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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-14 (Patreon)

Published:
2015-07-26 10:31:10
Imported:
2026-06
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Content

"I am nothing but stallion"


Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future


Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card


Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.


I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...



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Comments

Nocara

a quite particular put into scene. A shame he is so bad making new friends, because a stallion surrounded by so many mare should be popular... but of course, he is Twilights son XD Uh! let me offer you my less broken English XD "You GOT our friends..." I think here you should use the past "Wait and hope..." Languages with Latin alphabet use always capital letters after a point. Also, here if you want to say that he was waiting maybe you should put this sentence in past. "But THAT day..." I think those is for plural, for ONE day I think the correct is to say THAT "I am A stallion" Not sure why but this sounds better for me :P

Calpain

Not bad! Some suggestions: Panel 1: One by one you get our friends into bed with you. Panel 3: But that day will never come. Panel 4: Because I'm a stallion.

Raile21

Let's see.. 1st is Sparity, 2nd is Surprise, 3rd is... can be either Eden or LJ, but from the expression I'm leaning towards Eden. Then 4th is supposed to be LJ from the scarf, but in my eyes I see an adult Scootaloo not LJ. My God, Dawn! Stop crying because you're not getting any! You only need to ask Surprise to get in the action!

Kankri Vantas

I feel so bad for him, never getting laid by a girl or his friends who he loves, he loved Ace, but shes a Fillyfooler or bisexual