Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout
haven't archived this post yet. have a subscription? use the importer!

Content

Dialogue, my beloathed. I gotta get used to laying out for bubbles again now.

I think for the longest time when I thought about having to do this chapter I just imagined a lot of yelling between the two. But that seems exhausting and they're both so tired and worn down.

Also I still think I'm five pages behind on public updates. I just keep forgetting. I think at this point it'd probably be easier to just change Patreon to 5 pages early. Of course that wouldn't affect yall but.

Files

Previews only

Comments

Megan Pawlak Arts

Still beautiful as always. Also, Mac gonna feel guilty in 3, 2, 1…

Adib Khorram

Good old Southern passive aggression!!! Love the colors here.

Kassyflo

Poor thing, he’s so tired 😭

Zirosto1

“I was wasting the morning” is incredible old man energy lol

JustEki

I think it's a wonderful choice to let them converse this way. It feels in line with their distanced and uncertain reaction in the previous panels. Sure, they may want to scream at each other, but in their heads there's probably a little voice saying, "What if that causes them to leave? You'll be alone again." I'm seeing and hearing things just in this one page that tell me they care about each other: Mac only looks away from Felix to grab the rope; Felix focuses his words on Mac leaving instead of the trauma of the house collapsing. It's beautiful storytelling! 💜

RPL

Ouch! But to be honest, if we consider how fragile Felix is in that situation, Mack deserved that burn! :/