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Brenda makes the first move...

You can read the original story by by Hunter S Creek here:

http://mg-sg.pbworks.com/w/page/5824836/Compounding%20Interest%20By%20Hunter%20S%20Creek


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phunnyphil

I know that a lot of Compounding Interest is told through Mark's internal monolog and not spoken aloud, but I thinkmaybe just a small text box with a little narration on some of the speech-less panels might go a long way to better describe the scene or at least what Mark is feeling. You do a great job with the visual storytelling and I am loving this series. I just think a little accompanying narrative text would take it to the next level.

TetsuGTS

I thought about that and I think you're right. However I'm doing it without text box to make my pics "talk". I know you must read the story to fully understand what's happening this way. I hope you can forgive me and enjoy it anyway :)