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Well, it is that time of the month again. No - not the end of the month, time for thousands of erotic words about a prim and proper wife being pulled down into the dirt by some brute and enjoying every second of it.

This chapter picks up right after CH21. I hope you enjoy where it goes. I've updated bits of it from the Insider feedback. Also thanks to Grandeman for the edits and Roxy for the outfits.

I have some lofty writing goals as we head further into the fall. I won't say too much on this yet but suffice to say I have high hopes for future stories. I'm hoping to wrap up Detestable Liaisons very soon as well.

Well, I know you like reading what I write but I'm sure you couldn't care less about these intro messages so here is Chapter 22 of Toxic Attraction.

P.S: Attachments are inspo for Sarah's outfits in this chapter.

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Despite the light snoring from Dan’s side of the bed, Sarah couldn’t sleep. Even though her body felt utterly exhausted from the night’s events, her mind was still racing, processing everything that had happened.

She still couldn’t believe that she had actually taken two cocks into her body at the same time. It had been something she’d always fantasized about doing. It didn’t happen exactly the way she’d thought it might have. She always assumed she and Dan would get wild on vacation somewhere and indulge both their fantasies with a stranger, preferably a good looking one. She certainly didn’t think she would be riding Dan’s ugly roommate while another weird stranger fucked her mouth.

The scenario wasn’t exactly what she’d expected, but she’d still gotten lost in the moment and had given herself over to its pleasures. She was nervous about what Dan might say about what had happened in the morning, but it hadn’t stopped him from eagerly fucking her at the end of the night. She and Dan kept shifting back and forth about embracing this adventure and then stepping back from it. She wasn’t sure where he would land, but Sarah didn’t regret it. Not yet, anyway.

Sarah reached out into the dark and found her phone on the nightstand. Through squinting eyes, she checked the time. She guessed it was late or early, depending on how you looked at it. She glanced back over at Dan, who was sound asleep, and slid out of the bed. It looked like she’d fucked him into exhaustion with the contented look on his face. Still, nature called, and she needed to leave that bed. Not only was she wired, but Dan’s bed was also notably uncomfortable. Lumpy in a way that affected her ability to get a good night’s sleep.

She tiptoed to the door, opening it before gently shutting it behind her. A small part of her mind warned her about moving about the apartment in just her panties, but that voice was growing more faint as time went on. Trying to keep quiet, Sarah slipped into the bathroom and used the facilities. While washing her hands, she looked at herself in the mirror and shook her head, smiling at herself. The absurd events of the night before still played in her mind, and she couldn’t help but laugh at herself and what her life had become. If Dan hadn’t moved to Chicago, she couldn’t have imagined doing the things she’d done, especially with someone other than her loving husband.

With one last discerning look at herself in the mirror, Sarah left the bathroom and headed to the kitchen to get a glass of water.

***

A familiar notification popped up in the corner of Lester’s screen. If he’d been playing WoW he probably would have just ignored it. He wasn’t sure what time it was but he knew it was late. Instead of World of Warcraft, Ichi the Killer, a cult Japanese film from the early 2000s was playing on his monitor.

Lester’s sadly unfit body sat slumped over as he stayed at the monitor; the only movement in the room was from his chest in its labored breathing and his hand disappearing into the bottom of a bag of Cheetos. His eyes darted up to the notification. With a groan, he pulled up the camera feed on his second monitor and saw Sarah quietly leaving Dan’s bedroom. He could hear the soft sounds of her footsteps padding toward the kitchen from where he sat.

His cock twitched at the sight of her body. He was once again happy that he had sprung for the higher definition cameras as his eyes ran over her bare legs and jiggling naked breasts as she tiptoed into the bathroom. A predatory smile crossed his face as he marveled at Sarah’s curves and gorgeous face. He could never get enough of her.

***

Sarah took a long sip of water from the glass before heading back towards the bedroom. She hoped that getting up for a bit would let her mind reset so she could fall asleep. Still, she wasn’t eager to get back onto Dan’s uncomfortable mattress. She wished they’d sprung for something similar to their bed at home when he had moved in, but money had been tight. It was still too tight for them to afford that kind of extravagance. She resigned herself to a few more hours on the misshapen bed.

As she moved down the hallway towards Dan’s bedroom, a faint blue light spread through the hallway. She felt the frightening thrill of being caught, stopping in her tracks. A dark figure momentarily dampened the bluish glow. Sarah recognized the shadowy silhouette. Lester. He stepped forward, the faint light emanating from a screen in his room behind him.

He stood there watching her, wearing nothing but a pair of ragged boxer shorts, his fat, hairy gut hanging over his fraying waistband. His peculiar face had the same hungry look to which she had grown so accustomed.

“Sarah,” he said, not taking his eyes off of her body, “Couldn’t sleep?”

“Just getting a glass of water,” Sarah said, casually covering her breasts with her right arm. She knew it was risky to walk out of the bedroom like this. There was a point at which it would have been mortifying for her to let a man like Lester see her like this. But now she didn’t feel at all uncomfortable around him.

Sarah moved towards Dan’s bedroom door. As she did, she saw Lester’s hefty foot begin to move, as if he were going to block her path. However, it returned to the floor, and instead, Lester leaned on his doorframe and spoke. She paused at his words.

“So you’re just gonna go back to bed?”

“Shhh,” Sarah said, still holding the glass of water in her other hand, “Dan’s still sleeping.”

“I bet,” Lester said, looking her up and down. He slowly reached out and smoothly put his hand around the wrist that was covering her breasts, gently pulling it away from her body, finding no resistance. Sarah’s naked breasts came on full display for Lester, heaving up and down in time with her rapidly quickening breath.

“Lester…..” Sarah started.

“You’re right,” Lester licked his lips. “We don’t want to wake him up. Let’s go into my room and finish talking.” Sarah watched his large tongue disappear back into his mouth.

Lester hefted himself up off the doorframe and plodded back into his room, leaving the door ajar behind him. Indecisive, Sarah stood half-naked in front of Dan’s closed bedroom door. She knew that if she followed Lester into his bedroom, much more would happen besides just talking.

Still gripping the cold glass of water, Sarah opened the door to Dan’s bedroom. Her handsome husband was still asleep, snoring lightly. She stared at him for a moment. It would be so easy to just get back in bed with him, even though she hated sleeping in his bed.

“Dan?” Sarah whispered. He didn’t stir.

Sarah gently closed the door and returned to the hallway, where she walked a few feet to Lester’s bedroom door. She cringed as the floorboard creaked beneath her feet. With a deep breath, she pushed open the door and stepped into Lester’s bedroom.

It was still just as dirty and dingy as it had been the previous night. The room had a slight stale stench, probably from the unwashed clothes and plates piled around randomly on the floor. Lester was leaning against his bed, arms crossed. The ethereal blue glow of his computer monitor illuminated the sweaty fat rolls on his oddly proportioned body.

Sarah gently closed the door behind her and stood there in her panties, unsure what to do next. Her body knew what it wanted, but her mind still needed some convincing.

“Come here,” Lester said gruffly. At the command, Sarah stepped forward into the room, her uncertainty fading. Her daintily manicured toes delicately traversed the piles of refuse covering Lester’s floor. She stepped between mounds of clothes and other remnants until she was standing right in front of Lester.

He didn’t say anything. He just let his eyes roam over her body. Sarah felt her nipples grow hard under his silent gaze. Eventually, Lester arose and closed the distance between them. He stood just in front of her, staring into her eyes. Sarah could feel his warm breath on her face and smell the tinge of Cheetos wafting in his exhale. It didn’t disgust her as much as she thought it would.

Lester reached out and took the glass of water from her hand and held it. They both knew what they were headed toward, yet Lester was tantalizingly slow and torturing her. He dipped two fingers into the glass and then held them up over Sarah’s naked breasts. Water slowly dripped from his fingers, landing on her breasts before the beads trickled down her sloping curves. Lester made sure his fingers were placed just right so the water would stream down her breasts over her nipples. The cold water sent a jolt of electricity through her body each time she felt the chilly flow.

“Why are you here, Sarah?” Lester whispered as he continued dappling droplets of cold water onto her breasts.

“You know why, Lester,” Sarah whispered back, seductively holding his gaze.

“I want you to say it. To admit it to me.” Lester said. His brow furrowed slightly.

Instead, Sarah reached forward, and her hand found Lester’s cock through his ragged boxers. She gripped the thickening shaft while running her hand up and down, stroking him through the material. Lester smiled and shook his head.

“No. Not so fast,” He said, “Why are you here?” He put his hand on her wrist, stopping her strokes, but he was still in her grasp.

“For this,” Sarah whispered, “I need your cock.”

“You want to get fucked again? Didn’t get enough before?” Lester said. “I heard you and your husband going at it.”

“Did you peek?” Sarah asked, “Through the peephole?”

“No,” Lester said, “I couldn’t give a shit about seeing you with Dan.”

“That’s a shame,” Sarah said, “I like putting on a show for you.” Her nipple felt an icy spike, and her neck spasmed sexily in response.

“You certainly put on a show tonight,” Lester said. “That wasn’t what I wanted.”

“Sometimes you don’t get what you want,” Sarah said reproachfully, “Sometimes it’s about what I want.” She squeezed him then, telling him the truth.

“I think,” Lester leaned forward and whispered into her ear, “That you need to be reminded just whose little slut you are.” Her perfect breasts mashed against his pale hairy chest as he closed in.

Sarah bit her lip, “Are you going to show me… daddy?” Her left leg bent back at the knee in gleeful anticipation, playing up her role as his slut.

Lester’s face was covered in an ugly smile. “First, I want you to tell me what you want.”

“I want you to fuck me, Lester,” Sarah whispered, staring into his eyes.

“And where’s your loving husband going to be?” Lester said.

“He’s in the next room. He’s asleep,” Sarah said.

“My good little slut,” Lester set the glass of water on his desk, then grabbed Sarah by the waist and pulled her towards him as he backed up to the bed. He pulled her hips forward until they were pressing against his cock. Sarah immediately started to grind her sex against his.

“Do you feel me?” Lester said, “I’m going to stick that into you until it explodes inside of you.”

“Ughhh,” Sarah moaned at the thought. She could feel the warmth of Lester’s cock pressing against her panty-clad sex. “We, we really shouldn’t be doing this.” Her body continued to get as much contact with the solid pole as she spoke.

“It’s too late for that,” Lester said as he deliberately ground his cock back against Sarah’s pussy. “You knew what was happening when you followed me into this room. You want to get fucked while your husband is sleeping in the room next door.”

Lester’s mouth was licking at her neck, tasting her. “You could have woken Dan up for another round, but you didn’t. You know only I can give you what you need.”

Sarah’s eyes were closed as Lester’s lips were leaving a wet trail of his drool cooling on her neck. Her body shuddered at his words, and the electricity of his sucking lips pressed into her flawless skin. She still couldn’t believe that she was here, half naked in Lester’s room while his hands roamed her body and his lips were on her. It wouldn’t make any sense to an outside observer, but only she had experienced the incredible events that led to this moment.

“What is it I need?” Sarah huskily whispered. “Your big cock?”

Lester chuckled and turned both Sarah and him around so that her bubble butt was pressing against the bed. He gently pressed forward, lowering her onto her back. Sarah involuntarily moaned as Lester tugged at her panties, sliding them down her legs.

“It’s more than that,” Lester said, staring down at Sarah victoriously, watching her beauty sprawled out on the bed before him. Her knees were grinding together in anticipation of what was to come next.

“You like giving yourself up to a guy like me. You love it. Especially because you know your husband and I don’t get along. A beautiful princess like you with someone like me. I know how wet that makes you.” Lester sneered.

“You don’t know the first thing about me, Les–” Sarah started, but she was cut off by Lester spreading her legs open and pressing two fingers against the entrance to her pussy. Lester’s digits easily slid inside, Sarah’s pussy already wet with anticipation.

Lester smirked as his fingers entered her, running wildly in and out of her, grazing against her sensitive g-spot with his manipulation. “That’s what I thought,” Lester said, “Soaking fucking wet. When are you going to give up this game, huh? We both know it’s just a front. We both know what you really want. You can play the pretty wife and the capable office worker, but we both know you just want to be on your knees with me pounding away behind you.”

“Uhhh,” Sarah moaned as Lester’s fat digits slid in and out of her rapidly, his thumb stuck out and frigging her clit,. He was expertly running the tips of his fingers over her G-spot, over and over, putting a delightful amount of tender pressure on the area, “Mhmmmmmmm.”

Sarah’s eyes were dreamily shut as she lost herself in the moment. When they opened back up to look at Lester, he saw the lust now present in them. The desire. The hunger. He was happy to oblige as he lowered himself down until he was level with her glistening pussy. He inhaled deeply, her scent sending a steady flow of blood to his expanding cock. With a lick of his fat lips, his head leaned forward until his mouth clasped onto her sex, sucking her clit and its hood between his lips, flicking his tongue.

“Oh fuck,” Sarah moaned as her thighs clamped tightly together around Lester’s head, “Mhmmmmmm.”

“I love it when you moan for me,” Lester mumbled as he sucked and flicked at Sarah’s clit with his huge tongue. His fingers continued to stroke inside of her, lightly dragging across her G-spot, simultaneously pleasuring two of her most sensitive erogenous zones.

Lester expertly sucked on Sarah’s clit while his tongue slowly raked across it, over and over again, establishing the rhythm with which he’d take her. Sarah was writhing on the bed, hands clasping Lester’s luxurious bed sheets, balling the fabric in her clenching hands. She squirmed, her hips thrust off the bed, trying to get more and more of the delicious pleasure Lester was delivering to her. Keeping herself wide open for the beastly man.

Lester’s other hand snaked up her body until it grabbed a handful of Sarah’s breasts, mauling each of them as he rolled a nipple between his thumb and index finger.

“Oh god, fuck, ohmmm” Sarah’s eyes alternated between being shut and staring up at the ceiling of Lester’s bedroom. The dark room felt eerily like the lair of some mythological cave troll, which heightened the exhilaration her body was experiencing.

Lester’s suction cup-like mouth detached from her, “Sshhhh, you going to wake up your husband. I wonder what he would think seeing you like this.”

“Uhhhhhhhh,” Sarah moaned. The thought of Dan walking in on her with Lester like this. Catching them together after everything. It was a dangerously hot idea. One that was playing in the back of her head as she quivered and jumped around Lester’s fingers. She looked down her body at Lester and saw half of his fat, balding head peering at her lecherously from between her tanned, toned legs. He was looking up at her with that ugly, sneering smile but she couldn’t help but feel enamored by it. But he wasn’t sucking her anymore.

Sarah let go of Lester’s sheets and grabbed the back of his head, pulling his mouth back down onto her.

“More,” she spoke this openly, not in a whisper. Lester obliged and quickly resumed his feast, sucking and licking her clit while his fingers ran rampant inside of her. Eagerly tasting her juices as they flowed copiously from the ecstatic young wife.

A welcome, familiar electrical buzz was building inside of her. Lester’s fingers and mouth were quickly working her up to a climax that she didn’t intend to let go of, “Fuck, fuuuuck, Lester, don’t stop. Keep doing that. Oh my, fffuck.”

Lester mumbled something, but his mouth was full of her clit. The bassy mumbling sent an electric vibration against her clit that ramped up her orgasm. She could feel it building so quickly it was about to crash down on her.

Sarah was already holding her breath, ready for it to wash over her. She still couldn’t believe where she was but none of that mattered. All that mattered was letting Lester do whatever he wanted to her body and to give her the feeling that only he could.

“Oh fuck. Yes. Please. Pleeaase,” Sarah begged as she felt the orgasm rock her body, again forgetting to keep herself quiet. Sarah’s thighs wrapped tighter around Lester’s chubby head as she pushed her hips up off the bed, offering herself to him fully. Lester’s nose pressed into her crotch, cutting off his only supply of air.

“OH GOD,” Sarah moaned with wild abandon as her back arched off the bed. Her entire body felt like it was on fire as her explosive orgasm washed over her. Sarah’s eyes were closed, reveling in the illicit pleasure. She couldn’t see Lester’s head turning a tomato shade of red as he struggled to breathe. His fingers stopped moving inside of her as her thighs held his head in a vise-like grip, not allowing him to move. Immobilizing him to keep him from potentially ruining her orgasm.

Lester struggled against her, trying desperately to free himself from her grip. With his other hand, he rubbed a finger stroking up the wife’s immaculate taint until his middle finger’s tip pressed against the clenched wife’s asshole. He slowly pushed his finger in, up to the first knuckle.

“OH SHIT! SHIIIT! OHGODOHHH!” the sensation of Lester’s sausage digit violating her asshole as the dynamite went off again, heightening her ongoing string of climaxes. The warm, full feeling coming from her ass was amazing, but she needed to catch her breath.

Sarah’s body finally came down from her powerful climax; her muscles relaxed, and she laid back into the bed, luxuriating in the pleasure she’d gotten from Lester’s mouth. Her thighs let go of Lester’s head, and he pulled back, heaving and gulping a deep breath. Sarah opened her eyes at the noise, looking down at Lester and chuckling at his beet-red face.

“Sorry,” she said, closing her eyes again, “You just do that too good.” Her mouth curved in a contented smile.

Lester awkwardly and unflatteringly shuffled out of his ragged boxers, revealing his hard cock already dripping. Hearing the fabric move, Sarah’s eyes opened to catch the reveal of Lester’s giant cock. Sarah eyed it and licked her lips, “Put that in me, big boy.”

Lester stood there, his forehead sweaty and his lower face soaked with her juices. His beady eyes roamed over her body, and his tongue rested on his bottom lip as he stood there ogling her. Lester squeezed his large cock in his hand and smiled, then shook his head.”

“C’mon, Lester, I need you to fuck me.”

Lester’s smile widened, but the only move he made was to continue shaking his head and denying her what she wanted.

Sarah was now up on her elbows, her shapely breasts more apparent at this angle, “Doesn’t my Chicago boyfriend want me? I need that big dick of yours.”

Lester’s grin widened, and he looked a little crazy, but again, he stood there, waiting. The shaft and purple head of his cock still held against his gut, trembling slightly with the room’s tension.

Sarah smiled, and her green eyes seemed plaintive in the blue glow of the PC monitor. She took her right hand and slowly caressed her breast. She licked her lips and said, “My husband is asleep in the next room. Please fuck a baby into me… Daddy.”

 

Lester’s smile broke wide, and he didn’t waste any more time, roughly crawling on top of Sarah as her legs opened to welcome the ugly trollish man between them. Lester’s gut pressed down onto Sarah as he settled his weight on top of her, pushing the air from her lungs. His bare cock, slick with precum, quickly found the drenched entrance to her pussy and began pushing himself in.

Sarah moaned at the feeling of being stretched to accommodate Lester’s girth. Her legs instinctively wrapped around his hips as her hands gripped onto his flabby biceps.

“Uhhhhhhhhhhhh,” Sarah groaned as she felt Lester’s turgid member push deeper into her. Every single time, she was surprised by just how good it felt inside her body. Not only to be stretched by a large cock like his but to feel so utterly submissive under the weight of his massive frame. To completely give herself over to an ugly bastard so far below her.

“I’m gonna fuck you slow and hard while Dan sleeps next door,” Lester said as his lips pressed hard against hers. “I want you to fucking explode while I dump my cum into you while that idiot snores away, not knowing I’m claiming his wife. Breeding you.”

Sarah didn’t respond, but she opened her lips, letting Lester’s fat tongue slide into her mouth. She tasted the Cheetos he had been eating as her tongue danced over his, her mouth resonating with every taste bud she had.

Lester pushed his monster cock fully into Sarah’s tight pussy.

“Ohhhhhhhgod,” Sarah moaned at how full she felt. Lester’s hairy balls were pressing up against her asshole as his swollen cock was fully embedded in her. “So fucking good, baby.”

“That’s what I like to hear,” Lester said as he gently bit at her lip. As he lowered his lips back to hers, he tilted his head slightly and pushed his sizable tongue deep into her mouth. At the same time, he pulled his hips back until only the tip of his cock was nestled in the folds of her pussy, then pushed his cock fully back inside of her til their hips slapped together.

Sarah moaned into his mouth, trying and failing to battle him with her tongue. Each time she made any progress, Lester’s cock pulled out and thrust back in, causing her to moan and lose the ability to focus on anything else. Lester clasped Sarah’s hands and interlaced his fat fingers with hers, holding them gently over her head, pinned to the bed.

Lester kept up his slow routine, slowly pulling his cock out of Sarah before just as slowly pushing it back in. Sarah’s hips started thrusting off the bed as the couple made out. Eagerly wanting him to go faster, urging him to fuck her harder.

After what had transpired earlier in the night in the living room, Lester didn’t want Sarah taking control again. He needed to reassert that he was the one in charge. He rammed his cock hard into her, pinning her hips to the bed under the weight of his immense frame.

“No,” Lester pulled his head back and looked deep into her eyes, “We’re making love tonight. It’s been too long.”

“Uhhhhh,” Sarah moaned in disappointment but kept bucking her hips up off the bed. Lester adjusted his hips' angle and sank his knees into the bed. He pulled all the way out of Sarah until just the top of his cock was still inside of her and slowly worked it back in, dragging across her G-Spot. “Mhmmmmm fuck.”

Lester repeated the action again, then again. Sarah’s hips pushed up to meet his thrusts, the two of them quickly moving their motions into sync with one another. Lester grabbed the back of Sarah’s neck and pulled her head up towards his mouth. His lips met with hers as his cock sunk deep into her.

Sarah moaned into his lips as Lester changed tactics with his lips. Instead of pushing his tongue deep inside her mouth, he focused on his lips on hers, sucking and gently kissing them in a slow, sensual manner. His plan was to entice some of those love hormones in her brain to be released by his slow, methodical pace.

Lester kept up his steady tempo, pulling out and pushing his entire length into the married woman. He wanted her to feel every inch of his veiny cock, over and over again. He let go of her hands and dropped more of his weight on top of her.

Sarah felt Lester slightly crushing her petite frame. Thankfully, he kept himself on his elbows. Still, her heavy breasts mashed against Lester’s flabby chest. She could feel the wiry hairs on his chest chafing her pristine skin, but that wasn’t at the forefront of her mind. She was focused on the marvelous sensations between her legs.

Lester shocked her by suddenly altering his cadence, thrusting himself quickly in and out of her twice in rapid succession. Sarah gripped his arms in response, tugging on them for leverage. Urging him to give more more. He went back to his slow, methodical thrusts making Sarah squirm.

“Fuck Lester, that feels so good,” Sarah moaned into his shoulder. Her tongue instinctively reached out, licking circles into his bitter, sweaty skin.

“It’s gonna feel even better when I cum inside you,” Lester whispered. “I can’t fucking wait.”

“Uhmhmmmmm,” Sarah moaned at the thought of Lester’s hot cum exploding inside of her. “I can’t wait, Lester. I can’t wait for you to cum inside me again. It ffffeels so good.”

“That’s my girl,” Lester grunted, still sliding his cock slowly and steadily. Sarah’s body was responding to him in real-time. He could read her like a sheet of music, the effect of each thrust. Every grunt and moan. Her body was telling him that she wouldn’t be able to hold out long before cumming again herself.

He knew from experience that her mind played a critical part in pushing her over the edge. He chose his words carefully to tug on the strings that he knew would turn her on. Lester wanted to run on a knife’s edge between pushing her buttons and trying to deepen her connection to him.

“You feel so good, Sarah. I love being with you,” Lester whispered. “I love that you followed me into my room. God, you’re so fucking tight. My cock is throbbing. I love this.”

“Fuck Lester. You feel so good,” Sarah moaned, her hands flung around his sweaty back, pulling him down on top of her. She felt more of his weight on her frame. It was intoxicating, feeling like she was trapped under him, needing to give in to whatever he wanted to do to her. “Don’t stop, baby. Please.” Sarah groaned, thrusting her shapely hips up off the bed to meet him.

“Why?” Lester whispered into her ear, “Are you getting close? Are you going to cum on my fat cock while your husband sleeps in the next room? Poor Dan. Doesn’t even know his wife is making love to me right this second.”

Sarah felt her body start to tingle. Lester’s words laced through her ears like a seductive serpent focused on enhancing her pleasure. Sarah closed her eyes and tried to focus on her orgasm, but it was difficult. Everything was stimulating her body. Lester’s words had put her body into overdrive, his warm Cheeto breath on her face, his disgustingly sweaty back, and the way she felt pinned under him. Everything was adding up to make Sarah want to scream and just let loose.

Lester felt Sarah pushing against him erratically; her breathing grew shallower, and he could hear a tell-tale sighing whine at the back of her throat. He knew she was close to cumming. He just needed to tip the scales in his favor.

“Do it,” Lester whispered as his tongue danced wetly on her earlobe, “Cum for me. I want to feel your body squeeze me. Come for Daddy, Sarah. Be my good little slut.”

“Uh fuck,” Sarah grunted. “Oh my God, Lester, your cock. It’s, it’s so fucking, fffuhh.” Her body was wildly fucking Lester back. Lester had abandoned his slow and methodical pace, responding to the changes in Sarah. Wanting to stoke the fire within her. He kept the same angle but was now thrusting into her faster, ensuring he punctuated each thrust hard to get Sarah to cum for him.

“Do it,” Lester growled into her ear. “Cum on my cock, you good little slut. Your husband is sleeping next door while you’re pinned under me. Cum for me.”

“Uhhmhmmmm fuck. Lester. I – I — Fuuuccccmhhhhmmmmm,” Sarah moaned into Lester’s shoulder as her body spasmed and her orgasm took hold. She squeezed Lester’s cock with her pussy, trying to hold it in place, not wanting anything to stop the onslaught of her chain explosion. Sarah’s muscles tightened, and her breath stopped as she came erratically on Lester's cock. It felt like a tsunami engulfing her as electric sensations ran across her body. Every one of her nerves seemed to be on fire and were extra sensitive, sending her to the very edge of consciousness.

“Good girl,” Lester grunted, pulling his cock out. It was not an easy feat, as Sarah’s pussy had it in a death grip. Lester slammed it back into her. His cock rocked her orgasm, pushing it to yet even higher levels. Lester kept slamming into her, ignoring the iron grip her pussy tried to have on his cock. He wanted to push her into another brain-melting orgasm.

In the next moment, Sarah felt that promised explosion rock through her body as Lester started to fuck her harder and faster than he had been doing. She felt him slide long strokes so deep into her. So quickly and so hard, confidently claiming her. All her muscles seemed to tense up again as she felt another, even larger orgasm start to unleash inside of her.

“Ah fuck. Uhhh. God. MHMMHMMM. FUCK. YES. PLEASE. YOUR COCK. PLEASE. YES. FUCK ME LESTER! ” Sarah’s body was out of control. Nails dug into Lester’s back as she clenched her teeth. Her face grew red as she focused so much energy on fucking back on Lester’s raw battering ram of a cock. Her ankles were locked behind his fat ass, and she pulled herself further onto his impaling pole.

“I’m gonna cum in you,” Lester declared quietly into her ear. Both of them started bucking against each other in a sexual frenzy.

“Do it. Oh my god. Oh GOD, DO IT LESTER. DO IT! I LOVE YOUR FUCKING COCK!” Sarah screamed, not worried about anything else at that moment. Consequences be damned. She knew her next orgasm was about to crash down on her body. The thought of Lester’s hot cum pumping into her was driving her insane. “FUCK ME LESTER. I LOVE IT! I FUCKING LOVE YOUR COCK! GOD, Don’t stop. I, I LOVE YOU! FUCKKKK. FFFFUUUUHHHCK!”

Lester roared like a lion attacking a fresh kill in the savannah as he came, his eyes fluttering as he pushed into the gorgeous woman. Even though he had cum hours earlier, a torrent of white, hot sticky cum sprayed like a firehose from his cock. It drenched every inch of Sarah’s insides, exploring every corner and crevice of her body.

“OH GOD,” Sarah shouted as she felt Lester’s cock explode inside of her. His hot cum drenching her, filling her up completely in an instant. Rope after rope of cum kept exploding into her in a never-ending loop. Sarah grunted loudly as her body came again. Another orgasm washed down on Sarah, dwarfing the previous one as it overtook it and took over her entire body.

“MHMMHMMMMMMMMOHH,” Sarah wailed as her body enveloped Lester’s, holding him tightly to her. Lester’s cock continued to pulsate and throb inside of her as more of his illicit seed was emptied into her.

Sarah’s pussy continued to clench down on Lester’s cock as she came, her body trying to milk every last drop of pleasure out of it. Lester pushed his head down, his lips mauling Sarah’s as the contradictory lovers came together. Sarah’s tongue pushed into Lester’s mouth, barely registering the taste of Cheetos as she found his tongue with hers. They kissed each other hard as both of their bodies continued to go through the bliss of their orgasms, Sarah’s arms still clutching Lester’s sweaty, hairy, pasty back.

Their bodies continued to press against one another, Lester crushing Sarah’s as the sweat on their bodies combined. Finally, the pace of Lester’s thrusts slowed in time with Sarah’s hips. They lay intertwined, still kissing one another for several more minutes. The kisses changed from oral exploration with their tongues to soft, gentle kisses with just their lips.

Lester broke their kiss. His cock still embedded in Sarah, he pulled back to look at her. She opened her eyes to look back at him. His hand caressed her face, brushing a stray strand of hair away. With his labored breathing, he stared into her eyes. She looked back up at him affectionately as her breasts were still crushed under his chest. After staring at each other for several seconds, Lester leaned down one last time. Sarah raised her head off the bed to meet his lips with one last lingering kiss.

Slowly, Lester pulled himself out of Sarah and flopped onto the bed next to her. Sarah felt even more exhausted than before, but now that her itch had been scratched, she knew she could finally fall asleep.

She looked over at Lester, whose eyes were closed, his breathing growing deeper as sleep overtook him. Her mind wasn’t thinking clearly, but she had thoroughly enjoyed that session. The way Lester had tenderly held her while still driving deep inside of her had been overwhelming.

Sarah knew she had to get up and slide back into Dan’s bed. She would do that in a minute. Lester’s bed just felt so nice and comfortable. She just needed another minute or two, and she would get up and quickly clean herself up before returning to her husband. With the heat of Lester’s body off of her, Sarah could feel the air conditioning run over her body, giving her a slight chill. She pulled the thin covers up over herself, enjoying how soft and luxurious they felt.

A yawn escaped her lips and her eyes started getting heavy. The room suddenly went dark as Lester’s computer monitor shut off. Sarah still had her eyes closed, unable to see the darkened silhouette of Lester’s form with hers in the monitor.

Just one more minute, then I’ll get up.

***

Dan groggily rubbed the sleep from his eyes as he tried to wake himself up. Sunlight was already streaming in from the window, and he knew he needed to get moving. He reached out for Sarah next to him, but his hand felt the empty spot where she was supposed to be.

His eyes snapped open, and he looked around the empty room for any sign of his wife. The door was closed, and her duffel bag was still in the corner of the room, the nightshirt she’d pulled out laid over it. Dan sat up and quickly threw on a pair of shorts and a T-shirt. Sarah had likely woken up earlier and left the room to shower or get coffee. Being considerate, she shut the door behind her so she wouldn’t wake him.

Dan quickly opened the door and stepped out into the hallway. The bathroom door was open, and the light was off. He turned and walked down to the living room, worried when he didn’t see Sarah anywhere. He checked his phone, but there was no message saying that she’d run out.

“Sarah?” He said as he walked into the kitchen and looked at the small table in the corner. She wasn’t in here either.

The noise of a bedroom door opening came from behind him. Dan whirled around, walked back into the living room, and looked down the hallway. His eyes went wide at what he saw.

Sarah was gently closing the door to Lester’s bedroom. Her long, naked legs on display. Dan couldn’t tell if she was wearing panties or not. The oversized ugly t-shirt with the Death Star from Star Wars emblazoned on it hung down to her upper thighs. Even from where Dan was standing, the shirt looked wrinkly and unwashed.

She paused and bit her lip as she saw Dan standing in the living room watching her. He tilted his head, and she silently nodded, spreading an impish smile across her face. An understanding seemed to pass between them in that moment.

Sarah walked down the hallway and stopped in front of the bathroom. She gave Dan a sexy look that could cause a lesser man’s heart to stop and smiled at him again before disappearing behind the door.

Dan stood there, his mind going into overdrive, putting the pieces into place. At some point in the night, Sarah had somehow ended up in Lester’s bedroom. His mind raced while his body reacted, and he felt himself grow stiff. He wasn’t sure what he wanted at that moment, and conflicted emotions were clear on his face.

All he knew was that Sarah had gone to see Lester after Dan had fallen asleep. And Dan’s cock was rock hard at the thought. He stepped up to the bathroom door and tried the handle. She had left it unlocked. He couldn’t deny that the look she gave him turned him on. And the fact that she had spent the night with Lester….while conflicted, he couldn’t deny that his lust for his wife was at an all-time high.

Dan turned the knob and stepped into the bathroom to join his wife in the shower.

***

With Sarah headed back home, Lester sat in his command center, staring at the monitor in front of him. His hands were clasped together in a steeple before his face as he contemplated his next move.

Things had taken some unexpected turns lately. Even though he’d accounted for all the variables, things had still gone awry with Vernon. He hadn’t wanted to share Sarah like that. Not yet. Not unless he was fully in control of making her capitulate to his demands and having her willingly give in to him.

Vernon was just supposed to be an added spice, turning Sarah on at being exposed while further reducing Dan’s agency in the heightened situation. Lester would need to improve his vetting process or find some way to better control how he exposed Sarah.

Putting her on display to his D&D friends and strangers behind the windows of his car was one level. Vernon was quite another. Even fucking her against her office window overlooking the hospital’s parking lot had been a tactic he’d used to push her into obedience, succumbing to her own desires.

He wanted to continue down that path, pulling Sarah deeper and deeper into his web. But the events with Vernon gave him pause. He didn’t like a plan not going the way he liked, introducing too many outside variables was proving too chaotic.

Still, some variables were worth the gamble. Lester still needed to punish Dan severely for his transgressions, and he had just the idea of how to do that. Lester reached out, grabbed his phone off the desk, and dialed the number for Jesse.

The phone continued to ring as Lester thought through his plans. Dan’s reaction to seeing Jesse at the club had been volatile. He wondered just how far he could exploit that. Perhaps push Dan into doing something else stupid, this time falling into a trap with more consequences.

“Hello?” Jesse’s voice answered from the phone.

“Jesse. It’s Lester,” Lester said, “I think it’s time we talk. I have an idea that I need your assistance with.”

“Oh yeah?” Jesse fired back in words dripping with venom, “Now you want my help? After shutting me out and ignoring me? Sorry, but I have my own plan now that doesn’t include you.”

Lester frowned. This was not what he had been expecting. A pliable variable like Jesse should be known, waiting and eager for Lester to call on it, “Excuse me?”

“Yeah. I don’t need you anymore, Lester. My friend from The Lincoln Group and I already have things in motion. He promised I’ll get my time alone with Sarah in Minnesota real soon.” Jesse was talking in rapid-fire bursts, “You’re not going to dick me around anymore. I have her all to myself and take her away from you and Dan.”

“Listen here, you little shit,” Lester started, “You don’t know the first thing about me and the lengths I’ll go to ruin your pathetic little life.”

“Whatever,” Jesse said and hung up the phone.

Lester stared at the phone in anger as his fingers clenched it tightly. What the hell was that?

Jesse suddenly growing a backbone was not a factor he had anticipated. Lester scooted his chair forward and opened up a search engine on his computer. He typed in The Lincoln Group while opening another tab to look at Jesse’s LinkedIn page. He needed to assess and figure out what events were in play that he didn’t know about. These guys thought they could take Sarah from Dan for themselves or something?

After his months of scheming and subtle manipulations, they just wanted to reap the fruits of his labor.

 

No fucking way.

Lester’s phone rang. Expecting Jesse, and answered but didn’t recognize the number.

“Hello?” He said coldly as his eyes ran over the information on the screen. He opened a word document and began collating information about Jesse, his company and this Lincoln Group he mentioned.

“Hi, Mr. Marshall? This is Jenny with Chase Bank’s fraud department. I’m reaching out because several recent transactions were flagged as suspicious. Can you confirm whether you purchased over one thousand dollars of liquor this morning at a convenience store? Or an AirBNB rental?”

“No,” Lester fired back, his eyes scanning his desk for his wallet. Holding the phone to his head, he stomped out to the living room to look for it. The last thing he remembered was giving Sarah money for the pizza.

Vernon. “No, I didn’t do that. Cancel all my cards and reissue new ones.”

“Okay, Mr. Marshall. First, I need to ask you a few questions to confirm your identity.”

Lester balled his free hand into a fist, feeling the rage boiling inside of him. Vernon. Dan. The Lincoln Group. Jesse. It was time to burn them all to the ground.

***

“Fuck,” Dan muttered, looking down at his phone.

“What is it?” Sarah asked, looking concerned. They were riding in the back of a Uber on the way to their hotel in Minnesota. Their early morning flight ensured Dan could get into his client’s office by mid-morning.

“My client at Sentinel Securities is complaining about my responsiveness,” Dan breathed. “I’ve been stretched between them, my other clients, and actual work. I try to respond to them right away, and I’m ahead on our agreed timeline, but they seem to want me to act like a full-time employee. I have to figure out what to do with this. They’re my biggest client and the linchpin for my future plans.”

Dan put his head back on the seat and closed his eyes, “It just never stops.”

Sarah held his arm and leaned in towards him, “We’re going to figure it out together, remember hon?”

She smiled at him and gently bumped him with her shoulder, “This trip isn’t just about work. It’s about getting you out from under these guys, remember? One less thing for you to have to worry about. We plant that USB, and then you can get out from under them and deal with everything else, one thing at a time.”

“You make it sound so easy,” Dan opened his eyes and looked at Sarah, who was smiling back at him.

“It isn’t, but we just need to focus on what’s in front of us and not get overwhelmed by the bigger picture,” she said. “You’re smart. I know we’ll get through this. Figure out a good response when we get to the hotel room, and then let’s focus on burying these other guys.”

“I’m still not sure how we’ll get that USB into Byron’s office,” Dan said.

“You go there and work like you normally would. See if you can find an opportunity to do it or just scope the place out. Then, we’ll talk and figure out the best way to approach it. Okay?” Sarah said reassuringly.

“Alright,” Dan looked at his wife, smiling back at him. A weird expression crossed his face.

“What?” Sarah asked.

“It’s nothing,” Dan looked out the window.

“No, tell me,” Sarah said, “What is it?”

“Your smile just now. It reminded me of the last time you visited in Chicago. You know when I caught you doing the walk of shame in the morning?” Dan said tentatively, “from, ah, the other bedroom.”

“Oh did it?” Sarah asked.

“I know,” Dan said, “You just do something to me. I love when you behave badly but I feel like I shouldn’t. Shouldn’t love it.”

“Don’t be embarrassed about anything like that with me,” Sarah checked the rearview mirror to see if their Uber driver was listening. He had headphones in but she was sure from his reaction faces that he was eavesdropping. “We’re in this together and I’m happy to indulge in both our fantasies.”

She ran her hand up his thigh, her eyes still on the rearview mirror. The driver looked back and locked eyes with her for a split second before quickly refocusing on the road. Sarah ran her hand over Dan’s crotch before pulling back and giving him a wicked smile, “I think we’re here.”

The Uber pulled up in front of the same hotel they stayed in last time. After grabbing their luggage, they quickly checked in and settled into their room. Dan got dressed in his work attire and kissed Sarah on the lips before departing for The Lincoln Group’s office.

It didn’t take long for Dan to get to The Lincoln Group’s office. He checked in at the security desk before riding the elevator up and spoke with their receptionist. After a few minutes, she led Dan through their hallways to a discreet corner office with large windows looking out over the city. Byron was lounging behind his large desk in the middle of a call while Jesse was perched on a couch, looking like he had nothing to do.

Byron ushered Dan in and dismissed the receptionist while he finished his call. Dan wasn’t about to sit like a patsy on the couch, instead opting to stand until Byron was done his call. Jesse smirked at him from the couch, but Dan pretended to ignore it. Byron didn’t so much as glance his way as he lowered his voice and spoke into the phone.

Finally, his call ended and Byron got to his feet, walking over to where Dan was with a hand outstretched. Dan noticed the slight receding hairline and deep bags under Byron’s bloodshot reddened eyes. Reluctantly, Dan shook Byron’s hand who squeezed extra hard and gave him a few extra pumps before disengaging.

Byron looked behind Dan and then around the office, “Where’s that lovely wife of yours?”

“Shopping,” Dan said, “Ready to start?” He looked over at Jesse who hadn’t even opened his laptop yet.

“You brought her along, though, right? Maybe I should have been clearer that she was required to come in today,” Byron said, putting his hands in his pants pockets. He narrowed his eyes at Dan.

“Well, she’s not getting paid to be here, so, no, she won’t be,” Dan said coldly.

Byron just stared at Dan for several seconds, sizing him up. A predatory smile broke across his face, “Fine. Let’s get started.”

Byron gestured to the couch where Jesse was sitting, with his laptop on the table in front of him. Dan sat down next to his former subordinate while Byron sat in a chair opposite. Byron leaned back in this chair, stretching his arms above his head, “You know, I would gladly compensate your wife for her……services. She’s going to join us for drinks later. I’m not asking.”

“Sure,” Dan said while opening his bag, ignoring the grins on both the men’s faces.

The trio got down to business, discussing some of the finer points of The Lincoln Group’s projects that Byron had been unwilling to discuss over the phone. The project was very ambitious and somewhat sketchy. From the sounds of it, it seemed like the company was establishing some off-the-grid community that had energy requirements far exceeding those of a normal subdivision. It made Dan think that they were building some kind of secret commune. Byron wouldn’t reveal any details of the location, but he did say that all of the housing unit’s energy, internet, and other services would run through a central monitoring hub. What might occur in that hub still remained a mystery.

Dan led the group through the project's finer requirements, not wanting to waste any time or be required to stay in Minnesota longer than necessary. He also hoped not to have to come back here. He wanted to knock out what he needed to do to complete his part of the project and then try to get off the project entirely.

At lunchtime, Byron escorted Jesse and Dan out of his office so he could make some other calls. Dan had the USB with the keylogger in his pocket. He couldn’t see Byron’s computer tower, but it must be somewhere under his bulky wooden desk.

When Dan and Jesse were alone, riding the elevator down, Jesse opened his mouth to say something smarmy, but Dan cut him off. He very intentionally hid his mouth in his hand as he spoke, “So what do you think Byron is going to do when he finds out you’re spying on him?”

Jesse’s face was fearful as he sputtered to respond, “W-what?”

“I know the deal you made,” Dan said. “You’re getting paid to spy on Bryon and The Lincoln Group’s project and give regular reports to Peter. Don’t play dumb. He told me. He’s getting impatient with you.”

“It’s not like…I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Jesse said.

“Suit yourself,” Dan said, “I’ll just talk with Byron after lunch about it and show him what I have. We’ll see what he says.”

“No, don’t,” Jesse said too quickly, “Don’t.”

Dan smiled at Jesse, “Why shouldn’t I?”

“I’ll split the money with you. How did you even find out? Fuck!” Jesse said.

“It doesn’t matter. Call Peter a mutual friend. He told me a lot, particularly that you haven’t been giving him the reports he asked for.” Dan turned back to the elevator doors as they opened and then walked out.

“Because I don’t have anything yet!” Jesse spoke in hushed tones as he followed Dan out into the building's lobby. “Today was the most we’ve seen. They’ve been all secretive before this.”

Jesse continued to trail Dan as he walked outside. When they were away from the building, Dan turned and said, “So what’s the plan tonight with Sarah? What are you guys planning?”

“I, uh, I don’t know. Honest,” Jess said, “I just know that Byron said at some point I’ll have some alone time with her. Without him and without you.”

“Well, that isn’t happening anymore,” Dan said. “Or I’ll tell Byron everything, and you’ll get fired again.”

“Okay,” Jesse looked deflated. Dan kept walking, and Jesse was still on his heels. Dan turned around and stared at him, “Why are you still following me? I’m getting lunch. Alone.” Dan walked off, leaving Jesse standing by himself on the busy street corner.

After lunch, the trio resumed their work hashing out details of the project. Dan continued to keep them on point, quickly trying to get through all of the items on his checklist so he could go back to Chicago and hammer out the project. Jesse constantly looked uncomfortable but Byron never mentioned it.

“Alright,” Byron said, standing up and looking at Dan and Jesse, “It’s time to get out of here. Quitting time. I’m going to grab dinner, and then we’ll meet up for drinks across the street. Say nine o’clock. He pointed a finger at Dan. Don’t forget to bring that sweet wife of yours.”

Dan just nodded. Byron gestured to the door and went back behind his desk, where he propped up his feet and dialed a number on his phone. Dan and Jesse left, each going their separate ways.

When Dan got back into the hotel room, Sarah was there waiting for him.

“How’d it go?” She asked anxiously.

“He never left us alone in his office. But I know where it is. I think his computer tower must be under his desk somewhere. He looked like he was getting comfortable but he wants to meet us at the bar across the street at nine.”

“Is his office private? Would it be easy to get in there without anyone seeing?” Sarah asked.

“It’s tucked away. Yeah, I think so.” Dan said, “I still don’t know how we’re going to get in there, though. Maybe tomorrow, we can bait him out of his office while I’m in there, and I can attach it.” Dan was pacing back and forth now, anxiously visualizing the office.

Sarah walked up to him, stopping his stride. She put her hands on his chest and looked up at him, “Honey, relax. Okay? We’ll figure it out.”

She patted his muscular chest, smoothing out the wrinkles on his dress shirt, “For right now. Let’s just worry about dinner, okay? I’m starving.”

“Alright, baby,” Dan said, “Let’s go find some grub.”

***

Just after nine, Dan and Sarah entered the loud bar across the street from The Lincoln Group offices. Several heads turned their way as they made their way across the crowded bar to the lounge area at the back.

Sarah pretended to ignore all the glances she was getting, but she secretly loved the attention. She knew exactly what she’d been doing when she put her outfit together. Long flowing black dress pants that tapered at her midsection. A very low-cut tank top in faux silver alligator skin with black straps. The top exposed a lot of her chest, sitting low enough that she didn’t wear a bra with it. She knew that eye contact would be a problem with any man she talked to tonight.

Her silver heels matched the small silver clutch she carried that contained the USB drive Dan needed to plant in Byron’s office. As the couple navigated the bar, they quickly approached a booth with Byron and Jesse.

Byron stood up to greet her while Jesse remained sullen in the booth, his expression blank.

“Dan,” Byron said cheerfully, clasping his hand before quickly turning to give Sarah a very obvious up and down ogle. “My, my, my. Sarah, I forgot how sexy you looked. It’s been too long. He stepped up and gave Sarah a lingering hug, which she reciprocated before pulling away and gesturing to the booth.

“Dan, why don’t you sit on that side next to Jesse,” Byron smiled, “I want to catch up with this lovely creature.” Byron gestured to the booth, letting Sarah in first before quickly sitting next to her, cutting off any opportunity Dan had to sit next to his wife. He reluctantly slid into the side of the booth next to Jesse.

Sarah was well aware that Byron had purposely pinned her between the wall and himself, with no easy way out of the booth. A server came by and took their drink orders, quickly returning with a wine for Sarah, a light beer for Dan and Jesse, and an 18-year-old scotch for Byron.

“Keep 'em coming,” Byron winked at the server. As she walked away, he pointedly checked out her ass before turning to Dan, “You’re covering drinks tonight, right?”

“Actually,” Dan said, “I’m just the contractor. You’re Jesse’s client.” Dan gently slapped Jesse on the back and nodded his head, “Drinks are on you.”

“Yeah, sure,” Jesse said, trying not to stare at Sarah’s distractingly low-cut top across from him.

“So….” Byron said, turning towards Sarah, “Where have you been all this time? Dan’s been keeping you from us. You should have come in today so I could show you my office.”

Sarah caught Dan rolling his eyes. Byron turned his body to focus on her, physically blocking Dan and Jesse from engaging in the conversation.

“Well, a girl has to keep her secrets, Byron, you know that,” Sarah said, “Besides, I was too busy to come to your little boys' club.”

“Ha!” Bryon laughed, shaking his head, “Little boy, huh? Is that what you think of me?”

“I haven’t seen any evidence to the contrary,” Sarah kept eye contact but flicked her eyes down to his crotch. With a smooth smile, she turned her body away from him and grabbed her wine glass to take a drink. She leaned forward, out of Byron’s grasp, and looked at Jesse.

“Jesse, I haven’t seen you since that night in Chicago,” Sarah said. Jesse looked at her and then her breasts before his eyes darted to the bar. “How are you?”

“I’m doing good. Yeah, I got a new job. Things are going well,” Jesse squirmed.

“I heard,” Sarah smiled, “That’s really great. Dan said it’s an awesome and really prominent company. I wish that Dan would be able to land something like that.” Sarah eyed her husband and gave him a wicked smile. Dan hadn’t realized it until just that moment, but Sarah was playing her game the second she walked into the bar.

Sarah swirled her wine glass. All the men waited with bated breath to hear what she’d say next. She turned to Byron, “Did you know that Jesse is a really, really good dancer?”

Byron shrugged, “Had no idea.”

Sarah cast her gaze to Jesse again, “It’s true. Jesse, do you know what they say about men who dance really well?”

Jesse looked like a deer in the headlights, “No…”

“Hmmmm,” Sarah said, gazing Jesse up and down, “Too bad.”

Despite the unfortunate circumstances, Sarah was enjoying herself, teasing Jesse and Byron in front of Dan and making them think lustful thoughts about her. She loved the power and attention it gave her. All three of them were like putty in her hands. She couldn’t wait to get Dan alone later and see his reaction to all of this.

Byron took a large sip and finished his scotch. Sarah eyed it and took another gulp of her wine. The small size pours weren’t nearly enough, “Byron, can you get me another?”

“Sure thing,” Byron said, raising his hand to catch the server's attention. When he did, he motioned to their drinks and gave her a thumbs up. Sarah was staring at him.

“Is there a wife at home, Byron?” Sarah asked.

Byron chuckled and knocked back his drink, “Not anymore.”

“I’m sorry,” Sarah said.

“Don’t be,” Byron eyed her, “It’s better this way. I was too much for her to handle.”

“What does that mean?” Sarah asked, leaning in.”

“I kept her satisfied and more. But she couldn’t quite ever keep up with me. Which is why I find you so intriguing.”

“How’s that?” Dan asked, cutting in.

Bryon eyed him, and a sly smile spread across his face. He looked at Jesse and then back to the loving couple at the booth. “I know all about your arrangement with your roommate. Now, I’m not one to judge, but it sounds like Sarah here has the same insatiable appetite as I do. That their spouse can’t quite keep up with them. Don’t get me wrong, I’m not sure I would marry you, Sarah, but I do love knowing an insatiable minx like yourself is out there, waiting to pounce.”

Sarah almost choked on her drink.

“Let’s change gears here,” Dan said, coming to the rescue, “We don’t really want to talk about that.”

“Why not?” Byron said, “It’s fucking fascinating. Letting a woman like this get with your schlubby roommate. What are you thinking?”

Dan stared daggers at him. Recognizing the rising tension, Sarah moved to change the conversation's course and proceed with her plan.

“So, Dan tells me you have him working on some exciting project,” Sarah said, “Something about a subdivision?”

“It’s way more than a subdivision,” Byron said dismissively to Dan. It’s a whole new community designed and controlled from the ground up.”

“Really?” Sarah said, feigning interest. The server returned with their drinks, and Sarah immediately asked for another. “Tell me about it. What makes it so special?”

Byron began talking about the project his company was working on. He kept the details vague but kept overstating how cutting-edge and important it would be. As he talked, Sarah slid her foot out of one of her heels and extended her leg, letting her calf run up and down against Jesse’s leg. Sarah had to stifle a laugh at his reaction. It looked like he was ready to cum right in his seat.

She shared a conspiratorial look with Dan. Despite his anger at the situation, his face betrayed his aroused emotions. Byron continued to talk about his secret project. Sarah nodded along but didn’t really listen to what he was saying. She knew the type of guy Byron was. He loved to hear himself talk so he would feel important and powerful.

“Isn’t that right, Dan?” Byron said, turning to her husband. As he did, his hand disappeared below the table and rested firmly on Sarah’s thigh.

“Sure,” Dan agreed, “We’ll get it all done on the right timetable.”

“That’s what I like to hear,” Bryon finished off his scotch, signaling for another. “Sarah, your husband is great at what he does. I’m sorry, but I’m going to keep him very busy over the next few months.”

“Oh,” Sarah said with a disappointed look, “If my husband is so busy, what ever am I going to do with myself?”

Byron chuckled and turned back to face her, “I can think of a few things.” He ran his hand further up her thigh and smiled at her. Sarah leaned forward and whispered, “You know, I’m disappointed I didn’t get that tour of your office earlier.”

“Really?” He said slyly as his hand massaged her thigh.

“Is it too late for one now?” She asked, “I’d want a private one, without your coworkers hanging around. Also,” she craned forward to speak into the older man’s ear, “can you dance?”

“Oh. Oh! Yeah. Yes, I can.” Byron sat up and checked his watch. Sarah could tell he was already well on his way to being sloshed. She took another long sip of her wine, finishing it off. “It’s late,” Bryon said, “Everyone should be gone by now.”

Byron smiled, “You want to go now?” Sarah nodded her head, smiling at him.

Byron turned to Jesse and Dan, “Hey boys, uh, Sarah didn’t get the office tour earlier. I’m just gonna take her across the street and show it to her. You guys stay here, we’ll be right back.”

Byron got out of the booth and held his hand to Sarah, helping her out while his eyes ran up and down her body. She shared a quick, knowing look with Dan, who simply nodded back to her. Sarah hadn’t realized just how much the alcohol had hit her until she stood up. Jesse looked heartbroken as Bryon led Sarah out of the bar.

“Are you really just going to let her go with him?” Jesse said pleadingly to Dan.

“She’s a big girl. She can handle herself,” Dan said, taking a long sip of his drink, “Besides, you didn’t try to stop them.”

Jesse just shook his head, “I…I don’t…”

“So here’s what’s going to happen,” Dan said, turning an angry gaze to Jesse. He gestured a finger back and forth between them, “You and me, we’re going to find a way to get me out of this whole thing. You’re going to help me, or I’m going to have a nice long chat with Byron about what I know.”

“There is no way out,” Jesse said, “Besides, I’m not scared of him.”

“Oh yeah? He’ll forget all about me and burn your world to the ground. You heard him back in your office, and you heard the threats he made against me. What do you think he’ll come after you with?”

A thought occurred to Dan at that moment. Maybe he should just contact Byron and burn Jesse again. But there were no guarantees that Byron would let Dan walk or that Jesse’s company wouldn’t still work with him. He needed a cleaner break.

“What do you want me to do?” Jesse was staring down at his drink.

“We’re gonna get your company to fire me,” Dan said.

“They won’t do it,” Jesse muttered, still staring at his beer, “Hiring you is a clause in our contract with The Lincoln Group. They’d have to get that approved by Byron, which, after tonight, I don’t think he is going to do.”

Dan sat back against the booth, trying to think of a way out of this. He still felt trapped, but at least now he had something of an accomplice in Jesse that he could take advantage of. He knew he still couldn’t trust Jesse fully, though.

“We’ll figure something out,” Dan finally said, finishing off his drink. He eyed Jesse, “Tab’s on you, right?”

Jesse nodded as Dan left him alone at the booth and headed out onto the street.

***

Across the street from the bar, Byron and Sarah rode up the elevator. Byron had his arm draped around Sarah’s shoulders as his eyes feasted on her cleavage. When the elevator doors opened, the dark floor of The Lincoln Group’s Minnesota office appeared before them. Byron led Sarah into the open atrium before a glass wall obstructed their path. He reached into his pocket and retrieved a set of keys, quickly unlocking a glass door. He held it open for Sarah, who walked through. Byron’s eyes were glued to her ass as he followed, it swayed hypnotically as he walked behind her.

“Which way to your office?” Sarah asked.

“This way,” Byron said, sliding up next to her and placing a gentle, guiding hand on her supple ass, leading her further into the depths of the office suite.

“Here it is,” Byron said as they walked to the end of a hallway to his corner office. He opened the door and let Sarah inside. She looked around at the decor as Byron started to take off his suit jacket and openly eye fucked Sarah.

“Byron,” Sarah turned to face him. The alcohol was starting to take effect as she saw the lust-filled expression on Byron’s face. “Do you have a kitchen here? Or, like a pantry?”

“Yeah,” Byron said, closing the distance between them, “There’s one across the office.”

“Could you run and get me a bottle of water so I can get more comfortable?” Sarah smiled as she looked Byron up and down. A shit-eating grin appeared on Byron’s face, and he raised his eyebrows.

“Sure thing,” He said as he walked over to the door, “I’ll be right back. Don’t go anywhere.”

“Oh, I won’t,” Sarah said, “I’ll be here waiting for you.” A smile played at the corners of her lips.

Byron flung open the door harder than he probably meant to do and disappeared into the hallway. Sarah quickly opened her purse, grabbed the USB, and hurried around the desk, her steps unsteady from the alcohol.

She quickly got on her knees, looking under the desk for Byron’s computer tower. All she needed to do was plug the USB in. To her growing horror, she couldn’t find the tower anywhere. It wasn’t under the desk, not even suspended under it. The cabinets were full of papers. She ran her hands along the monitor, looking for any kind of USB slot, but both were already filled. Sarah’s eyes darted around the room, looking for any wires running from the desk to a hidden tower somewhere, but she couldn’t find anything. Nothing behind the couch, nothing on the bookshelf. The only wire she could find was the cord to a power strip that powered the monitor.

Her body swayed on dramatically as she looked around, feeling like she was completely out of ideas. There wasn’t anything to plug the USB into. She hurried back over to the desk to peek under it one last time.

“I’m back,” Byron sauntered back in with a freshwater bottle in his hand. Sarah quickly put her sexy face back on, replacing the worried and frustrated one formed a moment earlier.

“It took you long enough,” Sarah said, standing up straight. “I was starting to get bored.”

Byron set the water bottle down on the desk, “What are you doing down there?”

“Oh,” Sarah stalled for time, trying to think up an excuse that wouldn’t get her caught, “Just wondering if there was room for me down there.”

“And?” Bryon asked as he slumped himself down into his chair, “Is there?”

“I’m not sure,” Sarah said.

“Why don’t you get down on your knees and see?” Byron suggested. Sarah stood staring down at him before slowly lowering herself to her knees. Byron unbuckled his belt and pulled it out of the hoops on his dress pants before unzipping his fly.

Sarah froze, watching as Byron slid off his pants. She was about to do this for no reason. No USB, no corporate espionage. Her entire plan just went out the window.

“What do you think of this,” Byron said as a semi-hard cock sprang into view as he lowered his boxers. It was girthy, longer, and thicker than Dan’s but still not as impressive as Lester's amazing cock. Still, she couldn’t take her eyes off it as she realized kneeling before this piece of shit man was making her wet. “Still think I’m a little boy?” Byron asked.

“No,” Sarah breathed, her eyes still focused on his cock.

“You know, it’s rude to stare,” Byron said as his hand looped behind Sarah’s head. His fingers ran through her blonde hair as he pulled her head towards his angry-looking cock. “Put that pretty little mouth on it.”

Sarah’s brain was still trying to think of a way to make the most of this situation. A way to get what Dan needed and somehow get access to Byron’s computer. But her body was already responding, her lips opening up, taking Byron’s cock into her wet, warm mouth.

Byron moaned as his cock disappeared into Sarah’s eager mouth. Sarah couldn’t believe how easily she had just obeyed his request and accepted her fate. She should have maneuvered into something else, going to another office. Looking in a conference room. Instead, her body just gave in to the path of least resistance. What was wrong with her? And why was she enjoying this so much? She felt like her body was running on different programming than her brain.

“Ah, yeah,” Byron moaned, “That’s it, Sarah. I knew from the moment I saw you that I’d have my cock inside of you. It was only a matter of time.”

“Mhmmmm,” Sarah moaned around Byron’s cock. She couldn’t help but compare it to Lester’s in her mind. Byron’s cockhead was unusually large, and he seemed to know what he was doing. Byron’s dick was pretty hot, but Lester’s amazing cock just did something to her that she couldn’t quite express in words. Sarah licked up Byron’s shaft and kissed its enormous head, “I’m surprised there’s room for me down here. I expected the space to be taken up by a computer.”

Byron chuckled, “Thank god for the IT nerds then. My computer is just the monitor and the Bluetooth keyboard and mouse. If I need to do any heavy lifting, I just remote into a more powerful workstation. I’m sure we would have figured out someplace else to get you on your knees.”

So, this whole thing was pointless. There was no computer to plug the USB into. She could still just get up and walk away. Get out of the office, saying she changed her mind. The wet cock in her hand throbbed, and Sarah looked down at it, unable to take her eyes off of it. It wasn’t Lester’s by any means, but she still felt powerful holding it in her hand.

“I would have managed. I’m very skilled,” Sarah whispered.

“Show me your skills then. I knew you’d be a good cocksucker,” Byron thrust his hips up, running his cock up Sarah’s hands.

Sarah looked up at him while lowering her tongue to his bulbous throbbing head, “You have no idea.” Then his cock disappeared into her mouth as Sarah lowered her face onto it. Sarah expertly stroked the shaft of Byron’s cock as she sucked as much of it into her mouth as she could manage.

“Mhhmmmmmm,” She moaned around his cock. Sarah had grown addicted to feeling her mouth stuffed full of cock, the sensation in itself turning her on immensely. All of this seemed so out of character, but it felt so fucking good to give in to the craving.

“Damn,” Byron breathed, staring down into Sarah’s green eyes, “I should have invited Dan up here so he could see this. I bet that little cuck would be hard as a rock seeing you on your knees for me. After all the shit he’s caused, I’d love to see the look on his face. Is this how you dance?”

Sarah slowly licked up Byron’s shaft, causing his body to shudder in response. Her tongue swirled around the head of his cock, licking a drop of precum that had formed there. Byron’s cum tasted different than either Lester’s or Dan’s. It was the most bitter of the three.

“Slow down,” Byron breathed, “Take your top off.”

Sarah begrudgingly let go of Byron’s cock and reached down to pull her form-fitting shirt off. The faux-alligator skin shirt held her breasts up so well that she hadn’t worn a bra. Byron’s eyes lit up as Sarah’s naked breasts were exposed to his sleazy gaze in the dim office.

“Fucking A,” Byron leaned forward and grabbed one of Sarah’s heavy breasts in his hand. He roughly pawed it as Sarah lowered her mouth back down onto his broad cockhead.

Part of her mind was still battling against the suppressive nature of her new instincts and urges. It still wanted her to get out of the office and go back and find Dan. This entire thing was now pointless because there was nothing to install the USB stick onto. Her grip tightened on Byron’s shaft, not willing to give full consideration to those thoughts. Maybe she could just suck his dick clean and then make her exit.

“Dan’s really been holding out on me,” Byron said, “We should have done this the last time you were here.”

“Well,” Sarah said as she kissed down his shaft and started licking his balls. She alternated between licking, kissing, and sucking on them despite the patchy matted pubic hair. “Before, I was just a happily married woman. But now that you’re making Dan work for you, I finally have the excuse I needed to get what I wanted.”

“And what's that? What do you want?” Byron was breathing hard as he stared down at Sarah while mauling her naked breasts.

“This,” Sarah said, licking over his ballsack and up his shaft, twirling her tongue over the towering head of his cock and then sucking it with abandon, her tongue flicking its oversized ridge. If she sucked hard enough and stroked him off, she knew she could make him cum quickly.

“Uhhhhh, fuck Sarah,” Byron moaned, “You’re so fucking dirty. I love it. You kiss your children with that mouth too?”

Sarah didn’t respond. She didn’t want to think about her kids right now. All she was focused on was Byron’s hot sleazy cock in her mouth. Byron let go of her tits and slumped down in the chair. Hands behind his head, he just watched Sarah go to town on his cock, amazed at the sensations she was eliciting from his body.

“Goddamn,” Byron muttered to himself as he watched Sarah work. He could feel her expert attention already starting to make his balls begin to tingle and get ready to explode in her. He was torn between letting her suck the life out of him or throwing her off and fucking her.

“Stop,” Byron said. Sarah pretended not to hear and continued to suck his cock with abandon. She knew he was getting close by the rate of his breathing and the shifting of his body. She just wanted to finish sucking his cock and drink his bitter cum.

“Stop it,” Byron said, gripping her hand, stopping it from running up and down his shaft. Sarah gripped his dick harder, making him jump. She kept her mouth firmly attached to his cock, creating a perfect suction-like seal. “Fuck. Sarah, stop,” Byron said loudly. Sarah finally broke her sucking trance and looked up at him.

“What?” Sarah said.

“Stand up,” Byron said, pushing his chair back with his legs. “Take off those pants.”

“You want me to take these off?” Sarah asked as she stood, playing with the hem of her pants.

“Now,” Bryon ordered as he marched over to the couch area of the office. He grabbed one of the plush chairs he’d sat in earlier and pulled it over to the window. He turned and watched as Sarah undid the button on her high-waisted pants and seductively lowered them to the floor. His eyes grew wide like saucers as she revealed the black thong she was wearing and her long, tanned and toned legs.

“Jesus, they really broke the mold when they made you,” Byron said, “Come here.”

Sarah slowly closed the distance between them with swaying steps. She felt completely exposed to this scumbag of a man, wearing nothing but her heels and black thong. But she had to admit to herself that she felt so fucking wet being on display like this, for someone like that, in front of a view of the city. Byron had irked her the first time they met. Made her skin crawl, and now she was offering herself up to this creep on a platter.

Byron glanced out the window and chuckled before turning his attention back to Sarah. He bit his lip, grabbed her by the back of the neck, and pulled her in for a sloppy kiss, his tongue immediately pushing its way into her mouth. His other hand grabbed her shapely ass and pulled her body towards him, his cock pressing hard against her thong-covered sex.

At some point, he had ditched his pants, standing naked except for his sloppy shirt and high black socks. His hand kept roughly massaging her ass as his cock ground up and down her. Sarah couldn’t help but feel her body moving in time with cock, reciprocating its insistent attention.

Was she really about to have sex with this sleazeball? This hadn’t been their plan. None of her plans had worked out the way it was supposed to. Maybe she could just drop to her knees and finish him off with her mouth. Before Sarah could formulate a concrete plan, Byron pulled back from her and twirled her around. His hand was still on the back of her neck. He pushed her forward. Her knees bumped into the edge of the chair he had placed by the window. He pushed her neck down until she gripped the back of the low chair to brace herself.

His hands were on the sides of her thong, pulling it down faster than her brain could compute. Byron roughly pushed her ass forward with his hands until Sarah put her knees up on the seat of the chair while her hands rested on the top of it.

“Fuck, I’m going to enjoy this,” Byron said as he quickly shuffled behind Sarah and ran his cock between the tops of her thighs.

Sarah breathed hard and hung her head in anticipation. She could have walked out of there at any time, but she knew that her body was in the driver’s seat, and it got what it wanted. Byron was running his cock up and down her slit, coating it in her wetness. Then he pulled his hips back and put his cock right up to her opening.

“Byron,” Sarah breathed, a thought suddenly dawning on her, “Do you have a condo – ughhhhh.”

Byron pushed the thick pole of his cock into Sarah’s wet entrance. Sarah’s hands braced themselves against the chair as she ground her knees into the seat.

“Fuck you’re, nnrggn, so tight,” Byron grunted from behind her. Sarah froze in place, encapsulated by the feeling of Byron’s swollen member pushing into her. “God, that feels fffucking good. Oh yeah.”

“Uhhhhhhgmmmmmm,” Sarah groaned as inch after inch of Byron’s cock pushed into the young wife. Her mouth contorted in pleasure, and her eyes rolled back as more and more of Byron’s large cock pushed into her. The low chair provided the perfect angle for Byron to fuck her, his cock pressing right up to all the perfect places inside of her. “Ohhhhhhhhhhh,” she moaned as Byron’s cock was finally fully embedded inside of her. His balls slapped against the bottom of her asscheeks.

“Holy fuck,” Byron said loudly as he grabbed her shapely hips, “I’m finally inside of you. I’ve been waiting for this. Fuck.”

“Open your eyes and look out the window,” Byron said. Without hesitating, Sarah did as she was commanded. She opened her eyes and saw the Minnesota skyline outside.

“Lower,” Byron sneered, “Look down across the street.”

Sarah did as he said, her eyes shifting from the dark night sky to the dimly lit street below. She scanned the street, her eyes stopping on the illuminated sign for the bar they had just been sitting at. Standing outside the door was Dan, leaning against the wall, watching the entrance to Byron’s building.

“What do you see?” Byron asked.

“Dan,” Sarah breathed back. Byron pulled his cock slowly out of Sarah before quickly ramming it back in.

“Ughhhhh,” Sarah grunted as she was rocked against the chair.

“Do you think he knows what’s happening up here?” Byron said. Sarah closed her eyes and turned her attention back to what was happening behind her, “Maybe.”

“No,” Bryon said, “Keep looking at your pathetic husband out the window.”

Sarah opened her eyes again and looked down at Dan, who was standing vigilant on the street below, waiting for her return.

“Watch Danny boy while I make his wife my bitch,” Byron grunted as he started jackhammering Sarah’s pussy. He held her hips in place with an iron grip as he fucked her relentlessly on the office chair. Again, Sarah appreciated how smooth Byron’s strokes were. He was more measured in his fucking than, say, her husband Dan was. But Lester was on her mind. The brute wasn’t smooth, he set a violent tempo when he fucked her, and whatever speed he set, she knew she’d explode on his glorious organ.

Sarah stared at Dan, several floors below her, as the man who had been stressing him out hammered into her. Sarah wanted to keep looking at Dan and maintain that connection to her husband, but Byron’s pistoning cock just felt too fucking good. She closed her eyes and focused on his cock, running back and forth inside of her. Sliding in and out like a machine, hammering into all her most sensitive places, bouncing her off him. The hot, throbbing feeling of his cock buried inside of her.

“Mhmmmhmmfuuck,” Sarah moaned.

“That’s right, Sarah,” Byron hissed from behind her, “Moan for me. Nobody’s here. Moan as loud as you want. Moan loud enough for Danny boy to hear you down there. Moan for me. Moan as I fuck you!”

“MHMHMMHMHMHMMMMM,” Sarah let out a guttural moan in response. His words made her feel completely unbridled as she dug her knees into the seat and thrust back against his cock, “UUGH, AH, Ah, ah, Ffffuuuu, mhmmhmmm, Yeah.”

“Fuck yeah, baby,” Byron grunted, his death grip leaving handmarks on her hips, “Moan my name, bitch.”

“Byron,” Sarah said loudly into the office, “BYRON. OH FUCK. BYRON. DON’T STOP.”

“That’s right,” Byron chuckled as his hips kept rhythmically thrusting forward, his naked cock sliding in and out of Sarah’s unprotected pussy with abandon, “Shit.”

“Uh god,” Byron said. He leaned forward and licked his tongue up Sarah’s back over her spine, making her shiver at the chill. One of his hands stayed gripped to her hip while his other hand grabbed roughly onto her shoulder. Each time he thrust into her, he grabbed her shoulder hard and pulled her back onto his ramming cock.

“Look at your stupid husband down there,” Bryon said. “He didn’t even try to stop me tonight. He just let you come up here and get fucked. Well, while you’re in Minnesota, you’re my bitch, got it?”

“Mhmmhm, oh, uhhh, ah, ah, ah uhhh, ohh, ooomygod,” Sarah whined.

“Whose bitch are you?” Byron demanded.

“Uhhhh, yours. Yours.” Sarah moaned back.

“Whose bitch?” Byron said.

“YOURS,” Sarah shouted, “I’m Byron’s bitch!”

“Heh, that’s right,” Byron laughed. “Look down at your husband. Do you see him?”

“Mhmm, uhh, ya – yes,” Sarah said, her eyes having trouble staying focused on Dan on the street as Byron’s hammering cock made her body jump with each thrust.

“Tell him,” Byron said, “Tell him whose bitch you are.”

“Dan…,” Sarah started as she felt this new level of humiliation and degradation of Dan start to blossom into an orgasmic flower inside of her. She knew that her next admission was going to send her over the edge. “Dan,” Sarah breathed, “I’m Byron’s bitch now. He fucks me so fucking good. I’m all his. All Byron’s. All Byron’s bitch.”

Sarah felt her body start to quake as the heat from Byron’s cock seemed to wash over her entire body. Her nails dug into the fabric of the chair as she ground her teeth together, “Uhhhhh. Oh. Fuck. Please. Please. Give it to me. Don’t stop. Uhhh, I’m gonna. I’m gonna.”

Byron shouted to the empty office, “Cum for me, Sarah. Cum on my cock. Let your husband see.”

“OHGOD,” Sarah’s body convulsed as she felt Byron’s cock inside of her. Each thrust into her was like another rapid domino that pushed her orgasm higher, searing it into existence, “FUUUCKKKKKKK.”

Her muscles grew tense, and her toes flexed out, pointing. Her fingers dug into the couch. She arched her back and thrust her breasts out as she loudly screamed, “AHHHHUHHHHHHHHHHHMMMHMMMMFFUUUAA”

“MMMMHMMHMMHMMHMMMMM,” Sarah groaned as her orgasmic fireworks continued to explode inside of her. She was gasping for air as she came down hard, her body continuing to feel little tremors of pleasure on Byron’s cock.

“Fuck,” Bryon grunted, “I’m gonna cum.”

Sarah pushed herself off Byron’s cock, not wanting to let him cum inside of her. She twirled around and sat down on the chair as Byron thrust his cock towards her face. She eagerly opened her mouth and took his cock into it.

“Uh Fuck,” Byron grunted. The first rope of hot cum blasted against the back of her throat, causing her body to jerk. She thought his cum was going to blast her off the chair.

“Oh yeah,” Byron said, still pumping his spewing cock into her, feeling his balls completely emptying into Dan’s wife. “FUCK THAT FEELS GREAT. TAKE IT ALL SARAH. TAKE ALL MY CUM.”

Byron looked down at Dan’s pretty wife, worshiping his cock. Her throat swallowed his load. Byron looked out the window at Dan standing alone on the street corner, and he chuckled, shifting his attention back to Sarah. Eventually, he stopped ejaculating inside her, his last rope erupting out, accompanied by a long groan.

Byron was breathing hard. His hands still gripped the back of her head. Sarah opened her eyes and looked down at the street where Dan was still waiting patiently for her, checking his phone.

Slowly and with a groan, Byron pulled his cock out of Sarah as he stood up. He stumbled back and just admired the scene before him. Sarah Williams propped back on a chair, thong dangling around one of her silver heels as her heaving chest slumped forward, trying to catch her breath.

Sarah slowly caught her breath and shuffled off the chair. The alcohol in her system was making her dizzy as she fumbled around, looking for her thong. After finding it, she weakly pulled it back up.

Byron had flopped himself onto his office couch. His eyes were shut, and he wore just his dress shirt and socks. Sarah quickly put her pants and shirt back on. Without bothering to say anything to Byron, she left his office. Although she wanted to make a beeline for the stairs, she opened a few doors, hoping to see the glimmer of a computer tower – anything she could plug the USB into. Then, she noticed that some of the hallways had discreet security cameras.

Her face was red from being caught on camera, and she played the part of a drunk woman looking for a bathroom. Playing up her dizziness as she navigated the office halls until she found the bank of elevators. As powerful as her orgasm had just been, she couldn’t help but find herself craving something more. Someone more. Her mind immediately thought of Lester. He never left her like this. She felt humiliated. On uneasy feet, she rode the elevators back down to her waiting husband on the street below.

***

Lester felt the rage boiling inside of him. This wasn’t how things were supposed to go. Sarah and Dan had briefly dropped some things off in the apartment in the morning before heading to the airport to fly to Minnesota for his work.

Was Sarah actually going to fall to such a weak boy like Jesse? What kind of leverage did this company have? Since his call with Jesse, Lester had been extensively researching and digging up dirt on Jesse and his company. From what he could tell, Jesse’s company had The Lincoln Group as their client. And those guys seemed shady as hell, a typical multinational corporation that said all the right things to Congress but had their fingers in all kinds of different pies. Completely vertically integrated, with very little information available about them. For such a large and powerful corporation, they mysteriously weren’t publicly traded, which meant there was very little information he could dig up.

He didn’t want to get too distracted digging into them, but he had trouble suppressing the urge. They were an unknown variable that he hadn’t realized was part of this equation. He couldn’t have that. He didn’t like the feeling of not being in control. The unknown entity was a black hole full of baseless ideas that Lester’s brain generated.

Fortunately, he would have more answers soon. Then, he would figure out what he was up against and how it would impact his hold on Sarah.

He opened his computer console again and rechecked the validation he had reviewed a few minutes earlier. Jesse’s company had been easy to breach access to. They used a common suite of tools with known vulnerabilities. He began downloading all of their communications that mentioned Jesse or The Lincoln Group, and he would soon find out exactly what was going on.

Lester uploaded a package to Jesse’s work computer. Once Jesse unknowingly accessed it, the file would worm its way into his computer, allowing Jesse’s machine to be a slave to his. Lester could use Jesse’s work computer as a relay to push into The Lincoln Group’s network without it being traced back to him.

Lester took a calming breath. Patience.

It would all work out in the end. All of these were just momentary setbacks that he would swiftly bring to heel.

***

Dan was exhausted. He pulled their carry-on suitcases down the hall of his apartment building. Sarah was ahead of him with her keys out already. He had managed to escape Minnesota early, leaving the morning after the night of the bar and Sarah running off with Byron.

They hadn’t talked much about it, but Sarah had confirmed that Byron had fucked her in his office. He knew she needed time to process everything despite his need to know all the details about what had happened. Byron had sent him some passive-aggressive emails that morning on their way to the airport about how skilled his wife was, but he ignored them, having shut off all of his devices.

While Sarah had crashed early last night, Dan had tossed and turned all night. He couldn’t stop thinking about what had happened. His cock had been rock hard until dawn just thinking about Sarah with Byron and the look she’d given him when he caught her leaving Lester’s room the last time she’d visited.

The unknown was plaguing his mind. He desperately wanted to see Sarah in action. He gritted his teeth as they grew closer to his apartment door. He knew he shouldn’t want to see Sarah with another man. At least, he knew it was bad for him to lose control like that again. But with the events around them lately, the denial of being party to them and his blue balls from the previous evening had his head swimming with images of Sarah being bad.

Fuck, that look she gave me in the hallway. It implied so many things to him. They really should have talked about it afterwards to ensure they were on the same page but it felt too late now. As life moved on, whatever answers he got out of her would be sanitized by time. And, maybe deeper down, he knew that the unsanitized answers turned him on in a way he wasn’t quite ready to deal with.

Sarah turned the lock on the door and opened it, stepping inside and out of the way for Dan to wheel the carry-ons inside. Sarah shut the door behind him and locked it. Dan brought the luggage to his bedroom, and his wife followed him. They both got changed, Sarah sliding into a comfortable outfit for lounging around the apartment. She’d be heading back to Middleton the next morning.

Dan eyed Sarah as he unpacked his bag. She wore a loose pair of cream-white sweatpants that went up to her belly button, which had a tapered cut. Surprisingly, she had a matching white tube top on, so she likely wouldn’t need a restrictive bra. Then she’d put on a matching oversized white cardigan that went down past her knees.

His eyes couldn’t help but roam over her body as he felt his cock getting hard all over again.

“Let’s go watch a show,” Sarah said, opening the door to her bedroom before Dan could voice his desire for her. He swiftly followed behind her, trying to figure out what it was his mind wanted and how best to get it.

Dan was on the couch scrolling through Netflix, trying and failing to find something to watch. “Hey honey, wanna watch Letters to the Frontlines again?” he joked, seeing the title in the suggestions queue.

Sarah laughed giddily as she made herself a cup of tea in the kitchen. Then Dan heard the familiar sounds of Lester’s plodding feet. Lester appeared in the threshold of the hallway with an intense look on his face. Dan read it as the man being deep in intense frustration, and an anger underscored with deep lust. Wearing only a pair of tight white underwear, Dan winced at seeing Lester’s pale, almost naked body. The rolls of fat, the thick matted hair covering his skin. His oddly proportioned frame on display. Lester’s eyes gazed across the living room until he heard the kettle boiling water in the kitchen.

Without so much of a glance in Dan’s direction, Lester marched across the living room and disappeared into the kitchen. Dan heard the slapping tracks of his determined bare feet cross the room behind him.

“Lester – what the,” he heard Sarah say, followed by the sounds of plastic cups and pots clattering onto the kitchen floor. Dan sprang to his feet, letting the remote drop onto the carpet. He quickly made his way around the couch and over to the kitchenette. He stopped abruptly as his eyes took in the scene.

Lester had Sarah’s pert ass pinned up against the counter as his hands mauled her body while his large illicit tongue was running up the side of her mouth, leaving a wet trail. Sarah’s perfect behind was pushing against the counter, one of Lester’s legs between hers, prying them apart. His hand was roughly grabbing the bottom of her ass cheek while the other held her by the back of her neck. Dan watched in horrified fascination as Lester turned Sarah’s head towards him and pressed his ugly, fat lips against hers.

To his growing horror and reluctant arousal, Sarah’s surprised features seemed to relax at the urgent kiss. He watched as she closed her eyes, seemingly giving in to Lester’s aggressive pursuit. After a moment, he could see that Sarah had become a full participant in the kiss, moaning back into the undressed man’s mouth.

Lester ardently ground his crotch against Dan’s wife. This was all so sudden and not something Dan had expected. He recalled the power of marching into his home and holding Lester by the throat, but that power was out of his grasp now. Maybe it was the past day or so of living in a constant state of denial and arousal, finally bubbling up to overwhelm his carefully managed semblance of control. Whatever it was, in this fleeting moment, Dan felt like he was rapidly regressing to his impotent state of letting Lester do whatever he wanted with his wife.

Dan managed to ball a hand into a fist, and as he did, he noticed his dick bulging against the material of his pants. Lester kept up his savagely aggressive mauling, Sarah’s body seemingly capitulating to Lester’s desires.

Lester broke their kiss with a snarl, both hands coming up to Sarah’s shoulders and throwing off her oversized cardigan. Sarah gasped at the boldness, her arousal going from zero to one hundred within the few seconds of being in Lester’s presence. With Dan, she was like a dial that needed to be finely tuned and gradually turned on over time, cranking up until she was ready to go. With Lester, it was just a push of a single button, and she was uncontrollably turned on.

Lester licked his lips, and his head darted forward, licking her neck again while pinning her against the counter. His tongue trailed down her chest, licking all over every inch of exposed skin. Sarah’s eyes locked with Dan’s, both of them standing there staring at each other. They’d been here before. She noticed the bulge in her husband’s pants, and Dan couldn’t help but notice the way Sarah’s body seemed to be grinding itself on Lester’s thigh.

Sarah bit her lip and looked at Dan, waiting for some sense of direction, asking with her eyes. What did he want her to do? Would he let her continue with this, or did he want her to stop? Dan didn’t say their safeword ‘pineapple,’ nor did he say anything else. He just stood there staring at his troll-like roommate roughly having his way with his wife. Sarah watched Dan’s features for several more seconds, trying to discern what he wanted her to do. In the end, she took his lack of response and clear arousal on his face for consent to give in to his roommate. Something she was more than happy to comply with.

Lester’s tongue worked down her chest until it met with the fabric of her cream-white tube top. He didn’t like his access to her breasts being impeded, and he roughly pulled it up her body awkwardly. Sarah tried to comply, moving her arms up to allow it to be pulled up over her head. Once Sarah’s pendulous breasts were free, Lester abandoned pulling the top off her, letting it pin her arms in the air as his mouth found a breast and sucked it in. Lester twisted the top in his fist, pinning Sarah’s hands against the cupboard.

“Ohh,” Sarah’s hips shot out against Lester’s body, her crotch wedged against his pressing thigh as she struggled to free herself from her top. Lester didn’t relent, continuing to press himself against Sarah as he held her hands firmly in place over her head.

“Lester…” Dan finally managed to say, his voice wavering. Lester just ignored him and continued mauling Sarah’s naked breasts. Lester took Dan’s weak tone as almost a green light for him to proceed.

Sarah looked at her husband, her face wanting to communicate, ‘It’s okay,’ but her eyes closed as her head fell back in abject pleasure.

Eventually, she freed her arms, letting her top drop to the floor. It lay next to the discarded Cardigan, the pristine white in sharp contrast to the dirty laminate floor of the kitchen.

Sarah’s now freed hands went to the back of Lester’s head, pulling him to her chest as he continued to lick and suckle on her breasts, his fat tongue swirling over her exposed nipples. Sarah’s body shuddered, and Dan watched as the lower half of his wife’s body seemed ready to be exposed by the way it was gyrating and humping against his slobbish roommate.

Lester seemed to notice her signal as well. With a loud grunt, he bent over and picked Sarah up with his arms, catching her completely off guard. On unsteady feet, Lester held Sarah up, her arms encircling his neck, holding on as he plodded out of the kitchen past a stricken Dan.

Lester either couldn’t wait to get to his bedroom or just couldn’t physically carry Sarah that far. He brought her over to the couch where Dan had just been sitting and yanked off her sweatpants, revealing Sarah’s white lace panties. Sarah sat up and quickly tugged on the waistband of Lester’s once-white underwear. The briefs dropped to his ankles as Lester’s turgid cock sprang out, smacking Sarah in the face. She didn’t waste any time, grabbing it eagerly with both hands and dropping her drooling mouth onto its length.

Lester just stood there, hands on his hips, watching Dan’s wife devour his cock. He looked over at Dan, who seemed to be paralyzed by what was clearly happening in front of him. Lester now felt he had the cheat code to override Dan’s control. He needed to be gradually introduced to arousing elements to loosen his control. When he discovered Sarah and Lester at his home, it was a sharp introduction, letting him retain his control. Lester wouldn’t make that mistake again.

A shit-eating grin spread onto Lester’s face as he looked at Dan, now understanding the best way to make him compliant. His gaze shifted to Sarah sitting on the couch before him, eagerly worshiping his cock. It was time to teach Dan another lesson and see how far he could warp his image of his perfect wife and the mother of his children.

Lester made sure to keep Sarah connected to his cock as he moved beside her and laid down on the couch. Sarah followed him, never taking her mouth or hands off his cock. She was on her knees on the couch, bent over licking and sucking Lester’s cock with hearty abandon.

From the doorway to the kitchen, Dan watched as Sarah’s bouncing head disappeared below the back of the couch. He could still hear her light, muffled moans and the wet, unmistakable slurping sounds of his wife’s mouth on another man’s cock.

This was the do-or-die moment for Dan. The back of the couch blocked his view of what was happening, but the sounds left no doubt in his mind. Dan usually missed out on the full view of what was happening, whether through the peephole or just being denied. Dan stood there, staring at the back of the couch and listening.

Dan’s uncontrollable arousal propelled him forward. First, one step, then another as he made his way to the side of the couch. Sarah’s white panties and her fantastic bubbly ass were pointed out towards him as her head bobbed up and down on Lester’s crotch. Dan couldn’t take his eyes off the illicit affair, his hand absently reaching out to find the plush leather chair as he tried to sit down.

Lester saw Dan sitting down out of the corner of his eye and smiled.

 Time to twist the fucking knife.

“You miss this?” Lester said to Sarah. She looked up at him with her piercing green eyes and nodded before licking up his shaft.

“Mhmmm, I did. I missed it. I missed this cock. I missed you,” Sarah’s mouth returned to Lester’s thick cock, and he watched as she went lower and lower down onto it.

“Good girl,” Lester said as his hand went to the back of her head, guiding her up and down on his cock.

“Uhhhhh, oh that feels great, Sarah baby, suck my cock. Yeah, just like that - you know how I like it,” Lester said. Sarah continued to wantonly bob her head up and down with abandon on Lester’s cock. She already felt her panties getting wet. She loved sucking cock, especially one like Lester’s. She had been craving Lester ever since the night before with her encounter with Byron. No one made her cum as hard as Lester could. Her mind was racing at everything that was happening, but she pushed it all aside to just focus on her favorite cock in the world.

“Ughh, lower. Suck on my balls,” Lester commanded.

Sarah took her mouth off Lester’s cock with an audible ‘pop’ and quickly descended down to his thickly matted public hair, her face disappearing into it as her tongue trailed down his colossal ballsack. Lester’s frizzy salt and pepper pubic hair pushed into her closed eyes and up her nose, but it didn’t bother her as she sucked on his balls and inhaled his primal scent deeply. Her tongue darted out and traced circles on his hefty, wrinkled nuts.

Dan just sat there watching the love of his life devour Lester’s scrotum. A small voice inside of him was screaming, begging for him to listen and take some action, any action, but he felt the same way he did whenever he took an edible. Couch-locked, unable to move or react. It was like he was watching a particularly engrossing porn clip. Unable to affect the outcome of what he watched.

“Lower,” Lester said, causing Sarah to move down the couch onto her stomach so she could lick the underside of his balls. She kept stroking his massive cock as her mouth slobbered over every inch of Lester’s massive gonads.

“Lower,” Lester said again. Sarah didn’t disobey. She obliged by licking down below his balls to the musky area between his legs. Lester squirmed at the sensation, enjoying every swab of her tongue across his taint. But he wasn’t done yet. Not now that Dan was sitting here watching. He needed to show him just how much Sarah belonged to him now.

“Lower,” Lester said again. Sarah stopped licking and looked up at Lester, who stared back at her. The fat man reached down and grabbed his own knees, pulling his body into a crunch, the rolls of fat quivering with tension. Dan thought he looked ridiculous, somewhat like an overfed hedgehog on its back. His quick, disparaging smile disappeared as he suddenly realized what Lester was doing. Sarah dropped her head again, her tongue licking between his open cheeks before going further in.

“Yeaaah,” Lester chuckled as he felt Sarah’s tongue graze his asshole, “Nice little circles like that.”

Sarah knew she should be repulsed. Repulsed by what she was doing, she could feel Lester’s cock throb in her hand and knew the effect she was having on his cramped body. She loved that feeling. Being in control of it, his cock. The power of making someone like Lester shudder. She lapped her tongue out more, licking and circling it around Lester’s hairy unclean asshole, finding herself getting more and more turned on at her illicit and depraved actions.

“She ever cleaned your asshole before?” Lester said offhandedly to Dan. “No? Your wife gives one hell of a rim job. I guess she saves it just for her lover.”

“Keep doing that, baby. Yeah, yeeeaahh, right there. Daddy like. Keep going. Fuck yeah,” Lester groaned, his hand removed from one knee and on the back of Sarah’s head, holding her firmly in place as she thoroughly tossed his salad. Her body was writhing on the couch, clearly enjoying Lester’s firm hand and encouraging words.

Dan couldn’t believe what he was seeing. Sarah’s perfect mouth. The one he kissed on their wedding day. The one that kissed his daughters on the forehead every night before bed was firmly attached to his disgusting roommate’s puckered asshole. He felt himself getting lightheaded watching. A memory popped into his head, where Sarah had vehemently expressed her disgust at the idea of any sexual act relating to anyone’s asshole. And now she was here, feasting on his ugly roommate’s.

“Mhmmmmmm,” Sarah moaned as her tongue lashed out at Lester’s asshole. The coppery, bitter taste was just a pleasant afterthought as she enjoyed this much more than she ever thought she would. The simple act of licking Lester here was like pouring jet fuel on a fire, making her body crave more and more. She pushed herself up off the couch, despite Lester’s strong hand on her head, and pulled her panties off.

“I need you inside me,” Sarah said, urgently climbing up atop Lester’s grotesque body. Lester just watched as the beautiful mother climbed his mass and straddled him - her wet pussy pressed against his cock. She held it there for a second, eyes closed, just feeling his hard cock against her wet slit and clit. Then she slowly moved up, letting his cockhead brush against her clit. Then back down. She did this a few times before she went all the way up and positioned her entrance on top of his cock. She drew in a sharp breath as she began to lower herself onto Lester’s massive cock, letting him inside her.

Her breath quivered as she took more and more of Lester’s pulsing cock into her.

“That’s it,” Lester growled, “Take it all, baby.”

“Ohhhh ffffuuck,” Sarah groaned. She lowered herself fully on Lester’s cock, “God, I feel so fucking full.”

“That’s because you are,” Lester said. They both stayed still for a moment looking at each other as Sarah adjusted to Lester’s cock inside of her, feeling his quickened heartbeat deep within her. Tentatively, Sarah began rolling her hips on top of Lester. His hands came up and grabbed a handful of each ass cheek in them, kneading them as Sarah started to ride him.

Lester was just bucking his hips off the couch enough to spur Sarah on. He didn’t want to ruin her pacing but ensured his cock was hitting all the sensitive areas inside of her. Sarah’s hands were resting on Lester’s flabby chest, pushing her breasts together for him to salivate over.

“I’ll never get tired of fucking you,” Lester groaned.

“You’d better not,” Sarah breathed, eyes half closed while looking down at Lester.

“Did you see that Dan?” Lester said, “She didn’t even think about putting a condom on me. Isn’t that right, Sarah?”

Dan just stayed silent despite Lester’s taunting. The image of his wife’s beautiful body riding this ogre was transfixing.

“No….no condom,” Sarah moaned, throwing her head back as she picked up the pace with her hips. “Never again.”

“Why not?” Lester urged her on.

“They fucking suck,” Sarah said, “It’s so much better without one. My Daddy’s cock is too good to be covered.”

“It’s better raw,” Lester corrected her. “Tell Dan you like it raw. Tell him.”

Sarah didn’t turn to look at Dan. With her eyes clamped shut, she was focused on riding Lester’s huge cock, “I love it raw, Dan. I only want Lester to fuck me raw from now on.”

“Heh,” Lester said, tightening his grip on her ass, pulling her tightly back down on top of him in time with Sarah’s movements. She moaned at the strength of his hands and the way he expertly manipulated her body at the right moments. Lester could tell if he kept pushing things verbally, he’d have Sarah cumming in no time. He knew Dan’s presence could be a lever he could exploit with her.

“Where do you want me to cum?” Lester urged, “Where’s Daddy allowed to cum, Sarah?”

Sarah’s pace picked up. Lester’s words were pushing her to her orgasm faster than she anticipated. Talking like this. Admitting these things in front of her husband was driving her wild. Her ‘betrayal’ and submission to someone her husband detested only served to make her wetter than she’d ever expected. Her leaking fluids covered the belly of the fat man beneath her.

“Fuck,” Sarah moaned as she felt an orgasm fast approaching. She could feel it hanging over her body, ready to crash down and consume her. “You can come anywhere. Any fucking where you want. I don’t care. I just want your cum.”

“What do you think, Dan?” Lester said, “Should I cum in that pretty mouth of hers? What do you think, Sarah? Can I cum in your mouth?”

“Ugh, yes,” Sarah moaned, each word spoken further stoking the fire inside of her, “I want your cum pouring down my throat. Into my belly. It tastes so fucking good.”

“Or I should cum all over her chest? Maybe spray on her face,” Lester said. Sarah’s body seemed to shiver at the sound of his words, imagining what that would feel like. Lester just grinned, “Or maybe I’ll cum in this tight pussy of hers like this and see if we can get you that boy Dan failed to give you.”

“Oh fuck, fuck, fuck,” Sarah moaned as she started to ride Lester like a woman possessed, her orgasm just barely out of reach. If she kept up this pace, it would be hers to have it in seconds. “Don’t stop. God, please fuck. Ohmygod. OH, OOOH, mmmm, Jesus. Yes. Yes.”

“Or,” Lester said through gritted teeth as he braced himself for Sarah’s insistent fucking. He let go of her ass, and both of his meaty hands planted themselves on her swaying breasts, tweaking her nipples, “I could cum in your ass.”

“FUUCK,” Sarah screamed as she threw her head back and thrust her breasts into Lester’s lecherous hands. “Whatever you want, Lester. Cum wherever you want.”

The patiently waiting orgasm came crashing down on Sarah, igniting the nerves in her body on fire. “Ahh, oh fuck. Fuck YEEESSS,” Sarah screamed, arching her back, nails digging into Lester’s flesh. Sarah was panting hard, trying to catch her breath as waves of pleasure washed over her body.

Lester had a shit-eating grin plastered on his face, staring up at Sarah. He looked over at Dan, who was sitting immobile in a catatonic state in the chair. “Did you hear that?” Lester grinned, “Your wife wants me to stick my cock in her ass and fill it with cum. I’m gonna save that for a private date when you’re not around.”

“Mhmmhmmmm,” Sarah was still catching her breath, frozen in place, still enjoying the after-effects of cumming on Lester’s cock.

“Get off me,” Lester said, “I’m going to fuck you doggy style so Dan can watch your face.”

With a groan, Sarah pulled herself up off of Lester’s cock. She stared down at the massive appendage covered in her juices. Its absence from inside her created a deep need she knew just how to fill. She swung her leg off the seat as Lester shimmied up the couch awkwardly. Without waiting for his command, Sarah put herself on all fours on the cushions, waiting for Lester to get behind her.

Lester got onto his knees behind Sarah and rubbed his cock up and down her wet and waiting slit. She pushed back on his cock, trying to get it inside of her, but he chuckled and continued to play with her.

“Mhmmm, Lester,” Sarah moaned in frustration, “Put it in me.”

“I will,” Lester said, “I want you to look at Dan and tell him what you want.”

Sarah lifted her head off the couch, the sweat on her face causing her hair to stay matted to her skin, “I want Lester’s cock inside me, baby. I want him to fuck me. Is that okay?”

Before Dan could speak, Lester abruptly pushed his entire length into Sarah, causing her to squeal delightedly. “It doesn’t matter what Dan wants, do you understand?”

“Yes,” Sarah breathed as she tried to get a grip on the couch as Lester fucked her from behind. He held her hips in place and slapped one of her ass cheeks as he increased the pace of his violent thrusts. Not wanting to give Sarah a minute to breathe.

Dan felt like he was having an out-of-body experience as he watched the coupling before him. His mind was watching, but his body was somehow disconnected.

“Look at your husband,” Lester said through gritted teeth. His face was getting red and flushed as he fucked Sarah with gusto, sweat dripping down his back and chest, running through the coarse dark hair matting his skin. Sarah raised her head to look at Dan, sitting there with arousal on his face. He looked like he was in agony. “Look how pathetic he is watching his wife get fucked. He won’t even lift a finger to do it himself. Who do you want to fuck and fill you tonight? Me or your husband?”

Sarah dropped her head to the couch, “You Lester. I want you.”

“But you fucked someone else on your trip, didn’t you? DIDN’T YOU!?” Lester said.

“Yesss,” Sarah breathed.

“Who?” Lester said.

“Byron,” Sarah squealed, “Dan’s client.”

“Not Jesse, huh?” Lester grunted as he pounded Sarah from behind.

“No,” Sarah dropped her entire torso to the couch, her ass still high in the air for Lester to fuck. She reached her hands out over the leather, looking for anything to grab onto. Something about what Lester just said scratched a part of Dan’s mind, but he couldn’t put the puzzle pieces together at that moment. All he could do was watch in horrified arousal at the scene in front of him. All cognitive function was devoted to absorbing every moan, groan, and twitch of Sarah’s body.

“So Dan just sat there like he is right now and, rrggh, watched you get fucked?” Lester said.

“No, he let me go with him. Dan stayed at the bar,” Sarah grunted.

“Was he good?” Lester said angrily as he power fucked Sarah ruthlessly. Each thrust caused her body to jolt forward, her hair jostling to and fro with the movement. His unrelenting pace and the angle of his cock was pushing Sarah closer to yet another powerful orgasmic detonation.

“He, he was okay,” She moaned into the leather, feeling her eyes rolling back in her head. Lester’s cock just felt so good. Everything about it was amazing, his hands on her hips. His balls smacking against her ass. The fact that Dan was watching and hearing everything they were saying. “I kept thinking of you,” Sarah admitted, “Afterwards, I just wanted you... Daddy.”

“Heh, hear that, Dan?” Lester said, “Your wife’s been craving me after she got fucked. She probably does the same thing after you leave her wanting more, too.”

“But,” Lester said, grabbing her hips tightly and pulling Sarah’s ass back onto him. He pushed forward quickly into her pussy before pulling out almost all the way and slamming it back in again. Each thrust a punctuation, “You. Don’t. Fuck. Anyone. Else. Unless. I. Say. So. NNNNnng. Got it? Not even him.” Lester nodded in Dan’s direction.

“Uhhhmhmmmmmm yes, Lester,” Sarah groaned, “I’ll fuck whoever you want.”

“It’s going to be your punishment,” Lester growled, “For fucking someone behind my back. I’m going to make you fuck somebody you hate to teach you a fucking lesson.”

“Mmmhmmhmmmmmmmmm,” Sarah moaned. She’d agree to anything Lester wanted at this moment as long as he didn’t stop fucking her. It felt way too fucking good right now. Nothing else in the world mattered. Consequences be damned. It didn’t even scare her that she felt like this was about to get so much better.

Lester wanted to complete his carefully constructed circle of humiliation tonight. He was eager to keep pushing Sarah while making Dan feel like the true cuck he knew him to be. It was time to finally put him in his place, at least for tonight.

“Tell your husband to take out his little thing and start stroking it. He’s not going to ‘reclaim’ you tonight. He’s going to cum watching you get taken by a real man.” Lester grunted.

Sarah raised her head to look at Dan. He looked like his mind was a million miles away, “Take it out, Dan. I want to see you stroking for me. I want to – OW”

WHAP

Lester slapped her ass harder than he ever had before, leaving an angry red handprint on her perfect butt cheek, “No. No improv. Just tell him to take it out and stroke that pathetic stiffy. You’re focused on me tonight.”

“Ughhhh,” Sarah groaned as Lester’s mammoth cock ground against her insides, in and out, in and out, over and over, unrelenting. “Take out your dick, Dan.”

As if in a trance, Dan lowered his pants and boxers in one slow motion, his erection sprang out over the elastic band. His hand immediately went to it, mouth hanging agape as he started to actively stroke himself.

“Yeah,” Sarah said, eyeing it, “Stroke it for me. Stroke that pathetic thing while Lester fucks the shit out of me.”

Perfect. Lester thought.

He let go of Sarah’s hips and watched as her body continued to rigorously fuck itself back onto his iron-hard cock. Now he could keep turning the screws on Dan and cut him down at the knees. Lester needed to take whatever momentum Dan thought he had and crush it.

“Who owns you, Sarah?” Lester snarled, “Who owns you - mind, body, and heart? Tell me.”

“Mhmmm fuckkk,” Sarah moaned, sweaty, her head pressing down into the couch, eyes barely open, staring at her husband stroking himself. She wasn’t sure what to say. She didn’t know what would be crossing the line for Dan, but at that moment, all she wanted to do was make Lester happy. Make him cum. “You do, Lester,” Sarah moaned loudly, “You, you fucking own me. You can fuck me whenever, wherever you want. I’m yours.”

“Damn fucking right,” Lester growled violently, slapping her ass again. This time, a low moan escaped her lips at Lester’s brutal handling of her. “What about at the hospital? I can fuck you there again?”

“Yes!” Sarah screamed as Lester’s cock was hammering against her G-Spot, “You can fuck me wherever you want!”

“What about your bedroom at home,” Lester breathed hard, almost wheezing now. Sweat was dripping off his forehead, falling onto Sarah’s back. She pushed back against him, her ass cheeks jiggling flawlessly each time. Lester held her by the base of her neck and held her down on the couch, “Answer!”

“FUCK LESTER! YOU CAN FUCK ME ANYWHERE!” Sarah screamed at the top of her lungs. Dan was now stroking himself faster and faster, not being able to control himself at all. “YOU CAN FUCK ME IN MY BED! ON MY FFF-FRONT FUCKING LAWN! I DON’T CARE WHAT DAN SAID! DO WHATEVER YOU FUCKING WANT TO ME! FFFFUUFFFUUCKK!”

“Do you get it now, Dan?” Lester snarled with venom at his roommate, “Sarah is mine. I’ll do whatever the fuck I want to her. She’s mine, not yours. She’ll fuck whoever I want, where ever I want. Your wife is mine.”

“OH FUCK. FUCK. FUCK. UHHHHHH. FUCK. LESTER,” Sarah said as her vision blurred and she got light-headed. All of the nerves in her body started to light up at once, ready for a massive orgasm to explode inside of her. Lester talking this much evil shit directly to Dan was oddly intensely turning her on. “I’m gonna. I’m going to, to. Ohmygod, Lester! LESTER!”

“Cum for me, Sarah,” Lester grunted, “Show your husband what it’s really like when you cum and aren’t just pretending for him.”

“AHHHHHHHMHMMMMHMMMMM,” Sarah’s toned back spasmed upwards uncontrollably as her hips quivered on Lester’s cock. An avalanche of an orgasm crushed down her nerves, and she lost the ability to see for several moments. Her face contorted into a near-demented mask of pure pleasure that only Dan could see. Dan couldn’t help but stroke himself harder at the unprecedented sight in front of him. Watching Sarah cum this explosively was too much for him to handle.

Lester never stopped his energetic thrusting into Sarah. Her pussy tightened around his cock as she came but he dug his heels into the arm of the couch and quickly pushed forward into the fist-like grip of her imploding pussy. He firmly held the back of her neck, pinning her to the couch as he relentlessly fucked her to make a point to both members of the married couple. Sarah’s orgasm was still rocking her body. A dribble of drool seeped out of her mouth as it hung open in a perpetual moan. Lester’s large stomach rested on her ass, placing extra weight on it as he deliberately and repeatedly drove his cock home.

As Sarah’s orgasm began to wane, Lester immediately pulled out of her and flipped her onto her back. Before she could comprehend what was happening, he was back between her legs, burying his cock into her wet and waiting clenched pussy, “Mhmmhmmm, Ahhhhhh. Oh, fuck yes. I love your cock!”

“Ugh, you feel so fucking good,” Lester growled, staring down at her. His overweight stomach was now pressing against her taut abdomen. Dan was rapidly stroking himself with abandon. His mind still felt disconnected from his body, but it registered the tingle in his balls, and he knew he was going to cum soon.

“You’re going cum again for me, Sarah. I’m going to explode and dump my entire load of cum into you when you do,” Lester said.

“Do it, Lester!” Sarah screamed, “I WANT IT.”

“What do you want!?” Lester said, holding her thighs in each hand as he pumped his massive cock in and out of her.

“Your cum. I want your cum. Give it to me,” Sarah pleaded, her hands going to Lester’s biceps, urging him to keep fucking her, “God, I want it. I need it.”

“You’re gonna get it. All of it. I’m going to fill you up,” Lester said, then he turned towards Dan and sneered, “Maybe I’ll even knock her up. Who knows?”

“Ohgod,” Sarah’s head rolled to the side and saw her husband furiously stroking his pole, watching them. There was no way he was going to last much longer. The familiar sensation inside of her suddenly burst to the surface again. She was about to explode again with all the sensory input at full stimulation. “Don’t stop. Please. Please. Please. Lester. Ohmygodrighttherelester. Baby fuck me! Oh, OH, Please!”

“I ain’t stopping,” Lester said firmly. He had waited until this moment to launch another attack at Dan’s heart. “The last time we fucked in my bed, do you remember what you said?”

Sarah shook her head as she closed her eyes and waited with bated breath to cum. She felt her muscles tighten, her pussy gripping Lester’s cock as her painted nails dug into his biceps.

The short man smiled and spoke slowly, relishing this truth. “You said-”

“I love you.” Sarah told him and opened her eyes, looking up at Lester’s ugly, grinning face. She couldn’t help herself. She was at the edge of a steep cliff. “I love you, Lester.”

“Again!” Lester growled. He looked between Dan’s face and Sarah’s. “Look at me and say it to me again. I want to cum to it.”

She felt like she was drowning in his commands, but she wanted his cum. She needed to feel that heat from him. She would do anything it took in that moment to make herself cum. “I love you,” she moaned while staring up at Lester’s ugly features, “I love you.”

Dan’s eyes blinked in a rapid sequence as his brain tried unsuccessfully to process what his ears were telling him his wife had just said. His hand slowed to a stop as he knew he was about to shoot. The dagger to the heart felt like heroin to the veins of his cock. It was probably just sex talk, he told himself. But he couldn’t help but feel the need to see this through to the end. He leaned in to watch.

Sarah grabbed Lester by the back of the neck and pulled him down on top of her for a deep kiss. Their tongues clashed as Lester continued to vigorously hump his gargantuan cock into her. The horny wife continued to moan the three words unintelligibly as their mouths connected. Sarah’s body repeatedly threw itself off the couch onto his cock as they sucked onto each other’s mouths, teeth, tongue and lips, crashing into one another. She’d never kissed another person so intimately and completely. She’d never wanted someone as badly as she needed Lester right then.

“Fffffffffff,” Sarah moaned into Lester’s mouth as every bit of her body exploded to fiery life. Her eyes rolled back in their sockets as her hips and torso twitched around Lester’s gigantic cock. Every fiber of her being seemed to come alive and transcend to a higher state of existence. Lester’s body and his swollen cock felt like the only things that mattered in the entire universe as she quivered below his thrusting mass. Her legs kicked out upward, and her toes curled inward. Every muscle in her body had tensed in anticipation. It was as if Lester was fucking the very core of her existence.

Cum shot out of Dan’s crotch in long ropes and landed on him, pattering his thighs and feet. As his balls emptied, his mind finally seemed to come back down to his body, and he began to process the illicit scene in front of him. A look of genuine horror spread across his face.

His ogre of a roommate had a huge load sloshing around in his balls. At the sound of Sarah’s words, the troll’s nutsack expanded, its wrinkles disappearing as it filled with his boiling fetid spunk. On his next downstroke into the lust-crazed wife, this a particularly vigorous one, his cock became wedged completely into Sarah’s quivering pussy. It was as deep as he’d ever been inside of her, cramming her full of his solid club of a cock. He felt the immediate ecstasy of his shaft expanding with the volume of the foaming fluids. Lester roared hoarsely and unleashed a tidal wave of cum into Sarah’s waiting pussy, her labia red and swollen, stretched around his girthy, pistoning shaft. Her body was still experiencing her own extended orgasm and instinctively tightened its grip on his cock, milking load after load of his hot, sticky seed into her canal. Lester came way more than either Dan or Byron ever could by an order of magnitude. The sticky flood of cum completely filled her to overflowing. The sensations of the spewing jet brought her orgasm to another level, quickly crescendoing like a rocket past all limits previously known to her.

“UH-UHHHH-UHHHHHHMHMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAHHHHHHHH,” Sarah screamed louder than she ever had before in her life, the piercing sound almost inhuman in its raw expression.

Somewhere distant, a floor below them, a dog started barking in response to the noise. Lester continued to thrust into Sarah, sending each rope of cum he deposited deep into the young mother. Their lips still mashed together, slowing as they both needed to catch their breaths.

“You taste like my ass,” Lester mumbled to the thoroughly violated wife.

Dan was sitting there, covered in his own cum, watching as Lester and Sarah’s bodies came to a complete stop. The only parts moving were their lips. Sarah’s voice saying ‘I love you’ to Lester played over and over in his head. He wasn’t entirely sure she wasn’t now whispering it to the monster on top of her. His brain felt like it had been shattered into a million pieces and was desperately trying to put itself back together. He had no idea how to chart these unknown waters or how to react to any of this. He had no map for what came next. He just sat and stared at the taboo coupling in front of him.

Eventually, Lester pulled himself free of Sarah. Dan saw his roommate's dripping horse-length cock emerge from his wife and dangle impressively between his legs, coated in Sarah’s copious juices. Lester chuckled derisively, catching Dan staring at his swinging cock, and he shuffled off to his bedroom.

“She’ll find her way to my bedroom again tonight,” Lester chortled as he disappeared into the darkened hallway.

Dan looked at his wife who had rolled onto her side, light snores coming from her. It looked like Lester had fucked her into complete submission.

Dan finally got to his feet, grabbed a box of Kleenex, and began cleaning himself off. The tissues kept sticking to his hands and ripping on his legs. He’d made an absolute mess of himself. Satisfied that he was mostly clean, he threw the tissues in the kitchen garbage and retrieved a blanket to put over Sarah’s naked well fucked form.

As he laid the blanket over his wife, he saw a thick trail of cum leaking out from her pussy. His brain still didn’t know how to process all of this. He put the blanket down on her and flopped himself back into the chair.

He didn’t want to go to bed and leave Sarah here by herself. He sat in the chair as his eyes got heavy. He told himself he was staying out here to guard Sarah, but he wasn’t sure he could stop Lester and Sarah if he wanted to.

If I wanted to. He wasn’t sure of that either.

His mind was in turmoil as he drifted off to sleep. All he wanted to do was talk to Sarah, but she was already ensconced in post-orgasmic bliss.

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J Lewis

Not sure how Mr. Silver did it but the final version was better than the alpha draft which IMO was damn near flawless. Bravo

Lenbow spring

Great, the story just gets better!

Rick57

Loved it!!

SmartSharks

Great chapter and one of the best! Cant wait to see where the story goes.

Dodge1109

The changes made the final draft have a much different feel to it. The subtlety of how Sarah was much more willing to go to Lester and please him was great! Going to be hard to convince Dan that it was all just “sex” talk as he witnessed her complete submission. It was also a little telling that she wanted Lester to “reclaim” her after Byron instead of Dan. Looking forward to the next chapter for sure…

Sean Thomas

Wow. Just wow. I'm like Dan right now looking for that box of kleenex

Royston smith

3 sex scenes plus Lester’s final triumph over Dan and Sarah’s full corruption and subjugation to Lester. Loved the bit where she told Dan to take his cock out “Yeah,” Sarah said, eyeing it, “Stroke it for me. Stroke that pathetic thing while Lester fucks the shit out of me.”“In that phrase is encapsulated Lester’s final victory. I can’t see anyway back for Dan now. The irony is Lester has triumphed over Dan but finds he has a competitor for Sarah’s pussy he didn’t know about, Byron.The Byron scene was pure gold. Sarah has to submit to Byron as she has backed herself into a corner by asking for a tour of his office. Then she finds there is no computer to plug Peter’s device into! So, it looks like they will have to go back to Minnesota again! Another irony. So far Mr Silver is keeping his plot line plates spinning expertly. Let’s hope it continues and we are in for an even more enjoyable ride.

Chris K

I totally forgot about Lester switching Dan's mattress at some point! Good call back! I like how this chapter shifted back into toxic attraction category, with the 'I love you's' and her thinking of Lester while getting fucked by Byron.

Michael Haase

So, does Sarah need Lester's permission to fuck Dan? Or does Dan need Lester's permission to fuck Sarah? It appears Dan is cut off unless Lester lets his girlfriend give him some relief, maybe a hand job for the little guy. Dan is increasingly marginalized; he has to keep Lester happy. Dan becomes more and more like a teenage boy, while Lester (Daddy) and Sarah (Mommy) take control. Sarah loves it because Dan loves it. She'll give the little guy some pleasure if Lester says he's been a good boy. Dan's children become more like siblings as Dan is no longer the head of household. Dan should increasingly be assigned apartment housekeeping chores to keep Lester happy. Sarah notices Dan persistent boner when he's under their control. Dan loves it.

keith kingsbury

Don Silver literally just leaves you wanting more and more !! Pure genius on every level 👏

Robert Smith

I totally agree. First draft was awesome but this is even better. I really like the changes to the Byron scene (keeping Byron from cumming inside her and the emphasis on her longing for Lester afterwards), the few extra mentions of Sarah wanting Lester’s baby, and how Sarah throws out more “I love yous” without much prompting from Lester. Dan has been a cuck for a while but damn did Lester take that up a notch in the end scene. He got Sarah onboard with humiliating Dan and she agreed to cut him off? Crazy. Just wow with this chapter. I’m glad I stuck around!

Michael Haase

"What does it mean Sarah" "It means I love Lester's Cock, I love fucking Lester, and you know what else it means...you love Lester fucking me, you get off on it sweety." "i don't" "Your boner says otherwise Dan" "Dan. I'm going to be fucking Lester a lot and we're both going to enjoy it." "Lester says I can't fuck anyone without his permission, I think he means you Dan, would you like that, would you like Lester cutting you off unless we get his permission?" "Oh look, little Danny is excited about needing Lester's permission." "Wow, we can cut little Danny off and he'll love it." "Are you going to constantly masturbate again, that may not be allowed, I'll ask Lester."

Arc

Well, after the debacle of the whole Vernon-nadir, this chapter certainly goes out of its way to set the Lester + Sarah dynamic aright again. Thank-goodness! I do wish that Sarah hadn't merely passed out at the end though, and had, instead, after a few minutes of recovery, gotten-up, while looking abashedly at Dan, as she silently headed to her new boyfriend+lover's bedroom, leaking cum shining between her buttocks and thighs, where she lets herself in, without a backwards glance, and Dan catches the words, "Hi Daddy...", even as the bedroom door closes behind her... Cementing, with unambiguous words and action, the new hierarchy of her interest and affections...

whiterhino

Is Sarah on birth control? I cant recall, I know Lester faked his vasectomy and his pumping Sarah full of potent seed, but forgot Sarahs fertility situation. Love the fuck a baby into me comments, needed even more dialogue like that. Good stuff DS. Cant wait for her to be commanded to fuck other scumbags soon.

Jerry Crabbe

Sarah, from Dan & Sarah's argument in Chapter 20: “It’s just some dumb thing Lester wanted. Something about him not being able to do it now and wanting to live out the experience. It’s just sex talk, Dan. It’s not real, you know that. He’s fixed, and besides, I’m not an idiot, okay? I’m not just going to have sex with someone and not take precautions.” Sarah added.

Robert Smith

Earlier on in the story (in the early/beginning chapters) it’s mentioned that she isn’t. Later on, when Lester first gets in her house, he searches for it and doesn’t find any. When Dan questions her in Ch20 she says she takes “precautions” but doesn’t specify and Dan never asks. DS hasn’t clarified the issue. I assume that she isn’t and perhaps her precautions is using the rhythm to know when she is fertile.

Jerry Crabbe

I share your desire for more of this new dynamic, but Don really outdid himself here - the ending was perfect. As similar as it would be to how this chapter began, I think we get Dan's perspective of when she wakes up next. I think the thing I want to see most is her getting her husband to be ok with the savage cucking he just underwent while at the same time making her way to Lester's bedroom for more, making his statement that she'd find her way in that night the truth, whether she heard him or not.

Arc

I think Lester will be having her put Dan into chastity. That would serve both to reinforce his newly-demoted status, as well as keeping him simmering in subspace without having access to the orgasmic release that seems to be the key that lets him break free of his cuckold-fugue state... Plus it's pretty evident that imposing that kind of blatant denigration and control on Dan, at this point, would really turn *her* on too...

Jerry Crabbe

I think she's doing something more reliable than rhythm. And I think now that she's submitted to Lester, he'll simply ask her, and she'll tell him, and he'll tell her to stop, and she will.

Sigma

In an earlier chapter she said she had some errands to do at the pharmacy or something before heading to Chicago, implying plan b or birth control for many of us readers.

Darrow

I'm not even halfway through, but Jesus H. Christ, Dan has to be the dumbest son of a bitch on the planet. Jesse rolled him. Jesse rolled right over him. He bluffed Dan into admitting he's spying, almost without effort.

Darrow

Very very well done. To follow up - Dan is indeed the dumbest son of a bitch on the face of the Earth. He got rolled by Jesse, although he managed to fight back. Jesse is the second dumbest son of a bitch on the planet. He swallowed Byron's bull hook line and sinker. Byron isn't going to share his new toy. He blabbed to Lester, spilled just about everything, and has put Lester onto the Lincoln Group. That's going to be interesting. He was completely flatfooted when Sarah openly flirted with him. And he's allowed himself to be pushed around by Dan. If Dan is a Cuck, then Jesse is a Sub-Cuck. Speaking of Byron, it's now guaranteed that he's going to be seeing a lot of Sarah. In his mind, he's claimed her, that whole "Look at your husband" and making her say "I'm Byron's bitch now." That's ownership. Byron isn't nearly as smooth or manipulative as Lester, but his cock is bigger than Dan's and his bullying ways push Sarah's buttons really hard. He clearly pcked up on her submissiveness. And Byron knows he made her come hard, and she was enthusiastic about swallowing his cock and then his come. So basically, as far as he's concerned, he owns that pussy. He's not going to be shy about claiming her and telling Dan. He's going to be extremely demanding - not just of Dan, but demanding that Dan hand over Sarah, and he's going to get increasingly humiliating as he does it. As between Sarah and Dan, they'll need her to do it. He needs her to do it, pimping her to Byron is the only way to eventually accomplish the mission. And his cuck fetish is running away with him, I think as hard as it is for him to admit it, he's excited by Byron taking her from him... especially if Byron makes him watch. The degree of shit that Byron is going to feed Dan is going up exponentially. As for Lester, bravo - as wild as the sex was, as emotionally wrenching, it was absolutely bottomless. He's now promised to take her anal virginity, she's accepted his right to decide who fucks her, she's agreed to him choosing to make her fuck someone she hates (probably Jesse, maybe Cash), and he's just declared both the right to come in her, and put Dan in a condom, and perhaps a veto over her and Dan's sex life - only with his permission. I can't imagine what's going to go through her head when she recovers after that magnificent fucking. "I said what?" Some of that won't stick. Byron is going to be fucking her no matter what. She'll either disobey, not tell him, or seek or manipulate Lester's permission. Equally, I think she'll break whatever rules he sets for her with Dan, she does love him and they're a team. But she will either have to sneak around on Lester (have an affair with her husband behind her lover's back) or accept his 'punishments' perhaps even embrace them. One thing she's not going to do is give up Lester's cock. Even while Byron was fucking her, she was thinking of Lester not Dan. And let's be fair, it doesn't help Dan's case that every man that Sarah has played with in any real way has a bigger cock than Dan - starting with Lester and Byron, but also including Vernon, Cage and Jesse. And they've all been dominant over her and excited the fuck out of her, even Jesse in a sneaky way. As much as she loves Dan he's literally relegating to third string. As exciting and intense as it was, and as emotionally wrenching, there's promise of so much more.

Darrow

That seems to be the natural choice. He's the only character she genuinely despises. But does Lester know that? I think his choice might be Jesse, but with impeccable timing, he's burned that bridge. Vernon might be sleazy enough, but no way that's happening.

Robert Smith

Love your thoughts, Darrow. Just wanted to add that I’m excited for the Lester vs Byron showdown ahead. Now that they both know about each other and have both established dominance over Sarah/cucked Dan hard, there will be a struggle. It could play out so many ways, especially because we don’t know the true extent of Byron’s power and we’ve only seen some of Lester’s. It’s going to be good!

Robert Smith

Can’t wait to read this conversation. Does she offer to stop without prodding?

Richardcat

I wouldn’t be surprised if she was getting a hormone shot every 3 months. Thus no pills around.

SierraDelta

Interesting point about every man she's interacted, sexually, with having a bigger dick than Dan. Assuming he's average, the likelihood of that is wildly improbable. She really needs to buy a lotto ticket, because thats gotta be 1 in 3-4 million to occur.

whiterhino

I hope its someone more disgusting, I think I will be wrong, but I would love the nerd D&D gang or the homeless Cash and friends. She is so perfect and they are so un worthy. The office guys dont seem low enough to me. She and Lester need to degrade her. Thats what she likes obviously.

Mike Kogel

Had high hopes...but it's truly over

Darrow

But she seems to have liked the Nerd gang. It would be like making her do the black pizza guy. She wouldn't mind. And frankly, she liked playing with them. I don't think she'd be troubled with Ned at all. The only one she might dislike is Eugene. That is tempting. On the one hand, major humiliation for Dan if the guy that kicked him out of the peephole fucks his wife. On the other hand, Lester doesn't like Eugene and is even more into keeping him in his place. Lester's not going to allow Eugene to cuck him. I like the idea of a DnD gangbang but (1) Sarah might be into it, so that doesn't work as punishment, and (2) Lester was specific that it was one. Cage is a possible, but definitely too wild a card. I'm maybe coming back to Jesse, because Lester likes control, and Jesse has the potential to be a useful tool. But maybe it will be someone new and vile.

Bones

Well done.

Darrow

Well, if Dan's average that just means that 50% are bigger than him, and 50% are smaller. That said, Sarah's recent run of men definitely seem to cluster on the far end of the scale. But Vernon is a ringer, not a coincidence. He was specifically recruited because he was bigger than Dan. Cage might be another ringer, assuming that Lester engineered or pre-arranged. Lester seems to be definitely freakishly big. But Byron and Jesse both seem to be smaller than Lester, but larger than Dan. Maybe Dan is on the low side of average or genuinely below average. Possibly his insecurity about his size drives his cuckold fixation. I don't think that there's anywhere in the narrative that gives us a real comment on Dan's size. Or, most realistically, all these characters might be living in porn universe where there is a large proportion of endowed males. Anyway, the point is that Sarah's experience and her standards are going up.

Darrow

I think it's going there, but not right away. Don likes to turn up the heat slowly. I think Dan's going to be cut off, he may well cut himself off, he got served a major dose of humiliation. He may be too traumatized to follow through. Even if he isn't cut off completely or cut off right away, I think his sex life is going to change. A lot more masturbation, self involved, or Sarah assisted. And definitely he's going t be wearing condoms. Lester is going to insist. Sarah and Dan can even rationalize it, she's had unprotected sex with two men, so she's at risk of STD... wearing a condom protects Dan. But the noose is definitely tightening. One chastity cage scenario is actually Byron. Byron doesn't hesitate to bully and threaten, and he'd dearly love to humiliate Dan with a cage while they visit Minneapolis. The only problem is that Byron might not let him out.

Darrow

Further thoughts - Sarah has watched now while two men, Byron and Lester, openly and totally humiliated Dan in front of her. She's seen Vernon casually humiliate Dan. She's aware after the fact of Eugene's humiliation of Dan. And both Byron and Lester have had her participate in verbally humiliating Dan (usually when he's not there, but also in his presence). Even if she loves Dan with all her heart, that's got to have some subconscious psychological effect. On some level, perhaps on level's she's not even aware of, she's losing respect and perhaps developing contempt for Dan. Couple that with Dan's own cuck-fetish self humiliation, his sexual selfishness and his inadequate size compared to literally every other man she's seen lately, that's likely going to add to the effect. Even if she's not aware, I think it'll affect her behaviour. Casual remarks, casual attitude, definitely during sex she'll be increasingly willing and excited to play into his humiliation, or to inflict it. I look forward to the night when they're making love and she says "Fuck me Dan, fuck me with your pathetic little dick." And given Dan's fetish, that might cause him to ejaculate right there. Dan's only really asserted his manhood and his dominance a couple of times with Lester, and has paid for it each time, and successfully with Jesse. I don't think that's enough.

Darrow

Also, thinking it over, Byron's not a good lover. Consider how the session went. He didn't move on her, didn't kiss her, he didn't tease her nipples, stroke her pussy or go down on her. He simply told her to get on her knees and suck his dick. He ordered her to take her top off so he could play with her breasts, but that was for his pleasure not hers. Then he ordered her clothes off, bent her into a chair and fucked her. There's none of the skill that Lester or even Dan displays. He fucks without a condom, but didn't particularly care whether he shot in her mouth or pussy. His verbals are entirely self aggrandizement - putting down others - especially Dan his subordinate, but also Sarah (Bitch) and elevating himself by making her "Moan my name" "Your my bitch now, say it" "Tell your husband you're my bitch" He's not dirty talking to raise her temperature, although it does that. He's dirty talking to get off on his own power over others. He contributes nothing to Sarah's arousal, or her orgasm, that's basically her own lust using him as a tool. A dildo and a tape recorder could substitute for him. She's much more in control of her arousal than with Lester, her willingness to trash talk her husband and play submissive is very natural and unforced and it definitely arouses her. But she's also thinking clearly. His after-sex game consists of falling asleep on her. She effortlessly pumps him for information. I think that Byron may get a lot of sex, but he's definitely paying for most of it. He doesn't really know what to do with a woman or care. He's about his own ego and aggrandizement, and that comes with bullying and demeaning. I think he's outmatched by her. She'll zero in on his weaknesses, feed them, and wrap him around her little finger, all the while making him feel big and powerful.

Sean Thomas

I hoping we see a different side to Lester. A side that shows he cares for Sarah. He's been a devious creep and still is but I'd like him to declare his love for her himself and promise to protect her from Byron, Richard etc. I like the idea that she is able to tame him and his devious nature only surfaces when it's to protect his girlfriend (Sarah) and her family. I think Dan and Sarah will still be on friendly terms but surely there's a happier life for her with Lester? After defeating their enemies. Anyway that's just my weird thinking. Whatever way Don chooses to take this will be great I'm sure. Hope he doesn't feel pressure or stress over everyone's comments

Arc

"P.S: Attachments are inspo for Sarah's outfits in this chapter." Attachments? I didn't see any (valid) links in the post? 🤔🤷‍♀️

Jekyll

This is a very accurate take on Byron. I think the scene between them showed a great deal about each of them. Byron is unlike any sexual partner Sarah’s had. Dan loves her, makes love to her. Lester wants her, wants to corrupt her and bend her fully to him. He makes sure her pleasure and needs are met, because this gets him what he wants. (I’m sure if we got to see Lester’s track record with his former “roommates.” It would likely be similar in style to Byron.) Now for Sarah, the one thing that really stuck out, was her inner monologue about how she should have avoided getting fucked by Byron. But her body wanted it and her body gets what it wants. I think Sarah is loosing control in a way, she doesn’t yet understand. It was the immediate way her body reacted to the dominant Byron. Sarah herself thought, she could have just given him a blow job, or side stepped it all. But instead she went to the chair, she showed no hesitation in insulting Dan and there was little to no delay and declaring herself Byron’s bitch. A lot of her “training” with lester is showing in this chapter. The dirty talk 100% stimulates her, but having her mind not consumed by pleasure at the moment, spoke volumes about how far she has fallen from grace.

Arc

Hmmm... I know that that's where they *usually* are, but there's nothing there on my screen for this chapter? After "...in post-orgasmic bliss." there's just some white-space, then the "🤍 🗨️ ..." and "Share" standard footer.... 🤔😕🤷‍♀️

Jekyll

In recent chapters I have seen this trend of people wanting Lester and Sarah to get together, in an almost loving style relationship. To almost see him redeemed in a way. I don’t see this side of lester, or think it even possible. The man has been drugging and blackmailing women for years to get what he wants. Now with Sarah it’s different, he wants to corrupt her, so he’s playing a different game with her. Lester is not a white knight coming in to save Sarah. The only reason he gets upset about byron and others, is because he already believes Sarah is his. Not his gf, not the girl he wants to win and marry, forever in love. But that she is his possession, his to use and control. Lester is not and has never been a good character and I doubt there is any good in him. The man would literally drive both sarah and dan into more financial hardships, just to force Sarah to rely on him even more. I don’t see a happy ending with Lester.

Darrow

I suspect that Lester's track record with other room mates is not too different than with Sarah. Yes and no. He's perfectly willing to use drugs, to blackmail or coerce, and to heavily manipulate. But he's about control and seduction, getting inside head's and making a woman's body betray her. I think that Sarah may be 'the big one' for him. The one he wants to keep rather than use and discard like Lizzy. But what he's doing to Sarah, in terms of seductive and sexual technique he's refined on a lot of women.

Arc

As I said elsewhere, IMO, Lester having Sarah force Dan into chastity is the most-logical next-step: It locks Dan into his fantasies without letting him get out via orgasm, and it's obvious that, at this point, emasculating him that severely will also play well into Sarah's growing kink over viscerally degrading him too...

Darrow

I agree. There have been small signs that suggest Lester might evolve into a better person. But catching his interior monologues, I think he's irredeemable. It was chilling to see him contemplating how he could get her fired from her job to make her more dependent on him, or how to get rid of her kids so that they won't distract her from him.

Arc

"Well, if Dan's average that just means that 50% are bigger than him, and 50% are smaller." LoL -- it's almost certainly referring to a modal average, not a mean: as with almost all biological characteristics, the distribution will be a curve, with the vast majority of people falling in/around the same 'average' while only a very few outlying individuals will appear on the fringes/extremes. So the 50/50 split you're referring-to wouldn't really be an apt way to visualize the sample pool...

Jekyll

Those little glimpses at redemption, disappear with Lester’s inner monologue. As you say, it’s chilling. Those moments plus his history, tell me there is no redemption for him. Wanting her kids kidnapped, to disappear, is dark thinking! Want to ruin her career so she has no choice but to rely on him, screams how much an abuser he is. Definitely not a good person!

Arc

Richard makes a lot of sense -- she doesn't like him as a person, and is currently desperate to earn his professional respect for her as a capable hospital administrator. As a result, forcing her to seduce and fuck him would essentially destroy any chances for achieving her professional goals. Plus, it starts the process of letting her ongoing corruption, in service of her ever-growing sexual needs, tear down the other pillars of her life (as anyone who's experienced severe addiction, first or second-hand, knows will happen!) Next up is her family (i.e. daughters + parents)...

Darrow

Sarah's approach to the encounter is interesting. She knows about Byron's (and Jesse's) intention to fuck her before she travels to Minneapolis. She's not bothered by it. At the bar, she's literally dressed to kill, and openly flirts with Jesse, rubbing her bare foot against him his calf and teasing him. Jesse's the weaker of the two so she feels more confident and in control. But she flirts with Byron, she's not at all put off by his clumsy attempts to monopolize her. Byron talks openly about the cuck situation, and that she fucks Lester, and that he intends to fuck her. None of this phases her at all. After all that, she asks to go up to Byron's office for a private tour. No one at that table thinks anything other than that she's going to get fucked. Even Dan thinks that. Despite all that, she doesn't particularly want to have sex with Byron. She doesn't seem especially afraid of the idea. She's ambiguous but open, and manipulative with it. It's very much that she seems to be wanting to play spy and plant the gimmick. That's the primary goal and distraction. Sarah's previous sexual encounters have always involved manipulation, both on her part and others. She absolutely loves to raise the temperature, to tempt, tease and arouse. It's part of her own foreplay and part of building her own sexual excitement. Lester's key is that he does to her what she does to others, he's about raising her temperature, tempting, teasing and arousing, all the way through. He never just fucks her, its always about building her heat, the verbal play continues in the fucking. He's using her own tactics on her, and she loves it. And once she's aroused, she'll guilt free do anything as we've seen. With Byron, I think throughout, she's manipulating herself to arousal. She plays her 'turn up the heat' game from the moment she walks in the bar, and she enjoys it. She's got an ulterior mission distracting her, but she's also excited and engaged. I don't think we've seen her this ambiguous, where she sort of doesn't want to have sex, she wants him to wear a condom, doesn't want him to come in her, wants to make him come with a blow job instead of going all the way. Her sexual play is a more cold blooded manipulation. She's into it, but in a cold blooded way. It's different from every other encounter we've seen. But once the sex starts, she kind of follows the track - she's definitely into it, aroused building arousal, submissive and highly verbal all the way to orgasm. There's no question she's into it. But she's not emotionally engaged as with Dan or Lester, and she's not been lead into losing control. There's an ambiguity. Some things - she has no difficulty trash talking and verbally humiliating her husband in the office, even if he's not there. That comes startlingly easy, and she totally gets into it. I think on an unconscious level she's reached a point of disrespect and contempt. This is how she feels about him sexually, and it excites her to say it out loud. It's a warm up for the later scene. The submission and verbal self humiliation also comes extremely easy and naturally. If Byron had insisted on coming in her pussy, she wouldn't have liked it, but she'd have let him and quixotically she would have enjoyed it. She would have done anything Byron wanted to make her do, and the more he made it, the more she would have loved it. She wants to be out of control sexually, and one way to that path is giving up control. Once they were alone, there was absolutely no way she wasn't getting fucked and she knew that. I think she was distracted by the mission, but also that she wanted more from Byron. She was too in control at the outset as the encounter starts. Regardless, Byron has officially taken possession of her pussy, at least in Minneapolis, and I think she likes that. It arouses her, although the emotions are more complex. There's games within games here. But she's committed, and she knows it. Both Dan and Sarah know that it won't be a one time thing. If nothing else, she's still got the mission to plant the bug, and Dan is firmly under Byron's thumb and forced to pimp her. She feels whored, and on some level doesn't like it. I think she resents Dan for it. But it's also completely guilt free sex. I'm going to guess that the more she fucks Byron the more she'll uninhibitedly enjoy it. Less or no ambiguity. But also contempt and control It's very tough, I don't think I've properly articulated. I'm seeing something interesting there, but it's hard to pin down.

Arc

"I look forward to the night when they're making love and she says 'Fuck me Dan, fuck me with your pathetic little dick.'" Given Lester's new rule, she'd need to have his permission to let Dan fuck her. it's perfectly reasonable to expect that such permission would include requirements like her repeatedly humiliating Dan. Plus we've already seen that doing so turns her on, so she probably wouldn't even put up much, if any resistance to such an order...

Larry

I suggest a good time to reward/humilitate Dan. Lester has got

Larry

Sorry Sarah commi

Arc

The story is titled "Toxic Attraction": I don't think it was ever intended to have a 'happy' ending in the traditional sense. It's playing out much more like an addict-tragedy, where Sarah's addiction to Lester, his cock, and her debasement, eventually takes over and destroys her life, even as she increasingly revels in the ever-growing debauchery. She should lose her career, her family, and her own self-respect along the way, as she spirals downward into the decadence of slavishly serving her addiction. I never sought nor expected a redemption arc for anyone: I'm here to see a human-trainwreck, in glorious, hi-resolution, slow-motion detail. Curious to ultimately see/find out just how gloriously ruinous it ends up being for the protagonist...

Sigma

Given how quickly Sarah gave in to Byron, basically no pushback at all, its quite possible that when Richard makes his move that the emotional "training" Lester has done will kick in - just as it did with Byron. Basically with Byron she immediately fell into the emotional desire to be with the creep. No reason it can't happen the same way with Richard even with the risk to her career or professional respect.

Larry

Sarah commits to only fuck who Lester tells her. Sarah wakes up and goes to Lester’s bedroom with Dan watching. Lester though says she should go back and fuck Dan first by Lester’s order because he doesn’t want his night disturbed.

Darrow

I agree. Given their previous sex play, which is extremely verbal and some of their sessions which played with cuckoldry, she'll take to this like a duck to water. They both will. I think a lot of their sexual encounters are going to increasingly involve Dan masturbating, or her masturbating him to finish, rather than sex.

Larry

Sarah fucks Dan quickly and returns to Lester’s bed to spend the rest of the night

Arc

“Tell your husband to take out his little thing and start stroking it. He’s not going to ‘reclaim’ you tonight...” Lol -- you apparently missed that...

Traycir

I agree with everything here. Lester is a scumbag, a resourceful scumbag with a big cock, bit still a scumbag. Jesse wants to take Sarah from Dan and live happily ever after, that's not Lester. Besides what's mentioned above, he wants to be able to let other men use her, at his discretion. From the beginning I have wondered what Lester's end game is. That's what makes writing this kind of story hard, coming up with a satisfactory ending. Even with his cuckold fetish, I don't know how Dan goes on after this chapter.

Traycir

I think it's interesting that Saarah declares love for Lester, but he doesn't reciprocate. I wonder if she really will go with the whole asking Lester's permission to fuck someone else. Also, is it possible for Sarah to be Byron's bitch in Minnesota, Lester's girlfriend in Chicago and Dan's wife in Springfield? I am really looking forward to seeing what happens in the morning after this chapter. Dan and Sarah definitely have to talk. Will Lester insist on a date with Sarah? Whose room does she wind up in? I am curious to find out.

Arc

She works in a hospital; it would be beyond easy for her to get something like a Nexplanon implant and be safe for *years*.... As an added plus (for a nascent sex addict), in some women it also can stop/reduce menstruation while implanted! https://www.plannedparenthood.org/learn/birth-control/birth-control-implant-nexplanon

Arc

"No reason it can't happen the same way with Richard..." ...other than needing to get/have Lester's permission first you mean. She didn't have that restriction with Byron, when she agreed to fuck him... 🤔😋

Rjh200m

Amazing chapter! So much to discuss…obvious key developments for me are the explicit humiliation of Dan that Sarah participated in with Byron and Lester; Sarah’s complete submission to Byron even after she realized there was no hope of planting the USB drive; Sarah’s longing for Lester, not Dan, after getting fucked by Byron; and Dan’s complete inability to counter Lester during the last scene. During the last scene with Lester, Sarah committed to doing everything Lester wants. But is this just another example of sex talk? Or will we see concrete examples of her actually following up on what was said? In the next chapter, there cannot be another Sarah-Dan conversation along the following lines…..“wow, that really got out of control”….”yeah, not sure how it happened”….”the next time we need rules and we need to let Lester know we are in control”. It certainly appears that Sarah and Dan have moved beyond this. There should be tangible impacts to their life, beyond the sexual adventures of Sarah and the rapidly growing intimacy between her and Lester. Some ways this can happen? —Lester and Sarah team up to go after LIncoln Group and Byron (Lester remotely penetrates the IT system), Sarah tells Dan….“Just stay out of it baby, Lester and I got this”. —Lester and Sarah work together at the Hospital to upgrade the IT system per Thornhill’s direction. Sarah tells Dan….“Lester and I will be spending a lot of time together, including here at the house. You need to be a good boy around us and not upset Lester”. — Lester and Sarah spend some weekends together. Sarah tells Dan….”I’ll be spending the weekend with Lester, baby, I’ll need you to watch the kids. My parents have done so much for us and I think you need to start taking some of the burden off of them”. — Sarah becomes more direct with Dan about her needs. She tells Dan….”I think you really now understand how much Lester satisfies me in ways that you can’t. We can’t pretend anymore that it’s about just you and me. Our time together can be special, but I need quality time with Lester and others he lets me fuck. I would like you to be involved, but it won’t be like before.” — Sarah starts limiting Dan sexually. She tells Dan….”baby, I think we need to take a break, I am super busy at work, and Lester and I will be away for the next few days on Hospital business. And I want to spend quality time with the kids. While I’m gone, I will talk to Lester to see what time you and I can arrange to be together when I get back.”

Rjh200m

I think the difference with Sarah is that Lester really wants for her to love him and choose him over Dan. And to be attracted to him as a whole person. This is what he has not had his whole life. And whatever acceptance he got, he had to blackmail and coerce. He struggles, however, with developing a real intimate relationship with Sarah, sure he uses this as a way to manipulate Sarah but it does not come easy for him and he is probably incapable of a close ongoing relationship. But as of yet, he has not reached his objective of Sarah choosing him over Dan.

Fuzzy Shark

I find myself in the minority, but here goes: Yes the title is TOXIC ATTRACTION and I would find it not realistic for this story to have a nice happy ending, all sunshine and rainbows. Lester has succeeded in his stated goals. Sarah has fallen to unrecoverable depths after the last chapter. But Dans future is not a zero sum of complete loss of everything including his self respect to Lester and Sarah and Byron and every other dick that comes along. He has shown he can recover forcefully. The conversation to follow should be intense between Sara and Dan. If Sara is in LOVE with Lester, game over, divorce on horizon and Sarah on decline until she realizes what she lost to her addiction if she ever does. Dan can tell her to raise the boy she has promised Lester and Dan will take the girls. Ugly divorce collateral damage every where. Dan has to call her out and be willing to walk away at this point. Lester will eventually grow tired of Sarah, it's in his nature as well as being pure evil, . Sarah years down the road has to eventually find it harder and harder to satisfy her kink as the newness and excitement wear off. Just rooting for Dan to maintain a little self respect

Mark

Great chapter, it seems like Sarah is really falling for Lester hard and is going to start to deny Dan. I don’t know why but this chapter really made me want to see real life breasts that Don might be drawing inspiration from. He makes her sound stunning.

Jekyll

Personally, from here I think Dan has limited options. 1. He can reclaim Sarah, much like he did after throwing Lester out of the house. Fucking her with the anger and harshness that she now gets off on. (I don’t see Dan doing this, I don’t think he had it in himself to maintain that level of anger, not is it his cup of tea. Plus, Sarah’s drifted even further now.) 2. He fully gives in and just goes for the ride. Coming to terms that his relationship has changed forever and it’s likely Sarah will be spending more time and doing more and more things different men. (I also don’t see Dan going this route. Be may, but there is still a fire in him and once he finds out about the manipulations he’ll break out of this weird trance.) 3. Dan can’t handle it, knows sarah ain’t going to change and he leaves taking the kids. (Something along these lines is my best guess.)

Larry

To ARC no I didn’t miss it Lester shows he can decide who and when Sarah can fuck and decides to throw Dan a crumb before taking Sarah to bed

Royston smith

So,any IT nerds/ experts out there know what potential levers/ power Lester could establish over TLG based on this passage:- “He opened his computer console again and rechecked the validation he had reviewed a few minutes earlier. Jesse’s company had been easy to breach access to. They used a common suite of tools with known vulnerabilities. He began downloading all of their communications that mentioned Jesse or The Lincoln Group, and he would soon find out exactly what was going on. Lester uploaded a package to Jesse’s work computer. Once Jesse unknowingly accessed it, the file would worm its way into his computer, allowing Jesse’s machine to be a slave to his. Lester could use Jesse’s work computer as a relay to push into The Lincoln Group’s network without it being traced back to him”. Even if he does get into the LG’s system what could he do that would sabotage it, or at least enable him to influence what they can/cannot do? Most companies are heavily dependent on their IT systems nowadays and struggle to operate if it goes down or suffers a cyber attack, so I presume Lester could cause some trouble for them. However, establishing control over a provincial hospital is not the same as going up against a multinational. Could he be the unlikely saviour of Dan and Sarah?

Michael Haase

"Lester wants you to wear this." "I'm not wearing a chastity cage like some sissy" "Lester won't let me fuck you unless you make him happy. he'll never let me fuck you if you don't put it on" "But, if I'm wearing this I won't be able to fuck you" "We can take it off silly....if your good he'll let you out" "So, Lester's permission is the only way you'll fuck me?" "That's what Lester says, besides, if you're not getting any you'll be beating off all the time, I don't want a limp dick. Put the cage on, keep Lester happy and you'll get out ready for action." "I don't believe this is happening, how could you do this?" "Come on baby, it might be fun, I think you like denial, it's perfect for our fantasy. It's a really nice device, web based, sensors so we know where you're at and there isn't any physical issues, a timer that can be unlocked anytime the admin presses the button, we can check your status anytime, anywhere." "We, status?" "Yeah, Lester and me and of course you, will be invited. Status, you know how long it's been locked, when's the next release date, how many erections you've tried to have and if your skin temp is normal, no rash or chafing, it's top of the line." "Who is going to control the unlock option" "I think Lester wants to do that, at least at first." "No way" "Oh, come on baby, I'll talk to Lester about the device, maybe he'll let me be the "Keyholder. Just remember, if you put it on and engage the lock, you'll need either me or Lester to unlock it." "I stared at the cage, my cock rock hard"

whiterhino

My signature photo is the first outfit that Byron asks her to take her top off to grope her perky tits

Pr

Yes. Even I want ti see those breasts.

Bob James

Great chapter and update from the alpha draft. There are a few scenes I would love to see play out... * Lester cumming on Sarah's wedding ring. * Lester/Dan/Sarah threesome where Sarah shows her preference to Lester..maybe she jerks Dan off but allows Lester to cum in her. * A setup where Dan has to wear a condom but Lester doesn't..maybe Sarah gets sick and has to get off the pill for a bit .. * A scene where Sarah makes Dan cum early so she can be with Lester. Great story, really interested to see how Sarah downplays this or where it goes..

Darrow

One small observation: Lester, as per usual, made a mistake. He mentioned Jesse and asked if Jesse fucked her. I don't think he's supposed to know who Jesse is. As far as Dan and Sarah are concerned, Jesse was a total stranger to Lester. Some rando that he had Sarah dance with at the bar. Totally suprised it was someone they knew. Dan picked up on it a little, but was too cockblinded to really register. It's possible Dan will forget about it. He's got a lot to process. But sooner or later he could remember, and if he does, pieces will fall into place. If Lester and Jesse know each other, the thing at the bar was a set up. If Lester knows enough to ask about Jesse, then he knows at least something about Lincoln Group and the arrangements. How much does Lester know and when did Lester find out? How much of what's going on is Lester's set up? Jesse is a very weak player. He's if Lester interrogates Jesse, he'll spill a lot, particularly if Lester dangles Sarah. Can Lester lie his way out? A couple of ways easily. I think Lester realizes that it was Jesse, not a drunken Dan, that sent Sarah to Lester's bed for the first time. So they know that Jesse knows who Lester is, after all, Jesse spilled about Lester to Byron, and Byron mentioned it. All Lester has to say is that Jesse called up Lester and talked to him because he was snooping on Dan and Sarah and that he bragged to Lester about what he was going to do. Plausible, close enough to the truth, that they might buy it. Alternately, this is the second best lie - Lester can say after the incident of the ring, he looked up Jesse because he was curious. Maybe even spoke to him. Also plausible. But if Dan interrogates Jesse, he's weak enough and stupid enough, he'll spill Lester's information. And that's pretty damning. Lester's lies might not work. So he either figures this out ahead of time and preps Jesse with the cover. Or he gets blindsided and sticks to his guns. The best part - even if Lester is exposed, Sarah is so cock-crazed and Dan so cuck-bludgeoned it might not even make a difference. "Sure, I used Jesse to get revenge after you manhandled me, so you'd know what it's like. So what? Sarah, suck my cock now."

Sigma

There've been a lot of posts speculating in future chapters how Dan can be further cucked and humiliated. While some of that is sure to happen, I don't believe Dan is ultimately going to end up powerless. How he ends up might not be happily ever after, but I don't think he's as out-of-control as many believe. The difference between Dan and Sarah is that while both know what's happening to them, Dan's cuck fetish and Sarah's being controlled fetish, Dan is actually the one who is aware of his weakness and vulnerability. Sarah is not. Certainly Sarah at times considers why she's doing whatever but it happens to be while she's blowing Byron, for example. Compare that to Dan who realizes when he's getting a hard-on and struggles to control it, and at times has succeeded. In many of those times he's thinking he shouldn't do it, even fights against it successfully. Further reasoning on this, Dan is actively working his plan to get out of Chicago and build his own business. He's taking positive steps and working the plan. Sarah is stuck at the hospital, more of a victim of circumstance vulnerable to the demands and influences of superiors. It may be messy, the marriage might not survive, but Dan seems to be the one who has recognized the danger from Lester and others and happens to be the only one working to get out of this problem. Sarah's a ride-along who's enjoying the situation and getting in deeper. One could say they both got into this undesirable situation by not controlling themselves with Lester, true. But its because of Lester they're in so many problems: Lester basically blackmailed them in exchange for rent; Lester's hacking put her in a tough spot in the hospital; Lester's fucking her led to Jesse's knowing, Lester pulling in Jesse as a tool, and Jesse tying in Byron who is now blackmailing Dan. Sarah has been a willing participant in all of this, at times putting Dan in a tough spot. But Dan's been the one to come up with alternatives and solutions in-spite of his fetish weakness. I believe Dan will somehow extricate at least himself from all of this, at some price of course. Sarah's in so deep I'm not sure she really wants out off this.

Darrow

And fun little observation - Lester has figured out what Dan's "cheat code" is. Stick a fork in. Dan's done like dinner.

Jerry Crabbe

Lester is supposed to know who Jesse is, just not to the degree that she might be fucking him on their trip. Only Jesse knew that until he told Dan.

Rjh200m

Getting control of Lincoln Group’s IT system could be challenging if they are as secretive as they make out to be and they have good cyber security. This is where Lester may need some help to implant devices on machines in HQS. This is where Sarah comes in. With Lester’s knowledge, he could direct her to the right places. And given her new very close relationship with Byron, she probably could get access to places no one else could. So, Lester working from the outside and Sarah working from the inside - a formidable team! No need for Dan, other than to just do the work they have hired him to do.

J Lewis

Sooooo…since DS is a master of pulling back into the story subtle incidents from previous chapters when does Lester give Sarah her wedding veil to wear again?

Rjh200m

The cheat code is not just for Lester to manage the timing of his seductions of Sarah to prevent Dan from getting violent or stopping everything, but also to use Sarah to say the right things to Dan at the right times. Lester is playing both masterfully. During the last scene of the chapter when Lester takes Sarah in the kitchen, Sarah looks at Dan with the “are you ok with this or do you want me to stop” look….i am not buying this anymore after 21 chapters of non-stop fucking between Sarah and Lester. She does not want to stop and certainly doesn’t want Dan to tell her to stop. I think her look is more along the lines of “I certainly don’t want to stop and I know you don’t want me to stop”!!

Darrow

I don't think he wants them kidnapped, just out of her life. Drop them off with the grandparents, or leave them with Dan, or just send them into an orphanage. He wouldn't have them eliminated unless there was no easier option.

Sigma

Yeah, similar thought. Building some off-grid "subdivision" and being the company with the killer instinct and like-minded amoral employees, there's no way they would have a lightweight security system. Perhaps this is a mistake by Lester? Perhaps he thought he penetrated the system, when in fact he actually alerted the mysterious powers within TLG that someone was attacking them. TLG doesn't seem to be a company that would simply ward off an attack, but would heavily retaliate on the perpetrator. After all, if it was that easy to penetrate the system, wouldn't Peter and his clients have already done it?

Jekyll

“Was there a way for Dan to lose the girls while out in public? Two birds with one stone. Girls are gone. Sarah hates Dan. I would be her only comfort. That was an interesting idea that Lester needed to think about more. Surely it wouldn’t be impossible to arrange.” Bit from Lester’s thoughts in ch 19. Now “loosing” the girls while out in public could mean a lot of things, but having to “arrange something suggests some level of removing the kids by external forces. Mayne not kidnapping, but definitely holding them, so dan can’t find them.

Michael Haase

"Dan, it's not just sissy's who wear these, Cuckholds wear these too. It heightens the fantasy. Look, little Dan is all excited about the thought. Little Dan never lies."

DrJensen

I read chapter 21 after skipping a couple of chapters as I found the story going stale and reading some of the comments here I will not read chapter 22. It started out great, but now it is getting too much for me. While it was nice with an extra person having sex with Sarah, but the rimming threw me off, even if it did paint a clear picture of her escalating depravity. There are only so many variations to the theme, and I find the chapters repetitive. Now we can expect full sex with a third man in a few chapters, then a handful of chapters more some anal and who knows maybe we end up with a DP scenario and/or impregnation. The plot is becoming way too convoluted and far-fetched for my liking, and the almost magical powers Lester has over Sarah make little sense to me. Without any likeable characters or captivating plot and too much repetition, I will skip the next two or three chapters and see if it catches up. I hope to see a new instalment of Neighborhood Encounter, which seems very promising.

Royston smith

Agreed RJ. I think they both know what Sarah is saying is just window dressing for Dan. She has now become a hyper sexual sex goddess, wanting as much tribute from cocks as possible. As far back as ch 8 she was craving Lester’s cock, whilst masturbating in the bath. She has now realised that she can have “any man” (ch 20) so why not? In the scene with Byron she loves that she has made him hard and he wants her desperately. She loves sucking cock, the taste of it. She wants to indulge herself, she is every man’s dream woman so why not take advantage of it? Dan’s fetish gives her the perfect excuse. She will manipulate Dan’s desires to get what she wants. She is too far down the road of luxuriating in her sexual goddess status now,whether Dan objects or not.

J Lewis

I really enjoy some of the subtle hints that DS puts in his writing. E.g in CH21 Sarah moans, “I, I love your cock” to Lester. It gave the tease that she caught herself from spilling the truth. That hesitation is evidence that it wasn’t just sex talk. In CH22, she says, “I, I love you.” The truth spills outs. Now that the dam has broken, Arc 3 as mentioned by Jerry Crabbe (Grandeman) on Discord has begun. Anxious for CH23 to see how Don accepts all this.

Jerry Crabbe

What if Lester replaces her rings with some costume jewelry or some obvious bullshit and Dan can't get a straight answer about where the rings he gave her are? I think it would be fitting for a bull this dominant to mark her outwardly so that everyone understands she's his. I'm not crazy about the idea of tatoos ar scarring but I could see the ring serving this purpose.

Rjh200m

Wedding rings go away to be replaced by matching rings of any style for Sarah and Lester…..Sarah just puts the wedding ring and engagement ring on a ring holder on the dresser in her bedroom, Dan sees this and the new ring she has on and realizes what is happening. No explanation from Sarah is necessary.

Rjh200m

I think that after the last scene where Dan did nothing, Lester will get more aggressive and not worry so much about Dan attacking him. So, yes, you can see Lester rubbing it in by placing the ring on Sarah’s finger in front of the Dan.

Rjh200m

Complete wildcard guess here….but he makes Sarah wear the wedding veil when he makes her blow the homeless guy through the back window of his SUV!!

Aj

Finally Lester has taken total control of Sarah and her sex life- which appears has become an overwhelming driving force in here day to day life. I want to see him follow through on his threat to make her fuck someone she hates as punishment for fucking Bryon. I want to see Lester fuck with Sarah’s mind, and continue to lead her further down the path to real depravity. Each sexual encounter just increases Lester’s control over her. When she eventually gets whored off by Lester, he should video the whole show and make Dan watch it! Make him jack off to his wife getting fucked like a slut, and video that as well. Then Lester can show it to Sarah and she can see how pathetic he actually is. Lester needs to continue to breed and reconstruct Sarah into the obedient slut he wants her to be! Keep up the good work.

Rjh200m

Lester has said several times to Sarah that a third person will not be Dan….but per your scene above, Lester can further humiliate Dan in a three way with Sarah….Dan is fucking Sarah from behind and she is moaning, and Dan feels like some of the magic has returned….but then Lester asks Sarah whose cock makes her feel better….and she responds “yours does”, then she turns to Dan and asks him to pull out, that she needs Lester’s cock so that she can orgasm as only Lester makes her do…..I can see Lester doing this three way despite his previous reluctance to do so if it means humiliating Dan further…question is how does Dan react? Is he so far down the cuck path that he just accepts it and falls back in the chair to watch? Or does he try to regain his pride and wife? Perhaps even more interesting is what does Sarah do if Dan hesitates in pulling out? Does she pull away from him and jump on Lester’s dick and tell Dan to watch?

Jerry Crabbe

Lester was and is thinking of ways to have Sarah's children eliminated. This is not that kind of story.

Fuzzy Shark

How about Dan agreeing to the three way with Lester and Sarah, as it has been alluded to in the past by Sara thinking it would be with her husband, and as Sara is blowing Lester and Lester thinks he is fully in control, Dan comes in behind Sara and takes her anal cherry just to spite Lester, Sara would love the domination and surprise while Lester would have to endure as Sarah would be reluctant to stop as she did during her last threesome.

Rjh200m

Good analysis! This is why to me the heart of this story is how do Dan and Sarah evolve in the face of all the outside influences they face, the principal one being Lester. You are right, Dan seems to have greater self awareness and is working hard to solve their financial issues, but ultimately what will he do? Will he try to course-correct their marriage and regain some normalcy by moderating his and Sarah’s sexual behavior? Or will he “go with the flow” as he has been doing as both he and Sarah basically encourage each other’s behavior? Or will he just give up and try to start anew? Sarah seems to just be delving deeper and deeper into her sexual desires, with no ability so far to recalibrate.

Rjh200m

Lester would certainly be angry and try to reestablish control of Sarah. Sarah would have to turn into a referee between Lester and Dan!

Allan Harrison

Not specific to this chapter, but I was thinking about how some readers were put out by Sarah seeming to have had birth control plans this whole time, like some deus ex machina to cover a plot hole. But with the level of suspension of disbelief that I feel makes the story most enjoyable, what if she was actually hooked more and faster than even Ledter realized, and her idea of "being careful" had morphed a while back from "I'll secretly get back on the pill, just in case something unexpected happens" into "Lester's snipped, so why waste money we don't have on pills, and I'll avoid risky days to be extra careful" and then into "it's still three days til my period, it'll be fine". Pretty soon, she'll slip further, landing on, say, "I should be ovulating, but it will turn Dan on so much, and it's not like Lester can suddenly get unsnipped, right?"

FU

“You taste like ass”. Yeah do you like the taste of your own ass Lover? The story is about a man and wife that have totally succumbed to their sexual fantasies, and seem willing to pay any price to satisfy it, even if they are being somewhat reluctantly pulled along and into the debauchery. I think Lester talks to Sarah about what happened and why she was alone with Byron in his office. Sarah tells him all about trying to plant the device for Dan and she just felt caught and couldn’t get out without giving into him and giving away what she was trying to do. Sarah lets it slip that Dan has another computer, Lester hatches a plan so he can plant a bug on it and Dan will send it wittingly or unwittingly to the Lincoln Group. Now Lester has an in at the Lincoln group. He will tell Sarah that he is going to take care of things that she is not to go with Dan to Minnesota. Lester is also going to find a way and places to have Sarah alone even with Dan in Chicago, he will go to their home and have her there and then when she is supposed to come to Chicago, he will have her there. She won’t be allowed to fuck Dan even if Dan goes home, Lester will have sophisticated surveillance in the home so he will know, and then he will punisher and she will accept it, because in this last slide into debauchery, Lester just got control of her soul. As chapters continue, we will see Sarah in multiple different sexual situations Lester will put her in and for most of them, Dan will be allowed to be there, but all he is going to be able to do is masturbate. I think the most evil thing that Lester could do in front of Dan after working on Sarah‘s ass and making her work on her own ass, butt plugs and small dildos, is to finally get his cock in her ass. Dan will have to watch his wife take it and finally succumb to it and even have orgasms from it. Once she has succumbed to that he will turn her out and make good money selling her and selling the videos. Any feelings for hearth, home and motherhood have long been drained from her. Dan will go home to raise his kids having to depend on his in-laws and his parents for support. Dan‘s only sexual enjoyment will be masturbating and watching videos online of Sarah. @DonSiver well at least that’s how I would write it, but can’t wait to see how you finish out this story.

FU

Oh, one more thing, Don. Those outfits may have inspired the outfits for Sarah and while they are very pretty ladies, they are not voluptuous enough to be Sarah especially in the derrière department.

Pascal

Byron is by far the most hateful and unsympathetic character in this story. And seeing Sarah give in to him so easily makes her extremely contemptible and as unexciting as a urinal.

Royston smith

So, is there somebody Lester is thinking of when he says this: “It’s going to be your punishment,” Lester growled, “For fucking someone behind my back. I’m going to make you fuck somebody you hate to teach you a fucking lesson.”The clear implication here is that it is someone Sarah already knows. “ Somebody you hate” is in the present tense and implies the here and now. So, of the current list of characters we know of in the story, who could it be? Ok,lets go through them 1 by 1. First, Jesse. Actually, I think Sarah is quite intrigued by Jesse and wonders if he has some hidden talents. Remember in 15, this: “Jesse’s tongue on her neck, his body pressing against hers. The feeling of his hardening cock pressing into her ass. Her hand on his crotch. She hated that she now had some idea of the size of Jesse’s cock - he was not small”. Then in the current chapter she says that she wishes Dan could land a job like Jesse’s ( remember how she had a similar thought when Lester landed the £250,000 hospital contract) and backs it up by implying he would be a fertile (big cock?)partner for her with this phrase: “Jesse, do you know what they say about men who dance really well?” Jesse looked like a deer in the headlights, “No…” “Hmmmm,” Sarah said, gazing Jesse up and down, “Too bad.” So she has managed to get in financial security and the size of his dick in 2 sentences. 2 things she prizes. So, in my opinion she does not hate Jesse, far from it. She is kind of curious about what he has got to offer her. Just how big is his cock? Does it rival Lester’s? Dan certainly despises him, so he fits her profile for someone to tease him with. Someone to fuck whilst her husband watches. The problem now is just how does Jesse get his chance with his ideal woman? Lester won’t want to use Jesse as his pawn anymore. He wasn’t waiting ready to be used like Lester expected. He wants to burn him to the ground. So that route is blocked. Dan has frightened him with threatening to tell Byron about Peter. If Jesse was just a little brighter he might figure out that Dan probably wouldn’t do this as Byron would want to know what Dan’s involvement was. How does Dan know about Peter? But Jesse is not bright and it does not look like Byron will want to share Sarah either. So that route is blocked. It could be though that Sarah is just too curious in the end. After all Jesse is certainly a Sarah worshipper and she likes being worshipped. Will she take matters into her own hands? Will she slip off to the powder room and give him the look/ gesture that says “follow me big boy”. I am not sure, but I tend to think Don Silver may be curious about Jesse too. He has certainly allowed him to come close in 6 and 15. Will he allow Jesse to get his just deserts in the end? Will the underdog win through? Only Don knows. Next, the Nerds.

Pascal

For Sarah to hate being fucked by a guy, he just needs to have a small dick. Otherwise she could get fucked by any scumbag, she would enjoy it as long as he has a big cock.

Rjh200m

I think Sarah would fuck Jesse in a heartbeat for the reasons you mentioned….and also because he is younger and probably has an in shape body. Something different from Lester and Byron. Also, does Lester know everything that you mentioned about Sarah’s thoughts on Jesse? Maybe Lester assumes Sarah hates Jesse because he tricked her into going into Lester’s room. Perhaps Lester sets it up with Jesse and then is aghast to discover that Sarah goes wild for it. Another example of Sarah slipping out of Lester’s control!

Rjh200m

By this criteria, Lester would make Sarah fuck Dan, since he seems to have the smallest dick of all the characters in this story!!!

Rjh200m

But she did not let him cum inside her pussy, so there is hope for her yet!

FU

I’m thinking things about this so-called birth control or lack there of. 1. I think that she had a permanent IUD implanted and is not ready to tell anybody because of the sexual thrill. 2. Maybe she decided to be really careful, cause she didn’t like taking birth control and didn’t trust Dan to get a vasectomy, so she had her tubes tied after giving birth to their second daughter and she’s never told Dan. So at the time she never thought she would be in this position, but now makes the most of it, as she can tease him all she wants, because not only is it a big sexual turn on for Dan, but for Lester as well. 3. Or three she actually quit taking the birth control after Dan did get a vasectomy and taking chances with Lester, but Lester is sterile because of his obesity and other health issues. Otherwise, why would she be so concerned about Byron coming in her? 4. Then again maybe she’s got a purse full of after morning pills and is not really taking chances at all.

FU

Oh no, remember how disgusted she was by the homeless guy leering at them through the fence. I think it’s the janitor, somehow Lester got him a job so he would do his bidding. Now she’s going to get boned in her office by him.

Rjh200m

She was concerned about Byron cumming inside her for the same reason she was initially concerned about Lester cumming inside her - loyalty to Dan. But now it is loyalty to Lester. But she will let it happen with Byron.

ojapa O

Since Sarah purposely didn’t make Byron cum quickly, would love a scene where she purposely makes Dan cum quickly and she can move on to Lester which is her favorite cock.

Mike Kogel

Just finished reading some comments before moving on..story itself is truly over..no reason to spend anymore money....take care

FU

No Lester Tells her to stay bent over the table so he can look at it, he slapped her ass and told her stay there. He walks around the front of her and pulls his cock out suck it. Then he looks at the tattoo guy and tells him would you take a fuck for payment? Tattoo guy says hell yeah. While she sucking his cock, see baby you can pay for anything with that pussy.

Michael Haase

The foundation of the story is Dan's cuckhold fetish and Sarah embracing the fantasy and pushing the experience. Sarah's connection with Dan and her love is a basic tenet. Besides Lester's big cock, Dan's reaction to each incident turns Sarah on and heightens each experience. IMO, Dan needs to remain an integral part of the story or it loses its essence. Likewise, Sarah's appeal is her loving wife and mother appearance, if she becomes nothing more than a cock whore the story is over, Maintaining the story's foundation is the only way for it to continue with the same intrigue.

Michael Haase

Yes, loving humiliation is integral. Denial can be an option, Sarah can be the keyholder, with Lester's permission. Dan needs to earn his release, when Sarah is not in Chicago, Dan's ability to masturbate will be restricted. Dan will be obliged to treat Lester nice, or he may forbid Sarah from unlocking him, Dan may be asked to assume some household chores in the apartment and at home as part of "Good Behavior". Sarah's tease options increase, she's careful but learns Dan loves her discipline and tease. The chastity device has sensors that can detect attempted erections; Sarah can see exactly what excites Dan via the log on the Chastity device web page that Lester and Sarah set up. The screen shows locked status, how long it's been locked and when the next release is scheduled. It has a GPS tracker to follow Dans location and a skin temp monitor to verify Dan's ability to continue being restricted, green for no issues, red for rash or chafing alert. The release option allows tube removal, a full erection and climax is possible, but the retainer loop stays connected around the testicles. If the wearer is allowed a 1 hour release, after the hour the retaining loop will send a slight shock and audible beep every 15 minutes, nothing severe, but the wearer soon realizes he has no option but to replace the tube and lock it. The web channel set up for the chastity device also allows the Admin to invite other guest as view only participants. The ability to anonymously invite others is an unbelievable humiliation for Dan, but as Sarah discovers via the failed erection log, Dan is excited by it. Dan can not hide, will Sarah let him out, will he ever masturbate again. Wow, what a fun game.

Alicia Peters

This was literally the hottest chapter yet love the loyal dedicated wife falling and being corrupted by that creeps cock.

Michael Haase

"I can't Dan, Lester says I can't make love to anyone but him for now" "But I'm your husband." "Let me talk to Lester, I think I can convince him." "Unbelievable, you're asking Lester for permission to have sex with your husband?" "You heard Lester, he's upset I fucked Byron without his consent. I don't want to make him extra mad by doing something with you right now, so, for now, I'm exclusive with Lester. Come on it's just until I convince him to let me take care of you, he is my boyfriend after all and I did promise him.

Michael Haase

"Look, for now I need to keep Lester happy, for God's sake, he is my boyfriend and I did promise him. I'm sure you can get some relief on your own, maybe Lester will let me help. But right now I'm going to keep my boyfriend happy." "What about your husband?" "My husband likes it too, he gets off on me and my boyfriend, so right now it's a win, win, win for everybody."

Rjh200m

Possible opening scene for Chapter 23….. Dan awoke on the chair in the living room and looked over at Sarah who was also getting up….”How are you feeling Sarah?” “Hey Dan, I feel like shit, I am so exhausted and I am stiff and achy from this couch. I really need a good nights sleep.” “Me too” Dan responded, “how about we go to my room, get into bed and get a good night’s rest?” Dan noticed a flicker of hesitation in Sarah’s eyes. “Baby, can I ask a big favor?” Sarah said in a low whisper. “Sure, anything” Dan responded. “Can I sleep in Lester’s bed tonight?” “What???” Dan said, his voice cracking slightly. “Yes, baby, I am so tired and desperately need to rest. Your bed is so cramped and lumpy, and it is impossible for me to sleep without tossing and turning all night. Lester’s bed is so much bigger than yours. And it is so comfy and warm. And his sheets feel so good against my skin. I promise that nothing will happen with Lester, I just need to sleep. And tomorrow morning, I will come by and we can make love like we used to do.” Is this ok, boo? “Well….Sarah” Dan stuttered while at a loss for words. “I am not sure how to respond, but I guess I understand why you are asking. You do look like you need a good night’s rest and I want to do what’s best for you…. so, I guess it is ok…I trust you completely and I love you so much” Dan couldn’t help but notice the quick sparkle in Sarah’s eyes. “Thank you, baby! Sarah said, “You are the best!” Sarah then got up, gave Dan a quick kiss on the cheek, and headed down the hallway to Lester’s room, totally naked….with her bra, soaked thong and sexy outfit remaining on the floor near the couch. From his chair, Dan watched her open Lester’s door and then heard her say “Lester, can I sleep in your bed tonight?” Then he heard the door close, followed by the faint click of the door lock. Dan then got out of the chair, gathered up Sarah’s stuff, and headed to his room. Once in bed, he realized how taken aback he was by Sarah’s request. At first, he was not sure how to react, but he did not want to say no. He took Sarah at her word that nothing would happen, especially after the marathon session between her and Lester just a few hours ago. And he did know that his bed was not the most comfortable and Sarah definitely looked very tired. So he agreed to her request….but he wanted to talk with Sarah in the morning about everything that has happened and how they can move forward together. Dan was also exhausted, physically and emotionally, and quickly was on the verge of falling asleep. Just as he faded into sleep, the last thing he heard was Sarah’s familiar seductive voice through the thin wall that separated his room from Lester’s – “….Put that huge cock inside me Daddy, I want you to fuck me all night….”

CrazyKidd

My favorite chapter thus far. It’s where the story logically needs to go. I think the dynamic is finally setting into place where Dan realizes he can’t stop any of this, because Sarah is now the one who needs it, and he can’t tell her no. In turn, Sarah is being corrupted and manipulated into becoming dependent on Lester physically and financially. Some of the story is far fetched but it doesn’t bother me- this is supposed to be fantasy.

Royston smith

You know Pete ( and this is also addressed to Achilles and other negative posts) I think you have a point to a certain extent. I myself, although loving the story still, am a little worried that it will degenerate to the point where Dan and Sarah have no agency at all. Sarah, in particular, needs to recover her mojo at work and show more of her defiant side where Lester is concerned. I loved her being presented as a strong woman with a strong and distinctive personality and don’t want to completely see that portrayal of her disappear. I also did not like that Dan just let Sarah go off with Byron without a word. Even Jesse was indignant that he had done so. I also cannot see Sarah loving Lester. It just doesn’t ring true. Some of the wilder speculation on here of what Lester should do to Sarah also leaves me cold. However, these caveats aside, I am still a huge fan of the series, as all on here will know, and enjoy each chapter as it comes out. I think you are wrong that Don is just influenced by the majority opinion. As all insiders will know Don rarely alters his basic storyline in response to insider feedback. I have only known him do so once and that was more of a structure thing rather than story alteration. I also think you should give us some indication of how you think the story should develop, instead of just telling us how it shouldn’t develop. It is a hot wife tale after all, so part of the dynamic is Sarah becoming corrupted by Lester and Dan succumbing to his fetish and allowing it to happen. How would you have the tale develop? Do you want Sarah to return to being a loving mother and wife with no kinks at all? Wouldn’t that be boring and fly in the face of the genre you are reading? My own preference is for Don to continue to develop the multiple storylines he has introduced, as just reading about Lester fucking and trying to breed Sarah and nothing else was beginning to get boring. I love the dare angle and his threat to make her fuck someone she hates, as again that introduces different angles to the story and is hot for me. So come on step forward and tell us what you want to see rather than just criticising, all you nay sayers.

J Lewis

From Lester the Prophet: CH1: Lester says to himself, “I’m going to fuck her.” CH2: Lester pictured his end goal. Taking Sarah willingly on his dirty bed. He would pull her deep into his web and she would be his. She will moan his name. She would milk the cum from his cock. He would impregnate her. CH5: I am going to take her from you, dumbass. You won’t recognize Sarah by the time I’m done with her. I point out these “prophecies” only to point out to those disappointed on where the story seems to be heading…you should not be surprised. It’s been telegraphed for quite awhile. For those not disappointed, enjoy the journey.

Royston smith

Oh for fucks sake, can we please have a break from Don Silver imitators on here!! I was being very patient but I am at breaking point now. I don’t want to read pale imitations of Don. I pay for the real thing, why would I want to read drivel from those not fit to tie his shoelaces!!!!!

Royston smith

Thanks for your reply Pete. Good to know more about your thoughts on the story. However, I am still a little confused about your position. You say it’s not a hot wife tale or a cuckold tale but is this true? Sarah is a wife. She is hot. She is playing around with another, considerably larger cock, that happens to be attached to a “troll” (or bull as that is the term normally used for the Lester type I believe) who is dominating her. So there we have the normal triangle that appertains to a hot wife/cuckold tale. If it is not a hot wife/cuckold tale then what is your definition of the genre we are both reading? I get your point about keeping it real and I agree with you as per my points in the previous post, but Sarah’s corruption, to take just one aspect of the story you say makes it unrealistic (and means it is not a hot wife tale, if I understand you correctly? ) is something Lester sees in her very early on, as j. Lewis has ably pointed out in his earlier “Prophecy” post. I believe Don very adeptly develops this tendency for Sarah to want to display herself to men and Lester exploits it. He then goes on to exploit her desire to be dominated and to experience other cocks than his. So the corruption arc is there from chapter 1 if you go back and read it. It is just that now, as you say, it may gave been overdone a tad. Again, I don’t agree there are no surprises or plot twists. The accidental pushing of Sarah onto Lester’s cock in 7, via Jesse’s texts was a plot twist/surprise. Jesse’s re-introduction in 15 certainly caught me by surprise. The Peter plot twist/the cash introduction/the stranger in the carpark/the shopping mallblowjob/ the nerds. Also, Dan putting Lester in his place on two occasions. I could go on. I don’t think though we are too far apart though, as I agree with you we don’t want phoned in cliched writing/plots. That’s why I don’t like DL and am yet to be convinced by NC, which seems like a cliched story waiting to happen. What attracted me to T A was its distinctiveness.

Todd

I’m waiting to see when Sarah misses her period. It’s not if she gets pregnant it’s when. Chapter 23 or 24 will be about the right time. Any opinions on whether she has the baby or an abortion? Will Dan grow a spine about this?

Gabriella J

I thought this chapter was pretty good overall. I wasn't too sure when Sarah went off with Byron so freely, but it came back together with Lester exerting so much control in the end. There's scope for the next few chapters. Maybe Sarah denies Dan for a while. Lester going back to Middleton and the hospital. Lester getting her to fuck someone she hates - likely the new hospital CEO going off recent chapters. Obviously it's hard to keep everyone on board with a story that is 20+ chapters and counting. This story is a real commitment and is more aimed at avid readers rather than the usual sex story crowd, so I can see why people may be getting bored. I think when this story is all finished someone could probably trim all the fat and edit it into a succinct 12 chapter story whilst still hitting all the key points. But that is hard to do when it's being written and published in real time without that hindsight. I'm happy to stick with it but I understand why others may bow out. Paying for this patreon membership is certainly an expensive reading hobby in some regards.

tim

"its never about the bull. Its never about corruption" This is a "dark" hotwife/cuckold tale dude. Thats the point. Thats why the focus is on the bull and the corruption. You wanting it to be something else doesnt make it that. Its a great dark fantasy. Is it perfect? No. Am I expecting Don to deliver pulitzer prize winning literature? No.

Gabriella J

This story is 100% a hotwife / cuckold tale. As are all of Dons stories ultimately. TC is a slight outlier but still falls into the "forced cuckold" category. Anyone reading these stories thinking they're anything else is probably in the wrong place. The niche of these stories in this genre though is that the "bull" (for want of a better phrase) is always portrayed as a conventionally lesser man than the husband, when usually it's the other way around in this genre of stories.

Gabriella J

Also, I agree there's been plenty of surprises and plot twists along the way, whilst also keeping the plot on course. Plot twists that completely divert the story into a different story would be bad storytelling / writing.

Gabriella J

I think the blowjob for Byron was a necessity for the storyline of her trying to plant the bug/USB. Getting in there and getting under his desk etc. I'd have preferred her to have some self respect to stop it there and not get naked and fucked so easily though. I'd have also preferred her to have been able to plant it rather than it being a failure mission though.

Gabriella J

I think the whole will she get pregnant / wont she get pregnant / is she secretly on birth control thing being up in the air is detrimental to the story personally. I get it to a degree, but most negative comments on the last several chapters have been surrounding this and how unrealistic it is that she's not pregnant already, and it is distracting. Don just needs to find a reason why it isn't an issue and tie a bow around the situation to stop the speculation. Maybe Lester has a low sperm count. Maybe Sarah had complications from her previous birth that makes her getting pregnant again much more difficult. Whatever the reason, just make pregnancy a super low risk and let's put that to bed rather than making it an obstacle to the story. Just my current opinion of course. The story could go off in a direction that makes me change my mind on that.

Rjh200m

Lester having a low sperm count would be quite the story changer…..Lester’s ego and dominant demeanor with Sarah would take a huge hit; Sarah might find him much less alluring and exciting; and Dan would be rejuvenated in his battle with Lester for the most virile male in Sarah’s life!

Mark

I really hope that Sarah tries to play the love talk and everything else Dan just witnessed as well just talk only for it all to fall apart when Dan starts to question why he is being denied. Maybe Sarah even Denies Dan her pussy but avoids saying it by finishing him off with her hand or mouth(if that’s aloud) a couple times before Dan finally confronts her about it.

Darrow

A couple of additional things strike me as interesting. First, with both Byron and later with Lester, Sarah got very aroused at the humiliation of Dan. The thought of Dan being humiliated, of being Byron's bitch and telling him so, of Byron emasculating him, really got her off. Second, although she left Byron's feeling horny and wanting more, she wasn't interested in Dan at all. He wasn't the back up cock. She didn't ride him as soon as she got out. She barely talked about fucking Byron, and just kind of played low key, with almost no sexual energy at all. But the minute she's with Lester... Finally, sex with Lester, she absolutely got off again on Dan's humiliation and emasculation, that fueled some intense arousal. Maybe when Lester orders her to have sex with someone she hates, it will turn out to be Dan.

Darrow

Geez, there's a whiny pack of virgins. Look Dudes, get a grip. #1 - The story is the story. Your particular fetish may or may not be catered to. Women can get pregnant very easily. And sometimes they don't get pregnant easily. You want something written to your fetish, write it yourself. The writer is going to write what the writer wants to write. If he writes something he doesn't want to write, because you asked for it, it's not going to be satisfying. #2 - The story is a wank story. You want literature, go read war and peace and see if you can stroke off to that. So enough with these endless complaints about characterization and story progression Hell, if he did what you wanted, you'd complain anyway. #3 - As a wank story, certain things go with the territory. Some characters are superhumanly endowed. Characters can have superhuman sex drives. And incredible orgasmic capacities. The truth is that some people actually do have amazing sex lives in real life. Get over it. #4 - Honest to god, I don't understand people who read a chapter, go 'this sucks.' Then continue to read the next ten chapters going 'this sucks' for each one. Get some therapy. I'm not singling out any person, I'm not attacking anyone specific. This is just general comments. If you feel it applies to you, then accept my apology. I don't mean no harm. But also, really, reconsider why you are sticking around if it's not working for you. What's the satisfaction in whining?

J Lewis

DS has written Lester as a super villain bent on total corruption of Sarah. There is no indication that Dan or anyone else is going to rise up as a super hero. The reign of Lester will continue to romp going forward. Collateral damage be damn.

Gabriella J

I agree @Rjh300m It was an off the top of my head reason to downplay the pregnancy angle. But having said that, Lester has been manipulating women for sex for several years according to the story, and he hasn't got 20 kids running around that we know about. So it would make sense really. But maybe we just have to assume pregnancy is low risk without the explanation of why so we can enjoy the story without the pregnancy angle being at the forefront. Sarah is still playing along with the fantasy even though she thinks Lester is snipped, so removing the actual risk doesn't remove it from the fantasy play.

Gabriella J

@Pete That's a very black and white and specific definition of the cuckold story genre and the term cuckold in general. Cuckold is actually a very broad term - "to make a cuckold out of him" for example is just a term for a man cheating with another man's wife. Not necessarily a BDSM fantasy, but usually with the man having some sense of dislike for the husband. So if a man takes another man's wife and he knows about it but stays in the relationship, especially if the other man becomes the main sexual partner, then the husband is a cuckold by the standard definition. Your definition of what cuckold is, is A definition but not THE definition. In TA, Dan is generally a willing participant, even if he has internal anxiety and reservations. So he is a willing cuckold for most intents and purposes, but definitely being cuckolded by all definitions. In TC, the husband is being blackmailed and drugged in order to let it happen, therefore he is being forced and isn't willing. So he would be a forced / unwilling cuckold by standard definitions. I can get what you are saying, you can certainly put TC into the blackmail/ non consent/ coercion category as well. But it is blackmail into cuckoldery rather than blackmail into sex, because the wife isn't being blackmailed and doesn't know about the blackmail. So in my mind that is a forced cuckold story, regardless if you believe that exists or not. People can have different opinions, but everything that can be done willingly can also be forced and it would be silly to think otherwise.

Royston smith

Or maybe it’s just that Don wants to play both sides of the equation by keeping the is she /isn’t she speculation going. He added a throw away line in 20, which suggested she was taking precautions, but not enough to dampen speculation. Call me cynical, but isn’t this a good way to keep the pro and ante pregnancy factions happy? To me, if she does get pregnant that is the end of the story for obvious reasons. If she doesn’t we will have this endless speculation from the pro pregnancy crowd.

Darrow

Nothing personal. Good try, Pete. Better luck next time. You'll get the hang of it.

DrJensen

Indeed Darrow, what is the point of whining? It seems that your post is the singularly most whiny. This is a comment thread where people, you know, comment. If you do not like the comments, then don’t bother reading them.

Darrow

Gosh Doc, it's less "whining" and more "mocking." I find it slightly annoying but kind of hilarious. I'm sorry if you feel personally singled out and feeling the need to clumsily defend yourself. But I'm not that sorry, that's on you. Have a nice day.

Z

Good chapter, but can we please get finale to Detestable Liaisons as the next story? NC is ok but still months/years before getting to the “good part” while DL is right in the middle of conclusion.

DrJensen

Well, it is nice of you to re-categorise your comments, even if it does seem a bit strange to apologise in advance if mocking was your intent. Now, could you please tell me which part of my comment gave you the idea that I felt singled out?

tim

To me, the darker the better. Lester is set up as a date rapist using a more measured approach to his most enticing prey. Thats much more interesting to me. Im terms of the plot point progression, its good enough to me. Ive had companies i worked for fuck with my paychecks and in fiction you can often dial events up to 11. Is it the most believable aspect of the story? Not particularly but its also a porn story so my need for iron clad plot points is meh. The example i gave a while ago was Dark Knight Rises. They tell Bruce he has no cartelage left in his knees... So he puts on a knee brace and is magically healed, even after the knee brace is lost. It makes no sense but adds drama. Thats a multi million dollar screenplay. If they can get away with it, then a story i found on Lit can have some wiggle room. In terms of Sarah's progression, most women Ive been with dont explore their sexuality. If i asked them their fantasies they would say they had none. Thats how I conceptualize Sarah. Her sex life was totally devouted to making Dan happy. Now for the first time she, her kinks are being catered to and explored. Its hard for her to process and she is getting lost in it. Dan isnt developed enough IMO. I dont like the extent he is sidelined so often but im hoping this chapter gets us closer to him being more involved and actually processing his feelings as he is confronted with the new reality. Depending on the ending, he should probably break down to Lesters victory. Or use the humiliation to propel himself forward and defeat Lester. We shall see. But all that to say - this is a solid story with great story progression/development. Commenting "this story sucks" as a few people do on occasion without any detail/constructive criticism are just pointless comments. Announcing youre leaving/not wasting any more money and then commenting on the next alpha cuz you "just had to know how much worse it could get" Yea. Okay. Sure. Lol Read for whatever reasons you want but dont act like youre enlightened while continuing to pay for something you claim to hate. Even the shit talkers preface that the story is well written so it is what it is. If its not your exact kinks, that sucks. Maybe Don will write something more to your taste in the future or he will continue writing what excites him and it wont align. Such is life.

tim

Forced cuckolding is a genre. Ive read tons of them on Lit. Idk why you're talking as if real world lifestyle choices should guide the storytelling. Thats not how fiction works. Dan and Sarah are not even in the official lifestyle. They didnt approach Lester to be their dom - he inserted himself as such. Also pointing out theres a formula isnt a sign of bad storytelling. All stories follow the formula of "hero gets into a situation, tries to solve it, fails and has to go back to the drawing board" Earlier on, I figured the chapter release meant it would have an episodic feel. Every month Lester would make a move on Sarah and push the story forward. Which it has. I also figured Don would use the slow burn progression and episodic format to explore some usual tropes - IE Sarah on her "wedding night" being the bride trope.

Rjh200m

It may be the least exciting sex she has at the rate she is going!

Rjh200m

Darrow - clearly Sarah has evolved in terms of her desire for Lester, it’s very clear that he, by far, excites and satisfies her the most. Question is whether she wants or needs the “more loving” sex with Dan, especially in light of the last scene in the chapter where there was clearly much more intimacy between Sarah and Lester.

Rjh200m

All, I have a question…when Lester and Sarah were having sex in the first scene of the chapter, he asked Sarah what she needed and she responded “your cock”. Then he said to her that it was more than that and he proceeded to tell her that “a beautiful princess” like her likes giving herself up to a guy like Lester, especially since she knows that he and Dan don’t get along, etc. He said that this makes her wet. Sarah then responded by saying “you don’t know the first thing about me Lester”. My question is should we read anything into her response? From my optic, Lester was right on point based on everything we have seen in previous chapters. Does Sarah have some hidden motivations that we are not yet aware of? Why would she so pointedly disagree with Lester’s assessment of her?

Darrow

Denial. Not just a river in Egypt. I think she's finding her sexual adventures to be liberating. Lester was talking humiliation. She's react negatively to that. But there is some truth to this, she's much more sexually adventurous than either Lester or Dan realize, she's willing to go much further, she enjoys the power of it. Quite often, it feels less like Lester drawing her in, than simply giving her permission. Lester has moments where he fears he's created a monster.

sean_1990

Dan seeing Sarah with open legs and Lester's dripping cum makes a very good scene for a cleanup, may be Dan cleans her up while she is still sleeping and while Dan is cleaning her up Lester peeks over and watches Dan secretly, later Lester lets Sarah know what Dan did

Royston smith

Rjh, I am an admirer of your posts normally, but I think Mark is right in this regard. Sarah has done that before with Lester on several occasions. She may enjoy a temporary victory, a battle won, ( as with the blowjob and throwing him out of her house in 19) but ultimately she loses the war. Lester gets back in the house and she submits to him in 20.

Darrow

Or he just cleans her up without anyone knowing, and it becomes his secret, eating away at him constantly, obsessing him. Every time he goes down on Sarah, he's thinking about it. Thinking how loose she was. Every time he has sex with Sarah, he's thinking about it, how much there was, how loose she was. He starts to think that even when he's in Sarah, Lester was there first, that Lester went deeper reaching places he couldn't, opened her wider than he ever could. He starts to feel Lester's presence in her pussy even with his cock in her, is she looser, more open, wetter, her body more responsive. When she comes is it for him, or is she thinking of Lester. And all the time, when he's kissing her, fucking, licking her, all he can think about is what it was like to lap up Lester's semen as it oozed from her ravaged pussy. No one else knows, but it haunts Dan, and he finds himself yearning for another opportunity, one that becomes irresistable.

Rjh200m

Mark, Darrow, Royston - thanks for your responses to my question on the meaning of Sarah’s comment to Lester…..”you don’t know the first thing about me Lester”. All very good points. But I would like to offer a wider perspective. I think Sarah’s comment to Lester was her way of saying that what happens between them in the bedroom does not define her as a person. Yes, she loves the sex, Yes, she likes being submissive to Lester, and Yes, she is getting increasingly turned on about the humiliation of Dan. But this is just one part of her life and, within this context, it is just something she does because she finds it incredibly exciting (and liberating). It’s not an act with Lester and Byron, Vernon, etc., but it also does not define her as a person and she knows this. In other words, she is not out of control. I couple her response to Lester here with her comments at the end of the last chapter - “ Tonight had made a few things crystal clear to her…..Sarah would need to be the one to protect herself…..Men were like putty in her hands…..All the problems she was facing with Dan came down to men and their ideas of power. Byron, Richard – it didn’t matter. They were all the same.” We have spent a lot of time in this forum discussing the trajectory of Sarah, whether her behavior is out of control and whether she is on the road to total ruin. I now tend to think that she will ultimately prevail. This certainly does not mean that the wild sex will not continue, it probably will increase. But she has a bigger goal in mind. What is it? I think it could be the quest for financial stability/independence and professional success. She will gladly take the great sex, but she also wants to reach these overriding goals. Yes, the sexual adventures complicate her professional and personal life, but I think she gets this and is much more in control than we may think. And she will use her sexuality to help her achieve her goals. And Dan will continue to be a part of her life (although she may have a few surprises for him on the sexual front!) Anyway, I think it’s to the credit of Don and the TA story that we can all speculate to such a degree on where the characters and story are headed!

Rjh200m

Great points! Yes, it is not an “either or” situation, and as we see in life, motivations and actions have many influences. Lester has certainly changed Sarah’s life in a way she never expected and she has to deal with her growing feelings for him. And she has to deal with her fast evolving sexual relationship with Dan. And I agree that she has manipulated Dan’s desires to her benefit, but also it seems to work for Dan.

MV

This is a great post. Very similar to my thinking.

MV

Your first comment is 💯 correct. Without Sarah and Dan being a loving couple and still having a bond, this becomes a different story. I personally read Sarah's degradating comments as being her believing she's pleasing Dan. He doesn't use the safe word, he has an obvious hard-on. The fact that Dan hasn't said Pineapple in that final scene, I regard as a fault. Dan doesn't start this story as a beta, and there must come a point, when he feels like he's genuinely losing Sarah, that he either uses it or steps in? Although they've become changed by this journey, I struggle to believe the original person isn't still inside each of them. Part of me thinks/hopes that as soon as Sarah realises she is genuinely hurting Dan, not turning him on, she will come to her senses.

MV

Agreed. I thought the second comment was wrong. Dan agreeing to *that* level of degradation just doesn't seem realistic.

TD40

I recently just joined DS Patreon. I also just finished ch. 22 & reading the comments below. I want to point out one huge subplot people MAY be missing and then share a couple of my hopeful fantasies for Sarah. 1. prediction: I haven't seen anyone mention this yet. Lester says at the end of the Chapter Sarah can only fuck who he wants & he was going to take revenge for her fucking Byron by making her fuck someone she hates. That has to be her new boss, Richard. DS preluded to it already when he was creepily rubbing her shoulders. My guess is Lester makes herself give herself to Richard. 2. My hopes - I am a lover of bdsm. I would see either Lester or Byron delve Sarah into bdsm. I think Sarah would love some whips & chains. Or maybe a golden shower? Maybe she will start calling Byron Master since he owns he when she comes to Minnesota. Looking forward to people's thoughts.

MV

I think Richard is a fairly sure bet, though it could be someone else. I can imagine Sarah doing *some* BDSM. I'm not sure she's depraved enough for golden showers, though. So far, her focus seems to be dicks and joining in cucking Dan, which she thinks is turning him on. I personally think Dan will reach a breaking point with that. Is she so far gone that she'd carry on when she realises she's genuinely hurting him and risking her marriage. Even if Lester tricks her into thinking it's what Dan wants, would the realisation of what she'd done wake her up?

Sigma

Question for all: To an outsider, Sarah’s demeaning sex talk to Dan, her trash talking to and about Dan, all may seem disrespectful. While it’s all part of the sex play do you think it will lead to actual disrespect of her husband where it will affect the marriage?

TD40

Thanks for the response. You may be right, but I still think Sarah is still learning about her sexuality. After being with a pussy like Dan for years, they've had very vanilla sex. I think she likes the idea of being an object and used nothing more than for a man's pleasure. I guess we will see though. I definitely agree I have no clue where this is going to go with Dan. My guess is that Dan tells her she has to stop.seeing Lester and she starts going behind his back to start

Rjh200m

I think it will get worse before it gets better. She seems to be getting increasingly turned on by it, but she is likely to adjust if Dan really starts to get upset or angry….she may still do it if Dan is not present….but perhaps she does not respond to Lester or Byron’s taunting if Dan is there…..but how Dan will react is also an unknown.

MV

I think that certainly at the moment, she does it because she's convinced Dan is into it. If Dan says the safe word, or lashes out at Lester, that is the test. Will she immediately come to her senses, or will she persuade Dan to back off, saying "You don't really want that, Dan?' I'm very much in the camp that thinks that if the marriage is over, the story is over, though. There are elements of the story that, if they are pushed *too* far, make the story unbelievable. I know some people want Dan to be made a pathetic cuck, but I think that would ruin the story, personally.

Royston smith

So, I previously put out a post on Lester’s threat to Sarah to make her “fuck somebody you hate to teach you a fucking lesson”. Mr Tim Drury’s post (welcome Tim) seems to have made it topical again. My previous post covered Jesse and the conclusion was it definitely isn’t him, as she would quite like to see just how big his “not small” cock is. But let’s do an analysis on Richard now as he seems to be everyone’s favourite for the title of Sarah’s “somebody you hate” (sorry Tim it has been mentioned before). TBH I don’t think it is Richard. Here is why. If we look at the evidence from ch19-21 in which Richard start’s to take up his role in the hospital, you will see Sarah feels: 1. Disdain for him. He is unprofessional in waffling on for 20 meetings at the beginning of meetings about something unrelated to work matters such as last night sports game. 2. Thinks he is a hypocrite. He turns up late to meetings after making everyone else turn up 10 minutes early. 3. She is “impressed and horrified” at how quickly “he was consolidating power and eliminating any potential challengers”. 4. Thinks he is slovenly in his appearance. He was wearing “a new suit since Sarah had seen him last. He looked more respectable, but Sarah still felt an underlying slovenly impression about him”. 5. Finally we have stronger emotions after he “creeped” on her by making her make the coffee and rubbed her shoulders in front of the assembled meeting in 21. He “makes her skin crawl” and she thinks he is “a misogynistic prick”. So, to me none of the above add up to hate. Hate is a much stronger emotion than those I have catalogued above. I think she sees him as someone who loves power and control and while she did not like him creeping on her, on another level she is quite impressed by his ruthlessness. Remember how she was “turned on” by Dan’s ruthlessness in getting jesse fired? Well I think she feels a similar conflict with Richard. She dislikes him (I wouldn’t put it stronger than that) but also can’t help but be turned on by his power play in the hospital. So, if not Richard or Jesse, then who? Well I don’t think there is anyone else who is a candidate for her hate amidst the current dramatis personae. Otis she hardly knows, the nerds she actually enjoyed teasing, Frank, the building manager, she has not met. Vernon/cash she is drawn to as characters who are beneath her. We are left with no-one then. Unless.. something happens in 23 to move her Richard dial from dislike to hate. Its interesting he says this in 21 after massaging her shoulders:”You’re so tense, Sarah,” Richard said, his hands leaving her shoulders as he continued walking around the table. “You don’t need to worry about anything anymore. All of our problems are in the past, and we’re on a bright new course here. I’m sure you’ll enjoy it just as much as I will.” This could be directed to the assembled meeting, but I think not. The sexual overtones seem obvious. He has just massaged her shoulders in front of everybody and made her go get the coffee like his PA. It is his power play on Sarah. Rather than sack her, like Jerry and Marcie, he wants to bring her close and make her his. Remember how he checked her out in 20, like a Lion sizing up a gazelle? So, if he makes a play for her in 23 she may end up hating him. There are other possibilities. It could be a new character that Sarah hates. Perhaps from her past. Remember Lester has access to her social media posts and could find something there. Or he could have found an interesting fact on Sarah’s hates whilst trawling through their documents in Dan’s office in 20. From Ch16: “think one thing is safe to say,” Sarah stared down the empty hallway. We never know what to expect from Lester.” Yes Sarah, that’s very true, we don’t. So who has he got in mind when he says he will get you to fuck someone you hate? We will have to wait and see.

Royston smith

Yes, I do. Surely Dan must be beginning to feel really pissed iff once he is free of the hypnotising effects of watching Sarah be bad. He surely must challenge her on loving Lester? If he doesn’t he will have lost all agency and it won’t bode well for the story going forward. Remember the arguments we have witnessed between Dan and Sarah in the past? I think there must be another one on the horizon. But what bothers me is how easily he gave into Byron. I am worried he is past redemption now.

MV

I have to be honest, I hope she fucks all the people you listed, at different times, for different reasons. Just having session after session with Lester is getting very samey, imo. I'd like her to fuck both Richard and Otis. I'd like her to fuck Byron, Jesse and others at the Lincoln Group. I'd like to see a scenario where something happens with the nerds at Ned's shop. I get that the tensions of the Lester/Sarah/Dan triangle form the core of the story, but I want it to be more about sex situations coming up than all of the story being about Dan's torment by Lester. Just my opinion. Although the sex with Byron wasn't 'great', it was a refreshing change. All of these sex sessions can be used to tease/frustrate/torture Dan in various ways.

MV

The best hotwife stories are the believable ones, the ones you can empathise with. I do think that if this story becomes too 'out there', it won't have the same 'attraction' for people, or at least only for a niche crowd.

Royston smith

Yes MV I agree. I have said before I like the different angles/plate spinning in the story too. Definitely would like to see Sarah go off piste, rather than fucked endlessly by Lester. The nerds chapter was a great one and would love to see a sequel. I think the problem Don has with opening things up beyond the Byron/Sarah scenario, is Lester’s desire to keep control. He does not like sharing. Therefore, the Byron situation is one where he couldn’t control

Royston smith

What was going on as he didn’t know about it. Similarly with the hospital and Richard/otis. Although he has access to the hospital and may even be the new head if IT.

MV

I agree with most of that, but not that Dan was a pussy. Sure, they had normal, boring married sex, but I've never regarded him as a pussy. He discovered a kink, and unfortunately, he discovered it in the apartment of a devious monster. Wrong time, wrong place. I still think the real Dan is under there and will eventually show himself. From little things she's said, I actually think the real Sarah is still under there, too. She's just getting everything she can from this ride while she's on it. Her and Dan will never go back to what they were, that's for sure. I think Dan will let her have lots of sex with other large, powerful cocks and carry on hotwifing.

Royston smith

MV, I like your “others at the Lester group” throw away line. I, myself, have wondered if Byron, to extend his power over her, and to further demean Dan, might have her gang banged by his drinking buddies, whilst Dan watches. Lester, you better get a grip soon or that may well happen.

Royston smith

Again MV, I find myself in agreement with you. You are spot on. This story, as opposed to many hotwife stories, does allow us to suspend disbelief. The way Don has slowly developed Lester’s dominance over Sarah, Dan’s simultaneous fascination and repulsion for it, and Sarah’s gradual recognition of her wild side/ her inner “monster,” has been thrilling to behold. I too don’t want to see it degenerate into just another “ the wife loves big cock and the husband capitulates tale”.

MV

Yes, I'm hoping for a few gangbangs at the Lincoln office. Maybe she's offered to clients to seal deals? The thing about Lester's control, I like to think she's only going to pay lip service to that. Little comments she's made ('You don't know me, Lester') give me hope that, although she's playing-up to Lester's games, the feisty girl inside her is more independent than she's letting on.

MV

I agree. Your last sentence, though, I can't see her desire for large cocks ending. That is a genie that you can't put back in the bottle, imo. It doesn't mean that everyone she fucks will have one, though. Maybe in some of her other adventures, it's the situation she's in that turns her on more than the cock itself.

Royston smith

Tim, I have answered your first point in another separate post. Regards BDSM I have often wondered if Lester might take Sarah there. After all she likes being underneath his large mass, feeling powerless and dominated, being pinned to the mattress. I am not sure about whips and chains. She doesn’t mind her bottom smacking, but being whipped is another level. Perhaps being tied up or handcuffed would feed into her liking for Lester’s domination of her whilst he pounds her from the rear. It certainly would be the next step.

Royston smith

MV I don’t disagree with you. That is why in my “is Jesse the one she hates post” I referred to her obvious desire in 22 to see if Jesse’s cock rivalled Lester’s in size. My point was really aimed at that type of cliched story where that is all that matters and the hot wife has no agency or personality of her own. I love that Sarah defies Lester occasionally, is a strong capable professional woman who has gradually fallen into hyper-sexuality and forbidden desire. Yes, she will continue to desire Lester’s large cock and wonder about the size of others, but she needs to maintain her inner Sarah and not become a total I love big cock bimbo. So, I suppose what I am saying is we need to see situations where the story develops based on what we know of her inner world, and not go in directions where we hold up our hands and say:”sorry, that is not the Sarah we know”.

Rjh200m

Agree that Sarah having sex with others without Lester would be very interesting. The dynamics between Sarah, Lester and Dan are very compelling because of all of the encounters that have had. Sarah’s session with Byron lacked the emotional connection she now has with Lester, but Byron was certainly different, more forceful and crude and he really focused on the humiliation of Dan which got Sarah very worked up. I think Sarah having sex with Thornhill, her boss, would be more interesting than her session with Byron as Sarah seems to admire Thornhill in some ways as Royston pointed out. I could see a strong emotional connection between her and Thornhill as he would seem to combine the take charge attitude that Sarah likes with a softer side (massage, “ you don’t have anything to worry about, Sarah”). Similar to her current relationship with Lester!

MV

Agreed. We don't know yet what all of these other characters are packing. If Lester's taken out of the picture down the line, either permanently or temporarily, if she is regularly fucking someone who is only slightly smaller than Lester, but isn't a troll, that would change the dynamics of any future Lester/Sarah relationship, which I think would be a good thing. I'm really hoping that Richard and Otis are fucking her at the hospital, but that she's also having trips to Byron's office, and getting heavily used there, to protect both her a Dan's income. Even if the other cocks aren't in Lester's league, the power exerted over her could be just as strong, just in a different way.

Mark Albright

I think Lester, as the new IT director, becomes Sarah's confidante at the hospital, as well as her daily dose of dick. Richard continues to treat Sarah as a subordinate/sex object. He starts to grab or swat her butt when no one is around, she threatens to report him to HR, and he tells her the new head of HR is a "good-looking piece of ass I've been tapping." He then offers Sarah a job as his PA, although he calls it his secretary. Sarah storms away from him and goes to Lester's office, fuming. Lester consoles her, holds her and asks if there's anything he can do. "No, I just hate Richard. Make him go away." "Ah, you hate him, huh? Well, in that case..." Sarah, realizing what he is saying, shakes her head, "You wouldn't make me do that...would you?" Lester smiles.

Dallas87

Now that it has been established that Dan can’t protect Sarah from Byron and they need tech access to Lincoln Groups network, Lester is primed to come to the rescue and make greater demands for it. Same potential at Sarah’s job.

Rjh200m

Agree! Lester will be using all of the levers to get Sarah to willingly fall further under his influence and to separate her emotionally and physically from Dan. This has been his strategy all along, including his comment to Dan a while ago that Dan will not even recognize her when he is done. Now that Lester has won Sarah sexually, I think he will focus on providing to her or help her achieve financial stability and independence and a renewed professional standing, which are both very important to her. He will still push her sexual boundaries, but to win her totally he also wants to provide her with other things that are important to her. Basically, Lester will continue to cause a steady degradation of Sarah’s attachment to Dan with a growing realization on her part that Lester can be a compatible partner that will help her achieve her goals. Of course, she has to weigh all of this against her relationship with and love for Dan. I have posted before that I think Sarah is in much more control than we may think. I think she is cognizant of the direction things are headed in, and she has to decide what to do. But no doubt, Lester is a huge and growing influence on her.

MV

I agree. On your last paragraph; I also think Sarah is more in control/aware than we think. For now. As we've said previously, the crunch will come a) if Dan gets upset/angry or uses the safe word (loudly) b) if, as we expect, she finds out she's carrying Lester's child. Those will be crunch moments. Maybe she finds out, tells Lester, and he won't let her tell Dan till it's too late. I'm hoping that if that happens, it doesn't kill off the amount of sex, definitely not just with Lester. Lester may feel that if she's pregnant, he is suddenly OK with her fucking around? I'd prefer a non-pregnancy story, but I think I'm heavily outnumbered. Either way, I hope the volume of sex stays high.

MV

I was kind of thinking Richard is going to be more than just a passing character, that he would open up a new avenue for power/sex games. I think it's good for the story for Lester to have rivals, not always get what he wants. I've suggested the thing about Dan possibly ending up as a house-husband myself. The problem with that is that it kind of takes him out of the story. Sure, we'll get Sarah lying to him and we'll get him being sent videos to taunt him, but he's effectively out of the picture?

MV

Completely agree. If we stop seeing flashes of the inner Sarah and the inner Dan, the story loses so much power, imo. If Lester, Byron, etc, are making her act depraved, it has to have something to be measured against, imo.

MV

The grandparents certainly seem very accommodating. Maybe they take on even more of a childcare role, enabling more action to happen at the house? If there *is* to be a third child, they look after that, too, maybe? Maybe the house is child-free all week, enabling Lester, Richard, or a visiting Byron to come round and put Dan through it at home, but on weekends, Dan stays at home, whilst Lester takes Sarah back to the Chicago apartment, and Dan is sent teaser video clips of what she gets put through?

Rjh200m

Time for Lester to push the boundaries…..he has already fucked Sarah multiple times in their house, including in the marital bed, living room, Dan’s office, etc. And with Dan watching and with him not there. Lester should convince Sarah to have a gathering at her house where some friends or neighbors are invited. Lester is introduced as Dan’s roommate in Chicago and a colleague of hers at the hospital. Lester flirts with Sarah during the party, nothing crazy, but enough so that the other guests can’t miss it. Sarah has a few wines so she gets increasingly touchy-feely with Lester in front of the guests and Dan. At the same time, it is clear to everyone that Dan does not seem to mind the flirting, and that he also seems to have most of the responsibility for making sure that everyone has enough to drink and eat, running into the kitchen at Sarah’s request. At one point, even Lester asks Dan to get some more wine for Sarah and him. At the end of the night, the guests leave and say polite goodnights, but some are wondering what is going on, especially since Lester is not leaving. After everyone is gone, Lester takes Sarah up to the bedroom to fuck her all night. Sarah tells Dan that he can come up and watch after he is done cleaning up. Not sure if this is realistic within the context of the TA story, but it seems that a next step for Lester is to get his relationship with Sarah more out in the open and not just confined to the bedroom. This would be a big step for her and Dan, but the question would be whether they go for it.

MV

I can't personally see Dan accepting that, because then it's not about the sex dynamic, it's purely about degrading him.

Royston smith

Anyone notice Lester’s choice of viewing before he fucks Sarah at the beginning of 22? Ichi the Killer. A Japanese, Yakuza, gangland gorefest. One of the most violent films of all time. Is Don trying to tell us something? It fits tbh with Lester’s violent reaction to Dan humiliating him in 21. Remember how he scoured the “internets underbelly” for contract killers? In his imagination is he Ichi the killer gunning down all his enemies? “Vernon. Dan. The Lincoln Group. Jessie. It was time to burn them all to the ground”.

J Lewis

Since crazy predictions are out here (are they really crazy? ) Only Mr. Silver knows. Here’s the final scene to the story. Sarah calls Dan and tells him she and Lester won’t be home until 7. Final sentence of this insane masterpiece; Sarah and Lester walk hand in hand into Planet Fitness. Sarah working off her baby fat and Lester at Sarah’s request trying to get in better shape. 🤪

Mark Albright

Another possibility of opening thing up would be Sarah and Lester going to a work party together. Sarah is no longer wearing her wedding ring since that is disrespectful to Lester. She tells her co-workers she and Dan have been separated a while (technically true) and that Lester is her boyfriend. Lester us in seventh heaven as Sarah fawns over him in front of everybody, calling him baby and honey and even Daddy. And she brags to her female co-workers how good Lester is "where it counts." She even sits on his lap at one point and tells him she loves him. This allows them to be more open without Dan's approval (or even knowledge). It also makes the casual touching of each other at work not draw any attention.

Royston smith

So, this is an interesting passage. Sarah is being fucked by Lester and looks up to see Vernon staring at her: “She shifted her eyes to look up at his face and found him staring back intently at her. With a lazy, knowing smile. Sarah was entranced by his beady brown eyes. The crows feet at the corners narrowed as he stared back at her. She felt so exposed, some random stranger seeing her for who she truly was, what she really wanted. Beyond the shield of professionalism she usually wore”. “Who she truly was”. Hold onto that phrase for a moment. Now Lester earlier in the same chapter:”The two of them thought they were just playing a game. That they could use him for their own fantasies and cast him aside when they were done, but they didn’t know anything. They didn’t know who Lester truly was or what he was capable of”. So, “who Lester truly was”. An echo of Sarah’s phrase. This story is about the mask slipping, how desires you thought were buried, you are barely conscious of, can suddenly bubble up to the surface and catch you unawares. Sarah is dredging up things she was barely aware of in her inner psyche, Lester is experiencing feelings he thought he had long defeated:”He hadn’t felt like this in a long time. Not since he was in high school”. And Dan? Well his mask hasn’t slipped, it has been ripped from him and smashed on the floor by Lester. He is exposed and naked to the world. The following reverie of Dan’s is the real Dan:”The time Lester roughly fucked her in the parking garage, and that bum had watched intently. He’d seen his naked wife exposed to the eyes of that dirty stranger as she fucked another man. He thought of Sarah exposed in other ways, all of those nerds watching her, surrounding Lester’s bed as she had rode his cock. Maybe Sarah taking on two random guys, both at once, in some shitty motel in a rough part of Chicago. Her picking up a stranger from the bar and bringing him back to their room, giving him whatever he wanted, serving herself up to be taken”. This is rather a nightmare vision. Dan, you need to get a grip or all will be lost. You will lose the lovely Sarah, only the taste of ashes in your mouth, as the final drama plays out.

Sigma

Re a happy ending to the story: Recall the line in Chapter 1: "It was a website that she would eventually wish she had never remembered." "Eventually" implies a realization down the road. When, we don't know. Sarah's "wish" of never remembering seeing Lester's apartment ad implies something bad. As in, deep regret from consequences. What regret, and what consequences? We don't know, yet. But it will have to be some sort of loss. Perhaps of family, husband, reputation, career, health. Anything but happy.

Rjh200m

I think that Thornhill, her boss, would not like that since he would want to further demean her at the office party and, of course, try to take her into his office for some personal attention!

Rjh200m

There is a huge anger in Lester, probably since he was unmercifully picked on as a kid and to this day women are initially repulsed by him. This is why he goes after women by using any means possible including subterfuge and blackmail. As you and others have discussed, it is different with Sarah since he seems to have feelings for her. But at the same time, we are all speculating as to whether the dark Lester will emerge to get Sarah to be totally his. With men, we have seen that he is very vindictive and he is probably capable of what you are alluding to, However, I don’t think he is going to get personally violent with Dan, he said he could have done this, but he did not, instead he went to his SUV and started yelling and banging. He will use others to go after Dan if he decides to do this, e.g., ruin his career. Or he will try to do more of it via Sarah. I would be interested in how he goes after Vernon since he not only got the best of Lester with Sarah, but also stole his wallet!

Rjh200m

Great point Sigma, when I read that line for the first time I wondered about it and what it could portend. Twenty plus chapters later, you can certainly see many potential causes for regret.

Rjh200m

Three characters struggling with (or trying to balance) their inner and outer selves. I think we all do this, but probably not to the extent in this story! I think your comment very nicely lays out how the three characters influence each other, but also have personal choices to make.

Mark Albright

I think there will definitely be a confrontation between Thornhill and Lester at some point. Lester will offer Sarah to Thornhill for a price. Sarah goes along with it to please Lester. But Lester intended for it to be a one-time thing. But Sarah ends up liking it, and decides to use her body to advance her career. She starts to go to lunch every day with her boss, and they can take as long as they like since he's the boss.

Rjh200m

I’d like to see a happy ending where Dan gets to fuck someone! One night Sarah says to Dan “ Lester and I are going up to the bedroom, you can watch if you want”. Dan responds “Sorry, boo, I’ll be fucking one of the nurses at the hospital tonight, she’s crazy about me.”

Royston smith

I think this may allude to the videos. At the moment Sarah is enjoying herself too much to regret things. But if things changed, maybe she finds out that Lester has been lying to them, maybe she feels betrayed by him. Don’t forget his slip over Jesse in the last chapter which Dan picked up. If his web of lies unravels he may go for the nuclear option with Dan and reveal his dirty videos of Sarah. Threaten to sell them on the internet if Dan does not comply. Then we hit a downward spiral and all bets are off.

MV

I don't understand the people who only want her to fuck Lester, not other men. Lester's hold on her is already established. If she fucks Richard for Lester, or Otis, because he gives Lester access to certain rooms, what difference is that to fucking Lester *for* Dan? She's already fucked Byron, and it hasn't stopped Lester wanting to have her.

MV

Yes, the pregnancy is the obvious one. Does Lester tell her not to tell Dan? If that happens, Dan is going to blow up when he finds out she hid it from him. I was more thinking about other stuff they find out; the rental agreement, the underhand computer stuff he's done, maybe Dan works out how he's manipulated some of the situations but Sarah defends him? There are lots of possibilities.

Rjh200m

Related scenario - Sarah finds out that Lester is not fixed, but she also knows that she is not pregnant. What does she do? Does she ask Lester to wear a condom? She has already said “never” . Even if she does, Lester will certainly not agree, and he will work his magic on her like he has done many times already. Under this scenario, I think the TA story would have to address the pregnancy issue. Sarah’s internal dialogue would either say that “I am ok since I am on birth control” or some variation, or if she is not, then she has a real decision to make. Also, does she discuss this with Dan or not?

MV

I expect us to get to a stage soon when she is hiding more stuff from him, or just doesn't value his opinion. Once a couple isn't on the same page, Problems are soon multiplied by lack of communication. Dan discovering she hasn't told him stuff will cause major blow-ups. When the couple get to the other side of all this, as I really hope they do, will Sarah see she risked everything for her addiction to the dick? Conversely, I want there to be a TA2, because I don't really want Sarah's Adventure to end. Should there even be a TA2? Why can't TA1 just evolve? Characters come and go? Scenarios come and go? Is there a baby as some suggest? Does Lester die or go to jail? Do other powerful men with big dicks come into Sarah's world? Does she fuck Richard and Otis, but then move on to work for Byron? In some ways, Don has *too* many choices. I don't envy him.

whiterhino

Wait til she starts lactating....hopefully she shares it with Cash and the nerds, lets see how low she can go.

Sean Thomas

I might have a bad memory but what was Lester's ultimate goal? I think the direction of this story hinges on what's going on in Lester's head. Is he just a sex addict? Is it just about getting a kick out of having control (not necessarily all about sex) or is the objective for him to be Sarah's man (her and Dan split) I feel for Don here because he's caught in-between a rock and a hard place. Reading comments on here, discord and literotica, there's probably a 50/50 split when it comes Dan / Lester fans but one side is going to end up disappointed in the end. I just want this story go on forever (I know it won't), I'm loving the ride and as a Lester fan I hope he continues to get victories even if she ultimately ends up with Dan. My preferred outcome is (after another 20/30 rollercoaster chapters) for Dan and Sarah to recognise that Sarah and Lester have something special and there is an amicable parting/divorce. When you really love someone, sometimes the best thing is to let them go. I would like to think that Sarah is able to change Lester. They enter into a serious relationship but he becomes her servant because of his IT skills and special capabilities in the bedroom.

Mark Albright

I hope Mr. Silver ends it however he wants to and doesn't do a reader's poll to figure it out. He's taken us this far. Carry it on home.

Royston smith

You fucked someone else on your trip, didn’t you? DIDN’T YOU!?” Lester said. “Yesss,” Sarah breathed. “Who?” Lester said. “Byron,” Sarah squealed, “Dan’s client.” “Not Jesse, huh?” Lester grunted as he pounded Sarah from behind…. Something about what Lester just said scratched a part of Dan’s mind, but he couldn’t put the puzzle pieces together at that moment”. So, Dan will now start to wonder, why did Lester think Sarah would be fucking Jesse in Minnesota? As far as Dan is aware Lester doesn’t know Jesse. He professed ignorance as to who he was after the dance hall incident in 15. So, what will Dan do? Will he come right out and ask Lester? Take a while to think things through? Tbh the logical thing to do is to ring Jesse or ask to meet him for a chat. Then ply him for information. The more knowledge Dan can gather about Lester’s subterfuge before confronting Lester or sharing it with Sarah, the better. Jesse is already backed into a corner over Dan’s threat to tell Byron about Peter, so it shouldn’t be hard to extract the info Dan wants. Eventually Jesse will confess the nightclub dance was a set up and Lester and he were in cahoots over it. Also, his recent conversation with Lester will come out in which he rejected Lester’s overtures for a repeat performance. But then will he go on to query other things. Vernon for instance. Was he a set up? Was it a coincidence cash showed up when he did? The increase in rent. Dan already voiced his suspicions to Sarah over that. WIll he go and talk to Frank? Suddenly, Lester’s game could unravel and it could be liberating for Dan. It could act like a revelation that gives him new strength. He may even decide to confront Lester over it all, once he has made full enquiries and use physical force to obtain a full confession. We shall see.

Rjh200m

All good points and questions….and yes, we shall see…but even if Dan finds out what Lester has been doing, he should not be surprised. He knows Lester has been trying to take his wife, Lester has told him this on many occasions. Dan has to know that Lester is not a nice person and would do things to undermine him in order to win Sarah. A related question is what does Sarah do if Dan tells her everything he has learned? Would both even consider cutting Lester off and figuring out how to counter him? Presumable they would do something to protect themselves, but would Sarah be willing to stop having sex with Lester?

MV

I agree that the story could go on much further. I admit I'm Team Dan. Not because I want it to end in sweetness and light, I don't expect that, I just don't see him as the weak cuck that appear in Don's other stories. He's tolerated much, and probably has more to endure yet. He tolerates it because he loves seeing her abandoned sexual release. She gets extra turned on because his hard-ons and lack of safe word convince her she's doing what they both want. It doesn't *have* to end with a total victory for either Dan or Lester. It wouldn't be hard to write one of several endings that people have suggested (Lester going to jail for a time, etc). The people who want to see Lester Crush Dan for being (becoming) a cuck, we didn't all come here for that. This has been a truly brilliant story series. Why alienate a lot of readers when there are ways of keeping both 'sides' on-board? Maybe neither side gets everything they want, but Don retains a bigger readership. I thought all authors wanted that.

Rjh200m

Lester wants Sarah to be his completely with no obstacles between him and her. Compared with his previous conquests which included coercion and blackmail, I think he has deeper feelings for Sarah and he wants her to fall for him naturally. He wants his “princess” to love him not just for the sex, but for the whole person, including his physical appearance. He seems well on the way to obtaining this. But what then? Your vision is one of the happy ending scenarios. But it could be a dark ending. For example, once Lester has Sarah totally, the thrill goes away. He is a predator and he got what he wanted, but now he wants to move on. He cuts a deal with Cronos to deliver Sarah to him. Just one among many possibilities. Key issue seems to be does Lester remain on the dark side or does he evolve with Sarah’s help into someone who wants a life with a partner/wife.

MV

But does she cut herself off from the girls? Would her parents really accept Lester, when Dan has done nothing 'wrong' to their daughter. I have known women who've left their kids (and hubby, obvs) for a new boyfriend, but they are few in number. I'm just not convinced that Sarah is that kind of woman.

Rjh200m

In the bedroom, Dan has seen everything between Sarah and Lester, including her verbal humiliation comments to Dan in this chapter. Dan seems to be good with this. But I think that if Sarah carries some of this over outside the bedroom, Dan will be impacted. Both Sarah and Dan have always seemed to cope by saying things “got out of control”, etc., but to date Sarah has not carried through on any of the verbal promises she made to Lester during sexual passion. We will see how this plays out. I think that this would be the next step for Lester (in addition to pushing her sexual boundaries)….to make Sarah commit to him and separate a little bit from Dan in a public setting. Nothing crazy to start, but little things to get Sarah to be seen with Lester in social settings, show affection for him, a little bit of back and forth flirty bantering…perhaps first without Dan present but later with him seeing it. This would be a big step for her and also a key decision point for Dan if she goes through with it.

MV

Definitely. In many ways, for me, this will be the defining moment, when she consciously belittles Dan outside of sex. I'm kind of hoping she doesn't, because when he began giving in to his weakness, I don't think that's what he signed-up for. But just as important as her making that leap, I really don't think he can realistically not step up or say Pineapple. I know him enduring further suffering fits with the narrative of where this is (apparently) headed, but I think that if these crucial steps are not portrayed realistically, the story is starting to lose something for me personally. Everyone has their breaking point, and it wouldn't be true to Dan's character if he didn't have his. Similarly, it wouldn't be true to Sarah's character if she didn't suffer internal anguish when she realised she was hurting Dan and possibly risking her marriage. I think, as we get to this tough stage of the story, hearing Sarah's internal dialogue is going to be crucial.

Rjh200m

Lots of discussion on how Dan will ultimately react to verbal humiliation from Sarah at the urging of Lester and Byron…..here is some narrative way back in Chapter 5 that portended what is now happening - Sarah: What was your favourite part of last night?" Dan: The words you said and the dirty talking you did with him also turned me on, especially when you talked about me. I don't know why, but it almost made me explode right then and there when he had you talk to me." Sarah: I thought you might like that, I’ll remember to up the intensity a little more next time. I think there is more to come on the humiliation front!

Royston smith

Yes, I think Dan will want to have good evidence before he shares with Sarah. Especially as she seems to be in thrall to Lester physically and emotionally. I presume his immediate priority will be talking through what she is feeling for Lester as the “i love you” admission seems to have shocked him. But making enquiries through Jesse I can see happening straight away.

Royston smith

Yes I agree Mark. A writer should follow his muse not be beholden to the tyranny of the crowd.

Rjh200m

From Chapter 6 when Sarah was jerking Dan off on the flight from Minnesota- Sarah - you want your wife to open her legs and let that man fuck her? You want to see me writhing in pleasure as he pounds into me while I moan his name over and over. Do you want him to fuck me so hard that I forget all about you? Dan - Fuck, Dan whispered harshly as he came. His cum shot out and hit the inside of the blanket, dribbling down onto his naked thighs as she pumped his shaft. Dan closed his eyes, spent. That was one of the most powerful orgasms he had ever experienced. The dirty talk from his wife had been next level and sent him completely overboard. Way back in Chapter 6 it seemed like sex/fantasy talk that Lester would fuck Sarah so good that she would forget about Dan. Now? It appears inevitable unless something changes….i think the “forget about you” part refers to Sarah no longer yearning for Dan sexually like she did at the beginning of the story. Between the amazing sex with Lester, the other partners that Lester facilitates or not, and work/kids, she may not have time for intimacy with Dan, nor would she need it.

Rjh200m

Yes, I agree. But this is what Lester has said he wants, Sarah available whenever he wants; Sarah able to show him affection whenever she wants. The extreme Lester takes this literally, so no Dan, no kids, no professional life to distract her. Will a more reasonable Lester emerge?

Rjh200m

Dan barges in and yells “Pineapple”. Sarah turns to him and says “No, I need a huge Banana”, then grabs Lester’s cock…..sorry, my attempt at humor!

Royston smith

So Grande-man, our esteemed editor, has told us, on authority, that we have now reached the end of arc 2. Presumably, arc 1 ended in 7 when Lester first fucked Sarah. Ending arc 2 with Lester’s final victory in 22, seems somehow fitting. Arc 3 now proceeds. What will it bring? A battle royal between Lester and Byron for Sarah’s pussy? Richard establishing his hospital empire, with Sarah as its temptress empress? Otis blackmailing Sarah for a a bit of slap and tickle in his broom cupboard? Dares galore for Sarah to negotiate, including a date with someone she hates? Jesse hovering in the background waiting for his chance. The Nerds queuing up outside the bedroom door hoping for more. So many plates Mr Silver, so many plates, spinning, spinning….who can see the way forward? Can you fellow members of the silververse? I must confess if Don can weave all the above together convincingly he will have created a masterpiece of hot wife ( sorry Pete) fiction. The first two arcs kept me glued (literally) to my seat, the final arc may finish me off completely (no pun intended). But what of matters of the heart? Will Sarah really leave Dan for the troll Lester? Does she really love him? Is Dan her one and only love or will it “all turn to dust” as “she starts screwing around”? Even Lester thought they were a “tight” couple. He could see their closeness, their love for each other. Will he be able to break that? I think we need to hear Sarah’s internal voice on whether she loves Lester or not. Dan’s internal heartache and thoughts, too. Finally, we also need to hear them discussing/talking things out; are they “still good”? When you look into your crystal ball my friends what do you see? We have had a lot of speculation on here , some informed, some wild and unlikely. So let’s hear from you. Make it credible though, basing it on the text we have in front of us not what you would like to see. I will start the ball rolling. Ch 23 or perhaps 24, will probably partially shift the focus back to Middleton hospital. The Richard thread will develop along the lines of Richard making clear to Sarah if she wants to keep her job then she needs to “be nice” to him, or she will go the way of Jerry and Marcie. In a succeeding chapter Otis attempts to blackmail Sarah into sex. Sarah resists, but soon realises her job will be forfeit if she is reported to the new Richard HR appointment and has to acquiesce. There will be a “crisis” in Sarah’s and Dan’s marriage after the “I love you” admission, unless Dan loses all agency and just becomes a cardboard cut out character. Dan will contact Peter to say: “we can’t fit your device as there is nowhere to fit it, dumbass. Call yourself a Private eye”? Lester will continue his invasion of Jesse’s and the Lg’s IT systems with some success. But he finds LG have a very sophisticated firewall defence in place that he has trouble breaching. In the meantime Byron and co are alerted to his attack and endeavour to find out who is behind it. Byron tells Dan he has to come to Minnesota again. This time Byron invites his drinking buddies along to meet Sarah. He has promised those who meet their sales targets for the month a bonus. Guess what it is. Jesse tags along hoping for his chance. On D &S’s next visit to Chicago Lester tells them he has booked a restaurant with a table for 2 for date night. IF Dan wants to come along he will have to book his own table and pay for his own meal. Sarah’s dare is to wear the low cut black dress Lester has bought her, with matching black stockings. It is very short, reaching only her upper thigh. He tells her she is not to wear any underwear and during the meal, on the pretence of visiting the restroom, she is to drop her purse and bend over to retrieve it, giving one half of the room a view of her bare bottom and the other half a clear sight down her cleavage. When she returns from the restroom she is to give a repeat performance by bending over the table to kiss Lester. Lester tells her if she does this he will reward her by taking her to see the stranger from the carpark and letting her suck him off through the window while Lester takes her from behind. Don can follow in his car if he wants to watch. And there inspiration fails me. Over to you.

MV

I don't believe Sarah *truly* loves Lester at this stage. I know she's started saying it a lot, but is it genuine *affectionate* love, or just love for his twisted mind and his cock? Is anything about Lester truly affectionate? The thing about Sarah's feelings, this is a big hole in the story for me. We hear about her feelings about the thrills, or being turned on by Dan's reactions, etc, but unless I'm missing stuff, I don't feel like I'm hearing her internal dialogue on an emotional level. Her thoughts about how she is comparing Dan and Lester in her own head, other than sexually. If she is to genuinely give herself to Lester, hurt Dan, etc, I'd want to hear in depth her feelings about stuff like that. If I've been missing her doing that, I apologise.

Sigma

In a lot of cheater stories, the cheater's excitement is the secrecy of the affair and that excitement dissipates once the affair is discovered. In other cheater stories, like TA, the cheater's excitement is the spouse's knowing of the extra-marital sex. That excitement, however, depends on the spouse agreeing to some extent with their spouse's extra-marital activities, maybe being sexually excited by the illicit nature of their partner's sex, maybe like Dan being subject to various fetish fantasies. When that spouse stops agreeing with it, then the entire story changes. What happens when Dan comes to realize this has all been a setup of massive proportions? Someone earlier mentioned Dan having a "revelation" of sorts if-or-when he realizes the videos, pictures, subterfuge between Lester and Jesse, etc. Once the accepting spouse realizes the extra-marital liaisons of his partner are not organic but calculated and conspired, the thrill is gone. No longer a thrill, but now a threat of massive proportions. Just as Dan immediately realized the Jesse threat and took decisive action, my bet going forward is that whenever Dan has that revelation (however it comes to him) then the story will take a massive turn. IMO this has to happen to Dan. He cannot remain a cuck forever and just let things happen, he's not that weak and it doesn't advance the story. He's proven a few times the ability to get control of himself. He's aggressive in trying to become independent with his own business and accounts. He's not been afraid of physical violence, nor of confronting people like Byron ("fuck off Byron") or Jesse, nor of negotiating with Peter. And since he's not always in the thick of things with Sarah and Lester, he has cleaner eyes than his wife so he will come to the realization much earlier than her. What will he do? What can he do? What risks is he willing to take? What losses is he willing to accept? We'll have to wait and see.

Richardcat

It’s so much fun to speculate on this story and to read everyone’s thoughts. So here goes. I don’t think marriage is in the cards for Lester and Sarah. He’s a narcissistic sociopath. He wants to control her, possess her but I can’t see them living full time together. He’s a slob who doesn’t care what others think and it would eventually drive her nuts. I do think he would like to impregnate her as that would be the ultimate victory over both Sarah and Dan. Remember they are the type who considers him a loser and he has strong feelings about that. He has to be wondering why she isn’t pregnant yet. I believe she is using some type of birth control and he will get her to stop it. There may be some more action with Byron but he doesn’t satisfy her like Lester and I think Lester will interfere effectively with Byron’s business which will sideline him. It’s likely that Lester will get her to fuck someone else but not until she is pregnant by him. I see blowjobs for Richard and Otis in the future although not necessarily due to Lester’s pressure. Richard has her keeping her job as leverage and Otis blackmail. It seems to me that if Lester wants to keep her as his personal sex slave but not live full time with her it would be a benefit if Dan could work at a job in Middleton. He would be able to watch the kids while Sarah sees Lester. I’m still puzzled about the group in D.C. and where they fit in. Federal agent involvement? If they did any kind of background check on Dan it’s obvious he would be a security risk. Lastly when this is done I would love to see a prequel showing some of Lester’s previous conquests.

Royston smith

Yes Pete, I think that may happen further down the line, or even sooner if Dan pursues Lester’s “Jesse” slip and has an insight/ revelation on Lester’s subterfuge, as I said in a previous post.

Royston smith

No, I think you are correct MV. We hear Sarah’s internal voice on her lust for Lester, how she can’t seem to resist his advances, crumbles quickly when she sees his horse cock, but nothing on her feelings toward him. We heard her ponder on Lester’s feelings for her in 17, she thinks they are akin to love, that look he gives her etc., but nothing on her feelings for him. She is jealous of Lizzie though, which perhaps tells us something.

MV

That's a very good point you make at the end. I think I'm guilty of not attaching enough weight to certain incidents or words because I don't think they are significant at the time.

Royston smith

So, Peter. What a waste of space! He is a PI ( we think) and yet hasn’t done his homework on the LG properly. He doesn’t even know that they don’t use PC’s with a usb plug in. What a berk. If I were his employer I’d ask for my money back.

Royston smith

So , the Sentinel group. What is their place in the story? The story doesn’t need a security conscious company, probable secret government agency, employing Dan. All he really needed was employment outside of Walt. So why??!! Could it be that they are monitoring the LG? They know they are up to no good. They wanted Dan because he had worked with them? Perhaps they are employing Peter too. If so, I don’t think much to their judgement. I’d be interested to know what you others think because it is dang sure puzzling me.

Sigma

On the other hand, maybe it had nothing to do with the USB. Remember Bridget Fonda in Point of No Return, when she was trained as an assassin and her first "job" was a test to see how creative she was? She followed the instructions but the supposed escape window was bricked up and she had to innovate. Maybe Peter was willing to sacrifice Dan. Maybe it was a test to see how far Dan could get inside LG. Maybe it was a test of Dan's willingness to put himself at risk. Maybe Peter works for Sentinel, and this is a test to see his abilities. Maybe there's really no one else inside as was claimed. Maybe it was just to confirm the network setup within LG that there are no hard drives, but a central hub. So far Don hasn't really introduced many irrelevant people, so there's got to be a purpose behind Peter and his subterfuge.

Sigma

Ultimately there will be a comeuppance with Lester. He'll slip up, especially when he's emotional. Much of his crime is hacking. So where can he mess up? One way is trying to hack a very mysterious, devious, amoral company as Lincoln Group. He may have opened a Pandora's Box of trouble if they "let" him in with a honeypot just so they can track him back. Another way is when another high-security firm is involved that includes a super tricked up secure laptop in the hands of Dan. Lester can't stand Dan beating him, and having a laptop he can't crack will undoubtedly tempt Lester. So what if he hacks it somehow, trouble ensures perhaps even involving Dan, but it gets traced back to Lester?

Sigma

Another possible use in the story of Sentinel could be to give Dan more resources in his fight against Sarah's prowlers. Perhaps Dan makes some good contacts and friends within Sentinel, or maybe they have other resources that will be at his disposal, or their 3-letter friends may come to have an interest in Dan (maybe through Peter?) because of his getting in to LG.

Rjh200m

A ton of great comments on where the story may go. I would add a few thoughts - — Royston mentioned completion of the arcs, the first being when Lester first fucked Sarah, the second at the end of this chapter (22) where Lester achieved his “final victory”, and now we are in arc three. I would say that the “final victory” could be defined as his victory over Dan where he showed Dan the power he has over Sarah sexually and how he got Sarah to do and say all sorts of things in front of Dan. If we look at how far the Lester - Sarah sexual relationship has advanced since their first encounter and what Lester wanted to achieve, it certainly could be considered a total victory. However, I think the third and current arc is really about whether Lester wins Sarah out of the bedroom. And a lot of the comments revolve around this, including what Lester will do, what Dan will or will not do, how Sarah will evolve, and the fate of Sarah and Dan’s marriage. — I don’t think Lester will be a monster, destroying Sarah and Dan, I think he will try to win Sarah totally by giving her what he thinks she wants/needs in her life in and out of the bedroom. I don’t think Sarah will mindlessly fuck everyone, she has other goals in life other than great sex; and this includes using her sexuality to her advantage, for example, sexually manipulating her boss Thornhill. And I don’t think Dan will evolve into a mindless cuck. He will rebound and try to come to a middle ground regarding his sexual urges. However, I don’t see any possibility that Dan and Sarah’s sex life returns to what it was pre-Lester. Those days are gone forever. And unless Dan and Sarah get their financial situation in a much better place, I think their marriage is in real jeopardy, especially since Lester is not going away. — I think Peter’s goal was not to install a UBS drive on a LG computer, but to actually get Sarah into a sexual relationship with Byron. He used Dan to achieve this. I think Peter has plans to use Sarah to compromise Byron in some way. — I think the Sentinel Group could certainly be aligned with Peter or even be his employer. Why would DS have such a powerful and secret group in the story as opposed to some generic company that could purchase Dan’s services? Possibly to play a role in taking down The Lincoln Group and indirectly helping Dan and Sarah escape LG and Byron’s clutches. Dan does not have a lot of ammunition to take on Byron, so he needs help. Sentinel/Peter could provide this. And if Sarah can convince Lester to go after LG, you could see LG being taken down. Again, this would help Dan and Sarah, including their financial livelihood.

Rjh200m

But does she love him enough to leave Dan? To have a life with him, including raising her two kids if she divorces from Dan and has custody? I don’t think so.

Richardcat

I agree, I think somewhere in the past chapters that Lester indicated that one of the problems with women is that they develop emotional attachment. I think Sarah does have some feelings for Lester. However he does not have the same feelings. If someone took her away he would be angry because it’s like taking one of his possessions away. He would have no problem causing her significant problems if she rejects him. Look at the way he exposed her to problems by having sex in front of a window in her house and at work. If it causes her pain he doesn’t care as long as it shows his power over her.

Richardcat

I think they are a government agency (FBI?) looking into sex trafficking. Dan would not normally pass a security check. I think they wouldn’t give him any classified information but hope he leads them, in some way to get some inside information into the Lincoln group.

Darrow

Just a thought on Byron's perspective. Byron's a petty, bullying guy. Alcoholic. Self absorbed. Not really into work. Early on before everything went pear shaped, he threw his weight around on Dan and Jesse, insisting on using business meetings as drinking opportunities, and nakedly ogling Dan's wife... and not shy about it. I don't think he's a competent businessman, but he doesn't give a shit about that, because he hires and fires competent business men. He's connected, very well connected, probably a college football player, probably a fraternity bro. He's found he can use his connections and bullying, and he's very good at abusing people to stay on top. He's also got a huge temper. That whole nuking Dan's entire company over Jesse's email? That was Byron. His approach to Dan after, nakedly lusting after Sarah while trying to recruit Dan, that's heavy handed. He misread the situation, he thought Dan was desperate, and Dan would snap at a lifeline. Dan pushing back set him off like fireworks. This isn't a guy who takes no from people beneath him. Jesse buying his way back? I don't think he's got an ounce of respect for Jesse, but he might use him as a drinking buddy. And absolutely no promise he makes Jesse will ever be kept. Byron simply doesn't think like that. He has no sense of obligation or fairness, only what he can take. He's like Lester in that respect. But Jesse was useful in letting him know that Sara was obtainable. And Dan could be captured and paid back for his troublemaking. Anyway, let's look at the Sarah encounter from Byron's point of view. He meets Sarah, Bill and Jesse, and immediately, he corrals Sarah to himself, literally cutting her away from her husband. She's smiling, flirting, seems totally into him, encourages him to be self aggrandizing. She flirts openly with him, right in front of her husband and he loves that. Then she asks - SHE ASKS - to go off with him alone, to be shown his offices. For a guy like Byron, that can only mean one thing. Up in his offices, he gets some water, and finds her behind his desk. And get this, she's looking to see if she'll fit. The Bitch wants him. She goes down on her knees in a heartbeat, eagerly sucking his dick, totally willing and into it. She wants him. She's eager, submissive, and totally attracted to him. She can't keep her hands off him. She's totally out of her loser husband's league and just going for the real Alpha male. She does every single thing he tells her, willingly and enthusiastically. He takes complete control and she gives it up willingly to him - first the top, then the slacks, puts her on a chair, takes the panties. He rawdogs her, not even bothering with a condom, and she lets him. Whatever he wants to do, she's into it. There's no pretending, this isn't some hooker (and he does a lot of hookers), this is a drenched piece of pussy, and she's totally into him. I think for Byron, he sees her as being captured in instant, overwhelming sexual magnetism. Hell, she's eagerly swallowing down his come, can't get enough. She orgasms as he fucks her, and there's no faking that. He looks down on her loser husband, and best of all, she looks down on the loser too. The girl has chosen her real man, as far as Byron is concerned, and its not her husband. And the best thing: She says it out loud, she shouts it, she says it to the absent Dan. "I'm Byron's bitch now!" It's not just sex talk. For a guy as nearly sociopathic as Byron, it's like wedding vows, or a bill of sale. As far as Byron is concerned, he owns her now, owns her completely, she's handed over deed and title, and she wants to be owned. That's how his narrow mind and gigantic ego takes it. So where does it go from here? Emotionally, Byron is a spoiled toddler. He wants what he wants, he wants all of it all the time, and he'll throw an epic tantrum if he doesn't get it. Which means that if Dan shows up in Minneapolis without Sarah in tow, Byron's fury will be fucking epic. He'll throw the tantrum of all tantrums, and he'll do whatever he can to hurt, humiliate and wreck Dan or his life. Lester's handling will be gentle in comparison. It also means he's going to be incredibly demeaning instantly. A lot of business meetings in Minneapolis that Sarah will be required to accompany her husband for. Byron may well demand her in Chicago, or demand that she travel places. He wants Sarah, he owns her, so in his mind, he's going to fuck her every opportunity, and as far as he's concerned, she wants it too. But even if he realizes she doesn't, he won't care. Having her when she doesn't want to be had just makes it better for him, shows his power. He'll want to possess her completely. It's going to be race between Byron and Lester to see who takes her anal cherry. Also, he'll insist on Sarah's monogamy to him - no more Lester. Maybe eventually no more Dan - for sex at least. And he will absolutely insist on humiliating Dan. He's going to make Sarah say "I'm Byron's bitch now." And likely in a public place, a bar or restaurant. He'll act as if he's her husband or owner in public, making sure Dan is at a distance. Like french kissing or groping her in a restaurant, while Dan sits quietly at the other end of the table awkwardly, iike some guest. In private, he'll make her blow him or fuck her in front of Dan, just to consecrate his ownership. Then he'll kick Dan out of the room. Once he's demonstrated ownership, the only reason to let Dan stay is to humiliate him further. The general abusiveness of his behaviour towards Dan will escalate. If Dan ends up in a chastity cage, that will 100% be Byron. Hell, Byron might go there really fast. If Dan is lucky, it will only be for visits to Minneapolis. Jesse will be up for some humiliation as well, and he'll get put in his place. But he's a nonentity as far as Byron is concerned. As for Sarah, well, as far as Byron is concerned, she's dismissed her husband as worthless, she's willingly and eagerly traded up to him, she's signed herself over to him. As far as he's concerned from this point on, it doesn't matter a damn what she thinks about anyting, or if she thinks. She's his toy, and she no longer requires ideas or opinions, just do as she's told and be his private, eager, wlling nympho. As long as Sarah keeps stroking his ego and playing the game, she'll be fine. The more she expresses herself, the more he'll consider it something annoying to discourage or train her out of. Rebellion, refusal or rejection - wild fury and all kinds of revenge. Sarah is going to be stuck with Byron, she's smart enough to play him. She's pumped him for information easily, and she's very good at manipulating him and his erection. As long as she plays willing personal sex slave, he won't even notice. One thing Byron is going to do with Sarah is share her. When you own a toy like Sarah, you want to brag and show it off. He'll take her to social occasions, show her off to friends, and definitely share her pussy. He might even let Jesse have a go, to both reward and humiliate him. The difference between Byron and Lester, is that Lester seduces, everything Lester does is seduction, even now when he fucks Sarah into oblivion, he starts off with seduction. He intrigues and draws Sarah, excites her. Byron will simply demand. He's not going to seduce, he'll order Dan to bring her, and when she's in his company, he'll order and demand. Lester cultivates her orgasms. As far as Byron is concerned, she's there to cultivate his orgasms. If she has orgasms of her own, its because he's so damned hot and potent, not anything he has to work at or build up. It's all about his satisfaction, her satisfaction is the pleasure of giving him satisfaction. He doesn't realize that she's been well trained. As a lover, he'll be selfish, demanding and relentless.

Darrow

Not really. Dissecting a character doesn't necessarily mean he'll be a large or small thing in the story. Byron is essentially an emotionally immature, selfish little boy in a grown up body and he's spoiled rotten. He's toxic in different ways than Lester. And he's in the picture somewhere, so its worthwhile to break down the character to see what he will do, and what he will want to do.

Royston smith

Ok guys, I think Sarah does have feelings for Lester, but they stop short of love. Mark is correct that Sarah has grown fond of Lester for the reasons he has given. I also think she likes the fact he is obviously loaded. She was impressed with him paying the rent, his $250k fee for the hospital work etc. She craves financial security after the years of struggling, and Lester can provide that. Notice how she had a dig at Dan by praising Jesse’s new job and contrasting it with Dan’s. Dan thought it was her bad girl game but I am not so sure. What we badly need, as I and MV have said, is to hear her internal voice on her feelings in the next chapter. That will tell us who is right.

Rjh200m

Not sure it is a right versus wrong discussion. She could love Lester and still find it difficult to leave her marriage. But if Lester could provide financial security, professional opportunities and great sex then it is possible. I agree 100 percent that the story needs to address Sarah’s thoughts and motivations beyond what has been revealed to date, as well as some decisions have to be made by her. As you said, hopefully in the next few chapters.

Rjh200m

Someone (Royston or Darrow?) asked for opinions on what is ahead for the TA story given the parameters of the story and what we know, not what each of us may want to happen independently of the information in the story Here is my take, based on some of the “internal thoughts” of Dan and Sarah during the last scene of Chapter 22 . First the internal thoughts - — Sarah: She had been craving Lester ever since the night before with her encounter with Byron. No one made her cum as hard as Lester could. - Sarah: She’d never kissed another person so intimately and completely. She’d never wanted someone as badly as she needed Lester right then. - Sarah: Her face contorted into a near-demented mask of pure pleasure that only Dan could see. — Sarah: Admitting these things in front of her husband was driving her wild…..She didn’t know what would be crossing the line for Dan, but at that moment, all she wanted to do was make Lester happy. — Dan: Dan couldn’t help but stroke himself harder at the unprecedented sight in front of him. Watching Sarah cum this explosively was too much for him to handle. — Dan: A memory popped into his head, where Sarah had vehemently expressed her disgust at the idea of any sexual act relating to anyone’s asshole. — Dan: As his balls emptied, his mind finally seemed to come back down to his body, and he began to process the illicit scene in front of him. A look of genuine horror spread across his face. — Dan: His brain felt like it had been shattered into a million pieces and was desperately trying to put itself back together. He had no idea how to chart these unknown waters or how to react to any of this. He had no map for what came next. He just sat and stared at the taboo coupling in front of him. What will happen going forward - — The best sex for Sarah is and will be with Lester, not Dan. The difference is that both Sarah and Dan now realize this, including the shocking intimacy part of Lester and Sarah’s coupling. Sarah has sexual needs that Dan cannot meet; she has evolved way beyond what Dan can provide. It’s now about Sarah’s needs, not Dan’s fantasy. Sarah and Dan’s marriage will have to evolve to accommodate this reality. — Lester has set the ground work for regular and more private time with Sarah……as Lester said “Did you hear that?” Lester grinned, “Your wife wants me to stick my cock in her ass and fill it with cum. I’m gonna save that for a private date when you’re not around.” — Lester will exercise increasing control over Sarah sexual life. As Lester said: “You. Don’t. Fuck. Anyone. Else. Unless. I. Say. So….Got it? Not even him.” Lester nodded in Dan’s direction. — Lester will follow through on his intention to control Sarah’s sexual activities with Dan. As Lester said: “It doesn’t matter what Dan wants, do you understand?” “Yes,” Sarah breathed…. — This will include Sarah denying Dan with regard to fucking her……as Lester said: “Tell Dan you like it raw. Tell him.” Sarah didn’t turn to look at Dan. With her eyes clamped shut, she was focused on riding Lester’s huge cock, “I love it raw, Dan. I only want Lester to fuck me raw from now on.” This last statement by Sarah can be interpreted in two ways, Lester will fuck her raw from now on…..or only Lester gets to fuck her raw from now on, no one else. Since Lester has already been fucking Sarah without a condom for a long time, I’ll go with the second interpretation - essentially that Dan will not be allowed to fuck Sarah anymore or that he has to use a condom. But based on all of the above, I think that this will happen naturally (not forced by Lester) as Sarah’s desire for Dan to fuck her diminishes going forward.

MV

A good post. The unknown here, as we've touched on before, is will she carry on like this when she knows for a fact that Dan is no longer enjoying this, in fact it's hurting him? I may be wrong, but I've been very much under the impression that she believes Dan secretly craves this. What about when he doesn't? Probably the pivotal moment of the story. If she forges ahead, all bets are off. Definitely for a time, what comes after is down to Don.

MV

Grandeman made a comment in the Discord about the next chapter demonstrating the new normal (possibly). To me, that means 2 things; 1) Sarah ignoring Dan's hurt. 2) Sarah finally missing a period/getting a positive test. If either of those things occur, or even more if it's both of them, we are definitely in a new paradigm. It could also include Lester's exclusivity, obviously.

MV

I agree with you, but I feel like we're outnumbered around here. So many others just seem to 'want the cuck to suffer'. I think the next chapter will give us a good idea of where things are headed. As others have said, it's fairly certain to start with Dan waking up to find Sarah gone to Lester's room.

Darrow

My bet that the new normal is Lester's exclusivity. That doesn't mean that Dan gets cut off... not right away. Only that their sex play / games are now going to involve either Sarah or Dan explicitly getting his permission, or Sarah and Dan doing it behind Lester's back... having an affair with her husband behind her boyfriend's back. The damnedest thing is that I think Dan would get into it... when he's horny. After he comes, he's going to be pretty conflicted about it. But the problem for him is that when he's aroused and horny, he's ... compliant. And after he's come, he's ineffectual.

Darrow

Something I missed earlier: "“Why don’t you get down on your knees and see?” Byron suggested. Sarah stood staring down at him before slowly lowering herself to her knees. Byron unbuckled his belt and pulled it out of the hoops on his dress pants before unzipping his fly." Byron pulled it out of the hoops. He took off his belt completely, even before unzipping. He dropped his pants and boxers. Why take off the belt completely. Why not unbuckle and drop them with his pants? I think Byron has his own little kinks, or maybe big ones. I think that he unbuckled and took the belt completely off and out of the loops because he's got a taste for bondage. I think that the belt is one of his 'go to' thing - look around the neck, as a n ad hoc collar and leash. Wrap it around her wrists as cuffs. Around her torso to immobilize her arms. Maybe a light slap(s) across her tits, or on her bottom. Even just slapping it against his palm menacingly, just to let the bitch know who is boss. Notice how he played with her body like a toy, and gave instructions. And especially, notice how he moved her into a chair, and positioned her in that chair, right up against the window. He could have just as easily fucked her on his desk, or on the couch in his office, or anywhere in the office in any position. He could have sat back and had her ride him. But instead, he's extremely deliberate in where and how he positions her, as if perhaps, he enjoys placing women in positions. But if Byron really is a bondage freak deep down, why didn't he follow through and use the belt on Sarah? Either around her wrists or as a collar and leash. A couple of reasons. First, like all guys like him, he's a bit hesitant at first. He likes control. This is first time with Sarah, he's a little hesitant to bring out the kink. Second, and more critically, I think Sarah moved too fast. She went right down on her knees at a word, she was sucking his cock right off the bat. I think she moved faster than he expected, was way too compliant, too submissive, the belt wasn't necessary and even if he wanted it, things were going so he just didn't have the opportunity to bring it in, without breaking up the flow. But if he does have this kink, then I'd expect him to draw Sarah into it on their next encounter. He's declared ownership, he knows how willing she is, he won't be taken by surprise and he won't rush. Instead, he'll take his time. It might be interesting. It would make for a completely different dynamic. As it is currently, he's just sort of a lesser version of Lester, more demanding and thuggish, but basically the same shtick, except cruder, clumsier and now as well hung. If he is a B/D guy, that might make things more interesting because he'll be doing things that Lester doesn't. Just a thought. *** I don't know if I've pointed it out already, or if anyone else has picked up on it. But regarding Sarah's encounter with Byron, she ends it by feeling unfulfilled and horny. Basically, she leaves Byron wanting more, much more. But then when she goes back to her husband, she shows no sexual interest or enthusiasm for him. She lets him know she fucked Byron but the mission was a bust. But she doesn't even bother to talk about it with him. Where's all that sexual energy gone? She walked out of Byron's offices horny and looking for more. But with her husband, it's ... poof, 'I'm tired.' Of course, it reappears instantly and volcanically when she walks into Lester's apartment. I think that's major. Of course, that's not the only time she's shown sexual disinterest or indifference to Dan. She did that again after DnD night in the shower. And of course, she is increasingly fantasizing about Lester while doing it with him. I think that Lester has wound into their sex life so much that Sarah's just not interested in Dan anymore, unless Lester is somewhere in the mix. *** Finally, I think there's something really significant that Sarah may not even realize herself. Dan pimped her out. The Byron thing wasn't a sex game, like they were playing with Lester. It wasn't for mutual excitement or adventure. None of the dynamic and slow seduction and escalation, the mutual sense of play and excitement, the mutual fun, and mutual consent, none of that was in play. Instead, Dan simply goes: "My new boss is riding me really hard, and he wants to fuck you." And more: "I need / want you to plant a bug on Byron's computer, and to do it, we're going to put your pussy in front of his cock." Clearly, they had communication, and there was a lot of teamwork, marital reconciliation and bonding, 'Dan and Sarah together' and even affection, romance and commitment. So I think Sarah has glossed it over, and she's definitely into teamwork and commitment. But on some level: Her husband pimped her. This wasn't a game, he made her his whore, and whored her out. And worse, he was a weakling pimp, ineffectually handing her over to a bigger stronger man, a superior. On some deep subconscious level, Sarah feels Dan is a weakling, who has made his wife into a whore because he's not strong enough to be a man. She may not be facing or dealing with it on a conscious level. She may not at all. Or she may start thinking in those terms in a later moment. Or if they have an argument, it's likely it's going to come out, possibly shocking both of them. But I think it's operating on subconscious levels. She was extremely enthusiastic about handing herself over to stronger pimps: "Byron's Bitch" "I'm yours Lester." Byron uses the word pathetic for Dan, Sarah repeats it when with Lester. I think she's got some unacknowledged resentment. I think her disinterest in Dan, after leaving Byron and feeling unsatisfied and horny, had an aspect of that resentment. An unconscious 'fuck you, Dan.' The resentment will increase. Particularly if Dan keeps pimping her out to Byron... as he's almost certainly going to be forced to do, even despite Lester's order. On the surface, they're together in this, they're a team. She needs to do it for the man she loves, and for the good of her family. But this entire mess is his fault, she's the one that has to spread her legs, and it complicates her thing with her lover. So fucking Byron again is probably inevitable. But it's also going to keep increasing subliminal resentment towards Dan.

Rjh200m

None of this would be surprising based on what we know of Byron so far. How will Sarah react? I would say that Lester is a soft dominant for Sarah, but Byron seems to be a more explicit and forceful dom. We will have to see how Sarah reacts to this. I think Sarah responds more to an emotional connection, so I don’t think she will take well to Byron’s very strong handling.

Darrow

Except that she's going to be in a position where she literally has to go along with it, and play along with it. And once her motor revs to a certain point, I think she'll get caught up in it. But yes, I think Sarah's going to have all kinds of emotional baggage and processing to do. I don't think she'll form an emotional connection with Byron, the way she's forming one with Lester. Byron's too stupid and narcissistic to even bother trying to develop that. But I think he has a chance at dominating her. Sarah's life is going to get very complicated.

MV

I don't see it that Dan is 'into' being a cuck. He's into seeing her lose control and get fucked stupid, but he didn't start out this story as a beta, like the hubby's in Don's other stories seem. A victim of his desire to watch her and his deteriorating financial security, he's been backed into this corner. Apart from going to Minnesota when she needed him home, he hasn't *done* much wrong, imo, just caused himself problems by inaction.

Rjh200m

Sorry Darrow, when I commented on your post, I somehow had only read the first part about Byron and his belt! The rest of your comment made excellent points about Sarah’s possible thinking. If we go back to the start of TA, we see a very active sex life between Dan and Sarah with, of course, their mutual interest in Sarah having sex with someone else. It was sort of a harmless fantasy and, presumably at the time, they had no actual experience. Fast forward to the present and we see a huge advance in their experience and possibly as you mention a divergence in their perspectives. Maybe Sarah’s experience with Lester and Byron have opened her eyes as to what really turns her on sexually and what she wants/needs in a man. Ironically, it could be a situation in which the more Dan gives in to his true desires, Sarah starts to realize that there are some aspects of his behavior that she may not be comfortable with. What they are doing is now real and no longer a harmless fantasy. We will see how this plays out. But there are a few things we do know — Sarah does not find sex with Dan as exciting as she did at the beginning of the story and Lester is definitely at the center of her sexual desires. Also, while she may have emerging feelings of resentment against Dan for being weak and pimping her out, she is definitely not blameless for the current situation. And just as Sarah may be reevaluating Dan, it’s likely he will do the same to her. The fate of their marriage depends on whether Sarah and Dan can come to grips with and balance their desires, urges and behaviors.

GW

any chance Lester decides to remove her priority as a parent and gets it on in the daughters bedroom while they aren't home or if they are home he takes her upstairs to the bedroom?

Mark Albright

I think the "new normal" that somebody mentioned is that it has gone from Sarah and Dan to Sarah and Lester. And it happens without Dan and Sarah even talking it over. The next chapter could start out right after the last one ended with Dan waking up during the middle of the night and hearing Lester and Sarah going at it again. He finally goes back to sleep, only to be woken up the next morning by them going at it again. He gets up and watches this time through his peephole. He hears Sarah saying "Only you, Daddy, I only want you." After they finish, he watches as they keep kissing, with Sarah saying "I love you" over and over. About six chapters too late, Dan realizes he may be losing her, but he thinks all they need is a good talk. But then Sarah and Lester take a shower together, and shortly after they come out of Lester's room, dressed and carrying bags. Sarah tells him Lester is going to be working at the hospital, so they're just going to drive back to Middleton together. She gives Dan a peck on the cheek and tells him she'll call him later. After being depressed for awhile, he decides he's going to fight for her, not physically. He knows he can't compete with Lester sexually or financially, but he also knows he's a good guy and Lester's not. So he decides to go along with her being with Lester on the surface. Meanwhile he's starting to figure out all the ways Lester has deceived them. But he has to wait until he can get Sarah alone to tell her. Does the good guy prevail? Only Mr. Silver know for sure.

Rjh200m

Mark, I like your idea of Dan realizing he can’t compete sexually and financially with Lester so he bides his time while he gathers dirt on Lester and then tries to convince Sarah how bad he is. But I don’t think Dan and Sarah are leaving the Chicago apartment without some reckoning of what happened. As you say, I think there is a very good chance that Sarah winds up in Lester’s bedroom after waking up on the couch later that night. As opposed to the last time, Lester makes sure that Sarah does not leave his bed after they finish another marathon session. Dan wakes up that morning and realizes Sarah is gone and suspects immediately where she is. At this point, he is not angry, but he certainly wants to reconnect with her. And he does not want to wait. He goes to Lester’s door, but it’s locked. Before saying anything, he wants to see what they are doing, so he goes to his room and looks through the peephole. He is shocked by what he sees. It’s not them having wild sex, it’s simply Sarah sleeping with her leg and arm across Lester’s body, and her head resting on his chest with her face clearly visible to Dan. She looks so peaceful and content. Dan immediately remembers Sarah’s comments about how lumpy his bed is and how hard it is for her to sleep in it. But in Lester’s bed, she looks so beautiful and comfortable as her head slowly rises and falls with Lester’s breathing. It finally crashes down on Dan how much things have changed since he and Sarah first visited the apartment. But more alarmingly, he realizes that he is on his way to losing Sarah. In his wildest imagination, he would never picture Sarah as she is now with Lester. Dan’s first instinct is to get Sarah up and both of them out of the apartment immediately. He went to Lester’s door and started knocking. “Sarah, you need to get up, we need to get going” Dan yelled. Sarah immediately raised her head from Lester’s chest when she heard Dan’s voice. But before she could say anything, Lester yelled out “Sarah and I were up all night and we are very tired. We’ll be out in a few hours”. Dan responded forcefully “Sarah, come out here immediately. I am still your husband and we need to leave together, right now”. But while Dan was yelling, Lester took Sarah’s hand and placed it on his rapidly growing cock. Without even thinking, she started slowly stroking it up and down…she couldn’t believe how hard it was and how Lester’s body warmed her all over. But she knew that she had to respond to Dan…….she was just struggling with what exactly to say….

Chris

Heard this chapter was back on point, and am glad to see it's true. The bits about Lester during the Byron scene felt a little bit tacked on, like Don was trying to soften the scene for those of us who prefer Sarah and Lester, but I appreciated that they were there... they just needed to be merged in a little bit more seamlessly imo. The comments are always a fun ride... it's clear lots of people want totally different things, and as ever, there's a collection of hotwife story lovers who want Dan to somehow win, and others who want Sarah to just fuck anything that moves. I'm here for Lester/Sarah, and am more than happy to watch Dan's original fantasy continue to cost him everything.

J

i'd prefer more romance between dan and Sarah because the greater the love between them the juicier the cheating becomes. if Sarah just keeps on breaking promises and stepping over red lines and boundaries, she's a lot less Sarah and a lot more slut which some like I suppose. I don't care for a HEA or a BTB but whatever ending comes has to feel natural and not forced or sacrificed into.

Rjh200m

As we all know, the children are basically not addressed in the story, except for being at the grandparents house a whole lot! However, to the best of my recollection, Sarah has explicitly mentioned them twice. First when Lester initially came to her home and was roaming about the upstairs level; she told him forcefully that the girls room was off limits. The second was in this chapter when Byron made a very crude comment to her that referenced her children (by the way, I think Byron’s comment hints at what a dangerous character he is and his devious intentions for Sarah). She did not respond to him and her internal thought was that she definitely did not want to think of her children given what she was doing with Byron. So, clearly the children are a red line for Sarah. But, as we also know, Lester is all about pushing her boundaries and I would expect that the next time he is in her house, and the kids are not there, he will try to get her into the children’s room. He has made specific references to having sex with Sarah in all parts of her house, and this could be next. Also, remember his numerous comments to separate Sarah from the kids so she can spend more time with him; this could be another psychological gambit by Lester to further remove all of her resistance. If he was successful in broaching this red line, I would see it as the final collapse of Sarah’s willpower and control of her life. And this could push Dan, if he found out, to end the marriage. And then Lester wins again.

Mark Albright

I think the next step is for Lester to show Sarah he can be her provider. He's already bought her sexy outfits to wear. Next, he buys her clothes for work, professional, but sexier than what she usually wears. And then furnishing for her home. Sarah starts to like not having to worry about money any more. If she needs something, Lester will simply give it to her. When she asks if he's buying her stuff so he can "stuff her" he smiles and says "I get to do that for free." She blushes and says "Yes, you do, Daddy."

GW

The fact that she drew a line in the sand on this is why I would see Lester pushing that point. I would think as a parent bringing someone like Lester into their life, whether direct or indirect, would break that boundary.

WILLYBOY

It’s likely that Lester will get her to fuck someone else but not until she is pregnant by him. = VERY HOT SCENARIOS

Tim

This story has turned sad and pathetic.

Robert Smith

Any word on discord about the alpha release of CH23?

Richardcat

It seems to be indicated that Dan and Sarah have not talked about what’s happening. But after Sarah spent the night in Lester’s bedroom Dan joined Sarah in the shower in the morning. What went on in there. Plus they flew to Minnesota together. Those conversations could have provided some clues for the future.

J Lewis

I mentioned the shower scene on Discord and was told basically that was an editing error so didn’t happen in the story line. Agree it’s a stretch to think Dan and Sarah didn’t talk about her overnight stay in Lester’s room during the trip to or back from Minnesota but that’s the prerogative of DS

MV

One of the most important parts of a hotwife situation (including IRL) for most people is when the couple have 'The Talk'. To discuss boundaries, turn-ons, concerns, etc. It can also be one of the hottest parts. As you've pointed out, we're not really seeing/hearing that conversation here. It's a stretch to believe that two professional, articulate people wouldn't be having regular 'talks' with how the story has developed. I have to assume that's deliberate, though I don't understand why, other than it would hold back the narrative. I've already said several times that we also aren't really hearing Sarah's thoughts/feelings about what's happening, not on any deep level.

Mark Albright

That's a pretty big editing error. So what really happened? Dan went to the bathroom door and it was locked?

Rjh200m

Recognizing that more time elapses in the story than the scenes we read, it could be explained as both are in a little bit of shock and are resisting actually talking about what has happened. For the longest time, Dan and Sarah explained what happened with Lester as “things getting out of control”, “not sure how it happened” and going forward “we need to plan better and keep control of what we do”. But clearly this has gone out the window. From Sarah’s perspective, her relationship has moved well beyond being part of a Sarah-Dan fantasy. Her wants and needs have come to the forefront. From Dan’s perspective, he has evolved from confronting Lester and reclaiming Sarah to just an observer, and he is struggling with these emerging urges/desires. And their sex life is on a noticeable downward trajectory in terms of frequency and quality. Given all of this, it could be understandable that Dan and Sarah are now less inclined to directly speak since the issue has become so much more complicated and they may be afraid to confront their emerging feelings and behaviors. But yes, this has to happen to move the story forward.

Royston smith

So, having asked for, and read, your predictions (very interesting ones as well with some excellent points) on how the specifics of the story will evolve, I want to now posit a macro overview of how the story will develop, using the 22 chapters we have before us and any allied D S texts which may bear on the TA story going forward. Even if I am way off beam at least my synthesis can act as stimulant for debate. It is clear to me that TLG have now become the fulcrum of the plot. Most of the characters are now being pulled relentlessly into TLG’s orbit. Byron sits there at the centre of its web seemingly pulling the strings, whilst Jesse,Dan, Sarah and now even Lester, are attracted by its magnetic pull. It seems the story doesn’t revolve around the Sarah/Dan/Lester relationship completely now. More and more TLG influences and bends the parameters of the plot. Why? Well let’s look at TLG to see if we can get a handle on it. Ironically, perhaps the clearest factual description comes from someone who has only just become aware of it, Lester:”From what he could tell, Jesse’s company had The Lincoln Group as their client. And those guys seemed shady as hell, a typical multinational corporation that said all the right things to Congress but had their fingers in all kinds of different pies. Completely vertically integrated, with very little information available about them. For such a large and powerful corporation, they mysteriously weren’t publicly traded, which meant there was very little information he could dig up”. (Ch22.) So, multinational, privately owned, vertically integrated. Let’s unpick those phrases. Multinational/ so must be a very large corporation and probably very influential within the political sphere/congress/the senate. But privately owned? There are not many privately owned corporations of that size. So what is the advantage of that? More control for the owners and board and less scrutiny by public bodies or regulators. Vertically integrated means they control their own supply chain, owning companies within their group that supply them in the manufacturing and distribution phases. So, everything screams control, power but most importantly for our story, secrecy. What else do we know? Well Byron has told us they fight dirty, when he says to Dan: “Get on our bad side again, and you may just find that the real estate division here buys up all the homes around yours, and we’ll rent them out to crackheads. We’ll tank your neighborhood and then buy out the rest of the homes for pennies on the dollar. It wouldn’t be the first time.”So note, “it wouldn’t be the first time”. They clearly fight dirty all the time, which we know from Don’s Detestable Liaisons. Archer, who works in TLG’s accounting division, set up Courtney in a threesome with a “Mr Tanner” a client her company were keen to sign up. We know what happened. Then, Archer moves to dismember them , as Byron says: “For example, this next meeting I’m going to. We’re there to discuss a hostile takeover of a leading accounting software company. They have a better product, better team and are all around better than what this arm of our business offers. But we’ve been attacking them and dismembering them for months, slowly bleeding them dry. My colleague found a really interesting opportunity and took full advantage of it. Now we’re going to take them over, integrate their operations, fire some of their employees and the ones we want to keep, and they won’t be going anywhere anytime soon.” I wouldn’t mind betting Courtney is “one they want to keep”. And this”subdivision” we keep hearing about, what is it? Byron tells us:”“It’s way more than a subdivision,” Byron said ... It’s a whole new community designed and controlled from the ground up.” A whole new community”? For what purpose? Why would a company like TLG want/need such an entity? Secrecy springs to mind. And given what we know about the nefarious methods and activities of TLG the probability is its purpose could either border on, or be illegal. Then we have Sentinel security. How do they fit into all this? Their security vetting, the type of computer they assign Dan, which Lester (who should know) recognises “wasn’t an off-the-shelf computer. It was an unknown variable ..All of the traffic seemed to be encrypted, and he suspected the laptop used some kind of VPN or tunneling software” all screams government clandestine agency. They are based in Washington DC, where the FBI headquarters is. They want to establish a “data center project” we are told in 17. In 18 Martin, Dan’s chief contact at Sentinel says: “We work very closely with a certain three letter government agency. This data center project is one of theirs. Thus the extra security measures. I hope you’ll understand.” We are clearly in spook land here. It is also interesting that in 17, after Dan’s teams with Sentinel, the next scene involves Peter, who asks Dan to spy on TLG. So, we have all speculated on who Peter represents, is he a PI working for a corporate or is he working for the FBI? Whichever he is, he is also part of TLG plot line. So let’s pull all this together. I believe TLG’s “community” project is an illegal front for sex trafficking or something similar. Sarah/Courtney and presumably other compromised women are being groomed to work there. The FBI are aware of TLG’s activities but probably cant pin anything firm on them as yet. Sentinel are interested in Dan as he has connections with them. Their cover is asking Dan to consult on a data centre for them, given his expertise in that area, but they are more interested in his connections with the Lincoln group. Similarly, Peter is an FBI agent interested in Dan due to his connections with TLG. I presume Sentinel and Peter are aware of each other’s activities and are approaching from different angles. So,again, everything seems to be converging on TLG.Lester is the one variable no-one else is aware of, yet. If he is not careful he could alert both TLG and Sentinel to his activities. Perhaps, though, he is ironically Sarah and Dan’s best chance of extricating themselves from Byron’s clutches. So, I have presented an overview which I think makes sense, given the information we have to hand. Obviously, the specifics of how this will all play out are only known by Don. One thing is for sure it has the potential to be an epic 3rd arc. Please do come back at me and question my theory. Happy to debate. However, I will expect a constructive alternative to be put forward outlining your own macro synthesis, not just criticism of my theory. Oh, and by the way, I am aware the hospital doesn’t fit with this analysis. To me it is a side plot that may provide secondary entertainment.

Darrow

That parallels a lot of my thoughts on TLG. I won't belabour it. The one area I diverge, and the most interesting point of divergence is this self supporting, off the grid, subdivision they're building. I don't get why a subdivision would need to be so self contained, but it looks like they're operating their own power and water systems. That makes no sense for a subdivision, the whole point is that a subdivision takes advantage of the gridded network of water/power/sewer etc., for efficiency and cost effectiveness. If you're interacting with the rest of the city, there's no reason for it. I don't think a 'sex trafficking compound' is the right answer. The whole point of sex trafficking is to plug into the seedy underbelly of society. This isn't a subdivision at all, it's an entirely self contained, self sustaining, and relatively upscale community. It's built or designed to exist without the rest of the city or rest of society. My initial thinking is that TLG is building for the Apocalypse - a community or community model like the Vaults in Fallout, that can be cut off from the grid and survive collapse or strife. They're crazy billionaire doomers. That might be it, or might not. Alternately, they're locating their communities in places where there's no urban infrastructure, or its unreliable. The rain forest, the desert, some third world hinterlands, antarctica, mars, on the other side of stargate (the last three are obviously crazy unlikely). But why? If it's a resource extraction compound, there's no need for the apparent standard of living based into the design. Look at rubber workers, coal miners, diamond miners, rare-earth element, coca farmers... the wealthy and powerful have zero interest in the well being and comfort of their victims. This is too upscale. Retirement compound for war criminals and drug lords? Maybe. But if they have enough money, they usually have refuges. Perhaps an overseer compound for extraction industries? Tht might be sleazy and violent enough. Or a third world urban compound, a subdivision in a third world city, designed to ride out disruption? Or maybe some weird Ideological/utopian/dystopian community? No idea yet. Oddly, the person most likely to know is Dan, although its slipped by the rest of us. Dan is being kept in the dark and told not to ask questions. But when Sarah got a drunk horny Byron to talk about the subdivision, he apparently yammered on quite a bit. Sarah didn't pay attention. But Dan could or should have been, and if Byron was letting things slip, Dan would have had enough background to start putting pieces together. Here's what we know of the subdivision project: * It is apparently relatively small, built to contain perhaps a few hundred to a few thousand people, max. * It is designed to keep these people at a relatively high, middle class, standard of living. So significant amounts of space, yard, etc., multiple single family dwellings, space or provisions for vehicles, amenities like pools etc. * If is not designed for either hyper-wealthy, or slave/serf labourers, either of those would have had very different requirements or leaped out screaming at Dan. * It is designed to be self contained - power, water, sewer, etc., and self-sustaining (recyclable, with minimal environmental footprint and minimized requirements for external inputs.) * The self sustaining aspects are the strangest. It's designed to be cut off the grid, and to stay off the grid for extended, perhaps somewhat indefinite periods. This implies either its intended location is where the grid is unreliable (third world cities), where the grid is anticipated to collapse (apocalypse), or where the grid is simply absent (desert, jungle, remote locations, hinterland, etc.), or where plugging into the grid is an unacceptable compromise (criminal enterprises, terrorist camp, secret prison or covert operations, some sort of espionage thing). * There's no sign that Dan is being asked to build for unusual environmental conditions. That lets out Mars, Antarctica, super-hot or arid deserts, super-humid deserts, underground cities, underwater cities, alien environments. Doesn't rule out the other side of a Stargate (being silly and recalling SGI where we discover most of the planets in the Universe resemble British Colombia). Environment appears to be within North American norms. So.... remote but not appalling, unreliable, unacceptable or apocalyptic. We just don't know enough yet. But whatever it is, it's almost certainly part of something larger, and likely something dangerous or illegal. The degree of secrecy tells us that.

Rjh200m

Quick analysis - the LG compound is not a criminal enterprise but an effort by LG to protect its intellectual property and key people in the event of a cyber war, EMP attack, etc. The compound is being designed to survive such an event. If we look at the world today, cyber attacks and the threat of more is out there. Separately, we also see very rich tech companies building stand-alone compounds to house their HQs and key people/capabilities. I think LG is going a little bit rogue on this and the federal government is concerned, hence the Sentinel/Peter angle, they want to know specifically what LG is doing and how they are doing it. Sarah, Dan and Lester will be caught up in this. Not sure if all of this holds up, but throwing it out there!

Mark Albright

First of all, it's good to hear from Royston and Darrow again. I was a little worried because we hadn't heard from you. I've been accused of being over-analytical, but you two put me to shame with your well-thought-out analysis. I will digest what you've said and come back with my take on it. But for now, I have to say I'm not a tech guy, or a business guy, so I'll yield to others on all that. My background is as a journalist, then working in local government in a boring, beauracratic job. Lately, I've written two novels, one published, one not. However, I wrote them in their entirety before anybody read them. I think it would drive me crazy to read a bunch of people's reactions chapter by chapter. But I guess that's how Mr. Silver likes to do it. While I'm still formulating my next response, I'd be interested to know how you think Dan and Sarah and Lester fit into all this and how their relationship evolves. That seems to me the essence of the story, and all the other stuff, TLG, the hospital, just a backdrop for our odd triple to traverse through. I'll stop now.

J

has Sarah emotionally left dan or is she playing Dan's cucky game and acting the cheating wife for his benefit as well as getting her sexy on also.

Rjh200m

We all know what turns Sarah on sexually, and we know that her professional standing and financial stability is important to her. But I think there is another factor that may determine the fate of her marriage and relationship with Dan. Outside of the bedroom, she seems to like when a man acts aggressively to achieve something. Two examples - first, she was impressed with how Lester did not back down from the previous Hospital CEO when he was resisting hiring Lester to restore the hospital’s IT system. Second, she was impressed with how aggressively Dan took care of Jesse when he tried to blackmail theem with the videos Sarah mistakenly sent to him. I seem to remember that she specifically liked how aggressive Dan was with Jesse during the face-to-face confrontation in the office. So, outside of the bedroom, she probably values this trait, a man who acts aggressively and decisively to protect their interests; basically someone who does not back down in the face of resistance. But at the same time, she enables and encourages Dan’s sexual urges which are headed in the increasingly passive direction. Even more, she has recently raised the teasing of Dan to a level of verbally humiliating him. So, what does she ultimately want? Does she want Dan to continue in this direction while Lester continues to be more aggressive and controlling in more aspects of her life? Or does she really want Dan to get aggressive and reclaim her and get their life back to some semblance of order; but not totally back to what it was pre-Lester because her sexual preferences have definitely evolved and there is probably no chance of going back to Dan and Sarah’s pre-Lester relationship). I have opined before that I think Sarah is more in control than we think. I still think this is the case, and maybe she is orchestrating events and purposely pushing Dan with the expectation (or hope?) that he is going to act aggressively and rescue her. This is something Sarah needs to resolve - what kind of Dan does she want- when she is not in the throes of passion with Lester.

J

I feel like she's more in control then is being let on. she doesn't seem to be concerned about the pregnancy risk she was "MEH" about her sex with Byron. I think when she's alone with Lester she can let go of all responsibilities and just relax into letting Lester have control. Also, I think she understands Dan's kink and plays to it. Would she have kept the, Lester staying in their house if Lester had left when he was supposed to, a secret. it would have been telling if she had the house cleaned and ready for Dan when he got home and if she confessed or not.

DrJensen

TLG is a made-up company that serves Don's plot nothing else. such a construction is very unlikely to exist in real life. It is even more unlikely that they would go to any lengths to undermine Dan to get to Sarah. This is yet another example of the storyline going off the rails for me, but hey, different strokes for different folks. I keep my fingers crossed for a nice new chapter in the new neighborhood story.

Darrow

Don't sell yourself short, Mark. A career in journalism and two novels is nothing to sneeze at. I'm struggling to put the pieces together. The Sarah/Dan/Lester axis still feels like the core of the story. And most of the developments - Sarah at the hospital, at home, Dan's work woes, etc. seem to be extensions or drivers of that dynamic. But TLG seems to be this shadowy presence, and it feels very much like there's some larger picture going on in the background.

Royston smith

Good call Darrow. I also think that the triumvirate will remain central. However, TLG is definitely going to be an important factor, although I am unsure if its importance may only be realised in a succeeding series. I disagree though that sexual trafficking only involves the underbelly of society. Epstein’s circle included royalty, presidents, Hollywood actors , etc.

Royston smith

I think the “new normal” means exactly what it says Mark. Lester has won a victory in 22 that Dan will find it difficult to come back from . However, this is mainly due to Sarah wanting that new normal just as much as Lester. She will use her “bad girl” powers to pretend Dan still has some semblance of control, whilst subtly working on his desire to see her be that “bad girl”. She wants to walk the bad girl path with Lester and I don’t think she can or will want to stop. TLG may or may not be the fulcrum for the 3rd arc’s storyline, but I am sure it will have an important role to play in the plot whatever happens.

Royston smith

Interesting RJH, but I don’t agree. It wouldn’t fit with the internal logic of the plot. Only a use that fits with a sexual purpose would fit with this type of story. Or else, why bother to include TLG? It surely cant be a coincidence that DL’s plot line gets mentioned too. Yes, the Byron angle is a subplot already exploited in the last chapter, but that could have been engineered in a different way. Why emphasise the “community” project so much.

Darrow

Not just Epstein. Sean Combs appears to have operated that way as well, on a nakedly larger scale. And I don't think that was Weinstein acted alone, or that his activities were solely personal. But the rich and powerful don't need the kind of self sufficiency that TLG does. They need discretion.

Darrow

Royston, TLG may be a red herring, or simply a plot device. But there do seem to be a lot of unnecessary items being dropped around it. Generally, one goes with the rule of Chekov's Gun from Star Trek. If there is a phaser (gun) in the teaser scene, then sooner or later it will get fired before the closing credits. It was a genius storytelling rule pioneered by Roddenberry because in Star Trek, he had only 48 minutes to tell a story. He wasn't some tedious Russian novelist who could spend hundreds of thousands of words recklessly for novels of nigh-infinite length. It was storytelling reduced to essentials and any element introduced had to be relevant. So you see, by the inevitable logic of Mr. Spock, TLG must be important and significant to the story and each hint dropped about it and its activities (and every teasing bit of information withheld - such as the mysterious purpose of the subdivision) will eventually pay off and serve some huge plot purpose. Of course, there's an alternate perspective - Chibnalling from Doctor Who, where you just keep introducing and abandoning plot threads and subplots until the audience is totally lost, at which point you stop and escape out the back door with the money. J.J. Abrams is the master of Chibnalling. So I guess the question is whether Don Silver is Spocking or Chibnalling.

Darrow

Note: I know who Anton Chekov is, I was just having fun.

Rjh200m

Royston, you are probably correct about the compound….but I think most agree that TLG has a role in the story going forward. Regardless of the specifics of TLG and its secretive compound, Sarah, Dan and Lester will be drawn in. I think Sarah will be used by Sentinel/Peter to get close to Byron, she has already done this and it will happen again. She seems to have a talent for extracting information from him! I think Dan will continue to be used for his technical expertise by Sentinel/Peter. And then on a personal “mission”, Sarah and Dan will work to protect themselves from Byron’s nasty intentions. What is Lester’s role? I think he will wind up also going after TLG. Why? First, from what we know of his personality, he probably does not like big, powerful corporations, so he is inclined to try and take them down when an opportunity present itself. Second, he wants to keep close to Sarah and control her interactions with Byron. Third, it’s another opportunity to impress Sarah and further separate her from Dan as he demonstrates his IT prowess and his willingness to help Sarah. It’s part of his effort to show Sarah that he can do a lot more for her outside of the bedroom.

Royston smith

Which would be provided by a remote self sustained entity with its own communications/resources etc., surely?

Rjh200m

Sure it’s possible. Any network is vulnerable, especially if inside information can be obtained. Nonetheless, the opportunity is for Lester and Sarah to further bond, Lester working the IT system and Sarah working the CEO. Of course, the outcome of these efforts are uncertain, but the key thing would be the Sarah-Lester relationship, the Sarah- Byron relationship and Dan’s fate!

Rjh200m

Also makes commenting on what might happen in the story complicated since some readers have already seen the future!

J Lewis

Posted the same thing in the insider’s chat (No Spoilers). My hypothesis for how TA will end can be predicted based on the upcoming conclusions to DL (this month) and TC (Jan/Feb). First a little background, prior to retirement I worked years in the mathematical modeling field. We would build a model of a process, be it manufacturing, human decision point, inventory, airline crews etc. identifying the key variables in the model and tweaking them so you can predict future outcomes with some reasonable % of assurance. As a warning though: All models are wrong but some are useful. Ok with all that out of the way…in 1)DL I forecast Courtney going to work for the TLG under Archer and becoming a worker with benefits. She becomes a cheating wife. Harry has no leg to stand on since he knew she was fucking Archer so he cannot get upset at what happened in Ch4. I have a little less confidence in my TC forecast…more variables but I forecast Brooke leaving/divorce Mark and moving in/marry Saul as they raise their child. Again because of the drugging of Mark, the deception in conceiving, and the manipulation of text messaging, I’m not as confident in this outcome. But based on these two forecasts my TA hypothesis is the bad guy wins…Lester. This is all in fun remember.

Richardcat

I’m thinking that Brooke will miscarry and they will find out that Saul was the father but she will continue to fuck Saul but maybe use birth control or not care if he impregnates her. His age might make the pregnancy more uncertain.

Mark Albright

What are the chances these stories all combine together? Saul and Lester could be brothers.

J Lewis

So the hypothesis still holds…bad guy wins. BTW the TC storyline is more in align with TA than DL is.

Rjh200m

I just can’t see Brooke living with or marrying Saul. He is old, ugly and has no personality! If Brooke is as hot as the story suggests, she can certainly get a younger guy with a big dick if she is done with Mark. Plus, the relationship between Brooke and Saul has not developed enough to see this happening. Contrast this with the Sarah-Lester relationship which has developed in several directions and Sarah has emotionally bonded with him. But anything is possible!

Reader79

Really great chapter, loving that Lester is dominating Dan, stopping Dan from having sex with Sarah and her sleeping in his room now. Can't wait for more!

Rjh200m

Looks like we are in somewhat of a quiet period until the next chapter is out. Just to stimulate some discussion, here is a potential scenario that gives a little bit to both camps- the “I want Dan to stop being a wimp” camp and the “I want Dan to be humiliated and lose” camp. Lester and Sarah are going at it again in front of Dan. Lester is really pushing Sarah to say all the stuff to Dan about how she needs Lester’s cock, she wants to have his baby and that Dan’s dick does not satisfy her anymore. Sarah does not disappoint him. Dan is sitting there listening and watching, but he has been drinking and his violent side is coming to the fore. After Lester says that “Sarah is all mine”, Dan loses it. He jumps from his chair and beats the shit out of Lester. Lester is left sniveling on the floor, wanting no part of Dan at this point. Dan is feeling empowered and turns to Sarah with the intention of reclaiming her. However, he sees the shock in her eyes as she runs to Lester, hugging him and trying to give him comfort. At the same time she starts yelling at Dan asking why he would do such a despicable thing. She tells Dan to call 911 for an ambulance. Sarah insists on staying with Lester at the hospital to help him recover. Dan has no choice but to accept this and watch the kids. After a few days, Lester is released. Dan is relieved that this ordeal is over and that Sarah will be back home. But Sarah tells Dan that she needs to be with Lester for the next week to take care of him and help him with his physical therapy. Dan angrily and vehemently rejects this and says it’s not happening. But Sarah gives it right back to him and tells Dan that Lester’s recovery is her priority right now and that, by the way, Dan is very lucky that Lester has not gone to the police to press charges. She also adds that if he did this, she would have to be a witness to the unprovoked attack on him. Dan reluctantly accepts that Sarah is going to do what she wants. But he wants to make her feel guilty, so he asks Sarah why she would make Lester a priority over her children, being that she won’t see them all week. “Oh no, buster” she says. “Lester is staying with me and the kids in the house. You are the one who will be staying at the Chicago apartment for the next week”

Mark Albright

I've thought about another physical confrontation between Dan and Lester, but I picture it going differently. Remember how angry Lester was at himself the last time Dan got physical with him and pulled him off Sarah. I think the next time Lester is going to remember all the times kids picked on him and bullied him when he was growing up. He summons a strength he didn't know he had and pushes a surprised Dan away and then slugs him, knocking him out. Dan, recovering in a hospital bed, thinks at last Sarah will come to her senses. She comes to visit him in the hospital, but she looks upset at him. "Now, I'm sorry that Lester beat you up, but you shouldn't have tried to interrupt us. You mustn't upset Daddy any more. I'll ask him not to hurt you any more, but you need to be nice to him. I'm sorry I can't stay longer, but I'm going out of town with Daddy for a few days to try to take his mind off things. He's still very upset with you, but maybe I can distract him enough so he'll forgive you.

Timmy

The introduction of other sexual partners don't hit anywhere close to as the scenes with Sarah and Lester. Also, why would Lester want Sarah to fuck other men? He's not the cuck in this story nor has he claimed her yet. I can see him saying something like that well after he knows his child is inside of her, but before pregnancy confirmation? So out of character for Lester... The convoluted plot with Dan and Sarah's job is overemphasized and very, VERY, boring to read. I skip all scenes with Dan that aren't related to his relationship with Sarah. Same thing goes for this tension that's trying to be created in Sarah's work place. I find the story much more enjoyable reading the true plot which is whenever and ONLY when Lester is involved. I don't remember exactly what chapters it was, but when Dan caught Lester fucking Sarah in their bedroom, he later asked her everything that they did. Sarah spilled the beans and told Dan everything we knew at the time. I think the following chapter showed that Sarah failed to mention her session in Dan's office. I bring this up because I hope there will be more things Sarah will hide from Dan. It could have been an honest mistake and lapse in memory, but I'd like to think that she is holding back a bit of truth from Dan. Also, Sarah is by far the hottest when she is described as a young mom. I really hope we'll get to see her have a huge family with Lester.

Eden

Any news on ch23?

LH_reads

This might be the best chapter so far. Can't wait for more.

Jay Muney

Amazing synopsis and theory. While I love DS stories, I'm finding the commentary and speculation to add an entirely new level of complexity to this extremely sexy story, and what you just said above is icing on an entirely wide, deep, and tall cake if you will. I just want to thank you and everyone else commenting here for making TA and all his other stories so much more complex from how they initially began, as totally HOT mind numbing sexual escapades blending the Hot Wife and Cuckold genres into a much more complex tale. I know I'm not adding to or expressing any further theories here (yet) but more so I'm just blown away at how this Lester the lower man in society with the huge cock is stealing the hot mother of Dan's children story...into a complex weave of a sordid tale involving potentially the FBI, High Class Sex Trafficking, and potentially government espionage, when I was initially getting fascinated by, and focusing on, when Lester FINALLY gets Sarah pregnant! Because seriously folks, we've had what, 11+ chapters where Lester has been 'breeding' her and STILL no positive pregnancy result?1?

Jay Muney

Agreed. I wondered if I missed that and tried to find it but finally realized it wasn't addressed at all which was a bit disappointing as I bet that shower was one major mind (and body) fuck for Dan. Then suddenly they are in Minneapolis running this bizarre scheme for Sarah to swindle Byron with sex while Dan plants a USB into a high tech company's (NOT going to happen) computer tower under the desk (what is this, 2015?). Also, the actions or words spoken to Sarah by Byron totally turned me off as they weren't at all realistic after what we have learned and began to love about her character development. Sorry but without Lester's direct involvement or under his direction, I don't see Sarah just giving up the goods to that idiot Byron, the way she did. I almost felt like in that one scene, DS used a ghost writer while he was on vacation! I wouldn't be disappointed if DS did because he has provided such amazing content in all his story arcs, but that entire segment missed the mark of his standard intensity, for me.

Jay Muney

AGREED. Possibly the hottest ever of anything I have read by DS yet, and after the 'bit of a let down' around the Byron scene, BOOM, DS comes out firing and slams me back into my chair.!