Page Five Lineart and Update (Patreon)

To share my pain and frustration: so this page introduces some things I needed to get out of the way early on so I wouldn't sabotage myself later (basically things that I saw being a problem in the script). So When I put this page together I didn't have the best idea of flow and format ahead of time - which made it incredibly difficult to put together. It's honestly a very simple page but I was having the hardest time getting it to look dynamic or visually appealing while still serving it's purpose.

I am ..satisfied.. with this version but its the  fourth? full version of the page and I still consider it "passable" at best.