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[Event] The Adventure Logs Of Young Queen 28 (Patreon)

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2015-09-17 18:01:26
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Be careful with your comment. The life of young queen is in your hand now.

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Kankri Vantas

Accept the offer and rest your enegry

Opacity Zer0

Braeburn takes you to his place and lets you sleep there for the night. You sleep in his guest bedroom and place your stuff on the table beside you. Braeburn sits on the chair beside you and asks you where your father is. You tell him that he is in the Crystal Empire and ask him if there is any way to reach there. He says that the train can take you all the way to the Crystal Empire, but it might take you a lot of money to buy a ticket. So you ask how a filly like you can earn some money in town. He says it’s hard to find a job for a filly in this town, but he may give you some bits if you help him harvest apples in the morning. He wishes you a nice dream and lets you sleep for now.

Opacity Zer0
>>807816

Oops. Anybody correct me if there's anything wrong in the proofreading!

Opacity Zer0

Rest for the night, young Queen. Braeburn's offer seems fair enough, so it's not a bad idea to help him with the harvest and keep the coins for the journey, as long as the guards back at the pass are not seeking you in town yet. Hava a good rest, but stay vigilant.

Justin

Accept his offer when you wake up.

Drow-chan
>>807816

Seems mostly fine. I'd change "if there is any way to reach there" to "if there is any way to reach it", not because the first is wrong, but because it seems a bit awkward.

UxieKnight

Action: Once you get up in the morning,you accept his offer to harvest apples. Asked Braeburn if he had a map or where you could get one of Equestria

UxieKnight
>>807913

As you slept your dreams were unfortunately not as peaceful as you wish what the guard told you about how your father hated change things makes it hard for you to sleep

RatedPonystar

Suddenly, Princess Luna appears in your dreams

Cylestea

accept his offer to help out to help raise money for your trip

Philip

Well, Young Queen, you have a safe space for the rest of the night. Braeburn's offer is a good one, tell him you'd like to help out that way. Go ahead and get some sleep, this will be practice holding your shape. The border guard might send out a warning, but they might not. For now, trust you luck and hope for a dream about your father.

Zeropony55

Work but be careful not to overwork yourself

Incarno

you dream about your mother and growing up in the hive. Do you think she has sent some of her minions after you?

Tetrominon

They say the Princesses of Equestria even stand vigil over their subjects' dreams, keeping them safe even as they sleep. Whether or not this applies to visiting changelings at all is uncertain... as is whether or not you actually WANT it to, considering...

FallenAngelXy

You dream of your mother and your life in the hive. But your dream is interrupted by Princess Luna.