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"I'm pussy expert...." - Aerial Ace


Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future


Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card


Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.


I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...



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Raile21

Comment: The comic is heating up. 1st panel: "Pussy on a stallion. Why does this look so hot...?" 4th Panel: "Ahhh!! Aerial... That feels good... You seems really good at this..." "Of course! How many pussy do you think I have ever licked before?"

Calpain

Some further corrections: 4th panel: Remove the 's' on seems to make it just seem. "Of course! How many pussy do you think I have ever licked before?' Try something like, 'Of course! You think this is the first pussy I've licked before?'

vavacung

Sorry. I can't try that sentence. Cause in my rough transcript. Alternate Dawn will answer her "All of our friend, right?"

Calpain

How about something closer to what you have up there then? 'Of course! How many pussies do you think I've licked before?'

Calpain

Awesome! Keep up the good work. The new sentence should work well with the answer you provided!

Nocara

eheheh that explains why she did not wanted the pact

Robert Prime

My English is ok. but Raile21 and Calpain will do a better job then me so ill just help if i see something they missed which might not happen with their eagle eyes lol.

Kankri Vantas

Mainly all the girls are fillyfoolers