thumb over the precum that had begun to leak out of it. Sarah brought her thumb to her mouth and licked it, tasting Lester’s cum, “Mhmmmmm.” Then quietly, she said, “You’re delicious, you know?”

“Hmm. We both know Dan’s going to be at that peephole in a minute, watching us,” Lester thrust his hips up, pushing his shaft against Sarah’s clit. She bit her lip and let out a long groan, “It isn’t the same. I want you alone again.”

“Mhmmm, ah, we can’t, Lester,” Sarah dropped her hands to Lester’s flabby belly and ground her hips down onto Lester, rubbing herself against his shaft. “We just…just….uh…ah..just made that deal.”

“Then we’ll break it,” Lester’s fat hands gripped her waist as he pushed his hips up high off the bed. He shifted his weight and slid his cock down until it was lined up with her soaking wet entrance. Sarah could see his face turning red at the exertion. As he lowered his hips, his cock started to part the entrance to Sarah’s pussy.

“Oh fuck,” Sarah grunted as she felt herself being stretched around the head of Lester’s cock. She bit her lips and braced herself against Lester’s mass, “Ahh uhhhhh.”

Lester pulled her down further onto his cock. “We’ll find a way to get together alone so we can really let loose. I want to fuck you in your office at work.”

“Ah, fuck. No, we, we can’t. Can’t,” Sarah was having trouble regulating her breathing as Lester’s cock pushed into her. It had been weeks since he’d fucked her in a parking garage. It was too long not to have his perfect cock inside her.

“Can,” Lester slammed her waist down onto his cock, pushing himself fully inside of her. Sarah screamed, “AH FUCK LESTER.”

***

Ned had just finished cleaning up the mess in his pants. He’d used toilet paper to clean up as much of it as possible, praying it wouldn’t run through and make a visible stain on his pants. He looked at his crotch in the mirror of Lester’s bathroom. It looked fine. No one would know what had happened when Sarah touched his leg.

He’d never felt anything like it. He couldn’t wait to get home and think about that moment. He’d share it with his Fleshlight. He finished cleaning his hands and thought about Sarah and her blonde hair. She reminded him of the old Ms. Marvel, not the new Disney diversity Ms. Marvel but the old sexy Carol Danvers before she became Captain Marvel. Sarah was sexy, just like her. Or maybe even Sue Storm from the Fantastic Four. Sarah had the confidence of both women, but neither seemed as playful and sexy as Sarah.

Ned shut the bathroom door behind him and headed back towards the others. Sarah was sexy and confident, like Mary-Jane, Spider-Man’s wife. Well, ‘wife’ before they did a soft reboot of the Spider-Man line. One thing Ned always hated about Marvel was their resets to the new status quo. Still, those big issues were collectibles. He would have to check this month’s valuations when he got home to see if any in his collection were going for –

“AH FUCK LESTER,” The words rang in his ears. Ned stopped in his tracks, slowly turning to look at Lester’s closed door. Maybe he just imagined it.

“Uh. Mhmmmmm. God, fuck.” A woman’s voice moaned again. Ned felt short of breath and wished he hadn’t left his inhaler in his backpack. Instead of returning to the living room to get it, he walked towards Lester’s door. He leaned in and pressed his ear against the wood. He could hear grunting and ruffling sounds and soft feminine moans.

Was that really Sarah? Was she really fucking someone like Lester? If Lester landed someone like her, did Ned have a shot? He quickly returned to the Lester’s living room.

Lester’s roommate, Dan, had an annoyed look on his face and was sitting in a chair by the TV. Eugene was on the couch scrolling through Lester’s Netflix account. Greg was beside him with his bag on his lap, all packed up and ready to go. No one turned their heads when Ned walked back into the room.

“Uh, guys,” Ned said with a shaky voice, “You’ve got to hear this.”

“What?” Eugene said, looking at Ned annoyed.

“Listen!” Ned hissed. Eugene reluctantly muted the TV. All four men sat there in silence until Sarah’s soft moans started emanating from the hallway. Ned, Eugene, and Greg all traded glances. Dan seemed disinterested and kept his attention on his phone. Eugene stood up and walked past Ned, listening to Sarah moan Lester’s name.

“You’ve got to be fucking kidding me,” Ned heard Eugene mutter. Ned looked at Greg, urging him to stand up, but Greg sat there and seemed to grip his backpack more tightly.

“What do we do?” Ned hissed to Eugene.

“I don’t fucking know,” Eugene spat at Ned, causing him to flinch back. Ned walked away from him to the couch, where he sat down. Eugene lingered by the entrance to the hallway.

“You guys plan on sticking around?” Dan said, looking up from his phone. I think the game’s over. There's no telling how long they are going to be.”

“What time’s your curfew, Greg?” Ned asked.

“Midnight,” Greg said, staring at the coffee table. Ned didn’t want to leave yet. No way. Not when he might be able to catch another look at Sarah. What if she came out in the middle of the night and wanted more attention? Ned could be here for that.

“We’re staying,” Eugene sat back down on the couch, “At least until Greg has to go.”

“I want to go now,” Greg muttered. Eugene glanced at him with a furrowed brow, “Well, I’m your ride, and I’m not going anywhere.”

“Well, guys,” Dan said, standing up. “It’s been great. Thanks for letting me play, but I’m going to bed.”

Ned watched with a slack jaw as Dan walked down the hallway towards the sounds of Sarah and Lester’s coupling. Ned closed his eyes, trying to feign sleep, but wanted to picture Sarah’s face with the noises she was making.

He cracked one eye open as he heard a noise in the room. Eugene was standing up, looking down the hallway after Dan. Ned saw Eugene begin to follow him.

“Where…where you are going, Eugene?” Ned stammered.

“Something’s up,” Eugene muttered, still staring down the hallway, “And I’m gonna find out what.”

Ned watched the older man disappear out of view as he left the living room. Ned’s mind was racing, wondering what Eugene thought was happening. He wanted to follow his friend, but he felt paralyzed, not wanting to leave his seat. He already felt embarrassed at having cum all over himself in front of everyone.

***

Dan slid into his room and quickly went over to the peephole on the wall. He peeled off the duct tape, closed one eye, and peered through it. The first thing he saw was a blob of pale white skin. Lester’s fat body was lying across the bed. Sarah’s tanned, toned legs were straddling Lester’s waist as she rode his cock.

Dan gulped and felt his heart race increasing. The word ‘pineapple’ danced in his head, but he kept his lips firmly shut. He was transfixed by Sarah’s hip movements, which were grinding on top of Lester.

“I think your husband is watching,” Lester whispered low to Sarah. He silently cursed Dan for interrupting his interrogation of Sarah. She was close to bending to his demands. He would have to press her again, “Let’s put on a good show.”

Sarah’s body quickened its pace. The idea of being watched just turned her on. She thought about Dan's hungry look on his face and the way he stood as he stared through the peephole. Would he be stroking his cock, already watching them? How long would he last? Were the others still here? Could they hear her?

Sarah bit her lip and stared at the peephole, wanting Dan to know she loved that he was watching them. She could feel the tempo of Lester’s heartbeat through the vein on his cock as it throbbed inside of her. Sarah couldn’t deny that she loved feeling his cock inside of her. She hadn’t even given a condom a second thought this time. She just needed Lester inside of her.

Ah fuck. Mhmmmm. God,” Sarah grunted as she rolled her hips around on Lester’s cock. “You feel so fucking good.”

Dan could feel his cock starting to tent in his pants. He leaned against the wall, with his arm over the peephole, his forehead resting against his forearm. Dan stared hard, watching his wife ride Lester, the way her bare chest was still heaving up and down as she tried to catch her breath. She didn’t want to stop. Dan wondered how long before she had her first orgasm of the night.

“Whatcha doing?” A voice hissed from the doorway. Dan snapped his head to the side to see Eugene and his dirty old beard staring at him. Dan felt like a deer in the headlights, not knowing how to react. He had gotten caught with his secret fetish and didn’t have a response planned. Dan hadn’t closed the door, not entirely. He tried to slip into the room quietly to observe his wife, not wanting to alert the couple to his presence. It looked like that shitty door with its messed up lock had cost him.

“Watching,” Dan finally croaked out softly, wanting nothing more than to turn his head back to the peephole. Eugene stepped into Dan’s bedroom and said, “Let me see.”

This strange older man was in his bedroom, where Sarah would sleep and get dressed. It felt like such an invasion of privacy. Dan remembered how Sarah toyed with this guy before, leading him on. Making him think he might have a chance. She wouldn’t ever give the likes of him a chance. No way. But the idea of it. Seeing her toy with him. The possibility. That turned him on. Lester didn’t get along with this guy either. He hated him from the vibes Dan could pick up. If Dan let him watch, it almost felt like he would be getting one up on Lester, choosing to let this guy see something that Lester thought was his.

Dan realized he had stepped back from the peephole, allowing Eugene to shuffle in front of him and take his place.

“My god,” Eugene muttered under his breath at the sight of Sarah’s toned body riding Lester.

“Ah fuck Lester,” Sarah’s nails were digging into Lester’s stomach as she gripped him, “You feel so fucking big inside of me.”

“Squeeze me, Sarah, ah,” Lester grunted, pushing his cock into Sarah, “Yeah, just like that. Squeeze Daddy.”

Sarah felt a pang of electricity run across her skin at Lester’s words—goosebumps formed on her back. Every time Lester tried to use that word, ‘daddy,’ it made her feel strange. She thought about the word over and over in her head as she rode Lester’s cock. She couldn’t say it. Wouldn’t say it, especially with Dan listening at the peephole.

Her body responded anyway. Lester had her ass in his hands, moving with her as she rode him, catching her and slamming her down on his massive cock. She felt an orgasm rapidly forming, ready to drop down and crush her, “Fuck don’t stop, uh, uh, stop Lester.”

“I’m not stopping until you cum all over my cock,” Lester grunted. He put his hands behind his head and watched the beautiful mother ride cock. The buttery walls of her pussy pulled at his cock deliciously. It was amazing how well his plan was serving him. The more he fucked her, the more he took his pleasure in doing so, the more she wanted him to do it again. He smirked, watching her beautiful face contort in pleasure. She was increasing her tempo, likely about to cum any second now.

“Jeeesuss,” Eugene muttered as his hand disappeared into his pants, and he stroked his cock. Dan stood there perplexed about why he had moved over for this stranger and why he still felt paralyzed. He could push Eugene out of the room or tell him to fuck off. But part of him knew the truth, that he was getting off on letting a guy like Eugene watch Sarah just like he had gotten off on letting Lester watch them on the couch.

“Fuck right there, agh right therrrreeeeeee,” Sarah’s pussy clenched down hard on Lester’s cock as she felt herself begin to cum. Her body tensed, and she held her breath as pleasure radiated out from her sex and seemed to light every nerve in her body on fire. She felt complete at that moment, with Lester’s cock buried deep inside of her. Just then, Lester flexed his cock inside her, and she felt a new level of bliss explode inside her. “Oh, OH, OOOHH, OH FUCK, LESTER, HOLY SHIII…” The quivering wife jumped off of Lester, shaking in the middle of the untidy room. She had a fearful look on her face, unprepared for the intensity of her orgasm after thinking she knew all of what Lester could do to her. She took a few breaths and looked at her overweight lover. He was grinning knowingly and patted his belly for her to get back on, his cock a solid spike standing in the air.

“Jesus, Lester. Nobody fucks me like you do.” Having recovered from her first orgasm, Sarah returned to the bed and straddled Lester, positioning his huge cockhead at her pussy lips. Once ready, she pushed herself down and allowed Lester’s entire length into her again, his girth making her eyes flutter with the intense sensation of stretching her open. Lester moved with her, ensuring that when their bodies met, he was deeply embedded. Sarah took her cue from Lester and laid upon him, their bodies mashed together as she slammed her midsection against the ugly man, repeatedly thrusting herself against him as she never had before.

The twinges of a second orgasm started to form in her outer extremities. She felt a tingling begin in her fingers and toes that worked its way to her core. Wherever she went when Lester made her cum was rapidly becoming her favorite place in Chicago.

“OH Lester, OHHhhhh, fuuuck. Don’t stop, don’t, don’t you fucking, uhhhh…l”

Before she knew it, she was in the throes of cumming again, this one not at all intense, feeling like a warm blanket of pleasant warmth and a tingling in her scalp.

“Ohhh Fuck,” Sarah groaned as she came down from her orgasm. She was still gently rocking her hips back and forth over Lester’s cock, nursing the residual feelings of her orgasm and trying to ignite yet another one.

Dan backed himself up against the other wall of his room as this strange older man seemed drooled at his peephole. Images flashed through Dan’s mind at what the old nerd could be witnessing. His eyes ran over Sarah’s naked body as she writhed under Lester. Dan felt himself beginning to hyperventilate. What would this guy do now that he’d seen Sarah? Would Sarah be pissed that Dan let this guy watch her without her knowing? These were things Dan could worry about later. He just wished he could see what Sarah was doing in Lester’s room.

His eyes glanced to the side at the picture of his family on his bedside table—Sarah and him standing there with their girls. Had Eugene seen that? Did he know that Sarah was actually his wife? What was he thinking, but more importantly, what was he seeing? It was a sight only Dan should see.

“Let’s switch it up,” Lester said, rolling his hips to the side, trying to dislodge himself from her. Sarah begrudgingly let him go and felt a pang of disappointment as his cock slid out of her, “Wha-what?”

“Come here,” Lester said, standing up. His meaty fingers closed around her wrist, and he dragged her off the bed and over to the set of drawers against the wall. He pulled her close and pushed her up against the drawers, facing away from him. Her thighs were pushed into the bureau, and Sarah placed her hands on the wall for support. She opened her eyes and saw that she was face to face with the peephole.

“One second,” She said to Lester, who was already trying to line himself up with her from behind. She gave the peephole her best fuck me eyes and slowly lowered one of the shoulder straps on her bra. Sarah licked her lips and pushed them together, blowing a kiss at the hole. Then, she let the other strap fall, dangling loosely beside her bicep. “Lester, can you please unstrap me?”

Lester did as he was told. Sarah felt the clasp of her bra open on her back. She held the front of the bra against her chest. “This could have been you tonight,” she said seductively into the peephole, “But you missed your chance. Now my barbarian Lester is going to fuck me all night long.”

Sarah let go of her bra, letting it drop to the floor. Her breasts proudly spilled out for Eugene’s eyes to feast on. Dan heard a sharp intake of breath from the older man. He wondered what was happening on the other side of the wall. The walls of his room felt like they were closing in again. He left the bedroom and headed for the kitchen. The other two guys on the couch were discussing some kind of anime. Dan ignored them and poured himself a glass of cold water. He quickly gulped down his drink and debated staying in the kitchen until it was finished or returning to the bedroom.

Sarah gazed into the peephole, trying to eye fuck Dan on the other side. Lester’s hands roamed up her body until each one grabbed a breast. He started roughly massaging them, rolling her nipples between his thumb and finger. Lester’s hips were pushing forward against her ass. She could feel his cock pressing between her thighs, getting reading to fuck her again.

“Fuck me,” Sarah stared into the hole, wanting both men to think she was talking to them, “Fuck me.”

Lester’s meaty hands left her breasts. One grabbed the base of his cock and lined it up with Sarah’s pussy. The other hand held her waist still. Sarah looked up at the hole, bracing her hands on either side.

“Oh fuck,” her mouth formed a perfect ‘O’ as she felt Lester’s cock slide back inside of her. Lester decided to fuck her slowly and methodically, wanting to savor every second with her. To draw out Dan’s agony on the other side of the wall. He pulled his cock out slowly before pushing it slowly back in fully.

“Mhmmmmmm fffuuck,” Sarah groaned while trying to keep her focus on the peephole. She wanted to give Dan a good show but was having difficulty concentrating, “Take it out for me, baby, stroke it.”

Eugene did as instructed and lowered his sweatpants to his thigh, and started to stroke his old cock.

“Look at me,” Sarah moaned as Lester was slowly pushing in and out of here, “Don’t stop looking at me. Stroke yourself for me. I want you to cum for me.”

Eugene started stroking his cock faster in Dan’s place at the peephole. Sarah was moaning just inches from him. Her beautiful eyes were staring right at him. Lester suddenly decided to pick up his pace. Sarah was slammed forward, her fingers arching out, trying to keep leverage. She was bent so far forward she was on tippy toes, her thighs pushing into the dresser. Sarah tried in vain to push herself back, to thrust back against Lester, but she couldn’t. Lester held onto her hips and pumped her relentlessly with his cock, pushing deep into the young mother.

One of Sarah’s hands dropped to the top of the dresser, crushing an empty bag of Cheetos, “Oh. God. Lester. Fuck.” Lester gritted his teeth and fucked Sarah as hard as he could. He wanted Dan to watch and see his wife cum on his cock again. Sarah felt the tops of the dresser pushing into her thighs. It was starting to hurt, but she didn’t want him to stop. Sarah’s hand slipped off the wall, causing her to lose her balance. Her breasts hit the dresser first, smooshing into wretched garbage Lester had forgotten there. Sarah’s hair was sprawled out among Lester’s discarded items. Sarah searched for something to grab onto, but Lester never let up. He just continued to pound into the young mother. The violent pummeling she was taking threatened to make her lose consciousness.

Lester grinned at the peephole, enjoying that he had successfully taken Sarah away from Dan’s view. Sweat was dripping off his brow onto Sarah’s ass cheeks that were slamming against his crotch. He couldn’t keep up this pace; he needed to switch positions.

With a firm grasp on her hips, Lester pulled her back from the wall. Sarah’s feet were able to touch the ground again. Sarah quickly pulled herself off Lester’s cock and spun around. She pushed herself up so that she could sit on the dresser. Her ass crushing whatever garbage that had been on it. Lester saw a fire in her eyes and knew he could only quench her desire.

Lester was standing there huffing and puffing after pounding the blonde beauty for five, almost ten minutes straight at his fastest pace. Sarah looked at him hungrily and spread her legs before him. “Put it in me.”

She didn’t need to ask him twice. Lester was quickly between her legs with his cock lined up with her waiting pussy. Sarah wrapped her legs around Lester's back as his cockhead began to push back into her, “Oh fuck. Fuck.”

Sarah pulled Lester’s body against hers as the rest of his cock slid into her. She threw her head back and closed her eyes, her mind concentrating on the feeling of Lester’s big cock inside of her. Her blonde hair covered the peephole, obscuring Eugene’s view of the beautiful young wife.

While Lester had meticulously measured the height of his bed to ensure he could fuck Sarah on it while standing up, he’d never done so with the dresser. Lester had his hands under her thighs and was standing up on his toes to get his cock fully into the young mother. The awkward angle proved to be quite powerful for Sarah. Lester’s cock was sliding up at an angle that made the cock head push against her g-spot.

She wrapped her arms around his neck and held her to him, feeling his cock sliding up and down, stimulating her. Sarah opened her eyes and ran her hands through Lester’s thinning hair as she felt another orgasm start to push its way to the forefront.

As Lester fucked Sarah, the dresser tilted slightly off the wall before slamming back into place. Each time he pulled his cock back, Sarah held on tighter, her ass firmly planted on the dresser causing it to shift with them. Over and over, the dresser slammed back into the wall. Neither Sarah nor Lester cared about the sounds they were making. Everything was miles away from their fucking.

Lester could feel his balls begin to tighten. After fucking her from behind in the parking garage last time, he wanted to cum with her on her back this time. Using all of his strength, Lester grabbed Sarah by her thighs and pulled up, lifting her off the dresser.

He wasn’t used to carrying any weight. On shaky legs, and spun them around and dropped Sarah onto the bed, his cock never leaving her pussy. Lester moved onto the bed with her and laid on top of her. Sarah’s legs closed around his hips, locking her ankles together and not letting him go. Her breasts mashed against his flabby chest as he dipped his head down and kissed her hard. Sarah pulled Lester harder into her as her tongue drove into his mouth, exploring and licking every inch of it.

Eugene was happy he could see again. He was slack-jawed, staring at his D&D frenemy fucking the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. As much as Eugene hated to admit it, there was no way she was a prostitute. He could clearly see the passion between them as they fucked on the bed. It seemed like something more to him. He wasn’t sure if it was love, but they had a magnetism. He felt like he was watching something that should be private—an outsider watching two people about to mate.

It didn’t stop him from furiously stroking himself, getting ready to cum. Consequences be damned. He leaned against the wall, trying to get as close as possible. He could hear Lester whispering something but couldn’t make it out. Why had Sarah forgotten all about him?

“You like getting fucked by me?” Lester whispered as he started to increase his tempo, his hips bucking against the young wife’s. Sarah’s hips were thrusting up to meet his unrelenting pace. She was so close to cumming again. She didn’t want to lose it.

“Uhhhh I love it. I love the way you fuck me, Lester,” Sarah grunted as her tongue licked the side of Lester’s face. Just needed to taste him. “I think about it all the time.”

“Ugh, uh, even at work?” Lester grunted, feeling his balls getting ready to explode.

“Yes,” Sarah whispered back through gritted teeth.

“I want to fuck you in your office,” Lester grabbed a handful of her ass and thrust into her. Sarah gasped as Lester continued to drive her crazy, “I want to fuck you right on your desk.”

“Ah FUCK LESTER,” Sarah screamed. It had always been a fantasy of hers to have sex at work. “DO IT. I WANT YOU TO FUCK ME.”

“Fuck Dan. You’re just going to be MINE,” Lester grunted as his balls began to tighten, “I’m going to fuck you in your office next time I’m in town, and there isn’t a damn thing anyone can do about it.”

“Oh fuck,” Sarah moaned, “Fucking do it. I can’t wait. I want you to fuck me everywhere!”

“Good girl,” Lester grunted as he started to jackhammer into Sarah. There was no going back now. He couldn’t stop himself. His biological impulses were in control, “I’m gonna cum Sarah. Who do you belong to? Whose pussy is this?”

“Ah fuck! FUCK!” Sarah screamed, her nails digging into Lester’s dirty sheets. An orgasm seemed to rip through her body. She felt her ankles go numb as blood rushed to her head, “It’s yours. All yours, Daddy. I’m yours.”

“FUCK,” Lester lurched forward and held his breath on the edge of cumming. His cockhead expanded and then exploded inside of Sarah, jetting thick ropes of sperm into the beautiful wife. Sarah moaned into his ear as she felt his hot cum spraying inside of her, pelting her inside with his illicit seed. Another orgasm seemed to rise and ripple throughout her body, reverberating each time Lester’s cum blasted the walls of her fertile womb.

“Aghh,” Eugene grunted as he came, cum splattering out against Dan’s wall. Eugene breathed hard, having just cum harder than he ever had. He closed one eye and looked back through the hole; one last glimpse of the goddess Lester was bedding. Stepping back from the wall, he looked down at the mess he had left there. Not wanting to get caught anywhere near the peephole, he stumbled out of the room and back towards the others.

Lester and Sarah kept fucking each other for several seconds, both of their hips not getting the message that they had both just cum. Slowly, their bodies came to rest, Lester still embedded inside Sarah. He rolled off of her onto his side, trying to catch his breath.

“Jesus,” Sarah muttered, breathing hard and covered in a sheen of sweat. You’re an animal, Lester.”

Lester just chuckled and basked in the afterglow of sex with Sarah. Knowing how willing she was to have sex with him was one thing. How comfortable she was becoming around him was another step in the right direction. He knew he had to play nice with Dan, at least for a bit, but he really did want to get Sarah alone to further his goals.

Sarah could feel her eyes getting heavy after the workout Lester had just given her. She could feel herself getting a little too comfortable in his bed. She knew she needed to get back to Dan. Wetness slid from between her legs. Sarah reached down and felt Lester’s load dripping out of her. With a heavy sigh, she sat up, “I’m gonna jump in the shower.”

“You coming back here after? Sleep here tonight.” Lester yawned, staring at Sarah’s naked back. He could feel himself growing harder, knowing Dan’s wife was beside him.

“I think I’m going to check in with my husband after, Lester.” Sarah stood up and moved around the room, trying to retrieve her clothing. It took her a couple of minutes, as her clothes blended into the mess on Lester’s floor.

He reached out and grabbed her arm, pulling her towards him on the bed, “One more kiss before you go?”

Sarah bent over and pressed her lips against Lester’s. To her surprise, he didn’t stick his tongue in her mouth. He just let his lips linger on hers tenderly. Neither of them broke the kiss right away. Sarah was the one who pulled back as she felt more of Lester’s cum leaking out of her.

“Do one last thing for me before you go in the shower,” Lester said, looking up at her.

***

Sarah couldn’t help but smile as she tried to ease Lester’s door shut quietly. She wasn’t sure if it was because of the intense fulfillment Lester had just given her or the devious little request he just asked for. It felt good knowing she could make him finish so thoroughly and do little things for him.

The nerds' voices abruptly cut off further down the hallway. Clearly, she hadn’t been as quiet as she had hoped. How long had Dan ended up watching at the peephole? Did he watch the way Lester kissed her? Or that he asked her to spend the night in his bed?

The idea of sleeping in Lester’s room felt, well, complicated. She was exhausted, and knew that if she slept in there, Lester would try to go for another round at some point….

While she wasn’t opposed to that happening, she did feel somewhat guilty about leaving Dan with the nerds. She wanted to check in with him and ensure things were okay. She really had put him in kind of an awkward situation with the whole game thing. He hadn’t said ‘Pineapple’ during it, but then again, he was behind the peephole as well. She’d unwittingly put him in a position where he couldn’t say it to her.

Still trying to be quiet, she eased the door to Dan’s room open and stepped inside. Sarah caught a glimpse of her reflection in the mirror, and a wicked smile spread across her face. Those nerds weren’t ready for her—not by a mile.

Her eyes drifted to the rest of the room, becoming aware that Dan was no longer there. When did he leave, and did he enjoy what he saw? She looked at the peephole and noticed below it a creamy sticky substance spattered onto the wall.

I guess Dan did enjoy himself, Sarah thought. She must have put on one hell of a performance for her husband to just leave a mess like that on the wall. Sarah decided she may as well clean it up, since she was partially responsible for it. Dan was probably off recovering somewhere or grabbing a glass of water.

Sarah grabbed a handful of tissues, walked over, and knelt next to the wall. Being so close, she could smell how potent it was. She started wiping it up but then decided to take her manicured finger and scoop up a globe of Dan’s cum.

She licked her lips and raised an eyebrow as she felt the thick substance between her fingers. I really shouldn’t let all of this go to waste.

Maybe she was still horny from Lester’s fucking, or maybe she just wanted to taste her husband’s cum. She didn’t spend too much time thinking about it. Sarah stuck her cum covered finger into her mouth and sucked it clean. Her tongue rolled against her finger, ensuring she didn’t waste a drop of it.

More bitter than usual, Sarah withdrew her finger from her mouth and licked some remaining cum off her lips. Then she scooped up another glob of the thick, creamy substance and repeated the process.

Mhmmmmm, it tasted less bitter this time. Perhaps her taste buds just got used to its flavor. She moaned slightly,, closing her eyes, knowing how badly she was behaving. As she finished sucking off the remaining cum from her finger, she felt herself getting wet all over again.

Sarah cleaned up the rest of the mess with the tissues. Satisfied that she hadn’t missed anything, Sarah left the room to find her husband.

***

Dan was still standing in the kitchen, letting events unravel around him. No matter how hard he tried, Sarah's being with Lester was his kryptonite. He felt his willpower drain away, and he was a bystander watching a car crash, unable to do anything.

Maybe he should check his health insurance to see if it covered therapists, he probably needed to talk to someone about his, even if it was shameful. Dan gripped his glass of water tightly as he saw Eugene walk back into the living room. The guy looked like he had just seen a ghost.

“Are you okay?” Ned said, looking up from his discussion with Greg.

“Yeah..I…uh…uh,” Eugene started. He looked around at the apartment, perplexed. “That woman is something...”

“Yeah,” Ned agreed eagerly, looking at Greg for agreement. Dan had let a complete stranger take his place at the peephole and watch his wife. Knowing Sarah was being watched by someone like Eugene felt strange to Dan, but he let it happen anyway. Part of him told himself that Dan stepping away was a sign of strength, not needing to watch Sarah and Lester, not allowing himself to be pulled in again. But the other part of him wanted Sarah to be seen, wanted someone like Eugene to see her.

“Where have you been, anyway? Bathroom too?” Ned asked.

Before Eugene could respond, the sound of a door opening down the hallway caused all three of them to freeze in place. Dan could hear light footsteps coming from the direction of the bedrooms. Sarah must have left Lester’s room and gone into his. Then, her footsteps grew louder as she approached. All their heads turned towards the noise in anticipation of what would come.

Sarah stepped into the living room wearing nothing but her black silk robe. Dan had to do a double take because he hadn’t seen her wear it in a long time. The loose robe stopped midthigh, and Sarah had it loosely tied so that the side of her chest would occasionally be visible.

“Hi, boys,” Sarah smiled as she cast them a seductive look. Before they could respond, Sarah turned her head and continued walking towards the kitchen. Dan watched as all of the men’s eyes stayed glued to Sarah’s ass, watching her walk away.

Once out of view of the others, she winked at Dan, “How did you enjoy the show I put on for you?” Sarah poured herself a glass of water and took a long drink. Dan quickly realized she wasn’t talking about walking through the living room in a robe. She must have done something on the other side of the peephole, assuming it was him watching. His eyes dropped down to her thighs, noticing the fluids leaking out of his wife, reminding him she had yet to take a shower.

“It was amazing,” Dan lied. He still didn’t fully understand why he had moved aside for Eugene, but he didn’t want to admit it to Sarah, let alone himself. “You’re amazing,” he said.

“Oh, I know,” Sarah smiled and covertly ran her hand across his crotch. “I’m glad you liked the show. And don’t worry, I cleaned up that tasty mess you made in there.”

Sarah ran her tongue across her mouth and raised her eyebrows at Dan before turning around and walking back into the living room. Then, loud enough for all the men to hear, she said, “I’m going to take a shower.”

She began undoing the silk belt of her robe as she walked towards the hallway. The nerds’ eyes were glued to Sarah until she disappeared into the hallway, dropping her robe on the floor at the same time.

Ned leaped out of his chair and dashed towards the hallway. As he got to her discarded robe, he caught a glimpse of Sarah’s naked back as she went into the bathroom.

“Alright,” Dan said, finally finding his nerve again. He strolled across the living room to Ned, who had picked up Sarah’s robe and sniffed it. Dan grabbed the robe from his hands and looked at the men loitering around the living room. “Game night’s over. I think it’s time you all head out.”

Dan was surprised Lester hadn’t come out to see his guests off. But then again, Lester never really gave a shit about anything. He’d gotten what he’d wanted, which was to make a statement to the group by showing Sarah off.

“Yeah, okay, that makes sense,” Ned said as he collected his things. Greg already packed his bag and beelined to the door, looking extremely uncomfortable. Eugene stayed planted, standing in the middle of the living room, staring at the robe in Dan’s hands. His gaze shifted over Dan’s shoulder to the empty hallway.

“Okay,” Ned said, walking up to Dan and extending his hand. It was great meeting you, Dan.”

Dan looked down at the man’s hand and thought back to how he had cupped his crotch while running to the bathroom. “No offense, but I’ll wait until next time to shake your hand.”

Ned looked down at his hand, and his face turned scarlet, “Completely understand.” Then he turned and walked towards the door where Greg was waiting. “Eugene, you’re our ride, dude. Let’s go or Greg’s mom is gonna be pissed.”

“Right,” Eugene said, finally shifting his gaze from the hallway. “Let’s go.”

Dan watched the three men shut the door behind them. The living room was still in disarray, with crumbs left on the table and the folding chairs still set up. I’m not cleaning up this shit.

He held onto Sarah’s robe as he walked down the hallway. He debated heading into his room to wait for Sarah, but Lester might slide into the bathroom. But she probably had locked the door.

Dan tried the knob on the bathroom door. Turning it the entire way. She hadn’t even bothered to lock it. He remembered all the issues they had with locks in this apartment. Maybe she just doesn’t care anymore? That seemed like such a strange idea.

He opened the door and closed it behind him. “Hey,” he said, unsure what to say to his wife. “You put on quite the performance tonight.”

“Did you enjoy yourself? Well, I know you did for the second show. But what about the first one at the table with the game?” Sarah stuck her head out of the shower and was still wearing her fuck me eyes.

“You were something else. You had them eating out of the palm of your hand. I think you made that Ned guy cum in his pants,” Dan chuckled as he leaned against the counter, arms crossed.

“I do have that effect,” Sarah grinned, waiting for him to say something.

After he stopped watching, he wanted to ask about what happened in the room with Lester. Or ask if she really licked up the cum in the room, but he didn’t dare mention anything. He started to feel like he was keeping some fucked up secret from her now, and he was already in too deep. The best course of action was to keep moving forward and hope it didn’t get brought up again.

“Lester did ask me to spend the rest of the night in his room.” Sarah said, “I was planning to come back to your bedroom to help you relieve any built-up tension from tonight, but I see that you already did that.”

She was talking about the cum on the wall. He needed to zig away from that, but it would be tough get any relief out of her tonight without giving it up. He’d have to play the satisfied husband card and not try anything. “Well,” Dan said, “It’s hard not to relieve that tension when I’m watching you. Doesn’t matter, though, I still want you in bed with me tonight. Just to be close to you. You’re not going anywhere.”

“Okay,” Sarah smiled, “I’m all yours. Just give me a couple minutes and I’ll finish up. I’m just rinsing off.”

“Yeah, no problem,” Dan said, not moving.

“You don’t need to wait here, Dan,” Sarah said as she rinsed her skin in the water.

Dan could go back to his room and wait for her, but if Lester had already made a play at having Sarah again that night, he might try another one while she was still in the shower.

“It’s okay, I like to watch you,” Dan said, “You’re so fucking sexy.”

“Bad boy,” Sarah grinned and winked at him. Then she turned and continued to rinse off.

The white noise from the shower was therapeutic for Dan. He closed his eyes and replayed the night's events and possible ideas of how he could have changed things. The most egregious was not shutting the bedroom door and allowing Eugene to watch Sarah …and then not telling her what had actually happened.

Still, the way that Lester and Sarah were getting along bothered him. The way they seemed to gel together during the game earlier. Sure, she had been putting on a bit of an act. The same way she did for him when they’d roleplayed, but she was so committed to it. It was hard knowing what was real and what was pretend.

He couldn’t believe he had left Eugene watch. To allow someone else into his spot at the peephole. To watch his wife and her body. To see into this fucked up fantasy of theirs that was spiraling out of control. To roll the dice….Stupid D&D.

Dan decided on his next actions. He needed to take control of this fantasy and try to find a way to cut Lester out. At the very least find new ways to explore it without him. Otherwise he worried that for his wife, the fantasy would just warp and center around his roommate.

Comments

ojapa O

The NC reference was fun to read

Chris

Hot as always. Looking forward to Lester and Sarah alone in her office and the night she decides to sleep in his bedroom instead of with Dan. She's 90% of the way there, it seems, so I just hope Dan doesn't get in the way like he seems to plan to.

Elfy

I don't get why people want Lester to win. It's just bizarre.

Chris K

Great chapter, but is it ever going to get to a point where Sarah needs Lester so much that she doesn't involve Dan in everything? It's great to hear the things she says and feels for him, and then it always feels all for not when she goes right back to the loving wife. It just feels like with the intensity of the sex growing, Sarah's character hasn't evolved since the beginning. She should be to the point where she just spends the night with Lester. Full date night, deal with it Dan.

Elfy

But it's not just Dan. She has kids, parents and all that. She's going to leave her family for Lester? That's what I meant with its crazy to expect her to give up everything for Lester because he isn't taking the kids. People want Lester to win and I really want to understand what you think that means.

Chris K

I don't want Lester to win in the end. That's absurd. But I do want Sarah to start getting lost in lust and making bad decisions, without the knowledge or reassurance always from Dan. It just makes the story more interesting. All the sex is great, but if it doesn't feel like there is anything to lose then it's just mundane and boring.

Darrow

Ah well, we're all nerds you see. Dan is and was an entitled jock.

Darrow

Well, first up, that was a fun cameo by Bill and Amber of the Neighbor Chronicles. It seems that despite the Anniversary, Amber remains insatiable and Jacked. Sarah's evolution continues. It's gotten to the point where Lester isn't so much seducing her as unleashing her. She played the D&D game authentically, not so much as D&D but as Sarah ascendant, mercilessly teasing the boys, including Eugene. Lester may have pitched ideas, but it was total Sarah, and she was absolutely loving it. Interesting that she teased Lester with Eugene, the way she'd teased Dan with Lester, you get the impression that this is a familiar game with her. I'm 99% certain that dropping the robe and being naked in the hallway was Sarah's idea, not Lester's. And definitely, hard ownership - "That’s my cock. You understand? I’ll do what I want with it. You don’t touch it. Got it? Lester slowly nodded as Sarah eased herself off his hips, “That includes other women. No more Lizzie. No one else.” I don't think Lester's ever been in a situation where a woman has claimed his cock as her private property, or appreciates the implications of her taking possession. Which makes me think - not only did she stake a claim on him in private when they were alone, she publicly and visibly staked a claim on him in front of the D&D group. He brought her in to say "I have a girlfriend and she's mine." But Sarah turned it around and basically said "This guy belongs to me, the rest of you are fun, but Lester's mine." I'm not sure Lester appreciates or understands the implications of it. But then, I'm also not sure Sarah has followed it out honestly to herself. Other bits - Lester's room is trashed, but Sarah likes it that way, it reflects his personality, which she also likes. Also, she likes the way it smells, because she likes his smell. Unleashing is the right word, I think. Sarah is very close to the point where she's going to be outrunning Lester, literally coming onto him, being more aggressive, being kinky or extroverted in ways that surprise him. He's going to have to start running to catch up with her. Notice she called him "Daddy" on her own, after refusing his request? Also, notice there wasn't even a mention of a condom. And she was the one mounting him. She just didn't give a shit, she didn't care that Dan was watching her mount Lester without a condom. She's just over that, period, and Dan doesn't get a vote. And in contrast, her subliminal dismissal of Dan, "“You don’t need to wait here, Dan,” Followed by.... “Bad boy,” Sarah grinned and winked at him. *Then she turned and continued to rinse off.* She still loves Dan, but the signs of disconnect are everywhere. As for Dan, sigh, the humiliation tango just doesn't let up. He picks a terrible character and then gets himself killed on the opening move of a D&D game? And then he lets Eugene dominate him at his own peephole. He doesn't just share it with Eugene, he literally lets Eugene evict him. What's wrong with him? I could see sharing it, but he simply folds. Dan's clearly on a hard downward slide, he knows it, but he can't seem to do anything about it, but to continue to lean into it. He keeps getting weaker, now to the point that even Eugene is running him off.

Chris

Because Dan's boring and an idiot. Happy to see him get what he deserves. Sarah's more interesting with Lester anyway.

Fuzzy Shark

I could not agree more, and I find that I am watching a total disaster unfold but I can't take my eyes off of it as it occurs and can't wait to see the next chapter...does that make me a "Dan"? Ewwwww

Elfy

And the kids? They exist. See this is my major problem. This story doesn't make sense because it ignores previous chapters. Its hard for Dan to have any agency when he isn't written realistically. The sex scenes are hot but otherwise, there is nothing here. It doesn't make sense.

Elfy

She already is. At some point there is no return to redemption. If this is a tragedy, then that's fine with me. You can't have a tragedy without a strong protagonist. Dan is not written as a protagonist. He has no agency. I am waiting for any development that resembles the initial chapters and all we get is more of the same in different situations.

Elfy

Maybe I should just move on. The sex scenes are hot but there has been nothing new really. I have previous submissions in my email. I mean really, how are any of the last several chapters different. She already had some dude watch her months ago. So some dude came on her. That he was homeless matters? How has any of this moved forward? Meh.

Fuzzy Shark

I think this tragedy is quickly developing..... Dan is now keeping secret he did not watch the show and let Eugene take his place, Sara telling Lester he can pretty much have her whenever he wants, and did Eugene see the photo and knows something is up? Will he let Lester know he watched and not Dan? Will Lester and Eugene tag team Sara after Lester has completed knocking Sara up because his conquest would be fully complete? I don't think Dan and Sara have a snowballs chance at this point. I was rooting for them but accept they are past the point of no return. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter of Neighborhood encounters instead!

Luster

I'm with elfie, it hasn't moved forward and it's something that could have been written in 2 days and not have to wait 30. I'm done with this story after vesting a year of my life very disappointing this was the worst one yet. You keep saying how the next chapter is what I've been waiting to write, well you've played that card too often! Literally I am so disappointed I can't even put it into words. Well I'm not playing your game anymore just to keep us paying your way.

Kyle Howard

Loved the chapter as usual Don. Sarah not wearing her wedding ring was absolutely necessary,can't have a girlfriend wearing a wedding ring in that circumstance. Sarah teasing the other guys was perfectly done. The dialogue with the sex was off the charts hot. Sarah made some serious commitments, like the sex in her office, and wanting to be alone with Lester. She is so close to wanting to commit all of her devotion to Lester. Whatever Dan's next move is,I hope it totally fails. Very excited for the next chapter now.

Fargo

Nothing new I rate it 6 out 10 waiting for a new T.C

John Lewis

Not familiar with D+D ,so I was a little lost. The final sex scene was great. Noticed Sara doesn't even hesitate fucking Lester almost seeming anxious to fuck him. It's good you added to the ending. Made it better. I am still liking the story and waiting for more.

Darrow

A minor observation. Sarah both does and doesn't have a bra when she sits down at the game. Initially, she doesn't have a bra. But a few paragraphs later, she's wearing a light lacey bra that allows her nipples to protrude. Later on, when she takes her top off with her back to the boys, she's wearing a bra, but then a second later, all she's wearing is hot pants with her back to to the boys. Then a moment later, she's wearing a bra because she's facing them as she's going to the bedroom. For what it's worth, I think it works better if she's not wearing a bra at all through the game, and that her back is to them when she takes her T-shirt off on the way to Lester's bedroom and they see her bare back and the hot pants. There's another later sequence where Lester and Sara are in the bedroom, and Sara is on top of Lester, involving pulling off his sweatpants where the tenses get really confused.

SierraDelta

Anyone got any bets on how many chapters this takes to wrap up? At this stage, I'm putting down about 35-38. First observation was that it was technically quite good. Theres a cohesive element to a lot of the descriptions and activities. I think it does add some extra things into play, which is also good. To an extent, I like how there are multiple layers being built. But there are so many loose threads in this series to date, I wonder if we'll ever see those threads pulled and watch how they unravel. Perhaps what isnt, is that this chapter felt a little lost. Each element, on its own, stands up pretty well but cumulatively I'm still not sure how this would effectively advance the story line. This isnt intended as criticism either, I'm simply trying to understand what this chapter is providing, other than world building. World building is good, but I kinda want more than that. A couple of other completely left field random thoughts: 1) Comedy option - the ending is that Sarah is a sex crazed sociopath and both Lester and Dan are her pawns. 2) The foreshadowing of a potential threesome for Lester and Sarah; is the obvious choice one of Jesse or Eugene? I feel like this would make a lot of fans happy. Left field option would be someone from the hospital to create professional and intellectual tension for Sarah, to keep her in line for Lester. 3) Dan gets actual honest to goodness therapy and that magically makes his character somewhat interesting - win or lose, I really want to see some exploration around his state of mind, I think thats a compelling story on its own. I might have an alternate agenda though, I'm still trying to learn how to write and I really like a lot of the stylistic decisions that DonSilver makes. I'm not intending to write this style of content though, I want to do more in the vein of short stories exploring deep philosophical questions through characters facing extreme stress or crises. I wonder if left field idea #1 could work as a story?

Octopus8888

Thanks for the chapter Don. If I may have my say I was hoping you would delve deeper into Jesse and Sara's relationship, secretly (via text?). I waited a month imagining this situation. It's a pity

Jekyll

I don't find Dan written unrealistically, though I admit that he relents too quickly at times. In the earlier chapters he was in control, he was confident, didn't see Lester as a threat at all and was enjoying the early stages of his fantasy. But truthfully, he was already struggling and I feel like people miss that. Far from home, away from family, his career is in shambles, struggling financially, likely battling forms of depression. But in having Sarah play with Lester he found his drug of happiness. Now at the start it was amazing, he got to tease Lester and feel better than him. I think we can all acknowledge that Sarah and Dan's entrance into this bargain initially was due to their own arrogance at being superior to Lester. But as I stated above, Dan wasn't all there and the cracks were showing. Lester's manipulations aside, Dan is the prime example of someone with buyers remorse. In reality, this fictional character would hardly be the first man to enter into a relationship such as this and find out it wasn't everything he thought it could be. This goes back to their arrogance, Dan never saw Lester as a threat. Now he can see how much more Sarah enjoys the sex with Lester and from this chapter, he now sees how intimate they have become. Now we know that this is through Lester's shenanigans, but from Dan's view, he's loosing his wife to someone who he never felt as a threat. In the real world there are countless stories of this happening in relationships such as these. Couples playing around and having it blow up in their face. Now this is not everyone who plays around, but lots have suffered break ups and meltdowns in trust with their experimenting. So why doesn't Dan just pull the plug on this whole thing? to use a phrase, he's chasing the dragon. Struggling to find that high he had when this game started, he gets tastes of it and he is now realizing that his own fantasy's are shifting and warping. Seeing him try and fail to regain control is accurate to me, he doesn't have the upper hand anymore and doesn't know how to make those steps forward. So one step forward, two steps back. Now as to the kids, they exist and we as readers know that. But are you suggesting that parents don't seperate and divorce? Nothing so far has indicated that Sarah would just abandon her daughters and run away with Lester. But like her husband, she's chasing a vice that is going to effect all of them. Sorry for the long winded reply lol

Jekyll

Enjoyed this chapter! It moved Sarah and Lester's relationship forward, while showing Dan still struggling between embracing his own fantasy's and his distaste for the loss of control. Clearly this chapter is to set up the upcoming ones, lots of plot points dropped in what will become something more. Seeing Sarah embrace and move more into her sexual side was great. But while the sex scene was really good as always, it was the little things in this chapter I really enjoyed. "Hey, Lester," Sarah smiled.... Immediately being happy to see Lester and then in the next little bit, she reaches out for him. Really shows how far their relationship has come. I also enjoy the distinction that's really coming full circle. Sarah has been using these trips to Chicago to escape and find stress relief. Now her body is reacting to it for just that, getting excited by Lester's presence, her body preparing itself at the strong scent of Lester, which is now associated with pleasure and not the disgust of early chapters. The attempt to take control from Lester was also very hot. By shoving him back and demanding his cock is only hers, showed how there is intimate feelings from her. Even if she did her best to hide them from Lester, her actions spoke loudly. This was a glimpse of the old Sarah for a moment, the one who dictates and control's the sexual relationship with her husband. We saw that Sarah when playing the game, the one loves to tease and get attention, only amped up to ten. But what made it super hot, was watching how Lester instantly took control back from Sarah and showed us and Sarah, the new her. The one who submits and looses herself to giving control to Lester. There is a vast difference between Sarah's everyday and married persona, and the persona that is now becoming addicted this game with Lester.

thib ear3

More and more, I think the story is moving laterally. What gripped me was the dynamic between the 3 main characters, which is not evolving anymore... I'll give one more episode but if this doesn't get back on track, I am out. An erotic story about a D&D evening ? Totally doesn't cut it for me...

Jekyll

Jesse will definitely be back and I think, he may be getting set up as a major foil to lester’s plans. He knows lester set all this up, so if he may try his blackmail scheme again, only on lester now.

Jekyll

#1 could definitely be a story and there would be a lot who got interested in it. Having the wife be the strong one and take control of the men, will tic a lot of fantasy’s for lots of people As to #2, I see eugene being yhe first to get into this threesome with sarah and lester. As well as maybe a group session where sarah has to play her character. Clothes get burned off? She has to undress at the table, and so on!

Chris K

Only gotta wait a year or so for the ball to get rolling on that...

Darrow

I doubt it. Lester isn't Dan, he isn't into cucking, and he hates Eugene. I'd almost see Lester using Ned. Lester has no respect at all for Ned, but I could almost see him using someone completely subordinate and non-threatening.

Darrow

Actually, that's kind of an interesting idea. Jesse's got a complicated, but barely there relationship with Sarah. She got to know him as Dan's incompetent, unreliable, slightly creepy colleague. Then there was his little stunt in texts. And his sub-par dirty dancing. I could see some version of Sarah, with no real respect for him, entertaining herself during boring lonely periods, screwing with him by texts, getting him to send dick pics and sext her. Sarah does enjoy teasing and sexual manipulation. She does it regularly to Dan, and did it to Lester and the gamers.

Jekyll

I don’t mean as in this story, Lester being cucked like Dan. I just mean a story about that would be doable. I can see lester using ned for sure, I’ve talked about this before. He fits well, easily controlled and worships lester. Eugene offers some interesting ideas. Plus he seems like a wild card and someone on Lester’s level. Something we haven’t seen yet.

Jekyll

I can definitely see this version of Sarah as well. Her desire to tease and receive gratification from it, is becoming very apparent. Playing with jesse would be right up her alley. We saw her embracing her sexual side a lot in this chapter, so controlling and dictating things with Jesse, would appeal to this new side of hers. I would say to that, the thrill of teasing the gamers made her extra turned on. But more so because she got to tease Lester. It really is her only time of control over him and playing that up in front of his friends, led to her intense claiming of him in the bedroom.

Fiestamasta

Loved the chapter Don. I think it was masterfully written and advances the fraying threads of the triangle at a slow burn. It’s my hope that this story continues with a focus on the relationships between the triangle. How they are slowly keeping things from each other. My favorite aspect of this story is the slow fall of Sarah, how this was initially Dans fantasy but it’s slowly becoming a Lester and Sarah thing. Where Sarah is becoming more infatuated with Lester. As opposed to how it started. Dan and Sarah exploring. I hope future chapters and events focus on this evolution. It’s my hope that Sarah is not written as some “unrealistic” out of control vixen that’s just going to bed everyone. There is plenty of that out there. But instead she is a mother, a breadwinner, a beautiful woman that is caught around Lester’s “finger” and is slowly losing herself to him. There is plenty of quick rocks erotica out there. But very few good authors and stories that maintain such a focus on the blurring of the relationship lines, the angst, the woman developing feelings for the lover/bull, the lover/bull having an agenda. Love it! I hope this story continues in the theme of tragedy. And that Lester eventually “wins”, not that he gets Sarah in the end as I don’t think that’s realistic, given her strong relationship with Dan, their family and real life. But I’m sure if this is the direction you take (I really hope you do!) that you will come up with something exquisite and excruciating. I’m just one reader. But I really hope the story does not imo devolve into crazy sex scenes just for the sake of fantasy sex to include other characters. Scenes should serve a purpose beyond being “hot”, such as this chapter. -Sarah feels so comfortable with Lester now and becoming an active participant in his world -being introduced to people as Lester’s girlfriend first -how easily, wet and anxious she gets when about to be intimate with Lester -the flex/move he made when she was on top that caused an orgasm she had trouble recovering from (this scene was so hot) as it kinda showed how Lester has more to offer and she is getting lost in his ability - the subtle beginnings of keeping things from each other (Dan and Sarah) regarding Eugene - the foreshadowing of now Lester is fulfilling Sarah’s fantasies (getting it at work) this is no longer about Dan. He is losing control

realcuck

Sex scene is hot as always. Rest of it I just skimmed kinda boring. Think I'm gonna drop this. Not worth paying for and already waiting. Read it for free when it comes out on literotica. Peace pervs nice hanging out with ya 😌

Juan

Man i hope the focus keeps on just the three of them. That's what made the wedding dress chapter so great. I really dont like the public sharing aspect NGL.

Darrow

I keep wondering what Lester's end game is in this, or if he even has a coherent one. At one point, it was impregnating Sarah - a bouncing baby Lester taking up residence in her womb or her life. But I find myself wondering if he's moving from that. He definitely wants to slowly but completely crush Dan, teach him to accept 'his place' as absolute cuck and more or less ruin him. It's not personal, it just seems to be a game he's playing. Dan is in the way of Sarah his real target. But that said, what does he want from her? I don't think he wants her permanently, he doesn't want to be a husband or active father. He likes his life just the way it is. He seems to just want Sarah for a toy, to manipulate physically and emotionally, until he's bored. He may have this sense that once he's bored, once there are no more worlds of Sarah to conquer, once she's decided that she loves him, that he's crossed very boundary, done everything he can think of with or to her, then he'll just drop her or them, leave them behind and move on, his ego maxed out. And Lester seems consistently sociopathic enough for this. It's consistent with his other 'conquests' and I have the sense that he's got trophies - if not physical ones (he likely does have physical trophies) then definitely a hard drive full of notes and photos of each victim, likely massively encrypted. Wait. Would it be encrypted? Lester in his own territory - he can be sloppy and arrogant. He might not bother encrypting his trophy files if they're on his private hard drive. It would be interesting if Dan or Sarah went boking through his hard drive sometime and found them. I don't know why Sarah would, but Dan is realizing he needs to fight back to have any chance. If Lester's personal history is exposed, things get very explosive very fast in all kinds of ways. But that's all kind of a side angle. Coming back to Lester, I'm starting to wonder if he doesn't have any clear plans or goals beyond a vague 'make Sarah mine' without any grasp of what the consequences or implications of that would be for him or anyone. To be fair to Lester, he doesn't really care about other people, and so doesn't care about consquences to them, so long as they don't impact him. But maybe he's missing things. For one thing, this is probably the greatest sexual odyssey of his life, the most genuinely consensual, the most romantic, and the most involved. Is this changing or affecting him in any way at all? The other thing is that if he thinks he'll just break his toys and walk away without consequence, how likely is that. Sarah doesn't strike me as a woman abandoned easily. What if he gets what he wants, and Sarah just doesn't leave. She's already declared ownership - he's her property. What happens if Lester says "We're done," Sarah responds "We're not," and cracks the whip? We talk about Sarah's fall from grace, but in many ways, Sarah is getting steadily stronger and more adventurous. This latest episode represents a turning point. Sure, he still sexually dominates her, but that's what she wants. She initiates, she rides him, she declares ownership, she fucks with what she thinks is Dan. Lester has never once done anything she wasn't completely up for, he's been in her comfort zone all this time. Maybe the woman that Sarah's becoming is more than he expects. Just some thoughts.

WILLYBOY

I enjoy the manipulative control/sexuality dynamic on and with her, Lester toward other receivers.

Gee

Might I add fellow readers Remember right at the start, the interaction of John, the interim CEO from the board and Sarah. John a head taller, Sarah racing to keep up, Sarah subtly asking about her prospects of becoming the next CEO John complimenting Sarah’s above and beyond dedication and secretly dropping a hint about her prospects. John reaching out and taking Sarah’s arm, gently squeezing her bicep, staring awkwardly at each other for seconds, before a sudden separation. Sounds to me John may try to leverage Sarah, using the role of CEO as an indecent proposal for seducing her sexually. Sarah’s marriage bond is in a much weakened state since Lester began breaking Sarah in as his big cock addicted cum slut. Sarah loves the attention, the power to seduce through being exposed & watched by others as her naked body is fucked. If John plays his cards right, he might gain some advantage over Sarah while she is confused and vulnerable about the dynamic of Dan and Lester. As for Jesse, I see Lester using Jesse in a similar scenario as the nightclub scene. Maybe a little more private, so that Lester can break Sarah in with the 2 cocks scenario. By getting Sarah use to more cocks, Lester can desensitise Sarah’s emotional commitment to Dan by using her arousal, lust and fantasies against her. Sarah is becoming completely vulnerable moving forward! What are you thought Readers

Jekyll

The interaction between Sarah and John was odd, especially his taking of her arm, could very well be something an indecent proposal. I wonder if in that instance would Sarah ask Dan for permission? Or Lester? Or both? Agreed! Sarah is becoming very vulnerable to this growing situation. If she’s properly amped up, and lester brings in Jesse, could she say no? Would she even want to?

Gee

Hi Den I think it may be a combination of all the above. Lester is driven by a need to get back at the men and women that teased & taunted him as a fat nerd growing up. One would assume he’s never had a healthy intimate relationship with a woman. Which would explain his sexual gratification in manipulating, controlling and exploiting women. When it comes to Dan, Lester can’t help but want to compete and beat Dan. To steal Sarah out from under Dan would go some way to balancing the hurt perpetrated on Lester by the better looking jocks from Lester’s youth. I believe Lester is torn between impregnating Sarah and or having her taken by many men, while creating written, photographic and video content about his conquest of her. While also showing a defeated husband as his wife is taken from innocence to willing degraded cum slut.

Travis Ellisor

I really enjoyed this chapter! Sarah flirting and then almost dominating Lester was great! I would personally like this story to eventually end up with Dan redeeming himself, fixing his life, and bringing Sarah back to an exclusive relationship, but not for a while. I definitely want many more chapters of Lester fucking Sarah.

Darrow

Very astute, and very interesting. The John situation raises some fascinating notions. Sarah is or was very straightlaced, very ethical, as is Dan. They don't cut corners, or do anything untoward of sleazy. Normal Sarah would certainly not respond to a low level sexual harassment, would not use sex or sexuality as part of her job search. I don't think she'd even think about it, or accept it even now. But we're past normal Sarah. So three scenarios: 1) She's sharing and chatting with Lester, and his advice or idea is to unethically seduce the guy and wholesale manipulate him. And this new Sarah thinks "Holy cow, why the hell not? Why not use sex as a tool to manipulate and take what I want?" I like this because it moves Sarah from victim to agent, and it embraces her transformation. The manipulative sex kitten has always been in her, but she weaponizes and moves it up a level. And I think it would be the most genuine corruption. 2) Lester hears about it from her, and uses it as an opportunity to break her down further, throwing her at John, either alone or with him, having her service him, and even pretending its for her own good and her promotion. This is not as satisfying, but it is kind of hot and in character, and continues to establish Lester as a controller and manipulator, steadily corrupting her. 3) John follows through on seduction of Sarah, and her morals and sexual barriers have been so compromised by Lester and his antics, that she folds and gives in... possibly without Lester or Dan's knowledge. I think she'd be smart enough, if it happens, to leverage herself for CEO. And there's story advantages here in terms of demonstrating both her pervasive corruption, and actually using it as a wedge against Dan and/or Lester if she has to deceive one or both of them. Anyway, thank you Gee. That was very insightful and thoughtful of you.

Sigma

It could be that Sarah is becoming so independent of Dan with Lester, all the while being a very capable and competent woman, that she sees a brighter future with Lester than with Dan. Certainly Lester's scheming could help her with the office promotion. And I too see more there with the interim CEO in a future story. And with Sarah's willingness to be seen in public with Lester, willingness to be independent of having to get Dan's approval, and fully aware of how her beauty, body, and attitude can influence men, she could certainly begin to use her body to get what she wants outside of her relationship with Dan and Lester. Lester has a real good thing going with Sarah, he even realizes how good he has it - best ever! So why would he get tired of it and toss her aside? Doesn't resonate with me. I think the plan is to get rid of any of Dan's influence, perhaps even get her to eventually leave Dan. The big issue is the kids. Well, Sarah's already become used to Lester's smell and his mess. And she's the one taking care of the kids in Middleton all week, so is it that big of a deal to keep doing that with messy Lester and without Dan?

Darrow

Good answer Gee, One thing you mentioned struck me "...need to get back at the men and women that teased & taunted him as a fat nerd growing up." Some of Sarah's inner monologue was thinking about how people looked at Lester, teasing, taunting, seeing a fat nerd. She actually experienced something like empathy or even protective feelings towards Lester in that moment, resenting people who looked down on him. Aha, here we go: "Besides, it bugged her that these guys were giving him a hard time. Just like when that homeless man called him fat, or that stranger subtly insulted him. Even the way that people looked at them when they were out together."

Pete

Loved the subtle inclusion of Bill and Amber into this story. I hope someone finishes that story soon. Another great chapter Don, you’re the man!

Chris K

I think she very well knows what John is doing. And all her "training" with Lester has taught her that men want her and she can control the outcome. I think she'll let him seduce her and then turn the power around.

Volkfly

Dude. You're spot on with your analysis. I also believe option 1 is the most genuine and rational choice.

Arthas19

I think it's not believable but more than anything it's not feasible for Sarah to change Dan for Lester and stay with him. Lester is not a normal guy, not even someone powerful, rich or handsome. A relationship is not just sex, Lester may fuck Sarah very well but what after sex? Sarah has a social life, a job, DAUGHTERS and other things. Lester can't change his physical appearance so he can only change in other aspects. I don't see guys like that changing his life for some woman, not even for Sarah. The two only understand each other perfectly in bed. Suppose Lester takes Sarah and they spend the whole day fucking at his house. Even he would get bored of it and Sarah would start thinking, she would easily get depressed, her physical state would change and everything could get worse. Unless they magically brainwash her into not being a thinking person. It is a gloomy scenario. An ending where Lester "wins" is if Sarah (and Dan) can incorporate him into their lives but Lester also has to give in to it. Sarah could spend a few hours with him maybe two or three times a week. The downside is that everyone would have to live nearby. I think that would calm everyone down. Because if the meetings will be once or twice a month or even take longer because they live far away, Lester could become dangerous and that whole adventure would end badly.

Gee

Hi Den, I’d run with the 3rd option. My reasoning is that Sarah’s values have been compromised. Her desire to be looked upon lustfully is still in its infancy. She tries to take the reins occasionally but loves it when those reins are yanked from her and she is taken hard and deep. With John, I believe this will start as a pet project on his own. John will have 1, maybe 3 colleagues he will confide his sexual progress with in regard Sarah. With Sarah trying to stabilise the families finances, I believe she will keep it to herself. She won’t want Dan to get upset and cause a confrontation with John, which would compromise Sarah’s selection. John is a smart businessman and has done this many times before. Men of power and lust can’t help themselves. John may share a reluctant Sarah with these colleagues. Sarah may succumb on a number of sexual levels. With Lester getting her use to different cocks, Sarah’s reasoning might be what’s the harm in another 1 or 3 cocks. She may try initially to discreetly justify her actions for securing her families well-being. The sacrifice of herself for the betterment of loved ones.

Gee

Hello again Den, My thoughts on Lester Are that he is torn between studying, planning, manipulating, seducing, drugging, filming, impregnating, beautiful victims & then selling the diarised story, video content online for money from his eager clientele. Dan and Sarah are a new dynamic for Lester. Lester’s ultimate joy is learning how to break the beautiful marriage bond of the couple through sexual corruption of the couples innocent fantasies. I believe the habits that Lester is addicted to is the sexual corruption of his victims. I believe Lester has Sarah addicted to the variety of sex scenarios introduced so far. Sarah is addicted to the unknown of what Lester may introduce next. Just the smell, leering attention, deliberate touch from Lester has Sarah’s nipples hard as marbles, her breast flushing pink and her pussy juicing up instantly. Sarah will capitulate to Lester’s future goals. He pushes her slowly past her boundaries with cunning planning. Ultimately Sarah will probably be ravaged by a group of the highest bidders amongst Lester’s clients. All while Lester films all the action from multiple angles and sells the content online. Lester is a predator!!! His spots won’t change now. Sarah getting pregnant by him will be the icing on the cake!!!

Gee

As for the diary and video content on Dan and especially Sarah, they won’t go looking for any of it until he makes them aware of it. By using it for blackmail against them.

SierraDelta

What about a situation where Lester is starting to feel the need for something more than a play thing? Lester isnt inherently evil, he's a guy who has a raft of weaknesses and insecurities in a position where he is at least able to get a taste of "the high life" due to finding a mechanism to exploit. Why cant Lester start to feel something, start to change? Sarah's actions (and reactions) would give any guy a little bit of hope. Why cant Lester, as the proverbial ugly duckling, have some hope and finally "win"?

Royston smith

Hi Gee, I agree the arm squeeze was odd unless it had a sexual connotation. But I would see it as Don giving himself storyline options rather than a definite direction the story will take. Remember the scene where her old boss Drew saw her in her underwear? So far that hasn’t been followed up and I doubt if it will be. RegardsJesse, I agree that Lester may use that route to break down Sarah further. She is obviously into the 2 cocks scenario and Jesse seems the type of weak personality Lester prefers , so he can control things tightly.

Royston smith

Hi Den, your thoughts on this are interesting and detailed. However, would Lester relinquish control in that way to a Man like John? doubt it. He would want to be in control. So, Jesse yes, but not John.

Royston smith

Hi Gee, Agree with all of this except the pregnancy part. If she was going to get pregnant than why has it not cropped up in the story yet? Seems to me that one of those couple of stops on the way to work after he fucked her in the marital home was to get the morning after pill.

Royston smith

Fiestamasta, Great comment on way the story should go. Sarah is seriously getting into the Lester vibe and will agree to be fucked at work, share his be d at night etc. However, I think she is also getting off big time on showing herself off to other men, so the 2 cocks scenario isn’t far away.

Royston smith

Yes I agree sierra D, Very good point, well made.

Royston smith

Hi SD, It advanced the story as we saw Sarah’s development. She obviously loved showing herself off to the nerds. In past similar situations she needed Laster’s prompting to do it. Secondly, she is also embracing the sexual heights Lester can take her to, even taking the initiative with him.

Jekyll

While I find Lester an interesting character to read about, he is the villain of this story. While I agree he may be changing to want something from Sarah, it’s not in any way positive. Lester is evil, through and through. From what we know of his past, he’s drugged, raped, filmed, shared and blackmailed numerous women to this point. These aren’t weaknesses and lester is long past any form of redemption. I do get the feeling he wants more from this new type of conquest with Sarah. But more as trophy to keep around, to continue to boost his own ego and give him something to do between conquests.

Royston smith

I agree Jekyl , Jesse will be back , but on Lester’s terms. I can’t see him successfully blackmailing Lester. Good luck with that one., Jesse! One thing that puzzles me about this chapter though is Jesse is now a Director with another firm. How did that happen? Just been fired and then gets a Directors post? Doesn’t ring true to me. It begs the question how tf did that happen?

Royston smith

Excellent observations Mr Jeckyl. Truly wise words.

neegan

Excellent chapter, I was actually hoping Lester would have rolled below Eugene's score, and seen Sarah take him into Lester's room. Have Dan and Lester jostling between them to watch through the peephole and finally Lester saying "fuck this!" and going into his room and And slamming his cock into Sarah while she's bent over sucking Eugene.... But it's awesome this way too lol.

Darrow

Hi Gee, Interesting position in terms of following through on option three. I dunno though. A weakened and corrupted Sarah simply being seduced and used by John feels almost like retreading - it just repeats the same thing as happened to her with Lester, except perhaps without the dark energy of Lester's malevolence, or Dan's fetish. So a faded copy. You could do that angle. The trick would be finding something more to do with it. Maybe John becomes the escape hatch, their affair is voluntary and healthy, and allows Sarah to move past both Dan and Lester into a new, non-toxic relationship, kids and all. It's hard to see it going darker - I like the idea of John proceeding with conquest, sharing the details with his circle. But it feels like too big a swerve, even a departure from the narrative into a new mostly unrelated plot thread. I think in terms of story coherence, we'd want Lester in the picture as in options one and two. Regarding Lester's motivation, I think you're right. One thing you're particularly correct about - he does share or sell the narrative and visuals of his conquests online with a select clientele. Although I doubt that's the main source of his income - it's more self validation. But that does explain the interactions with Kronus. Lester is indeed toxic, and it's difficult for toxic people to change. I see a lot of his motivations here confused and aimless. Impregnate Sarah... but share her? A climactic gangbang? Well, unless she's already knocked up, it would be hard to guarantee his fatherhood - and I don't think Lester would tolerate that. But I'm not sure he'd allow a gangbang on a woman that he impregnated. I think his agendas may be cross purposes. Of course, he may not have particular road maps, just a direction. Doing or destroying a couple is new untried ground for him, and he's loving it. But it's mainly only happening because they're receptive to it. The thing that keeps occurring to me is that Sarah is so willing and pliable because, whether he realizes it or not, she's in her comfort zone. There's always been this hidden Sarah of volcanic appetites.

Darrow

I suspect that Sarah comes out of this intact. Dan? Not so much.

Jekyll

As to Lester wanting to impregnate Sarah. I wonder if his aim has changed somewhat in the last two chapters. When he was going hard to fuck her unprotected and slam a baby into her, he felt that Dan was broken already. Perhaps the baby was the icing on the cake of showing Dan how much Lester owns Sarah’s body now. But! Dan grew a back bone and threw lester out of the house. Taking Lester’s moment of victory and crushing it. I think that moment affected lester a lot. Having Dan tossed from the club was the start. Now his plans are to turn Sarah into a slut right before Dan’s eyes, to utterly break him finally. Then he’ll be back on the baby hunt. Thoughts?

Tom

Same here. IF that ever happened, Lester would be the all-time, undisputed king of his D & D crowd! lol.

Aj

I was a little disappointed in this chapter. D&D? More nerds? I’m hoping Lester can continue to corrupt Sarah into becoming his cum slut whore, fucking him as much as he wants and anyone else he wants her to fuck. She needs to know and accept she’s already licking a stranger’s cum off the wall. Time to become the full time slut Lester needs

LesterstheMAN

And among many comments and actions by Sarah showing her gravitating towards Lester, recall the shower scene in chapter 14 where Sarah couldn't remember the last time she and Dan did that, yet here she's in the shower, Dan is in the bathroom with her and....she practically dismisses him, but he chooses to remain just sitting there watching her shower alone. Also like the scene where Lester asks DS to play D&D ,and Sarah feels sympathy towards Lester about the way people treat him badly. This and the other comments or thoughts showing Sarah becoming attached to Lester emotionally, make the sex scenes even better. Finally when Lester inevitably fucks Sarah on her desk is she caught ? Does this ruin her chance of becoming CEO or lose the position if already hired, forcing her to depend more on Letters financial aid, or just subject her to the blackmail of a forced threesome? Hope not though, just like the SLD dynamic best. Finally, the "making love" scene in chapter 13 was excellent, would like something similar to happen now and again, with the sweet talk too, to emphasize the increasing connection of SL.

Darrow

LesterstheMAN Yikes, some potent ideas there. I love the idea of Sarah getting fucked at her desk by Lester, and getting caught, preferably by John (Drew would also be good, but is now out of the picture). Some fascinating directions that could go. * The hot scenario - to save her/their asses, Sarah, on her own, or with Lester's prompting, or as part of a threesome scenario seduces John, enlisting him and consolidating her path to CEO and slut. * The disaster scenario - it all comes tumbling down. John sees a clear conflict of interest situation in Lester's involvement with Sarah, he backtracks, figures out that Lester's the one that uploaded bad rabbit and the whole thing is a sleazy extortion gambit, Lester and possibly Sarah are up on charges, even if Sarah evades jail her life and career are ruined. Dan still has plausible deniability, so she sacrifices herself, takes the fall, so that Dan can be saved and take care of the kids. Dan lives happily ever after, Lester goes to jail, and Sarah unable to ever again find work in her field and now notorious is reduced to giving blow jobs at a third rate massage parlour. Or variations thereof. Ironic denouement, Dan gets a new woman in his life, and ends up repeating the cycle.

Darrow

One thing that won't happen, sadly, is any kind of redemptive character arc for Lester. It would have been intriguing. The idea of Lester forming a real human relationship with Sarah, and actually growing as a person, Sarah gets pregnant with his child. She and Dan stay together, and agree to raise it as their own. Lester continuing to evolve, preserving his bond with Sarah and developing with Dan and his offspring, until he evolves into the role of a much beloved uncle to the kids, visiting frequently, with bedroom visits, and developing an actual whole life. I think I'm kind of a sucker for redemption. Dark energy is exciting. But sometimes spiraling inevitably into ruin is tiresome. But the reality is that while the suggestion of a redemptive path intrigued Don Silver on Discord, that's not where the story has or is going. Lester has been relentless in his sociopathy, and the occasional bits where he seems to warm up to becoming a decent person are either transitory or deliberately staged. It's Sarah and Dan that have gone through personal changes, with Dan declining steadily, and Sarah expanding and exploring. I don't see her ending up with Lester, but I could see her leaving Dan behind.

LesterstheMAN

Also one way Lester can get alone time with Sarah, take her to a very expensive restaurant that Dan can't afford. Lester will have a good laugh when Dan can't pay his check and has to ask Lester for help, further lowering himself in front of Sarah. Or maybe Lester just watches Dan squirm while explaining to the restaurant he can't pay as Sarah looks away embarrassed for him. A few expensive dates that Lester we know can afford and Dan's out of the picture. Sarah will be contentto go along since she wants to be more alone with Lester too. Dan can't do luxury and he's too condescending to be any good at competing with Lester at things like D&D. One other thing in my ramblings, I would also like Dan to start having performance problems with Sarah due to stress over money, Lester out fucking him etc. maybe have Sarah just come out and say point blank to Dan or in his hearing that Lester is a REAL man, successful,confident, and bigger and better in bed than Dan ever was or will be.

LesterstheMAN

I would like to see Sarah carrying Lester s baby and leaving Dan,though I prefer the Lester redeemed angle. However one thing that is undeniable, is people ,for whatever reasons, do sometimes bind with the worst possible person for them. So any outcome is possible in a story called toxic attraction.

Jekyll

One other possibility for an ending! Lester is found out and Sarah puts a stop to it. But I don’t think her and dan will ever be the same, especially with his fantasies now devolving faster and faster. So I wonder if a third party we have seen, will step up in the hand. Giving Sarah that controlling, sexual dominate she needs in the bedroom. Someone with long term prospects that merges the dan aspects and lester into one.

Jekyll

The perfect sentence there! People end up with the worst possible person! Like a bad drug trip, Sarah is latching on to the worst person she could.

YouTensil

I read through the alpha version and really enjoyed it. This version has even more to savour. Playful and fun, but with a bite to it. We are really seeing a new Sarah emerging. One that needs Lester. The way she responds to his presence and her desire for Lester grows. Loved the 'daddy' moment we've been waiting for! It seems the pace is too slow for some, but honestly, I'm really enjoying it. For me things are progressing all the time and I'm loving the attention these changes get. I'm very much looking forward to Dan's great plan to save Sarah from Lester's evil clutches! Guaranteed to work!

Darrow

Dan is already having performance issues. He came much too fast in lovemaking, blowing as they were just getting started and leaving Sarah unsatisfied. Other times, he's prematurely ejaculated, or she's found him half-drunk asleep. It's there, it's starting and it's definitely developing.

Darrow

I think that the problem with any great plan of Dan's, is that he's going to try and get things back the way they were. Chicken back into the egg, wine back into the raisin. Sarah's evolved, and even if she tries to go back... I don't think she'd be happy, or would stay.

YouTensil

I largely agree. Although, Dan did hint at trying to replicate a similar situation with someone else. Which could be a very intriguing prospect. What would Sarah think of that? Would it make her feel cheap, and drive her towards Lester? Would she even feel it was cheating on him? Would it be an utter disaster? Probs, yes. The other path is something closer to going cold turkey. Which has it's own issues, especially if Lester is spending time at the hospital. Fun possibilities!

Darrow

I think Dan's only way forward is full swinging, where he makes a point of sharing Sarah with other men, even groups of men, and where he sleeps with other women. Couple swap, selecting singles, perhaps different kinds of play. To dominate as Sarah seems want, he needs to take control of her sexuality while feeding her appetites and challenging her. Right now, Lester is both dominating her and feeding her appetites, and Dan is painting himself into the role of a bystander. Sarah's tried to include him by giving him her 'leash' - the final decision over what happens, but mainly that gets expressed by letting her off the leash or letting Lester take control. As long as the sexual relationship is between Sarah and Lester, Dan is slowly going to get frozen out and become irrelevant. It's happening already. Worse, Dan seems to not only accept his growing irrelevance, but he actively abets it - witness Eugene. Sarah's appetite and inclinations have grown, she's always been the bolder one, and she's the one that consistently made advances on Lester, each time Dan gave permission. She's not going to go back in the sexual box. She's not going to trade great sex, or adventures, or fulfillment for a man she loves but who she's coming to dismiss as inadequate and ineffective. Dan has to break Lester's hold on her sexuality, and the only way to do that is to start running other men between her legs, she likes to be dominated, he has to control that by selecting her lovers and situations. He needs to take her to an orgy. Right now, Lester is starting to occupy that territory, showing her off sexually, having her engage in play with other men. If Lester seizes that ground first, then that's tough on Dan, all he's doing And he needs to participate in an orgy, in couple swaps, have women. Right now, he's being turned into a eunuch masturbating at a peephole. He needs to assert himself as a sexual being, particularly a powerful independent sexual being. Right now, Sarah is engaging sexually with Lester and other men, and Dan is engaging with ... nobody. So Sarah gets to fuck without any consequence, and she subliminally disrespects Dan. He has to assert himself sexually, demonstrate to her that he's desirable and powerful for other women, in other situations. Sarah needs to start noticing him. If not, he's done for. He might as well stick his balls in an envelope and mail them to Hoboken.

LesterstheMAN

True, I guess I am looking for a bit more emphasis or maybe have it occur/referenced to more consistently. As is it only seems to occur occasionally.

Gee

Agreed I see 2 paths Lester becoming the distant uncle with regular fuck benefits of Sarah. With Dan and Sarah raising Lester’s child. Or The fantasy threesome blows up in their faces and all go in seperate directions. Lester and Sarah will be fine. Dan not so.

Gee

Lester likes to check what size equipment his apprentices for Sarah are sporting. I believe Jesse is bigger than Dan but not as big as Lester.

Jekyll

While I agree with a lot of this assessment, I think Dan could wrestle back control just from Lester, without sharing Sarah around. The last real moment we saw that spark between Sarah and Dan, was when he barged into the bathroom and kicked lester out of the house. Sarah loved that, like he was reclaiming her. She keeps giving Dan that opportunity, but he keeps squandering it. After booting lester, he reverted and told sarah how he’s not sure he can control his own fantasies. Putting Sarah back in charge. Moments like lester telling the couple, that during their game, sarah would be spending some alone time in his bedroom. Dan wanted to say something, but sarah quickly diverted that with a sly comment. Dan could win back control, I think, with moments like these. Had he told sarah and lester that they weren’t going to be alone during the d&d game, she would have caved and been towards dan. Dan needs to show he’s in control, Sarah responds to it. But like the last shower scene where he was left in the cold, he keeps sinking more into his own submission.

Sigma

While some readers dislike the nerd show, it had a purpose. First, it was a competition between alphas and Lester had to use Sarah to finally one-up Eugene. Second, Lester planned to further sideline Dan by referring to Sarah as his "girlfriend," freezing out any influence Dan could have as husband. If Dan revealed himself as the husband it would blow up Lester and Sarah's scheme, so, Dan is now further removed from the relationship in a public setting. Third, it was just another way to get Sarah alone without Dan involved. Its hard to see any recovery for Dan. He's too subject to his fetish, he just has to give in to it. As Den Valdron wrote, "Dan's painting himself into the role of a bystander." (great line Den!). And in-spite of any 'plan' for a safeword, each time a rule is broken, a line is crossed, the safeword un-uttered, it only further widen's Sarah's freedom. We all know Dan will always give in. Sarah knows it too. Eventually Sarah will be so independent that Dan will be irrelevant. Yes, she may humor him and tell him what he wants. She'll essentially role-play as the loyal wife to Dan, after all, she needs to keep up appearances for the time being to her relatives and employer - until . . . What happens when a husband becomes irrelevant? The wife does all the planning according to only her desires, with no influence or input from the husband. With Sarah now enjoying some dates with Lester, from walking around town to dinners and conversation, love-making, having mutual fun teasing the nerds, becoming comfortable with Lester's smell and his mess, one could see an independent Sarah rationalizing a life with Lester and her girls - inspite of Lester's appearance and mess. Looks don't always appeal to women. Lester's a bad-boy, sexually amazing, financially setup, professionally competent, and independent--not dependent on an employer. She might even look as Lester as trading up from Dan.

Sigma

"A eunuch masturbating at a peephole" ! ! ! Perhaps you should write some stories? You write some great lines dude, and I really appreciate your insight. Just my thought: I can't see Lester risking Sarah with any other man, at least willingly. He won't even sell her videos. I believe he wants this to be a permanent thing. And even if Dan tried to get a swinger group or orgy going, it would drive Sarah further away since she can always claim she's doing all this for him, not so he could be with other women. And if Dan was with other women, it would further drive Sarah's mind away from Dan and into the arms of Lester and help her further rationalize a life without Dan. Yeah, there are possibilities of Sarah screwing other men but not because of Dan. There's plenty of non-consensual opportunities with the interim CEO, Swan Systems, Byron, Lincoln Group, even Jesse, and now even a new alpha, Eugene. That's plenty of potential story lines without introducing swingers or an orgy.

Darrow

Dan may already be irrelevant. I keep coming back to the shower scene.... * You don't have to be here.... * 'Bad boy' then she turns around and ignores him...

Sigma

Yeah I'm starting to get that sense as well. Even at the end when Dan says "Doesn't matter, though,, I still want you in bed with me tonight. Just to be close to you. You're not going anywhere" Don has her respond with a simple "Okay," and then he writes "Sarah smiled." Sarah smiled? What kind of smile was it? Was it still a post-orgasmic smile? A smile to just acknowledge hearing him? A smile of looking forward to lying next to her husband? Or, was it one of those 'ok' smiles one's wife gives you to just give you an answer, to get you to go away? Because, as was mentioned, the next line is "you don't have to wait here." Maybe she said that because she did leave the bathroom door unlocked. Why? Maybe she was hoping someone else would come in and shower with her? Even Dan is getting that feeling, because next he meditates on how L&S are "getting along," how "committed" she was to the role play so that "it was hard knowing what was real and what was pretend." He won't admit it to himself, yet, but he's seeing her emotionally leave him right before his eyes. Cat's out of the bag. Horse is out of the barn. Train has left the station.

Darrow

Yes. This is the basis of my argument that he can't just reassert himself. It won't go back to the way it was before, because for the rest of their married life, he'll be compared to Lester and his cock and found second rate - and she's not going to accept that. That's why I suggested the 'whore wife' scenario, where he takes domination again by controlling and directing this new sexuality, and where Lester's cock isn't special, because there are a lot of cocks, and Dan is controlling every one of them. Or to put it another way, Sarah responds to domination, he's literally got to take real control and enslave her AND deliver satisfaction. Right now, his domination amounted to permission, and she needs it less and less, and she gets the domination and satisfaction she needs from Lester. Honestly though, I don't think Dan can manage it. He's clearly on a descent, and at this point, he's recognizing it. Every attempt to assert himself has been temporarily successful but has either been futile or blown up in his face. He acknowledges it, and even when he does have a success, as with Bill, it seems hollow to him. He's not just losing, but aware of it, and feeding it. He literally humiliates himself in a D&D game and visibly checks out. And then, incredibly, he allows Eugene to evict him from his peephole and room. Dan has a lot further to fall, more humiliations in store. But... I find it hard to see him credibly recovering.

Darrow

Thanks. I actually do write a few stories here and there. I think where I go with the Swinger thing, is not the casual 70s key exchange, but something harder where Dan dominates and directs her sexually, and uses that to demystify Lester's cock. Sarah seems to want to be dominated and controlled sexually. For all her teasing, it excites her to be told what to do. So either Dan regains that, or Lester keeps extending his control. I think Dan's window of time or opportunity to assert himself and take control is closing.

Darrow

Regarding Dan's performance issues, as I've said, we're seeing signs. I think we'll see more and more, with Dan consistently losing self worth, and Sarah becoming more and more tired of them. Dan consistently blows too soon, leaving Sarah unsatisfied. She smiles, tells him its okay, and thinks of Lester. Dan can't perform at all, mentions he's tired. Sarah tells him its okay, thinks of Lester. Dan, after two many drinks, falls asleep with her. Sarah is wide awake. Dan is insensate, smelling of booze. She's unsatisfied, thinking of Lester, he's in the next room,.. so she goes to him. Hell, for all we know, Sarah may be about to do that this night. Think about it. Dan's already had a few beer, he's probably going to be a dud. Sarah thinks he got off on her performance, but really, he got emasculated and displaced by Eugene and he's lying about it. That's on top of the nights humiliation elsewhere. Maybe he'll be able to perform sexually. Or maybe he won't. Likely, he won't. Or if he does, its going to be really fast. He's already a little drunk, he doesn't hold his liquor. He'll probably pass out fast - leaving Sarah unsatisfied, bored and wide awake next to a snoring husband. It would be so tempting to sneak into Lester's room, in his great big bed with its luxurious sheets (as opposed to the uncomfortable overstarched sheets she's on with Dan - Lester thought of that), snuggle up to his comforting bulk and drift off, knowing that they might wake up in the middle of the night and have some genuinely private time. She can even rationalize that she'll sneak back into bed with Dan in the morning before he wakes, and he won't even know.

TuwatchU

Great chapter and good comments. Dan is a less sympathetic character with each chapter. Instead of joining in the D&D and trying to learn the game, he acts disinterested and somehow beneath him. He exhibited the same behavior when he was asked to mentor Jesse. I'm starting to think there may have been more to his layoff than a simple downsizing.

TuwatchU

Accidently hit 'return.' As noted by others, the shower scene was very telling. In previous chapters, Sarah would have invited Dan to join and reclaim her. Now he's dismissed. I'm thinking she spends the night with Lester. When L says he wants to get S alone, she reminds him it was part of the deal. He just responds they'll break it. S does not object. Nice touch with Jesse getting a job D applied for. I think if/when S finds out it was Eugene who watched, she will not be upset but will tease D about another man watching her fuck. Lot of good breadcrumbs. What type of home movies do Bill and Amber like? What happens with the interim CEO? Already looking forward to the next chapter.

RD

Don, I'm going to give you my honest feedback - like I always try to do. This felt like a huge filler chapter. Lots of words, but a complete sideline to the main story. I've re-read it, and my opinion hasn't changed much. A lot of "can we get to the point, please?" for me. The good - as always, the actual sex itself is really well written and very hot to read. I do love how Sarah is starting to respond to Lester - her getting wet and wanting sex on the off chance that Lester was wanting to switch things up. Also, I love how she no longer has any issue taking him bare. That said, we know that Sarah is fertile - she has two kids. How many times can she let Lester inseminate her before it becomes an issue? The peephole stuff was a little weird, but also hot. Kind of an interesting twist where Dan lets the D&D nerd basically cuck him on top of Lester cucking him. I've played D&D for 35 years, so as far as that goes, you wrote that part pretty well. But Don, I'm not here to read about people playing D&D. :) The bad - again, this just felt like such a filler chapter. You'd been picking up momentum in the story of late, and now, it's off into the weeds again. I don't want to read about corporate intrigue. I don't want to read about D&D sessions. I don't want to have tens of thousands of words with only a fraction of those devoted to the cuckold plot. Jessie? Who cares? He filled his role a long time ago. I thought it was pointless to bring him back for the club, he REALLY does not need to be a recurring character. He's just distracting. It doesn't make sense for him to have this big crush and be trying to force his way into Sarah's life; Jessie knows the she's married AND that she's fucking Lester. For him to act like a lovesick puppy is silly, if you ask me (and you didn't). While I love that Sarah does take Lester bare, I think that this does need to be addressed in her dialogue - or at least her mental monologue. Oh, this is wrong, oh, this breaks the rules, oh, it feels so good, the idea of the risk is hot even though she "knows" Lester is safe. But what if he wasn't? Etc, etc. I've said before, I really think that you need to be wrapping this story up. Dan losing control, Dan craving the debauchery, Lester manipulating everything, Sarah being hooked on the big cock. This should be the focus, for my money. Lester actively trying to impregnate Sarah, her and Dan both making bad choices... I would love to see them really address the pregnancy risk beyond the whole "rules" concept. In general, I just want to see the main plot resolve. Finish this story, move on to the next one!

Darrow

Bill and Amber are characters from another series by another writer called 'Neighbor Chronicles.' In it, Bill has a hidden cuckold fetish that Amber discovers. Supportive to Bill, she begins to play with a neighbor Jack, who is sexually overwhelming. As always, the couple tries to put limits, and Jack tries to evade them. Amber eventually cools it with Jack. But Bill is still excited. Discovering that Bill's fetish is unabated, and with their anniversary coming up in a few weeks Amber conceives a plan - to have various kinds of sex with Jack and record it all as a gift to for Bill for their anniversary. Jack, of course, takes full advantage, relentlessly breaking Amber's sexual barriers. It has quite a lot of dark energy.

Jekyll

I enjoyed that series a lot and am hoping for a conclusion or continuation at some point soon.

RCH

Neighbor Chronicles, Envoyeur has branched from the original. I like it so far and find that it's a better presentation.

RCH

Some how I don't think this is a BTB story. Dan is the progenitor of the path they are currently on. Sarah has gotten caught up in it so Dan can't fault her too much. Things are the way they are because it becomes important later on.

RCH

Gee, I can see DS staying together raising Lester child but I don't see Lester being welcomed after the lying about the snip job. There is and interesting legal angle Lester could try to forces his parental rights. Many states would see Lester the father and having parental rights. He'd have to be convicted of rape to void his parental claim.

Darrow

Read the Envoyeur version. Hasn't really grabbed me. I think the Neighbor Chronicles is basically dead. But that's cool. Things die all the time. There's nothing to say it has to finish up in a conclusion or satisfying conclusion. A lot of Literotica stuff can go for a while, run out of steam, the writer quits or moves on.

b g

I would like to point to the last paragraph. I think Dan "adding in a new bull" inadvertently or not to try and make the fantasy more about Sarah and Dan is an exciting prospect. As Dan tries to wrestle control back. Someone like Archer during a work dinner would be hot. Initially, teasing by Sarah to help get Dan a job or project but losing control and getting dominated and Dan sidelined by the Bull once Sarah realizes he has a big cock.

Sigma

Isn't it amazing how different readers see the story differently? "Filler chapter" "Too long" "There's nothing here, more of the same" "Maybe I should just move on" "Nothing new really" "It hasn't moved forward" "Not worth paying for" What if this happened to be in book form, all 16 chapters. Or perhaps no chapters, just straight prose? Would the story still seem to drag on? Or would the reader be too engrossed at the story, turning page after page to see the continual character development, the bread crumbs, the hot stuff, and wonder how the next page and situation will turn out? Would it seem to be more of the same? Or would the story arcs and potential arcs capture one's attention, wondering what's going to happen in later pages? Could it be the delay and the time-gap between chapters from creative thoughts, writing, rewriting, and editing which frustrates some readers where they may lose interest? Could it be that some want some quick-stroke stories rather than the full development of the story? Maybe these are the readers who watch the 3 minute porn video to get off rather than buy the 2 hour full video. Whatever the case, everyone's entitled to their opinion. Sometimes I wonder what Don Silver thinks, who has the entire story laid out already, when he reads our speculations along with other's criticisms.

Jekyll

I could be wrong, but did Lester ever actually claim he was snipped? Sarah thinks he’s snipped because of Dan telling her where he brought Lester.

RCH

Amen! Sigma, I have to agree with your perspective 99.9%. All the character development, description of places all of it make for a better story. I befuddled by some of Don's setups with Lester but been told to wait and see there is purpose in the end. I've liked most everything so far. It's an engaging story.

Darrow

Honestly, I just want hot, dark, emotionally charged sex scenes, featuring dysfunctional people making bad decisions with furious intensity.

Darrow

Jekyll, you are correct. Lester never claims to be snipped, never suggests it, never even hints at it. He just asks Dan to bring him to a clinic where the procedure is done. Lester spends a few hours in a waiting room on his phone. Dan, bored, looks up the clinic on his phone, finds that they do vasectomies, and jumps to the conclusion, and phones Sarah up to tell her. They believe he is snipped, or a Vasectomy recipient, but neither of them every asks him, neither of them ever seek any kind of confirmation, neither of them ever discuss it or say it out loud in his presence. I assume that the Clinic has other services and procedures, and he can simply say he was going for something else, or wanted to be checked out, or was even going to check up on a friend of his because they might need a ride. There's literally a hundred non-vasectomy explanations for Lester going to the place. None of which occurs to them. Instead, it's just Dan jumping to conclusions (as he was meant to) and exercising bad judgment. When it comes down to it - Dan is just not that bright. For instance, he leaves his phone unlocked and unguarded around Jesse, when he absolutely has no trust or faith in Jesse. Dan demonstrates other competence or control issues. I think another poster may have it right - Dan's lay-off may not have been 'just a lay off.' And his difficulties getting a new position may not be 100% Lester. Dan's frat boy attitude at the D&D game reflects badly on him - remembering his old Jock buddies in high school, the subtle hints that he used to bully or even beat up nerds. His barely concealed contempt for Lester's guests. Maybe deep down, he is an asshole deserving how he ends up. When you look at the sequence, he himself worked fairly hard to put Sarah in this position, and put Lester in charge of her.

neegan

Let's not miss the fact that in her mind, Dan's one and done in the stamina department typically, and she knows her Chicago Boyfriend gets up for her over and over... as she already thought before discussing with Dan.

neegan

I find the branching off rather mundane. It has castrated Jack and made Amber the in-charge leader now. That's not what drove this series.

neegan

Not sure if you missed it, but the first time she takes Lester raw, she does have those thoughts you suggested. And her conclusion was, would she stop him now, even if he wasn't fixed? Or are you saying that Don should make her rethink these same thoughts everytime she has sex with Lester, instead of being done with those concerns? As far as pregnancy goes, it's not as easy as you think to get pregnant. We don't know when her ovulation cycle is, but you will notice there are often times, weeks between meeting up. The first time she had bare sex with him, I believe she did think that it wasn't the worst time.

neegan

FWIW, in porn, you can NOT involve kids. So you are quite astute, there isn't anything to do with the kids, and never, ever will be.

Sigma

I second that emotion, primarily because I'm a darkly dysfunctional person who happens to make good decisions but fully enjoys watching the schadenfreude experience of other privileged people making really bad choices.

RD

She made a heat of the moment decision the first time. I don't think that it's realistic for her to just say "oh well, that decision is made, it will never cross my mind again". Especially given how she reacted last chapter when the homeless dude was talking about how Lester was going to knock her up. She's shown a thrill at the idea of being unprotected - that sort of kink doesn't just evaporate because you thought about it once. With all due respect, you have zero idea as to my level of understanding when it comes to pregnancy. I have personally lived the life of "holy shit, I've managed to knock my wife up even though she was on birth control" and also the "let's track cycles and dates for a year plus, go on fertility treatments, etc, etc". And, as a programmer, I've actually been the lead developer on a fertility tracker tool. So I'm probably more educated in terms of pregnancy risk than 99% of the general population. Sure, we don't get exact dates of sex and are never told the particulars of Sarah's cycle. But by and large, women who have multiple children tend to get pregnant pretty reliably, and if she has unprotected sex many times with an apparently fertile man, the odds of her getting pregnant tend to get higher and higher with time. Sure, they may have been having sex every time on the couple of days right before/right after her period or long enough after her ovulation that the egg is no longer viable. But given the haphazard schedule of their sex, odds are they are going to get bitten sooner rather than later.

RCH

Corruption! More corruption!

RCH

RD, most of what you said is true. Help me here but How many days has SL had raw sex? One at the house then 3-5 days later with Dan looking on. Then the one time in the parking garage. Now after the D&D game night. I count 4, did I miss a day? Most Dr. tell couple to not worry until 6 month or so have pasted before worrying about fertility problems. The egg has a 24hr or less window to be fertilized so the sperm need to be present. 4-5 days before ovulation would be Sarah's fertilization window and one day after. To be safe you have to add a few days before and 1 day after. Sarah is 35 I think so she is starting to decline in fertility. 30-50 percent of fertilized eggs end in a successful pregnancy. As Neega pointed out we don't know what her cycles are and what the exact timeline has been with her raw sex with Lester. Now it doesn't make a big difference how may times they do it in a day as much as how many different days they have raw sex. A full weekend together would increase the odds as would sex 2-4 days over a week even more so. Sarah period finishes 3/30/24 Lester rolls into town 4/1/24 the day after They have sex on her desk day 1 she's safe. They can fuck like rabbits but come Friday danger. Friday 4/5/24 Lester is heading back to Chicago Sarah has the parents watch the kids. Sarah and Lester make love that night. Then again Saturday late morning. Sarah will have enough little Lesters when her egg drops Wednesday 4/9/24. She could get pregnant 30-50% chance. Really the risk starts Friday. All this is variable that's why the rhythm method has risks because it's a cycle that is effected by many factors. There is new studies that seem to show chemicals in semen can trigger ovulation early.

King40

Good chapter with hot sex session and lot of hints of the presumptive falling of Dan Lester and Sarah become so close and attracted to each other that I can’t see Sarah spending the whole night without joining Lester at a moment It could definitely emphasize Lester irreversible dominance over the couple and Sarah’s total corruption Already impatient to read the next chapter

Gabriella J

I can see why some people think of this as a "filler" chapter. But for me, it's more of an "affirmation" chapter, just reaffirming the position of the characters, Lester in particular, which has to be done for future bigger developments. The D&D element is niche so will often make some people zone out, as will any niche interest part of any story. For me, I know a lot of people think of this story being about Sarah and Dan's sexual awakening through the wife sharing fantasy and Lester being a secondary character. But I've always thought of Lester being the main character of the series, along with Sarah, and Dan is more the secondary character. I'd think the back story was that Lester, due to being a loner with a lack of likeability and was probably bullied and isolated because of it, developed a complex about needing to be seen as an Alpha and to have control of all situations. And to make this happen he has learned how to be a mental manipulator. And this is truly what this story is about for me, Lester slowly manipulating Sarah (and Dan) to get what he wants. Putting suggestions out there and then reinforcing them until that suggestion becomes the norm. From involving him in their sex life to begin with,to date nights, to being his "girlfriend" and acting the part, to not using condoms, and now trying to get Sarah alone without Dan around. And this chapter worked for me for that, as it reaffirmed those characteristics of Lester's alpha complex and the continued mental manipulation, with Sarah playing the girlfriend role, getting her alone in his room, keeping the suggestion going to wear her down of getting her alone in Middleton and taking her in her office at the hospital. So if you look at this as Lester's story rather than Dan and Sarah's story, this chapter did progress the story in that way. My opinion of course, everyone can enjoy the story from different angles and different perspectives and that is what is great about the medium of storytelling.

Gabriella J

I'll make a picky point on the editing and timeline continuity though... In the zoom meeting with Bill, it was specifically said that it was Monday. And Dan's thoughts were about getting through the week until Sarah arrived on Friday. Jump to Sarah's arrival on Friday and that Zoom meeting with Bill happened "earlier today", being Friday, not Monday. I was surprised that wasn't picked up in the edit as it stood out dramatically to me when reading.

Jekyll

Just got myself caught up on that “new” series and while well written, very lacking compared to the original.

Jekyll

Agreed! Jack isn’t the same type of character anymore, which was the big appeal. Amber just goes back and forth in her thoughts and actions. Her constantly saying it’s all for the husband. Then walking out on Jack after jerking him off, was predictable and blah.

Jekyll

Den, I agree with this a lot! Especially with the fact Dan called Sarah about the clinic, just to make fun of Lester. Seems like it will be a bit of poetic justice, when he knocks Sarah up. Dan’s behaviour at the D&D game is very telling of his personality. He doesn’t give any of those guys a second thought, just presumes everything about them, based on his group of friends and what they were like in highschool. Dan’s “competence” definitely has been the driving force behind Lester getting what he wants. He’s arrogant about how a guy like Lester could ever get a girl like Sarah. Seems to that with his attitude and views, his fantasy makes sense. Especially when you consider that he likely felt lesser than Sarah, especially with his work issues. That altered their dynamic and his way of getting the upper hand back, was to put her in a submissive, role with a man he considered less.

Gabriella J

I kind of agree that the cost per chapter is a bit steep. I've only been a member for a couple of months so I've been enjoying the early read so far, but I may dip in and out longer term, as the back catalogue is available when you join, so if I dip in every 3 months or so eventually I should get to do a catch-up read of 3 or so chapters whilst only paying for 1 new release, which feels like a more reasonable cost. You can set it so you only pay a maximum of once per month, but that is probably why the chapters are conveniently posted a month apart. This may have been a free chapter if it were posted on 31st March rather than the 1st April for example. Literotica is so far behind on this series now too. I thought this was supposed to be 60 or 90 days early release rather than 7 or 8 months. I'd prefer a set monthly fee that is smaller, then I'm not directly paying for chapters I like less or the story series I'm less keen on, and I know what and when is coming out of my bank $15+ is more than a book, so it's steep for a single chapter. And with over 650 paid members on here apparently, each paying $15+ per chapter is a lot of money to be made (maybe $10k per chapter). Fair play to Don Silver for getting it, but it is a lot for the readers to pay and feels like we're being taken advantage of a little.. $5 a month to support an anateur writer whose work I enjoy would be a price I'd happily pay regularly long term. And we could get 1-2 postings a month for that, which would be a fair exchange and mean that we'll be more accepting of transition chapters or new stories that may not be good.

Darrow

The thing with Dan just adding a 'new bull' to replace Lester is an interesting tactic for Dan. I think early on, it might have worked, particularly when Dan and Sarah found Lester pushy and Dan could have decided to just pick or find someone else to be their play object. I think that at this point, Lester's got his hooks too deep into Sarah, he's too firmly established as her lover. If Dan tries to begin something with someone else, well, Lester's already there, he'll outlast and overpower any kind of short term or mild fling. If Dan says "Okay, you're going to be fucking this other guy instead" she'll perceive it as insecurity and desperation, not dominance. And of course, you're right. Dan's established a pattern, simply somehow replacing Lester and bringing in a new man, Dan's at risk of sidelining himself all over again. He might try a man who won't sideline him, but then a man like that probably wouldn't turn Sarah on.

Darrow

What worked about the Neighbor Chronicles was the dark energy, and the volatile unpredictability. No character was ever quite sure where they stood, or stayed in one place. No matter what they decided or thought, things slipped out of their control. Amber initially went to tease Jack, ended blowing him, and it goes on from there. The best scenes were when characters lost control of their situations, they would choose to go in or initiate or accept, but then things would just run away on them. Jack was fun as a source of chaos, relentlessly pushing boundaries and scheming. A 'castrated' Jack is pointless - simply a stunt-dick. Amber constantly plans, teases, initiates, draws boundaries and even refuses, but all the while as she does so, everything shifts under her feet and her desires and choices evolve as the scene does, so she ends up doing much more, and particularly, wanting much more. There's a subtle appearance of coercion, but the reality is Amber is willing and consenting in each moment, an enthusiastic partner. It's just that what she consents to changes from moment to moment in relation to her desires and interaction. An Amber in complete control of herself is a lot less interesting.

Darrow

I had to look up BTB. Jesus H. Christ! Made me reach for the brain bleach. Not my thing.

Darrow

Jekyll, That's really insightful. I think Dan is presented as a protagonist, and we just assume that he's a good guy, albeit a good guy with a fetish that makes him vulnerable and almost a tragic hapless figure. We see him through his own eyes, and through Sarah's eyes. And Sarah loves and is committed to him. But now, through your and other comments, I find myself re-thinking that. We can all grant that Dan has a bit of a jealousy/cuck fetish, and an insecurity or perhaps an urge to degrade or encourage submission, a voyeur impulse. Everyone has weird sex stuff going on in their heads, so I don't necessarily fault Dan for his impulses. But is Dan actually a nice guy, or even a good guy. Or maybe he's a Jock/Jerk, formed his views of the world in high school, and is, deep down a privileged, entitled asshole, mocking everyone he thinks is beneath him, with an exaggerated sense of himself and what he's entitled to, but in many ways, sloppy, lazy and not really exercising good judgment. I find myself going back to the Jesse incident and what it says about Dan - here is an alleged professional who never bothers to activate security on his phone? WTF? I think we all stood up and cheered later, when Dan found what Jesse had done, Jesse tried his blackmail shtick, and Dan literally nuked him from orbit. That was a great swerve, establishing Dan as someone who stood up for himself, acted, and was forceful. Except, as it turns out almost immediately, it backfires on the entire company, which definitely points to poor judgment on his part. In sending an email under Jesse's identity, Dan did exactly what Jesse did to him and Sarah, so he lost any moral high ground. It was also reckless and ill considered, he'd have been fired on the spot if caught. And while he was out to get Jesse, he clearly didn't care about or consider any other effects or implications of his fake email - he already knew the Lincoln Group was a difficult and volatile client. So the alternate interpretation of Dan standing up for himself, is that he's actually a kind of lazy, sloppy, entitled asshole with an unearned sense of security and extremely poor judgment, who just half asses his way around and overreacts. Maybe this is who Dan really is? I might have to go back and re-read the whole thing with this perspective in mind to see how it fits. Maybe Sarah really is much better off without him.

TuwatchU

Thanks for the comment and explanation. I've read a couple of chapters of Neighbor. I thought Bill and Amber sounded familiar, but didn't make the connection. I guess that explains the thump in the background and 'movie night.' Clever reference.

RD

I'm really not trying to set up a fan calendar to track Sarah's periods and potentially fertile dates. I am aware that most doctors won't have any sort of conversation about fertility until you've been actively trying for six months without successful pregnancy - and very often, they won't begin treatment until a year with no pregnancy. Again, I've lived this stuff and was the lead developer on a fertility app. I understand pregnancy, rates, risks, etc. I also personally know of three people who got pregnant on their first "whoops", including one woman who was 42 years old at the time. And I know of other people via friends/family - and have read many, MANY accounts online regarding this subject. As they say, all it takes is one time. So my point remain valid. I'm not complaining that Sarah hasn't gotten pregnant. I am saying that a continued pattern of unprotected sex where she allows Lester to inseminate her again and again is very risky, and it breaks immersion for her to be unconcerned and for it to never be a worry in the story.

TuwatchU

Very good analysis. You make some good points. Since it's a given, Lester is going to fuck Sarah on her desk, will she be willing or will Lester need to dominate again. I'm also speculating what happens in Middleton. Will Sarah's mother catch Lester at home with Sarah, possibly right after sex?

LesterstheMAN

No he did say. About midway through chapter 5,when he is talking to S&D after Lizzie left. Here is a copy of it What's the deal with you two?" Sarah asked as she put on her shoes. "She seemed a little upset when she left." Lester turned around with his shoulders still hunched over. "We used to be a thing. On again, off again, sort of thing. I think this is the end, though. When she found out I got that operation done, she said that was it. She really wanted to have kids, and even though she knew I didn't, she always thought I'd come around one day. It's over now, I guess."

TuwatchU

Good point on the one and done. When Sarah finds cum beneath the peephole, and assumes it's Dan's, she thinks he's already had his relief for the night. This gives her the excuse to sleep with Lester. She tells Dan if he needs for relief, he can watch through the peephole.

TuwatchU

I love the series and don't want to be nitpicky but agree that there are several timeline issues. I don't think clinics offering vasectomies are open on Sundays.

Darrow

Definitely the 'movie night' - Amber had a lot of video to show Bill. Not sure what the 'thump' in the background was.

Robert Smith

I totally agree that the complete absence of concern for a pregnancy is a missing piece of the story. I think even an inner dialogue from Sarah would add a lot. Lester has to be wondering as well… he’s pointed out many times how she is unprotected, fertile, and vulnerable. I think he knows what he is doing and is definitely trying to make sure he seeds her every time. He doesn’t even think about cumming in her mouth, on her face, etc.. anymore.

RCH

My BTB is "Burn the Bitch" a vengeful cheated husband. Is there a darker meaning to BTB? I'm thinking of stories where the jilted man is not excited by a cheating wife and kicks her to the curb penny less.

Darrow

Kudos LesterstheMAN! You rock. I just want to compliment you on close reading.

Chris

Completely agree on who the protagonists are, Gabriella. Dan and his fetish were the inciting force and now represent the obstacle/roadblock, but Lester and Sarah are the main characters.

Sigma

Yeah, the entire pregnancy thing and Lester's intention to have unprotected sex can't just be for the thrill. Lester's certainly got to know the implications and complications to his relationship with Sarah if he gets her pregnant. Will he still be able to own her? Take her from Dan? If he gets her pregnant would he really want fatherhood and its responsibilities? He's always talking about getting Dan out of the picture. I don't think having Dan completely cucked to the point of taking care of an illegitimate kid while Sarah and Lester do what they want is really getting Dan out of the way. I'm guessing that the author is putting the unprotected sex in the story on behalf of the readers, to up the ante, increase the perceived risk, make the readers hearts thump a little more. But I don't think it will lead to pregnancy. Of course, we're all speculating - and only because the author writes so well!

alexander1089

I hope next chapter is not a filler and starts a paradigm shift for both dan and sarah

Jekyll

That’s right!! So lester will have to own up to that, or just claim they must have messed up!

Jekyll

Dan’s short sightedness has been a big factor. He had jesse taken care of, but that wasn’t enough. He had to get him out of there and it ruined what bit of a career he had. Between ch 14 and 15, I went back and read the series. Dan definitely comes off worse when you focus on his actions. Feels like a crumbling man in a way.

Jekyll

I feel like the thump Dan heard when talking to Bill, was Amber’s head under the desk. Likely she was in on the conference call without ever being seen.

RCH

RD, was just trying to do some risk assessment. Am I correct that there have only been 4 raw days so far? You are correct that the chance keep increasing with every roll of the dice. I can attest that if both parties are fertile and do it enough you'll be a winner. Second child was conceived within the first month we tried. A little history my wife is from an Asian country and birth control pill were not popular 30+ years ago. She claims she never was vary careful with BC and hates condoms. She had plenty of sex and was a bit of a hotwife before marriage. But she is very lucky a pachinko! Guess she was just lucky.

Darrow

I like that. I thought it might have been Jack doing something with Amber offscreen. From the descriptions of Bill's expression, whether he found the home movies sexually exciting, I think he also found them emotionally traumatic.

Jekyll

Based on how the story was going, I can only imagine the levels of submission Amber went through over that last little bit. Last we saw, she was crawling under a table and sucking Jack off. I love the idea of Bill being sexually stimulated by their videos and at the same time, emotionally destroyed. Realizing he’s lost his wife to Jack.

Darrow

I doubt Don Silver is taking requests or suggestions, but thinking out loud, I have three: 1) I'd really love to see Lester taking Sarah's anal virginity and making her love it. 2) I have this idea of Sarah, in Chicago away from Dan, seeing an advertisement for a fetish ball, and dragging or convincing Lester to go to it with her, where she wears a collar and leash for Lester and goes around half naked - role playing a slave girl, and being totally into it and having fun, not realizing how close it is to their real relationship. 3) The idea I want to see most, double barrels on Dan by Sarah, where she just lets him know how tired she is of his growing sexual inadequacy - not being able to get it up, coming too fast, his needy pathetic possessive voyeurism; and particularly of the ineffectual, whiny, passive aggressive bitch he's turning into, and the endless extravagant exhausting efforts she makes to put up with his bullshit and make him happy. She's constantly tiptoeing around him, trying to cater to him, fulfilling his fantasies and getting him horny. But seriously, when was the last time he tried to excite her, or indulge or talk up a fantasy of hers. Even when he buys lingerie for her, it's all about him. He's completely selfish, and she's always catering to him. And now she's in something that she's actually enjoying... And she's growing tired of him...

Darrow

I wrote a bit of a distaff continuation of Amber's story, it was fun.

Jekyll

Would love to read that! And your overall thoughts on that series.

Sigma

#3: Whoa. I love it, but not sure where it fits into the story yet. Maybe in a few more chapters when Dan happens to get in her and Lester's way? So that it isn't Lester sidelining Dan, but now its Sarah?

Darrow

Sometime in the future. I dunno. I've just been noticing, that in a sense, it's been all about Dan. Dan's fetish, Sarah caters to it to excite him. Things happen because Dan wants it. Dan keeps wanting to be the center of attention, and Sarah keeps trying to cater to him. I think maybe one of the reasons that Lester's been so successful with Sarah is that he's focused on her and pleasing her. Dan's made their sexual relationship all about pleasing him, and Sarah has catered to it, willingly, and even enthusiastically. But really, its Dan. Sooner or later, that's got to be tiresome to her.

Gee

Was that Jack mounting Amber against the kitchen island? Bill was liking it a lot! I think Dan’s only option is to embrace a dominant male taking Sarah a couple of times per month, if he wants his marriage and family to stay intact. Even then it’s questionable that the marriage will survive.

Darrow

If you go to Literotica, I actually wrote some fairly elaborate comments on Neighbor Chronicles. As to my distaff continuations of Amber's story, happy to share it, but not sure how to get it to you. Maybe contact me through Literotica.

Gabriella J

I don't think that Idea works in the context of this storyline though. Lester is a big, important character to the plot line, just switching him out, even temporarily, would make this a whole new story. If the author wants to write that as a spin off story after this story finishes then that's fine, but it wouldn't fit in to this story arc at all.

Jekyll

Think I found the right comment! If not, look me up on literotica. I have some stories on there as well. Jekyll1439

TuwatchU

I had similar thoughts about Jesse and Sarah. Somehow Jesse gets Sarah's number and they text each other. Sarah teases him about the photos. Jesse is pissed that Dan deleted all the photos. Sarah sends him some new explicit shots and it goes from there. Like other commenters not sure the dynamic with Lester.

Jekyll

I don’t see Sarah having a particular fascination with Jesse. I can see Lester forcing the issue, simply to humiliate Dan. But not Sarah just giving Jesse pictures.

Darrow

On there, I'm Dare.... something. I tend to go for deep dives and long comments.

Jap

It seems that S. finally begins to become more assertive! I loved this chapter because it marked other steps forward. As I thought, the safe word can be a double-edged sword. On this occasion Don used the ruse of exchanging voyeurs at the peephole so as not to use it but with it or without it S.'ll be freer. Interesting that S. wants L. exclusively, this will have a very high price...Even the idea that D. is mistaken for a perverted spy is fantastic even if I don't if Eugene noticed the family photo or the detached tone that S. reserved for D. in the living room, so different from the one through the peephole. The condom is now a thing of the past while the "Daddy" would be even more fun if S. asked for "mom" from her husband...The public "engagement" is a new turning point because it relegates D. to the role of the third wheel in front of other people for the first time. The topic of S.'s beauty squirming in L.'s garbage was also hot. The next steps I hope involve S. "spending the night" with D. in the other room (maybe with the peephole closed..) or her asking L. on a date. I don't know which is L.'s requests to S.; showing off the famous black silk robe or to saying goodbye to D. in the shower. Delightful both! The phrase " you don't need to wait here" is in fact the most powerful of the chapter. But also:" How long would he last?" it gave me a certain thrill... This could be another weapon for L.: D's loss of control. S.'s possible promotion to CEO could also serve the purpose if D. encounters serious problems at work (Jesse?).I imagine D. forced to work part time at McDonalds while his wife is CEO of an important hospital, perhaps John asking S. for a competent man for IT security...Even the scene in the elevator between S. & John made me to think; very intimate and delicate...but Don is a master at leaving all doors open. In fact, he still never hasn't mentioned about S.'s "errands" of the day after that he had mentioned to me a few chapter back or even when he writes about S. secretly reading L.s texts but specifying that she "..just wanted D. focus on their morning..". This a writer too.. Hopefully some of the promises (but new ones would be welcome too) are kept, thanks again for your beautiful job Don.

Darrow

I missed "How long would he last" there's a certain unconscious dismissal right there, that she doesn't even realize. Sarah asking Lester for a date would be a fascinating turnaround. One interesting thing here is Sarah went full on exhibitionist. She openly flirted with a bunch of strangers to the point of stroking Ned's thigh and making him come, and discussing taking Eugene to the bedroom. She was pretty close to half naked at the table, and went topless with her back to them, and went completely nude for a moment in the hall before going into the bathroom. The girl is feeling her oats.

Fuzzy Shark

If Sara gets the ceo job then Dan can be the stay at home dad while she plays with Lester at the office all day long and can go visit him in Chicago for consults at his apartment, strictly for business of course.

Jap

It's at the end of the chapter but it's said in a playful way, but it would interesting if she teased D. about his drop in performance....

Jap

I 'd liked, Fuzzy Shark, a possible contrast between the D.'s difficulties at work and the S.' s promotion to CEO.

Jap

Sorry Darrow, actually the sentence was a S.'s thought but the substance doesn't change... It would be a fun!

Royston smith

Sarah, I predict, will get two guys off at once in the next chapters. The seeds of this go back to chapter 1: “Sarah never liked Dan getting the upper hand or catching her off guard, so she shot back, “Well, I’m glad I can still get two guys off at once.” Two guys off at once? Had she, in the past...? “ In 15th chapter Lester asks her if she would like to handle two cocks at one time and she answers yes. In 16 she begins to realise what power she has over men and gets really in touch with her wild side, dropping the robe and revealing her naked body, as though mimicking the game scenario. So, definitely two cocks and perhaps a full striptease scenario either privately, or in a club setting, Lester of course controlling the method and execution, at some time soon. I hope!

Jap

Hi R. S., I suppose you are talking about "how long would he last?", right? Really It's a thought of S. When "D. Slid into his room" , 3 or 4 paragraphs after. Not exactly at he end of the chapter, sorry.

Sigma

Jap mentioned Sarah's thought towards Dan of "how long would he last?" while getting rammed by Lester. Given that the game started well after dinner (let's assume 7pm?) and probably went for about an 1 1/2 hours before D&L went to the bedroom, and Greg had to be home by midnight (let's assume the guys leave at 11:30) then that means Lester could keep it up for about 3 hours. That's certainly more than one-and-done-Dan. Two other lines with a lot of meaning: 1. "Dan turned to look at Sarah with a half disgusted look, dashing her daydreams." This was early when Lester's describing the game and ending with "during the game Sarah and I will spend some alone time in my room." Daydreaming about the sex she so loves and craves with Lester, only for those thoughts to be "dashed" by Dan. The word used is "dashed," not distracted, not alerted, not interrupted. But "dashed" as in destroyed. Perhaps furthering his dislike of and distancing of herself from Dan. 2. "He always seemed to have a plan, which Sarah appreciated." This occurs when Lester is texting Sarah with instructions she secretly keeps from Dan the afternoon they're walking around Chicago. Lester has plans and intentions. Dan has guesses and hopes. Lester is known for following through. Dan will give in every time. Lester will violate rules and norms as needed for himself. Dan feels security in supposed rules but permits them broken. Consequently, one more thing Sarah likes about Lester and dislikes about Dan.

LesterstheMAN

I agree with Gabriella J comment that this chapter is an affirmation of the characters as they are at this time after 15 chapters. The entire chapter is filled with implicit and explicit references to Sarah's increasing physical and emotional attachment to Lester and a distancing from Dan. Many have pointed out examples, and I will add this too, from when Lester is telling her how he knew she enjoyed making love with him (from chapter 13). "Sarah’s body shuddered at the revelation. She didn’t want to admit to herself how much she enjoyed that night. Lester was right. Her body had responded to him. She hadn’t wanted to let him go, even though he hadn’t worn a condom. She had wanted his cum that night, but she wasn’t ready to admit it to herself, let alone Lester. She didn’t know what he was driving at now but needed to shift things before she admitted something she shouldn’t. " She's not ready to admit she has already accepted Lester in her life. And she wants Dan ( at least the weak, inadequate, condescending, sexually inferior, financial loser he now is or aways was )out of it.

Sigma

Just came across something interesting from ch 15, when Lester was fuming at Dan making Lester leave the marital home the morning after the wedding night. It plays into the willingness of Sarah (in 16) to go along with Lester's plans, freeze out Dan, ignore their deal, flirt with other guys, get naked in front of others: "With women, they would inevitably develop some kind of emotional connection that Lester could leverage. With Dan, he wasn’t as sure." Sarah's clearly developed an emotional connection to Lester, from his smell, his mess, his sex-talk, his plans. As for Dan: "Whenever it seemed like he’d finally broken Dan down and had gotten him to submit to his whims, the idiot would suddenly grow a spine. Perhaps breaking a man down vs a woman was not as similar an undertaking as he’d considered." But in 16, Dan is sidelined first as Lester's roommate and not Sarah's husband, second when his character is killed and he's out of the game (as Sarah said, you're dead, you can't roll the dice for me), and third when Eugene supplants him at the peephole. Dan did not grow a spine in 16. Has Lester won?

thib ear3

Extremely interested by #1, could be some kind of exclusive Lester has on Dan, and a new wedge in Dan/Sarah relationship, maybe by keeping it a secret ?

Royston smith

So riddle me this then. How does Jesse go from being fired to Director of another company within a week? Is there something we don’t know that is to be revealed? Or is it an unrealistic mistake/development?

kombucha Tom

I love that because Lester and Sarah think Dan was at the peephole Lester can unintentionally take advantage. I mean Dan was at the peephole so obviously he heard Lester’s plan to go to Sarah at work and bang her on her desk. But then if Dan truely didn’t want that why wouldn’t he attempt to stop Lester, as far as Sarah can tell Dan clearly let this happen even though in reality Dan has no idea about the plan Lester has. I also enjoy how behind Dan is in other regards, ending the chapter saying he had to figure something out to prevent Sarah from assuming Lester was the main part of his fantasy, but Sarah is already at the point that her personal sexual fantasy’s are being furfilled and replaced by Lester. Sarah is already recognizing Lester as the one to give her pleasure, she doesn’t even look to Dan to reclaim her after assuming he already finished. She also didn’t even really ask what Dan wanted instead stating “Lester wants me to sleep in his bed” Dan is slowly being removed from Sarah’s part of the enjoyment, becoming just a bystander in her amazing sex life with Lester. Can’t wait to see how they take it to the next level!

LesterstheMAN

Perhaps title inflation as not "the director" but "one of the" directors ? Like today everyone is an assistant manager. Jesse did seem to me too young and stupid to have an important position .

LesterstheMAN

another subtle clue to her shift to Lester, Sarah did not lock the bathroom door .... "He debated heading into his room to wait for Sarah, but Lester might slide into the bathroom. But she probably had locked the door. "Dan tried the knob on the bathroom door. Turning it the entire way. She hadn’t even bothered to lock it. He remembered all the issues they had with locks in this apartment. Maybe she just doesn’t care anymore? That seemed like such a strange idea. "

YouTensil

There was a subtle, but healthy dose in this chapter. Though, I'm definitely on board with much, much, more corruption to come!

Sigma

Didn't Jesse have some connections, like a family member, that helped him get his job working for Dan?

Royston smith

Yes , his Father. But even if his Father got him a new job going from a junior employee at Walts firm to a Director at another seems a big jump.

neegan

RD you're missing the basic point, the odds are higher that she will not get pregnant than she will. The risk is that she can get pregnant, and she doesn't know it. I think it would be hot for the discussion to come up in the heat of the moment where one or the other says something about knocking her up, and she says, "I wish you could!"

kombucha Tom

Absolutely, whether subconscious or intentional Sarah was hoping Lester would join her in the shower for round 2. Sarah claimed she needed to check in with Dan but she wanted Lester to take the option away, she clearly loves when Lester bends the rules until they break.

Sigma

Maybe Lester had something to do with it, helping Jesse get a top job knowing how Dan would feel about it?

Royston smith

Yes, i am wondering if its his Father’s firm and he has made Jesse a Director? Its the only way he could go from office junior to Director.

Royston smith

I think its Jesse’s Father’s firm and he wanted Jesse to start at the bottom with Walts firm, a friend of the family, rather than his own as a learning experience. When he gets fired he has no option but to employ him in his own firm.

Royston smith

If Lester does get Sarah to wear a princess Leiea slave outfit in some scenario, will he play Jabba the Hut?

Royston smith

I wonder if Sarah squirts? She seemed to come close to it in this chapter when she jumped off Lester after he twitched inside her when she was coming.

Jap

Hi Roy. S., it happens when D., after the game in the living room, "slid into his room", in the 4th paragraph. S. is imagining D. 'possible reactions to her show...

Fuzzy Shark

Lester can easily claim he had the procedure reversed. It can be done up to 10 years after the initial vasectomy.

Edel

"I imagined that the Detestable Liaisons character would be introduced in Toxic Attraction through Courtney and perhaps marc as well, either linking her closely to one of the nerds or other characters, or presenting her as an additional challenge to one of the protagonists of this story. Perhaps also consider adding a female "nerd" character.

Darrow

I think it's definitely family connections. I assume that the whole 'toxic email' thing that was so disastrous for Dan's company was hushed up.

TuwatchU

I'm not sure what happens with the John scenario, but something will. One scenario I envision is during Lester's next visit when he fucks Sarah in her office and co-workers start to talk. "I wonder what's going on between Sarah and that Lester guy. Seems they're pretty friendly." "I'll admit it looks like something may be going on. But Sarah and a guy like Lester?" laughter, "Get real. Sarah would never go for a guy like that."

TuwatchU

But she sleeps in and Dan wakes up and realizes Sarah's in Lester's room. Then he hears the low moans of morning lovemaking.

TuwatchU

This ties back to Middleton, when Sarah and Lester were in the shower the next morning. He tells her he wanted to walk in on her the first time she was there. Her reply was, "Why didn't you." "You weren't ready."

TuwatchU

Accidentaly hit return. I think she's ready. She wanted Lester to join her. Not Dan.

alexander1089

I cannot wait for the next chapter lol

Royston smith

So, any bets on which way the next instalment will go?

Robert Smith

Have there been any updates from Don on when TA17 will be released to insiders? It’s been over a month since TA16 insiders edition was released already - I’m ready!

Royston smith

Yes, could be. Perhaps as an extension of 16, that night. I also wonder if the 2 cocks scenario will raise its head.

alexander1089

I see 17's draft is already out. Is there any way to know if it's worth to upgrade membership and read ? I am regular member right now

Jap

I'm agree with a. 1089, the S. 's night spent in the Lester'bed will be a must.. But it would also be fun to see D. appear to the whole nerd group like a perverted spy (go Eugene!) of the "new couple".

Traycir

I think that's the answer, or it might not be his father's firm, perhaps an uncle or something similar.

Traycir

I think Sarah does spend the night. But maybe Dan sees her looking at D&D stuff online and she tells him se wants to be ready if they play again. I also would like to see her go to another game with Lester, this time she picks a sexy D&D themed costume. I like that she is starting to sort of initiate some thngs on her own.

Traycir

Wondering the same thing! Are the drafts very different?

Traycir

I really like this story and I am hoping that Sarah continue to get into Lester, perhaps gets her own sexy D&D outfit to tease the other guys and play with him again; perhaps she even stars learning about the game so she can play. I hope Jessie doesn't get anywhere, he is my least favorite character. Dan also sometimes feels like too much of an idiot. I was glad to see him show a modicum of awareness at the end of the last chapter.

Gee

Can anyone provide a score out of 10 on TA chapter 17 from the Insiders Draft Ch17

Your Best Supporter

This one didn't work for me at all. I like DnD, but I ended up skimming over the whole game. It didn't feel like it advanced anything—more like a place holder chapter. I'm wondering if is getting drawn out too far—chapter 19 makes close to 300,000 words, which would be 4 or 5 typical erotica novels (or even more). Hopefully, the next chapters get back on track and more focused on developing the characters

FU

Well, it’s probably too late seeing how you have already written more chapters. But I find Dan to be a very unsympathetic character. He can’t even own. His shit would’ve beat him senseless by now, or started a fans only page and videoed everything she did with him that would be my source of income.

Reader79

Great chapter, love it, hoping for Sarah to start sleeping in Lester's room.